Tighten Your Prose: 10 Tips

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  • Опубліковано 2 лис 2024

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  • @crypticreels
    @crypticreels 6 років тому +14

    It's like you read my stuff and specifically addressed what I was struggling with. Thank you, I really didn't know how to resolve these issues!

  • @dembonez19
    @dembonez19 3 роки тому

    Thanks for giving _clear_ examples and showing them on the screen.

  • @wren8253
    @wren8253 2 роки тому +1

    God thanks for explaining the nitty gritty! I do so many passive and filler words it’s grinded me to a halt when writing. Thanks so much!

  • @derekfirmo437
    @derekfirmo437 5 років тому +5

    This video is simple to follow and straight to the point. Also extremely helpful. Thanks.
    Keep up the great work.

  • @dennou2012
    @dennou2012 6 років тому +6

    This will be my "writing Bible"-video. Great job as always! Clear and sharp :)

  • @alexbadeau5027
    @alexbadeau5027 Рік тому

    This was excellent, thank you!

  • @o_o-lj1ym
    @o_o-lj1ym 3 роки тому +2

    This video is my bible

  • @lyuda693
    @lyuda693 6 років тому +10

    Hello Nick. Your writing advice is excellent and I have learned a lot from you. But now that I have these tools to make my writing better I was able to fully understand a problem I have been dealing with for years. That no amount of technical skill will help if you don't even know how to make a story in the first place.
    So, can you make a video that talks about how to setup a good story? What elements do you need? Goals? Conflict? Something else? How should these be used to construct your story before you even begin writing it? What tools, or strategies can you use to create a story?

    • @nickslessonsonstory355
      @nickslessonsonstory355  6 років тому +4

      Hey Lyuda, I have actually developed a story creation technique that I've been using for my latest novel and I've had good results from it so far. I'll consider making a video on this topic, my only hesitation is that it's fairly new and I haven't "perfected" it yet.

    • @lyuda693
      @lyuda693 6 років тому

      Thank you for your consideration. It would certainly be helpful to hear your thought process behind this technique, even if the technique itself isn't perfected. Otherwise, a video describing a more general approach would be good too. Take your time. I will look out for your videos regardless. Your content is extremely helpful and informative.

  • @sabeormsby2976
    @sabeormsby2976 4 роки тому +1

    Thanks.

  • @xtonibx5770
    @xtonibx5770 5 років тому +1

    Number 7 hit me like a bus.
    Edit: as did number 10.

  • @admind.l.a995
    @admind.l.a995 5 років тому +1

    the background music is the same as the one in a porn game that i played

  • @JacquelinElizabethWrites
    @JacquelinElizabethWrites 4 роки тому

    This is the 2nd draft Bible.