How to Write a Scene

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  • @TylerMowery
    @TylerMowery  3 роки тому +11

    Get Practical Tools to Write Your Great Screenplay: www.practicalscreenwriting.com

    • @sebastienarroux3808
      @sebastienarroux3808 Рік тому

      Hello, sorry to bother you, but can you put subtitles on this video please ? As a french viewer, some words are difficulte to understand for me. But thanks for evrything. Your videos are greate !

  • @Poisonedblade
    @Poisonedblade 4 роки тому +83

    I've spent 2 hours struggling with a scene. Then I went for a short walk and realized, "Wait... this character wouldn't do this."
    Then went back and wrote it the right way in 15 minutes.
    When the motivations are accurate, the scenes just flow.

  • @mr.skeletor1589
    @mr.skeletor1589 4 роки тому +81

    Thank you Tyler for existing.

  • @roberthipolito1351
    @roberthipolito1351 4 роки тому +34

    Tyler Mowery, InDepthCinema & StudioBinder have been my 3 film teachers. I've learned so much from their videos.
    Awesome work Tyler, thank you so much.

  • @chaeyoungvideos5742
    @chaeyoungvideos5742 4 роки тому +82

    dude I get so hyped when I see a notification of a new Tyler Mowery video. You really make the best videos on filmmaking and writing on youtube

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  4 роки тому +9

      Thanks so much!

    • @amazingbro6723
      @amazingbro6723 4 роки тому +2

      @@TylerMowery hey Tyler, I know your channel is about screenwriting but have you ever thought of doing a qna video

    • @joshanobody6948
      @joshanobody6948 4 роки тому +7

      Same here. He's seriously educating me on how to write better and I enjoy jotting own notes watching his videos.

    • @TomEyeTheSFMguy
      @TomEyeTheSFMguy 2 роки тому +3

      69th like. Nice.

  • @Ruylopez778
    @Ruylopez778 4 роки тому +58

    When revising scenes, writers can also use the Story Grid "5 Commandments"
    -Inciting incident
    -Progressive Complication
    -Crisis
    -Climax
    -Resolution
    It can be a useful tool to see if the scene is building in a satisfying way.

    • @Ruylopez778
      @Ruylopez778 4 роки тому +2

      @@blueskye2790 There's a 5 part video on youtube that explains the principle of the Story Grid.
      ua-cam.com/video/y3-dw9cIx2o/v-deo.html
      storygrid.com/5-commandments/
      storygrid.com/writing-scenes-work/
      "There are two ways to frame an inciting incident: Causal or Coincidental. In either case, the inciting incident gets the story or scene going and makes a promise to the reader of what’s to come.
      Progressive Complications are the escalating degrees of conflict that the protagonist faces
      Turning Points are the peak progressive complications of a unit of story. Turning points drive the complications to a point of no return.
      The definable dilemmas that a character faces must coalesce into a question that offers a choice between two options, or a Crisis. A crisis asks a character to make a decision
      And the answer to these decisions is the active choice of the character, the Climax. Climax is the truth of the character.
      A Resolution is the necessary followup to everything that has happened before it. It doesn’t have to be long, but in order to feel like a story was completed, a resolution must be included and compelling."
      These 5 stages are a kind of framework, that you can apply to a scene, sequence, act, or the whole story.
      The character's "goal" in the scene/story isn't necessarily directly related to these individual stages (they are the stages the scene/act/story goes through) but obviously the inciting incident of a story is connected to the character's goal or obstacle. In some stories the main character's 'goal' is established later in the story (or the 'true goal' is revealed).
      A scene doesn't have to have *all* of these stages, all of the time, but if a scene isn't working, it can help to use this tool to analyse it.
      Does that make sense?
      Another way to think of it is that every scene is like a mini story in itself

  • @HistoryDose
    @HistoryDose 4 роки тому +9

    I run a history channel, so my stories "bound" by factual events, but your videos have been immensely valuable to me with regard to building tension, revealing characters, etc.! Thanks!

  • @Hanbl-ip1tn
    @Hanbl-ip1tn 4 роки тому +70

    Need this. Editing my first feature at the moment. All this series has been super helpful :)

    • @Preston_Hudson
      @Preston_Hudson 4 роки тому +2

      Writing and making my first feature (two months from now it seems). Hope it goes great, it’s super stressful for me as I’m sure it is for you. Good luck

    • @zaianmiguel
      @zaianmiguel 3 роки тому +3

      Hows it going now??

    • @Hanbl-ip1tn
      @Hanbl-ip1tn 3 роки тому +4

      Done and dusted. I’m on my second at the moment which is one I have far more faith and drive to pursue making/filming. The first really was a test dummy😂 but at least it got me to write a full 110 pages with structure being considered.
      I did a beat sheet for my second one and that has ‘sped up’ the process by a lot!

    • @zaianmiguel
      @zaianmiguel 3 роки тому

      @@Hanbl-ip1tn Do you mind letting others check it out or read either 1?? Im currently in the process writing a first draft now.

  • @noodle123ify
    @noodle123ify 4 роки тому +2

    I've been in writing programs, read books on script writing and been involved in writer's groups, and find everything in these videos extremely helpful, even if most of the concepts aren't new to me. Tyler does a fantastic job of synthesizing dramatic writing theory into a digestible form, as well as reframing some theories in his own words. The videos are thoughtful, smart, and encouraging. Thanks Tyler, I wish you great success.

  • @saiganesh7944
    @saiganesh7944 4 роки тому +6

    You own a large part in shaping me as a writer

  • @rukysees3589
    @rukysees3589 4 роки тому +8

    i recommend your channel to every filmmaker i meet

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  4 роки тому +2

      That’s awesome! Thanks for the support!

  • @miguelvidal2335
    @miguelvidal2335 4 роки тому +2

    Your content is pure gold.

  • @1017saurabh
    @1017saurabh 4 роки тому +1

    Ten minutes of your videos are worth hours and hours of lectures in college classrooms. Absolute gold mine.

  • @ditcher6146
    @ditcher6146 4 роки тому +3

    I watched so many videos but i always had confusion .... thanks brother you have solved my confusion ... love from india

  • @redxiii_
    @redxiii_ 4 роки тому +3

    Your channel is GOLD.

  • @JoJo-xp6wr
    @JoJo-xp6wr 4 роки тому +37

    You beat Tyler with bad dialogue, he hits you with story beats
    You beat him with terrible character development, he comes back at you with a story circle, and I tell you, you will wish you had finished him with the bad dialogue

  • @OGMann
    @OGMann 4 роки тому +3

    I'm thinking about the scene in No Country for Old Men, with Chigurh and the store proprietor. I suppose the scene feeds Chigurh's need for control; but, it doesn't challenge or change him. The entire scene exists solely to show character. It is, in my opinion, one of the most powerful, tension filled scenes in movie history. The audience knows the stakes of the coin flip. They understand the old man is face to face with death. The old man senses the wrongness in Chigurh. He just doesn't know what it is. The calm, low key energy between the characters only heightens the dramatic tension. It moves the story forward by showing what a complete abnormality Chigurh is. Masterpiece.

  • @yoshiplays9773
    @yoshiplays9773 4 роки тому +11

    Yes this is amazing I need this for my script

  • @puskraken
    @puskraken 4 роки тому +13

    thank you so much for this, tyler! you're such an incredible person for making these videos

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  4 роки тому +1

      Thanks for the kind words! Glad you like the videos

  • @h.ar.2937
    @h.ar.2937 4 роки тому +2

    This is perhaps the best writing advice I've seen so far. Cuz first draft and re-writing is part of the writing process! Awesome and subscribed just for this video. Keep it up, Tyler.

  • @davidvolpov9247
    @davidvolpov9247 4 роки тому +1

    Flagged for Very Very Helpful

  • @jamesduke2662
    @jamesduke2662 Рік тому

    I just watched it this past weekend. I also thought it was good. Following along with the screenplay helped me see how well it was written.

  • @pacohernandez1165
    @pacohernandez1165 3 роки тому +1

    At the moment i'm writing 2 scripts and i'm having issues with it, probably because i'm writing two and not focusing on one haha, but anyways, everytime i watch a video of Tyler explaining screenwriting process and points, not only informs and helps me but gives me a push of motivation, thank you Tyler. I'm binge watching all of your videos while i'm at work, instead of you know, working

  • @TheBigB4000
    @TheBigB4000 4 роки тому

    I have watched countless videos on writing screenplays, this channel is the best so far. Very helpful.

  • @geniosityfilms
    @geniosityfilms 4 роки тому +1

    Awesome video! It's so important to keep in mind all the different "turns" of a scene, not just expositional but emotional. Thanks for this!!!

  • @stevebeat
    @stevebeat 4 роки тому +1

    I love your channel, for real! I've been binge-watching your videos all day! Keep it up!

  • @royrieder2113
    @royrieder2113 4 роки тому +1

    Great prose writing advice too

  • @patsthebunny
    @patsthebunny 4 роки тому +1

    You sir, are incredible. I have always struggled with the idea of writing a script. It always seemed too daunting. You provide incredible information in such a clear and concise way that is easy to understand and put into practice! I finished writing my first script for a short film that I'm eager to shoot! Thank you and keep up the good work!

  • @Z5Z5Z5
    @Z5Z5Z5 3 роки тому +1

    Tyler is gold. Amazing quality content

  • @rajeshkumarjk9
    @rajeshkumarjk9 8 місяців тому

    Its really useful for all the screenwriters and film makers... Keep doing and be an inspiration for many writer like me...

  • @DomBurgess
    @DomBurgess 3 роки тому +1

    Great video man.

  • @amazingbro6723
    @amazingbro6723 4 роки тому +3

    We've been blessed by Tyler

  • @Vishnuputhiyedam92
    @Vishnuputhiyedam92 2 роки тому

    thank you for this video, as you said this will help in getting rid of unwanted scenes...
    cheers

  • @glenn_r_frank_author
    @glenn_r_frank_author 3 роки тому +2

    I see your points about having needs and conflict drive a scene and the story forward, but what about pacing? What about scenes meant to slow the pace, be more introspective or give the reader/viewer some rest from the relentless need/conflict/consequence cycle?

  • @agrima2024
    @agrima2024 4 роки тому +1

    You are helping a lot

  • @jmeslau
    @jmeslau 4 роки тому +3

    Perfect timing, thank you for all this knowledge Tyler

  • @TheJaylaReshon
    @TheJaylaReshon 4 роки тому +4

    You’re making me a great writer.. thank you 😊

    • @ARTOFFICIVL
      @ARTOFFICIVL 4 роки тому

      Hey Jayla I like you watch different videos like this on UA-cam and I’m looking to like put together team of writers where we can help each other with ideas and hold each other accountable to help turn our WIP in to finished polished pieces. Are you interested?

    • @TheJaylaReshon
      @TheJaylaReshon 4 роки тому

      @@ARTOFFICIVL yes very interested! Here’s my email Jaylanorfleet69@gmail.com / Instagram @jaylathemuse

  • @LightningStrikes66
    @LightningStrikes66 Рік тому +1

    Awesome Video Thank You!

  • @lucindanewcomb8769
    @lucindanewcomb8769 Рік тому

    Love this one. Thanks, again.

  • @kidanemariameyob8752
    @kidanemariameyob8752 Рік тому

    Well explained and thank you. Keep up the good work.

  • @aadityanailwal7368
    @aadityanailwal7368 4 роки тому +2

    You are doing great work man, keep it up

  • @ARTOFFICIVL
    @ARTOFFICIVL 4 роки тому +2

    This video is amazing!! Thank you so much.

  • @the-uc1gg
    @the-uc1gg 4 роки тому +1

    Dude thank youuu!!!
    This'll help me to understand movie's plot

  • @clowncinema
    @clowncinema 4 роки тому +2

    Hey Tyler I just wanna say that I love your videos and they’re really helping me expand my writing skills. Do you think you could make a video analyzing the movie Her?

  • @michaelbrianrawlinsactor
    @michaelbrianrawlinsactor 4 роки тому +1

    I was literally waiting by the UA-cam for this next episode.

  • @Rae066
    @Rae066 4 роки тому +3

    Great video as always, but moving forward with this series I believe you should take the lessons you taught us and apply them to bad movies/shows/comics or whatever. Too many times I search for lessons like these and they show only great examples, but not bad ones. Your take on justice league in this video was great because I had scenes just like this thinking nothing was wrong. Lots of people need help with writing and showing what/how not to do something can go a long way then showing what/how to do something.

  • @storywala88
    @storywala88 4 роки тому +1

    Very informational

  • @pufelmulticolorido
    @pufelmulticolorido 4 роки тому +2

    Always hyped for your videos. Are you going back to doing the live streams?

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  4 роки тому +1

      I may do them. They’re just really mentally intensive to give in depth story feedback off the top of my head while also keeping up with chat

  • @Alexsey095
    @Alexsey095 4 роки тому +2

    Thank you so much for the right and practical information. You rock!

  • @silviacondori1440
    @silviacondori1440 4 роки тому +2

    Thank you so so much for this new video. I am not into writing screenplay like... a lot? 😅😅 My passion are mostly novels, and thanks to you I've learned a lot to improve both my style and my stories!! ♥♥

    • @aldunlop4622
      @aldunlop4622 4 роки тому +1

      Yeah there’s a big difference between the two mediums. Novels require a lot more descriptions because it’s a non-visual medium. You have to describe the world, the scene, even facial expressions. Screenplays have to more succinct and to the point, because they’re mostly about dialogue.

    • @silviacondori1440
      @silviacondori1440 4 роки тому +1

      @@aldunlop4622 Yep, I agree in the difference between these mediums. But all in all, these are only tools at the end. They give us perspective and help us to analize where are the key problems all stories have at the core, which for me is the meaning and the capacity to create empathy in our audience. 🙃
      And even though I haven't watched a lot of movies, I don't think movies are mostly about dialogue?? Not all of them at least. They are a visual medium for a reason, and that is the opportunity of show more than say. The gestures, the facial expression, the body language say more than simple words. 🙈

  • @manavdehi
    @manavdehi 4 роки тому

    I am loving this series!

  • @directorkamble9237
    @directorkamble9237 4 роки тому +1

    Good information sir

  • @johnnypsepulveda
    @johnnypsepulveda 4 роки тому

    This is brilliant bro! Great tips! Thank you!

  • @Rockstar-iu8ye
    @Rockstar-iu8ye 3 роки тому +1

    2:13 There is probably a misinterpretation: It should be "If the SCENE leaves the STORY unchanged, then something is wrong. I know Tyler meant to say SCENE. Just wanted to make it clear. Love you videos.

  • @suryasivakumar7078
    @suryasivakumar7078 4 роки тому +1

    Thanks for sharing, Tyler. It would mean a lot if you could dissect the cab scene in the movie Collateral, some serious philosophical conflict.

  • @DorseyShaw
    @DorseyShaw Рік тому

    The old thumbnail was in my algo for YEARS. You definitely should change it back

  • @KenyaWright
    @KenyaWright 3 роки тому

    Super awesome advice

  • @eugenetswong
    @eugenetswong 3 роки тому

    Thanks. I feel like this will help me to finish my first novel.

  • @benjaminread5287
    @benjaminread5287 4 роки тому +8

    When it comes to structure is there a certain amount of scenes needed per act?
    Also are we gonna get some vids on writing episodes for a series rather than movies?

    • @pacothesheep
      @pacothesheep 4 роки тому +3

      I don't think there's an exact number, but percentage-wise it could be 20:40:20 for each Act, respectively. Then again, you should only use it as a guideline if you're stuck, instead of as a format.
      Regarding writing episodes, you might want to try out Dan Harmon's story circle, or the 2-Act structure, which prevents the characters from undergoing too much change in the span of 1 episode.

    • @Preston_Hudson
      @Preston_Hudson 4 роки тому

      Think of acts as less then the scenes in between but as the beginning and end of each act being a monumental choice or change that the character makes that effects the rest of story and other act points.
      Too long of an act one with set up feels like the story isn’t going anywhere. (Usually this is less than page 30, 17-25 is the sweet spot, but it’s not a rule remember, just a guideline)
      Act 2 is all about building to the midpoint, and the other half is the fallout of the midpoint.
      Act 3 is the response to everything the character’s learned from act 2
      Amount of scenes doesn’t matter, depends on the film. (Pages and minutes does though most of time) More or less scenes just depends on the pacing of the story, if you’re making some small intimate character study, maybe a scene change every 2 min isn’t the best way to go. (Again a guideline)

  • @noahlovesjesus3027
    @noahlovesjesus3027 4 роки тому +1

    Big fan bro. Could you do a video on how to make an opening scene? Thank you.

  • @Leto85
    @Leto85 4 роки тому +3

    But what is Emily's scene goal in the beginning scene in The Big Sick, just to have Kumail drive her to her destination?

  • @Uncarnaled
    @Uncarnaled 4 роки тому +2

    Very informative video, by the way are you still reading short scripts Tyler

  • @itsPsychological
    @itsPsychological 3 роки тому

    Very helpful

  • @clinton7846
    @clinton7846 4 роки тому +1

    Notifications squad

  • @ryanhowell4492
    @ryanhowell4492 10 місяців тому

    I love this

  • @acidspittingllama1865
    @acidspittingllama1865 4 роки тому +2

    How do I actually practise the core fundamentals like what is the technique to learning the skill of a core fundamental. For example I've been trying to implement suspense while I write but obviously I'm a beginner and I dont know if its suspenseful since I'm creating it. I need a technique to learn the skill.

  • @heyrama-itsshowtime007
    @heyrama-itsshowtime007 4 роки тому +1

    Hey great video..🥰

  • @miraclemorning5629
    @miraclemorning5629 4 роки тому +2

    Super... Make a video on how to write dialogue in a scene

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  4 роки тому

      Already did! Check my channel!

  • @dullboy475
    @dullboy475 4 роки тому

    THANK YOU !!!

  • @magdosaurus
    @magdosaurus 3 роки тому +4

    please add subtitles!:)

  • @silvanadonato7869
    @silvanadonato7869 2 роки тому +1

    In my modest opinion, as an audience, sure in an action movie the conflict structure of a scene has a sense. But sometimes it is good to breathe, to have scenes that release the tension, like some poetic moment given by a beautiful view, a moment of fun, etc. Of course always in the context. If the movie is just about achieving a goal, honestly is boring.
    I think that a scene in itself should be a sort of universe, where the audience should live an experience and feel like they lived another life. If it is just to give information to move the story on... again, it is acceptable for an action movie, but not in general.

    • @s-idney
      @s-idney 5 місяців тому

      Like those scenes in Columbo where he's chatting with his dentist or his dog. It just reinforces small things about the world. I like those. I love little dialouge bits too, where characters complain about television or work. It's actually really charming to have a scene that serves the purpose of showing us what these little blorbos get up to in their down time without dragging on for too long.

  • @Nerf_Jeez
    @Nerf_Jeez 4 роки тому

    Jam packed with useful info ONLY

  • @herrimanguy6361
    @herrimanguy6361 4 роки тому +4

    At 2:14-2:15 you said "If the story leaves the scene unchanged, then something is wrong." Don't you mean: "If the scene leaves the story unchanged, then something is wrong." ??

  • @1949AKN
    @1949AKN 3 роки тому

    Very helpful.

  • @JoJo-xp6wr
    @JoJo-xp6wr 4 роки тому +3

    Question: Can the want of a character change with character development?

    • @scrabdusanproductions2104
      @scrabdusanproductions2104 4 роки тому +3

      Sure, if their want was motivated by their lie then overcoming the lie means finding a new want.

    • @JoJo-xp6wr
      @JoJo-xp6wr 4 роки тому

      @@scrabdusanproductions2104 no I mean their goals elevate, from being a supporting role in something to be the one doing that something mainly?

    • @benjaminread5287
      @benjaminread5287 4 роки тому

      @@JoJo-xp6wr of course it can, it's just a matter of how their want ties in with the main narrative, or you could focus closer on him rather than bring him into the main plot and have a significant subplot in which he is the protagonist

    • @JoJo-xp6wr
      @JoJo-xp6wr 4 роки тому +1

      @@benjaminread5287 thanks my friend

  • @TomEyeTheSFMguy
    @TomEyeTheSFMguy 4 роки тому +1

    You ever gonna do a video on theme?

  • @RUSHMP4
    @RUSHMP4 3 роки тому +2

    ok i get it, suicide squad is the best exemple when it comes to bad exemples

  • @omnijonn277
    @omnijonn277 Рік тому +1

    I can easily come up with a scene. I just have to write it. Lol.

  • @Poisonedblade
    @Poisonedblade 4 роки тому +5

    People complain about Marvel Movies: that you forget the plot 15 minutes later.
    I can't even remember if I watched Justice League.

  • @ryanford7443
    @ryanford7443 4 роки тому +7

    Don't mean to nitpick, but when he said, "If the story leaves the scene unchanged," didn't he mean to say, "If the scene leaves the story unchanged"?

    • @TomEyeTheSFMguy
      @TomEyeTheSFMguy 4 роки тому +1

      That's a simple correction. And yes, I do believe he did.

  • @r.harlansmith7282
    @r.harlansmith7282 3 місяці тому

    Sometimes a scene doesn't have to move the story forward.
    Sometimes a scene just moves the character forward or backward.
    Sometimes it's only what the scene wants.
    Write what you want written and write it the way you want it to be read.

  • @Harshal378
    @Harshal378 3 роки тому +2

    Any difference between screenplay writing and scene writing?

  • @East9211
    @East9211 3 роки тому

    Does this also go with book stories too?

  • @Social-Ocean
    @Social-Ocean 4 роки тому +2

    It seems to me that Tyler himself is confused in his arguments.
    Have a look:
    What do the characters want? "Find love"
    What is the problem? "One of them does not want to find love"
    It seems to me that either the first or the second argument is wrong. Because they are mutually exclusive.

    • @Social-Ocean
      @Social-Ocean 4 роки тому +1

      @aπостол антuxpucтa Right! And if she thinks so, then she does not want to find a love (in this scene).
      So why are "both characters wants to find love" (in this particular scene) ?

  • @kalakritistudios
    @kalakritistudios 4 роки тому +2

    I remember only the joke from the Justice League.🤣

  • @abelmarcelino2401
    @abelmarcelino2401 4 роки тому +1

    How to write a heist movie please

  • @politicalscientist8880
    @politicalscientist8880 3 роки тому

    This fit TV? What do we think?

  • @FabianEllis
    @FabianEllis 4 роки тому

    Haven’t you already made this video? Oh is this like an updated version?

  • @anthonycosentino463
    @anthonycosentino463 Рік тому +1

    So in a zombie movie most scenes will just be about the characters wanting to survive.

    • @s-idney
      @s-idney 5 місяців тому +1

      It's dependant on the situation and characters and the world. The Walking Dead TellTale games have this down pretty well.
      It's not just "Survive zombies" it's also "We don't have enough food to feed everyone. We don't know how zombies come about. Is it a virus or is it all dead things? Where did this nice family get all this meat if they run a dairy farm? Who can we trust? What now? What does it mean to live in the shadows of a dead world?"
      Get creative. These scenes can change how acharcter views the world, themselves, and eachother. Maybe after I denied these strangers entry to our camp everyone thinks I'm a jerk but I'm not sure if we can trust or feed them or even keep them safe. Maybe I _know_ that we probably won't survive but I don't tell anyone because their hope is more important than how I feel.
      Use your imagination, I know you can do it.

    • @anthonycosentino463
      @anthonycosentino463 5 місяців тому +1

      I'm on the 2nd draft of a zombie novel taking place in NYC, and yes, there is so much to think about and consider. It's mentally exhausting.

    • @s-idney
      @s-idney 5 місяців тому

      @@anthonycosentino463 it's a _slllllllooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww_ process

  • @therohitbabuofnotre-dame7182
    @therohitbabuofnotre-dame7182 2 роки тому

    What is that movie where the guy is breaking a sink with a hammer?

  • @ergocinema
    @ergocinema 4 роки тому +1

    Tyler, what's your take on rewriting a script, not just a scene?

  • @SaiqaAskari
    @SaiqaAskari 4 роки тому

    Tq

  • @emhenriose1856
    @emhenriose1856 3 роки тому +1

    Did each scene need to have a conflict??

  • @Gtex555
    @Gtex555 4 роки тому

    5th!

  • @codyeasonBGR
    @codyeasonBGR 4 роки тому +11

    I cringed when i had to watch the justice league scene

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  4 роки тому +4

      It’s not great haha

    • @codyeasonBGR
      @codyeasonBGR 4 роки тому +3

      @@TylerMowery when you said watch a bad scene i was like oh No! Do you need say more great example of poor writing.

  • @wrench246
    @wrench246 10 місяців тому

    Why don't I use those four questions when writing the scene the first time?

  • @joescho
    @joescho 4 роки тому

    lets go

  • @pinakichakraborty8759
    @pinakichakraborty8759 Рік тому

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @antoine807
    @antoine807 3 роки тому

    10:06 Bat-mangoes

  • @andresoneca4414
    @andresoneca4414 4 роки тому

    How to create relationships between characters, friends, father and son