WRITE BETTER RAP LYRICS

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  • Опубліковано 7 лис 2024

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  • @magicmarker6933
    @magicmarker6933 4 роки тому +282

    You know you have founded the right rap coach, when you see biggie on the shirt and 2pac in the background.

  • @Gotothelui
    @Gotothelui 2 роки тому +7

    I learned more in the span of 3 minutes and sixteen seconds than I have learned in the span of months of watching videos
    "Rap has been around for you, and there's not a lot you can say that hasn't been already. So you need to say it in a new, doper, and fresher way"
    And
    "Make an image, paint an image"
    Which in my head turned into
    "Paint a Picture differently"
    I like to draw as well, so this definitely simplified it for me considering my knowledge on Physical Art. I came out of this learning more than I ever have before

  • @INBGMBeats
    @INBGMBeats 2 роки тому +22

    for those who aspire to be an artist, Im wishing you luck every step of the way. keep grinding and eventually you'll be so good nobody can ignore you any longer. I'll see ya'll at the top💜

  • @drillgirl718
    @drillgirl718 4 роки тому +85

    damn man.. thats exactly what i think as far as lyricism.. too many people claim they lyrical but they just saying big words and not much with it.. too abstract... no concrete

    • @Danielfelipe6
      @Danielfelipe6 4 роки тому +3

      Exactly

    • @noir269
      @noir269 3 роки тому +1

      Lyricism is supposed to be somewhat abstract. You're literally painting an image in your head that's meant to be a metaphor.

    • @drillgirl718
      @drillgirl718 3 роки тому +2

      @@noir269 yeah i like lyricism to an extent, but i like storytelling rappers which is different than lyrical rappers, most lyrical rappers saying a bunch of nothing, tupac was a storyteller, nas was a lyrical rapper, both goats, but one is a better poet and screenwriter and visualizer

    • @noir269
      @noir269 3 роки тому

      @@drillgirl718 Storytelling is lyricism tho. There's no right or wrong way of being a lyricist

    • @drillgirl718
      @drillgirl718 3 роки тому

      @@noir269 yeah there isnt no right or wrong way, its up to the 'poet' how they SAY it, so thats why 'mumble' rap is big right now cause they are saying the same thing but more catchy and using the right words that please the ear, they focus on melodic, what im saying is that all lyrical rap is not good, but storytelling is better than just simply just being lyrical, the soul expression has to be heard, thats why i prefer pac over nas, cause nas had a more boring tone, and yeah very lyrical but with pac he used the right words lyrically and put his soul to give it a stronger meaning, music is about the feel, anybody can be lyrical, lol my bad for the long paragraph homie

  • @LundosArtStudio
    @LundosArtStudio 4 роки тому +54

    Whats crazy is i can freestyle rap better than my written somehow I come up with doper lines off the top rather than writing because I think too hard about it I need advice on how to beat the writers block and really write lyrics to my full potential all I listen to is conscience rap and I have dope lyrics its just sometimes its hard to put it to paper. I've been making an album it just seems like I keep getting to a halting point with my lyrics after the first verse. I got the flow and I got the message I just need to find a better way to put my message on the paper to let the audience see the picture im painting. This video helped inspire me to finish a few of my songs today good shit bro! I appreciate it i still need to push past this block that I hit every once in awhile.

    • @Cross_Culture_Media
      @Cross_Culture_Media 3 роки тому +22

      If your like freestyling do it. Record it. Write your song. Refer to the freestyle and pick out a line. That'll spark a whole new strain of creativity. Rinse and repeat as needed

    • @marsh5944
      @marsh5944 3 роки тому +4

      omg I'm going through literally the same thing

    • @__-xf4rf
      @__-xf4rf 3 роки тому +8

      I’m the opposite. I can’t freestyle but when I write I feel I make good tracks

    • @joshmakkin7167
      @joshmakkin7167 2 роки тому

      That’s crazy yo because I’m the opposite I feel I can write better than I can freestyle

    • @leftcross_mma12
      @leftcross_mma12 6 місяців тому

      Your problem is that you listen to 1 type of rap only, you need to expand on what you listen, could give you more creativity.

  • @2ndperspective418
    @2ndperspective418 4 роки тому +32

    YOU THE GOAT FOR THIS CHANNEL!!!

  • @SofoniBeats
    @SofoniBeats 4 роки тому +8

    The tips you said was good like me spitting a verse "My hood take beef out the Ravioli ..........serving gravy with dough and no biscuits. "

  • @JB-mp9nb
    @JB-mp9nb 3 роки тому +7

    I trust you , you literally gave the simplest tip to right hooks 🪝 go more in-depth each sentence and I wrote a raw hook from that tip💯

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  3 роки тому +2

      That’s what I like to hear bro

  • @LonerBecause
    @LonerBecause 3 роки тому +5

    Paint a picture in a listeners mind!
    Got it! Good Advice 🔥🔥🔥

  • @Looksordeath
    @Looksordeath 2 роки тому +3

    Great video! Best rap coach out there. No gimmicks, just pure love for the art and wanting to help

  • @n8thegreat445
    @n8thegreat445 2 роки тому +8

    We’ve gotten to a point in hip hop that there have been so many metaphors and imagery in rap that it’s possible too have a full song out of lines that are clever but have already been said. Make sure to speak what feels right to YOU and not try to come up with metaphors that just sound cool. It hits harder when it comes from home.

    • @IyuaOG
      @IyuaOG Рік тому

      🙏🏿

    • @Playboimatrix200
      @Playboimatrix200 Рік тому

      Fr but I always be feeling like I gotta rap with the OGs like Pac Cool J Nas Big Mf Doom Jadakiss etc. Because all the old heads complain about rappers not using wordplay or allat

  • @kojik4271
    @kojik4271 3 роки тому +2

    your saying wise shit that al these proper looking people don't even preach about. i can see your passion and i love it. thnx

  • @derrickwayne4627
    @derrickwayne4627 4 роки тому +2

    you are a mad genius, you are the first i've seen who painted a picture about painting a picture, my mind is completely blown, you have my sub, like and a new student, thanks man 👍

  • @longdistanceslumberparty499
    @longdistanceslumberparty499 3 роки тому +6

    Gunplay killed it it was what you get with putting to cats on one and I agree on this song soul comes from gunplay. Much love appreciate your work

  • @fukoff9703
    @fukoff9703 3 роки тому +6

    You spit the true bro
    Yo simplify it better than anyone else
    My respect coach
    🔥Keep grinding bro 🔥

  • @geethefreshprince8836
    @geethefreshprince8836 4 роки тому +3

    I've been going through so many videos I finally got one that I needed. Thanks I wish I found this a year ago 💔

  • @juanpastore3187
    @juanpastore3187 Рік тому +2

    Gracias por el contenido hermano, bendiciones desde Buenos Aires Argentina

  • @adamsalchenberg779
    @adamsalchenberg779 4 роки тому +8

    “A great rapper can paint a picture” -me thinking about Picasso by Hopsin

  • @boldjeetkunedmo3782
    @boldjeetkunedmo3782 3 роки тому +4

    I appreciate this video. You helped me realize what I was looking for in a short and simple explanation

  • @AvveNestor
    @AvveNestor 3 роки тому +4

    Yo this was a great vid, subscribed

  • @ayetae
    @ayetae 3 роки тому +3

    Been binge watching all of your videos since I stumbled upon them an hour ago.

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  3 роки тому

      Hope you got something!

    • @ayetae
      @ayetae 3 роки тому

      @@THERAPCOACH got a lot and instantly applied it in the next song I recorded the other day

  • @IISpiikeII
    @IISpiikeII 4 роки тому +4

    Greatest coach ever 🤘 for real just what I needed and some Inspiration too write lyrics again, I've been kinda stuck but now I feel like I'm gonna be writing alot of verses 🤴🙏

  • @xzavierburkhart9784
    @xzavierburkhart9784 Рік тому

    Was a great refresher 🤙

  • @zerrepontaoeste
    @zerrepontaoeste 4 місяці тому

    Great content bro. A big shout out str8 from Brasil 🇧🇷

  • @Dorii1005
    @Dorii1005 3 роки тому +4

    Great advice. Just subcribed for all notifications bro. You definitely enlightened me thank you🙇🏽‍♂️

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  3 роки тому +1

      You gotta watch em all like Pokémon

  • @shridhar5265
    @shridhar5265 4 роки тому +3

    This channel doesnt deserve that dislike button..
    Dropping Gems.

  • @Jah06100
    @Jah06100 3 місяці тому

    This was super helpful🤞🏾📈

  • @aLr_boosh
    @aLr_boosh 4 роки тому +3

    That was a great video! Painting the imagery with words! Boosh!

  • @therealnodeezeee5487
    @therealnodeezeee5487 4 роки тому +4

    For someone who’s became depressed cause I’ve been doing this for four years and feel like no matter what I say is trash this the video I need

  • @reecespeace9109
    @reecespeace9109 4 роки тому +7

    2 minutes in, I knew I was in the right place 📌

  • @ryderwilson8605
    @ryderwilson8605 4 роки тому +9

    This video is so fucking helpful. You got any tips on flow techniques? Its like all starting rappers including me sound boring and the same when it comes to flow also

  • @AceArty23
    @AceArty23 3 роки тому +2

    dope bro, great job

  • @ifuckinghatemyself2498
    @ifuckinghatemyself2498 4 роки тому +3

    this rly helped me understand lyrics thank u brother

  • @anybody4802
    @anybody4802 4 роки тому +1

    thank you, the best rap coach out there, exactly what I needed

  • @ibrahimba1755
    @ibrahimba1755 3 роки тому +4

    This video rlly helped

  • @1swaudae
    @1swaudae 2 роки тому

    when i reach the top, let them know you taught me alot 🙏🏾

  • @EKhalilP
    @EKhalilP 2 роки тому +2

    I’m just trying to figure how was this released 4 years ago and has Kendrick New Album pic for the thumbnail🤔

  • @cjthechosen777
    @cjthechosen777 5 років тому +9

    Great video man I just sub to ur channel. I think u should make a video on how to make melodies hooks and chorus etc

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  5 років тому +2

      CJ The Goat Official coming up next!

  • @scream99times62
    @scream99times62 3 роки тому

    Honestly, here to get better at writing nonrap songs and I think these are super good tips for that too awesome vid man thanks

  • @NayeemA.28
    @NayeemA.28 4 роки тому +10

    Man i rlly need more lyrical skills

  • @SewYourOwn
    @SewYourOwn 3 роки тому +7

    This video is so damn good. Thank you for enlightening me.

  • @marioreyes8776
    @marioreyes8776 3 роки тому +1

    THIS IS AMAZING! Such great explanations and examples - make some videos without cussing and I would love to use your videos as classroom examples of thorough explanations and thinking!

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  2 роки тому +1

      I’m from the streets this is how I communicate. I think your kids would listen to me before you.

    • @marioreyes8776
      @marioreyes8776 2 роки тому

      @@THERAPCOACH You are right! I was thinking of what's allowed in a school setting. Real talk is better, but educators always have fine lines to walk --- parents, principals, etc. I wasn't commenting on how you talk but instead was commenting on the restrictions educators face in trying to give students authentic lessons such as the one you provided in this video. It's all love man!

  • @niccolonatali9672
    @niccolonatali9672 3 роки тому +1

    on point

  • @Adam-ty7vo
    @Adam-ty7vo 4 роки тому

    Keep the great work up!

  • @LewisJackson
    @LewisJackson 4 роки тому

    Felt this bro. About to go rewrite my verses!

  • @thebossman1944
    @thebossman1944 3 роки тому +3

    I got pipe dreams of clean granite floors
    I got enemies putting me in Mausoleum doors

  • @ryrez4478
    @ryrez4478 2 роки тому

    I feel like benny the butcher is another exceptional example of makin the same old raps sound like golden bars. Conway the machine as well.

  • @ifuckinghatemyself2498
    @ifuckinghatemyself2498 4 роки тому

    subscribed the second i saw u! man u awesome

  • @apocalypsegaming9640
    @apocalypsegaming9640 4 роки тому

    Keep up the good work bro

  • @lawrencemathews9129
    @lawrencemathews9129 3 роки тому +1

    so teach could you tell me were to go to learn i hope you can help me out

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  2 роки тому

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  • @sneakerstalkin
    @sneakerstalkin 4 роки тому +1

    🔥🔥🔥

  • @sibling8596
    @sibling8596 3 роки тому +1

    I was the 19000th view and for some reason I’m proud of myself

  • @music-wg2xf
    @music-wg2xf 2 роки тому

    Facts.

  • @philmomslim526
    @philmomslim526 3 роки тому

    great video

  • @jvalid2759
    @jvalid2759 3 роки тому +5

    basically turn simplicity into complexity

  • @sxdtune9086
    @sxdtune9086 4 роки тому +5

    Your teeth are white as hell, fresh

  • @michaelgladney9657
    @michaelgladney9657 3 роки тому

    This helped

  • @ericbennett1931
    @ericbennett1931 2 роки тому

    I just had to watch 4 mins of it nd im 👍

  • @clumsyj1611
    @clumsyj1611 4 роки тому +1

    I feel damn shitty untalented after watching this
    Imma just hear more rap hoping to improve

  • @dimitris_souloupoglou
    @dimitris_souloupoglou 4 роки тому +3

    Man im feeling that you know your shit really well im trynna write my own lyrics but i keep thinking the metaphor game is really difficult for me

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  4 роки тому +3

      Go watch the Uzi wordplay video

  • @bobsmokey2604
    @bobsmokey2604 3 роки тому

    Subbed

  • @Toptehn
    @Toptehn 3 роки тому +3

    god damn u have some bright teeth

  • @Nas-sg3yr
    @Nas-sg3yr 2 роки тому

    Analyze old gucci mane

  • @yveswave
    @yveswave 2 роки тому

    Beat for writing : ua-cam.com/video/3vu4B1a0ilU/v-deo.html&ab_channel=ProdBySebastian

  • @santiagogarcia5724
    @santiagogarcia5724 3 роки тому

    Underrated bruh hope u blow up 💯💢mad respect foh u for the background and the shirt doe💯 btw can u couch me on insta?? Plz bro I'm tryna be a rapper in the future

  • @hopeformemez6280
    @hopeformemez6280 3 роки тому

    mmmhhh b1tch

  • @kyspyrox
    @kyspyrox 4 роки тому +3

    0:00 LOL