They Called it a Museum Piece, Until the Human Dreadnought Roared to Life | HFY Full Story

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КОМЕНТАРІ • 48

  • @Cranky931
    @Cranky931 Місяць тому +6

    If the Indomitable was destroyed after ramming the enemy Flagship in a blinding super nova....HOW is it still intact as a Museum Piece?

  • @glorialundin2151
    @glorialundin2151 Місяць тому +9

    I liked the story, and the narrative.

  • @Ingolenuru
    @Ingolenuru Місяць тому +1

    Great job!!! This was a different take on aliens observing humans and it really helps to better understand other sci-fi stories about how truly adaptable humans are.

  • @hiddentruth1982
    @hiddentruth1982 Місяць тому +10

    Victory always has a price. It's just a matter of what the price is and who will pay it.

  • @vassurlbessjr4317
    @vassurlbessjr4317 Місяць тому +1

    Great storytelling. I enjoyed the story.❤❤❤❤

  • @jeffreyvoorheis6255
    @jeffreyvoorheis6255 25 днів тому +1

    I did like the story!

  • @PeterTattam-bd3fb
    @PeterTattam-bd3fb Місяць тому +1

    I like the story.

  • @geraldmahoney4856
    @geraldmahoney4856 23 дні тому

    All right! Duct tape survived into the future.

  • @carlpower164
    @carlpower164 Місяць тому

    I love your telling of the story and it brings you right in to the story line.

  • @ThumperPruitt
    @ThumperPruitt День тому

    I liked the story and wish for more. Being a vet

  • @iakatat2
    @iakatat2 Місяць тому +3

    Good story

  • @angiederooy1934
    @angiederooy1934 26 днів тому

    I do like the story again you've helped during a sleepless night

  • @jerryrose9109
    @jerryrose9109 23 дні тому

    Two points here: first, in the first few minutes you have the wreckage of an alien spacecraft spiraling into the sun. Unless the laws of physics have been changed recently, a spiral is not a possible orbit.
    Secondly, an explosion in a vacuum is not like an explosion in an atmosphere. In a vacuum there is no medium for a shock wave to travel through. There may be some damage from shrapnel and other debris, but nothing from the shock wave that doesn’t exist.

  • @duds1945
    @duds1945 19 днів тому

    liked the story,

  • @alexanderrosario8569
    @alexanderrosario8569 29 днів тому

    If I'm gonna die kicking alien ass I'm quoting independence day
    "HELLO BOYS! I'M BAAAAACK AAAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!"

  • @littledikkins2253
    @littledikkins2253 Місяць тому

    A very good story, I loved it....even if parts of it brought tears to my eyes.

  • @davebeckman1514
    @davebeckman1514 12 днів тому

    Okay, that was a great story 👍88

  • @clintdodson44
    @clintdodson44 Місяць тому +2

    I like the story

  • @juergenwolf5476
    @juergenwolf5476 Місяць тому +3

    Story is nice , but how is it possible that the ship is on display after it blew up ?Ah to the end the answer

  • @bearjawhomestead
    @bearjawhomestead 24 дні тому

    "You shall not pass!"

  • @rayoverde1
    @rayoverde1 Місяць тому

    I liked the story.

  • @sunshineamthauer3668
    @sunshineamthauer3668 18 годин тому

    Love these stories!! However certain phrases are used ad nuaseam. But, great story!! I am an over 60yrs.. thinking I was born to soon. So proud to be a human!!!! Even if it is imaginary. Thanks ☀️

  • @EmilBubb
    @EmilBubb Місяць тому

    Brilliant story.

  • @younggraphics
    @younggraphics Місяць тому

    Excellent story

  • @vreed8755
    @vreed8755 Місяць тому

    Love the story. ❤

  • @armandolising-yz3qk
    @armandolising-yz3qk Місяць тому

    I do like the story

  • @Synder1982
    @Synder1982 Місяць тому

    I really liked and enjoyed the story

  • @laureeharrison5967
    @laureeharrison5967 26 днів тому

    I have enjoyed your story's

  • @moxgion
    @moxgion Місяць тому

    ❤❤❤ I like the story.

  • @charlesadams1725
    @charlesadams1725 День тому

    i like the store

  • @peterjensen3559
    @peterjensen3559 Місяць тому +21

    honestly I do like your story but there's something you need to remember, sometimes you're telling the same story over and over again in your podcast and it's the exact same you just start a little over and then you put in a few other words but that eight-hour story goes that's sets me back for after listening to your story for a half an hour about 15 minutes back and starting all over again and that makes me turn off your story

    • @Cranky931
      @Cranky931 Місяць тому +4

      The stories are good, however many of them do repeat. The people who post them are far too lazy to remove the repetition

    • @CryptidsRoost
      @CryptidsRoost 29 днів тому

      Agreed, this is the problem when they have it written by AI, usually ChatGPT. Where the repetitions come in is where they asked for a certain section to have more detail and as you rightly said, they haven't bothered to edit it when they do the audio editing.
      Also, many authors on Reddit who have their stories narrated are getting fed up with them being AI/TTS narrated. I am starting a new channel (this one) telling reddit-based sci-fi stories, and I won't have them AI/TTS narrated. The first 5-6 stories go up in the next couple of days.

  • @andrewmcbride798
    @andrewmcbride798 Місяць тому

    I really enjoyed the story.
    It also reminds us That we are still fighting the dark forces.
    In 2024... Humanity and the light forces will win.

  • @johndelmar9148
    @johndelmar9148 19 днів тому

    This will be the last video I listen to on this channel. There's literally a commercial break every 3 to 5 minutes and I can't get into the story like that.

  • @jimkillen1065
    @jimkillen1065 19 днів тому

    Enjoy the videos

  • @thomaslengauer8213
    @thomaslengauer8213 Місяць тому

  • @Rick-lb8sm
    @Rick-lb8sm 9 днів тому

    I noticed in a lot of your stories you like to say the fate of the universe relies upon them just in case you do not know the word fate means the same as destiny and that cannot be changed you might try substituting the word fate words like relying on or depending on us

  • @markpica1416
    @markpica1416 Місяць тому

    I like the story it repeated a lot so I got bored not even half way through which Is disappointing to say the least 😞

  • @FeralPreacher
    @FeralPreacher Місяць тому

    Good story, but far too long. Could have been told in an hour or less. Too many repetitions, too many pauses for effect.

  • @lauriestlyon8773
    @lauriestlyon8773 Місяць тому

    Yet sgain an AI story in need of serious editing.
    It actually has good bones but...!

  • @serdalkeskin8624
    @serdalkeskin8624 Місяць тому

    why always double the telled story....all the sentences are only turned in a way and then the same explanation again...without the doubletell it would shorten all this to half!? 1:35:19 into 67:00 .... maybe even shorter but the same story non the less....whatever was a ok story

  • @denizdemircan9928
    @denizdemircan9928 Місяць тому

    The writing is weak. Repetitive descriptors and unoriginal regurgitation of well weathered concepts.
    There is potential here.

  • @user-kd5xw8rb1n
    @user-kd5xw8rb1n Місяць тому

    Okay so what and how could a ship survive a ship blowing up, destroying everything but that ship?? Come on I know this is sci-fi but really? Work on your storyline better.

  • @cbsupertech
    @cbsupertech 21 день тому

    Good story

  • @user-ye5cy6ig9u
    @user-ye5cy6ig9u Місяць тому

    I like the story