Maala's behavior towards mahir very bad and why she couldn't forgive him in every epi he says sorry and apologize for his mistake but she is hurting him toooo much now why she can't see love in his eyes😢
Seriously on the whole i didn’t enjoy this episode at all. First half was so sluggish and the last half was so fast paced. The things didn’t hit to their right spots. The fat shaming and social media trolling was not suited well with the story same as the Kardashian story in the previous episode. And how Nemrah responds that we are here for cheesy romance of Maala and Mahir that is a big NO we are expecting more than that. We as readers has evolved as u said and writers are not ready to accept that we have right for constructive criticism but i think she’s not ready to take that. This episodes contains alot of plot-holes , lacking the essence of Maala and above all i have lost all my interest in the story.
Maala is getting bored n losing its charm by delaying its writer... jis terhan dursi jobs hain ap ko apna kam waqt pe karna hota hai chahy kuch bhi ho isi terhan writing bhi aik job us waqt ban jati hai jab ap apny readers se commitment karty hain k ap regular episode daly gain..so there's no justification for delaying it's been about 2 years now jab Maala start hua tha n just 16 episodes hoi hain aur abhi pata nahi kitni baqi hain
Behen Mala 16 epi is bigger than namal and jannat ke pattay.. I dont want more than one or two ep now.. Now i just want the satisfaction that yeah i finished it bass..
But they searched bcz Mahir asked Malik to do that.. But yeah.. At the end it feels rushed.. And I so badly wanted Mahir to save mala but may be that would ve been too romantic for Nimrah.
Seriously I also love and like nimra ahmad novels I read Halim its too different and informative story you also read halim seriously heart touching novel😇
Love your review Rabia! I was also not expecting these clues by Maala and it was heart breaking to see Halal. No I didn't thought about Maala's abortion for once even. But I wanted them to be happy at least once in novel.
I also felt she didn't do that...Mohid kon? Mala ka bhai? Moid? I 100% agree ke independent honay ka matlab ye nahi hai ke jo chahay karen aap aur help na lain ksi ki...and Independent honay ko bohat ghalat display kiya jata hai ajkal...Maza kharab hogaya specially badar ke anay ki wajah se...Evolve karnay wali bat bilkul theek hai...kuch arsay pehlay ke novels ab bilkul nahi parhay jatay...
I guess sarkar's kaamwali is going to be next sarkar and she kidnapped maala's son badar. Also yes I cried for halal. Mahir and halal's scene was so emotional
Nimrah Ahmed kay sab novel ma ek lesson hota hy 𝙈𝘼𝘼𝙇𝘼 ma bhi ek lesson hy apny readers k lye 𝙨𝙚𝙝𝙧, 𝙟𝙖𝙙𝙤𝙤, 𝙗𝙡𝙖𝙘𝙠 𝙢𝙖𝙜𝙞𝙘 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚, 𝙨𝙚𝙝𝙧 𝙚 𝙞𝙨𝙝𝙦 𝙠 𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙝𝙮 etc,,, bohat amazing novel very different theme n story❤ another masterpiece like 𝙃𝙖𝙖𝙡𝙞𝙢
Very nice review @Rabia … I have same mixed reviews for this episode… and yes if you have a good option for shadi after divorce whom you know for couple of years and still you want to stay away from marriage .. it really doesn’t make sense .. ya toh koi ho hi na life May acha friend etc toh theek hai but it’s like forcefully shadi na karo 😐
Hi Rabia, thanks for your taught full review. ❤Yes, there are some flaws but, overall it’s engaging and thrilling episode. One of the hardest one. I agreed that Mala behaviour towards Mahir is unfair and could’ve been better. Missing berbal as you said. Sarkar’s and Mahir’s face off should be shown more powerful.
Hi Rabia you always good review but ye bhi sch hy kch chezain bht distracting th r kafi chezain k drama sy lee hain jesy ice truck r tracker k jam hojana wagera but informative bhi th r ye k sth na hona mala r mahir k mujhy bhi acha nhi lga lakin nemreh ny novel start krny sy phly h btadia th k love story nhi hy
This was the weakest writing of Nemrah Ahmed and her behavior towards her readers was so rude ....she can't take criticism...we dn't want cheap and cheesy Romance but we want logic and sense... Maala is wastage of time after this episode 😑😑
Rabia kiya apko ye sahi laga kay mala serial killer k sath akeli chali gai apni sister ko bhi nai bataya as far as i remember in JKP u'd obection k haya k sath turkey mein itna kuch hua aur usne apni family ko inform bhi nai kia is it correct?
Totally agreed with your list of weak points about this episode. Maala in the last scene was very arrogant and rude and just cutting out friendly relation just bcoz of a little reason was pathetic.
Your review was amazing as always and No novel Yahan khatam nahi hoo sakhta tha bcz novel ager yahan end hoota tu remember mahir had said multiple times to maala keh wo hilal ki badli us se kuch bhi mang sakti hai and I was wondering keh maala issa kiya mangi gi mahir se and now I'm so excited mahir badar ko keisi dhoondi ga aur Jo mahir aur ziyad ne ek dosri ko death threat de hooi hai I guess usko bhi nemrah connect kareingi so I'm excited for next epi
Rabia you’re very kind to Nemrah Ahmad or slightly scared 😂as I feel😅I love Nemrah Ahmad’s writing style still I feel as you said audience or readers are evolving YES I agree with you and don’t you think Nemrah Ahmad’s writing style is evolving too? Like why she go to that extent where she needs to show Zyad a serial killer? The story line was very interesting and engaging before this twist,though I don’t feel it’s a twist, to me it’s a blunder.all jadoo like things and how a girl and her family going through that was very good and new for me still I was struck for the first time when Zyad became a serial killer all of a sudden and honestly to me all the essence of the novel finished on that part.I debated with my sister for hours on that…and by the why we are not immature girls who are new readers of fictional novels.we are reading books more than the years of Nemrah’s age)why she went to that extent (zaroori to nahi jo jo cheez hum daikh or sunn rahay hain woh use ker lein novel mein.beheaded body of Noor mukadam put me and many of us in trauma for months.and It wasn’t necessary in this novel.Zyad was already being sarkar’s son doing many bad things and had toxic traits so why she go to that extent totally unnecessary plot.still she thinks she is the only person who chooses what to write n why.we are part of her as we are connected with her in many ways so she should value us and our thought process.what do you think about it?need your honest feedback
You didnt talk about the time lapse...and the way mala barged in mahir's meeting..and the way she talked to mahir..it felt like mala was not meeting mahir after 4 years but the day after their fight😶
One wow moment was the euthanasia note,that was simple but clever. The encounter of sarkar and mahir was very underwhelming. Zaid is a sehar e ishq baby too (nepo sehar e ishq baby 😂 ) what about his supernatural abilities ?he had none unlike hilal?
Kashmala has 10 percent self respect and 90 parcent arrogance...Writer jo Mala ki self respect dikhana chah rhi thi wo ab uski akad bn chuki h..kyu ki duniya me koi sensible insan itne gurur se kbhi nhi kehta ki mujhe kbhi kisi ki zrurat nhi padegi..hm sbko ek dusre ki zarurat padti h isi liye ye duniya chal rhi h
Pichli episodes mein maala nay mahir ko yeh kaha tha kay Pakistan say Canada log sirf weekends par kaam nhi kernay aatay....iss liye kaif sirf weekends par photography iss liye karta ha agar ussay baqi days kay liye kissi nay hire kiya hua ha...aur woh zyad ha. This was that conversation's point. Maala nay yeh nhi kaha tha kay woh photography kerta hi nhi ha. And kaif Canada mein Paison kay liye ha...woh tou paisay kay liye kuch bhi keray ga chahay photography ya jasoosi. So it was a valid point from Nemra. Btw I did not like Maala being illusionist. And one more thing maala used to change her mood and mind by controlling her breadths but she could not do it for four years and has same anger.
Malaa is a regular girl unlike zaid ,talia ,Faris or cihan,her going all James Bond is out of character. She says zaid won’t kill me when she knows he is a serial killer and tried killing even Sabrina ,the woman he loved m.malaa trusts zaid but not mahir. The way she is rude to mahir why she never takes that tone with moeed,kaif,zaid or sarkar they all more then deserved that. Mahir tells her he is getting married and she had absolutely no regard for his right to move on,no respect for his boundaries,she demands him to help her and that too with so much dhons kis haisiyat se? Nemrah kinda gaslights her readers by saying you guys don’t understand or have regressive mindset… why because we expect a strong emancipated woman to also be civil and capable of regulating her emotions while keeping her boundaries intact.
I strongly agreed with the missing of birbel plot at the end as he was the most joyous n interesting character of the story i seriously loved his dialouges n they always brings smiles on my face 😊😊 and 2ndly i guess tht Malaa being hyper n show anger on Mahir just on helping her was the worst part n thts so childesh when she said tht i dont wanna see u again n sadly their story ended 😢 i just wish this story turns towards a good happy ending cox i personally dont like sad endings n its very difficult to digest tht two ppl who r in love falls apart 😔😔
Ek point ap bhool gai jb "mala" &"hilal" container me hoti hen or mala hilal se conversation kr rhi hoti hai tb suddenly hilal kehti hai mala tm sb kuch nhi janti tm or mahir bhai sb nhi janty kuch asa hai jo tmhe nhi maloom
When I read Halim's 2 to 3 episode and I came to know the story was just a mixture of some English novels and Bollywood movies so I left that novel to read, but then my friend said it was just your over thinking but I totally lost my interest as I didn't digest the plagerism which contain in HALIM. I LEFT reading nimrah's novel. Maala was the novel which again drag my attention towards nimrah's writing, but this time her behaviour towards her readers shocked me. I think she should listen to her readers , we are very mature readers, she should think about us as she is the only one modern Urdu writer we are considering to read.
She is so busy in writing Quran tadubaur and Allah's name tafseer and now seerah also .... We shd appreciate her.... She is compromising her novel( her real career) for Allah's book
Sehr e Ishq se paida hone wali aulad, Saahir k lye qeemti hoti hai, wo use har haal me hasil krta hai. In Ziad's case, Saahir uski Ammi (Nageena Begum) hoti hai, wo khud hi kisi pr sehr e ishq krti hai, to us sehr e ishq k nateje me hone wali aulad (Ziad) uski APNI hi aulad hoti hai. That's why no one abducts Ziad.
Birbeel was there in the story moatly to give relief but i think this episode was not like that... It was meant to be like this without birbeel... only thing is time travel which is sometimes not understandable...
All points in your reviews I'm agreed to it... I love nemra's all novel, loving mala to, completely different style qnd tuch.but she gives the episode very late by that time you forget it what happened in to the previous episodes.... that's irritating me, otherwise would be the best novel.
Jo sarkar ki made Hoti ha I think us ki bi koi clue ha or Maher ka uncle ka bi beacaus in the hole novel in dono character ka bary ma abhi tk Kuch khas ni btya Kuch to missing ha or bader ka jahn tk ha to us ka Kuch khas smj ni Ara ku ka wo Jo mala ko restaurant ma bi larka milta tha mala usy bi dekh ka shocked Hoti thi or jb mahir us sa us larky ka bary ma puchta ha tb bi wo confused ho jati thi or one more important think yar mahir ko to dream ma Jo sarkar Nazar ata tha wo koi men HOTA tha but wo zaid ki mother Hoti thi I thought ka Maher ka uncle bi koi sarkar han ku ka wo mahir ko hospital ma asa Kuch kehty bi thy apny kareeby hi enemy hoty han anyway ab ye to next ep ma hi PTA chla ga I am waiting long time
kaif may be us ne photography ka sucha ho q ke zaid use paise nae de raha tha or us ni photography ki to nae na blke dhoke se sirf paise hi lie the. second full episode bht achi thi except last part mahir ko nae chahiye tha ke wo us ka debt deta Bcz wo janta tha ke mala bht gusa kre gi or mala Mahi or malik se bhi madad mang skti thi magar wo kisi ki madad nae lena chathi thi to mahir ko us ki madad nae krni chahiye the Berbel ko waqai hona chahiye tha us ke begair bilkul bhi nae maza nae ata Badr ka first 85 percent lgta tha wo zinda hai q ke mala janti thi ke kaif us peecha kr raha so us ne acting ki or phir nemrah ne Hme mala ke side ka koi seen nae bta magar jb mala nageena se kehti "magar mujhe marne se dr lgta" then 100 Percent hogaya ke Badr zinda hai and your missing point mahir ne last pe ye bhi kaha hai ke wo shadi kr raha
11:21 Yes ye conversation mahir ke Sath hui thi but at this point ye plan bhi zeyada ka tha I think pehly Kaif ne larki se commitment ki or phir bhag gya or phir Jo SB hua Maala ko social media main log insult krny lgy ye SB mala ko phsany ke Liye Tha i think
aapne hilal aur mahir ka meetup miss kerdia sarkaar ki death pe bhi kuch nhn kaha..And one thing about the last scene jahan maala mahir se itna behas kerti hai k tumne paise kyon diye I predict k uska koi reason hoga maybe novel mein jaake aage explain ho yeh baat.Aur doSra jo woh scene tha yeh sara photograpy wala I think woh sahi tha ek to humein yeh idea mila k maala ko ek job kese mili and dosra writer humein batati hai k log beauty k iliye kis extreme tak jaate hain..Ya kitni bodyshaming hai uske baad social media ka jo tha woh bhi sahi tha.But the major last scene jahan maala maahir k office mein jaati hai wahan maala ka behaviour buht irrevelant aur kisi had tak galat tha..
Kia sarkar ki maut itni asan honi chaye the. Mahir tu badla bhi na lesaka apna itne saal sirr Sarakar ko dhomdne mai laga dia bechara neib mili tu kia hoa😮. And nagina k bachpan mai aisa bhi Kuch bura nahi hoa jo iska hisab sa AGG jaisaa tha
nageen pay jadoo kesy ulta par gaya ?? itna asan hai jadoo ka. tor ??? mahir konsa wali tha.jo.urdu main dailouge kahay aur jadoo.palat gaya ??? ye tow tamil.movie main hota hai gun say.goli nikal.k.wapis villan ko.lagti thi bohat childish scene tha aur mahir ko.marna kiun zaruri tha nageen k liye uska aoni beahn.ko dhoondna konsa ghalat tha?? sub say buri baat bar bar ye kaha.gaya gumshuda bachy nahi milty. kuch arsa bad log bhool.jatay han how.how.?? kon.bhool.jata hai ??? agar bacha mar jaey sabar ajata hai gum.hojaey zindagi bhar ka rog hota hai
Ap nay sarkar k marny peh kloi baat nehi ki Kiya ap ko nehi lagta k sarkar ko itni jaldi nhi marna chahiye Tha kiyu k abhi to sarkar ka raaz khula aur forn he ussay maar diya this is soo wrong abhi us say intkam Lena chahiye Tha mahir ko
12:55 Maala ko isliye mahir p ghusa tha qk woh janti ha k mahir loves her awr mahir k intentions kiya ha ,woh maala ko hi chahta ha , tou ise lye maala ko ghusa aya k ye mere is kaam me involve na hota use lgta h me us pe dependent hu ya( mujhe uske zrurt ha ya par skti ha) Awr abhi tlaq ko zyada months bhi nhi hue Maala Mahir k intentions janti thi isliye ghusaa hue thi , that's it
that was 636364th time I felt nimra has done unfair with mahir. Mahir has always been soo kind and caring towards his every relation. From that episode till now after just reading 19 I feel maahir deserves a better and caring partner unfortunately maala only cares about her son and herself. Maahir deserves better😭😭😭
Mala ko itna our react nahi karna chahiye tha... mahir ne toh help bhi ki thi, iske bawajud ke mahir uski bahen ke liye aaya tha phir bhi... aur sarkar ki maut itni asani se nhi hona chahiye tha usne kitni logo ki zindagi barbad ki thi...
Maala's behavior towards mahir very bad and why she couldn't forgive him in every epi he says sorry and apologize for his mistake but she is hurting him toooo much now why she can't see love in his eyes😢
Nimra ahmad all novels are very interesting and full of suspense..... really I salute her for her writing skills......i was waiting for ur review...😊
Seriously on the whole i didn’t enjoy this episode at all. First half was so sluggish and the last half was so fast paced. The things didn’t hit to their right spots. The fat shaming and social media trolling was not suited well with the story same as the Kardashian story in the previous episode. And how Nemrah responds that we are here for cheesy romance of Maala and Mahir that is a big NO we are expecting more than that. We as readers has evolved as u said and writers are not ready to accept that we have right for constructive criticism but i think she’s not ready to take that. This episodes contains alot of plot-holes , lacking the essence of Maala and above all i have lost all my interest in the story.
Thanks for your review🔥.....love you😍
Really mahir don't deserve that egoist behavior of mala
I was waiting for your review,it completes the episode ❤
Maala is getting bored n losing its charm by delaying its writer... jis terhan dursi jobs hain ap ko apna kam waqt pe karna hota hai chahy kuch bhi ho isi terhan writing bhi aik job us waqt ban jati hai jab ap apny readers se commitment karty hain k ap regular episode daly gain..so there's no justification for delaying it's been about 2 years now jab Maala start hua tha n just 16 episodes hoi hain aur abhi pata nahi kitni baqi hain
Behen Mala 16 epi is bigger than namal and jannat ke pattay.. I dont want more than one or two ep now.. Now i just want the satisfaction that yeah i finished it bass..
Mallik's staff member found Hilal just by searching the tickets information. The whole story of Mahir and Mala finding Hilal is now useles.
But they searched bcz Mahir asked Malik to do that.. But yeah.. At the end it feels rushed.. And I so badly wanted Mahir to save mala but may be that would ve been too romantic for Nimrah.
Maala had a very promising start and I actually thought her to be THE WOMEN everyone should look up as an ideal women. Now? I’m not sure😐
That's what malla is portraying how our society is
Seriously I also love and like nimra ahmad novels I read Halim its too different and informative story you also read halim seriously heart touching novel😇
I wanna say that #rabiamughni is very, very respectful reviewer among all the lot of reviewers I came across and also emotional too!!
Love your review Rabia! I was also not expecting these clues by Maala and it was heart breaking to see Halal. No I didn't thought about Maala's abortion for once even. But I wanted them to be happy at least once in novel.
I also felt she didn't do that...Mohid kon? Mala ka bhai? Moid? I 100% agree ke independent honay ka matlab ye nahi hai ke jo chahay karen aap aur help na lain ksi ki...and Independent honay ko bohat ghalat display kiya jata hai ajkal...Maza kharab hogaya specially badar ke anay ki wajah se...Evolve karnay wali bat bilkul theek hai...kuch arsay pehlay ke novels ab bilkul nahi parhay jatay...
I guess sarkar's kaamwali is going to be next sarkar and she kidnapped maala's son badar. Also yes I cried for halal. Mahir and halal's scene was so emotional
Was waiting for your review Rabia!❤
Nimrah Ahmed kay sab novel ma ek lesson hota hy 𝙈𝘼𝘼𝙇𝘼 ma bhi ek lesson hy apny readers k lye 𝙨𝙚𝙝𝙧, 𝙟𝙖𝙙𝙤𝙤, 𝙗𝙡𝙖𝙘𝙠 𝙢𝙖𝙜𝙞𝙘 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚, 𝙨𝙚𝙝𝙧 𝙚 𝙞𝙨𝙝𝙦 𝙠 𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙝𝙮 etc,,, bohat amazing novel very different theme n story❤ another masterpiece like 𝙃𝙖𝙖𝙡𝙞𝙢
Suggest me halim namal or Jannat k paaty what shd be 1st to be read?
@@bushra6319 Haalim read karain
Jannat ke pattay @@bushra6319
@@bushra6319namal definitely
Very nice review @Rabia … I have same mixed reviews for this episode… and yes if you have a good option for shadi after divorce whom you know for couple of years and still you want to stay away from marriage .. it really doesn’t make sense .. ya toh koi ho hi na life May acha friend etc toh theek hai but it’s like forcefully shadi na karo 😐
Who is here before reading ep 17, so
They understand the upcoming episode????
Thankyou so much Miss Rabia 😊❤
Hi Rabia, thanks for your taught full review. ❤Yes, there are some flaws but, overall it’s engaging and thrilling episode. One of the hardest one. I agreed that Mala behaviour towards Mahir is unfair and could’ve been better.
Missing berbal as you said.
Sarkar’s and Mahir’s face off should be shown more powerful.
Hi Rabia you always good review but ye bhi sch hy kch chezain bht distracting th r kafi chezain k drama sy lee hain jesy ice truck r tracker k jam hojana wagera but informative bhi th r ye k sth na hona mala r mahir k mujhy bhi acha nhi lga lakin nemreh ny novel start krny sy phly h btadia th k love story nhi hy
Literally waited for ur review
Episode had plothóles.. yes it got frustrated.. yes maala is flawed but she is rude and ajeeb now
This was the weakest writing of Nemrah Ahmed and her behavior towards her readers was so rude ....she can't take criticism...we dn't want cheap and cheesy Romance but we want logic and sense... Maala is wastage of time after this episode 😑😑
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Rabia kiya apko ye sahi laga kay mala serial killer k sath akeli chali gai apni sister ko bhi nai bataya as far as i remember in JKP u'd obection k haya k sath turkey mein itna kuch hua aur usne apni family ko inform bhi nai kia is it correct?
Totally agreed with your list of weak points about this episode. Maala in the last scene was very arrogant and rude and just cutting out friendly relation just bcoz of a little reason was pathetic.
I was waiting for your review and ahhhh you understand the situation 😭😭😭🤍🤍
Your review was amazing as always and No novel Yahan khatam nahi hoo sakhta tha bcz novel ager yahan end hoota tu remember mahir had said multiple times to maala keh wo hilal ki badli us se kuch bhi mang sakti hai and I was wondering keh maala issa kiya mangi gi mahir se and now I'm so excited mahir badar ko keisi dhoondi ga aur Jo mahir aur ziyad ne ek dosri ko death threat de hooi hai I guess usko bhi nemrah connect kareingi so I'm excited for next epi
Rabia you’re very kind to Nemrah Ahmad or slightly scared 😂as I feel😅I love Nemrah Ahmad’s writing style still I feel as you said audience or readers are evolving YES I agree with you and don’t you think Nemrah Ahmad’s writing style is evolving too? Like why she go to that extent where she needs to show Zyad a serial killer? The story line was very interesting and engaging before this twist,though I don’t feel it’s a twist, to me it’s a blunder.all jadoo like things and how a girl and her family going through that was very good and new for me still I was struck for the first time when Zyad became a serial killer all of a sudden and honestly to me all the essence of the novel finished on that part.I debated with my sister for hours on that…and by the why we are not immature girls who are new readers of fictional novels.we are reading books more than the years of Nemrah’s age)why she went to that extent (zaroori to nahi jo jo cheez hum daikh or sunn rahay hain woh use ker lein novel mein.beheaded body of Noor mukadam put me and many of us in trauma for months.and It wasn’t necessary in this novel.Zyad was already being sarkar’s son doing many bad things and had toxic traits so why she go to that extent totally unnecessary plot.still she thinks she is the only person who chooses what to write n why.we are part of her as we are connected with her in many ways so she should value us and our thought process.what do you think about it?need your honest feedback
You didnt talk about the time lapse...and the way mala barged in mahir's meeting..and the way she talked to mahir..it felt like mala was not meeting mahir after 4 years but the day after their fight😶
One wow moment was the euthanasia note,that was simple but clever.
The encounter of sarkar and mahir was very underwhelming.
Zaid is a sehar e ishq baby too (nepo sehar e ishq baby 😂 ) what about his supernatural abilities ?he had none unlike hilal?
He's psycho and blood lovin' because of this
Note every child have powers. And power that hilal have not bcz she is sehre ishq baby. The power she had is KARAMAT
What exactly you mean by karamat
Kashmala has 10 percent self respect and 90 parcent arrogance...Writer jo Mala ki self respect dikhana chah rhi thi wo ab uski akad bn chuki h..kyu ki duniya me koi sensible insan itne gurur se kbhi nhi kehta ki mujhe kbhi kisi ki zrurat nhi padegi..hm sbko ek dusre ki zarurat padti h isi liye ye duniya chal rhi h
Kehty sab hain trust me
Thanks alot Rabia for doing the review ❤️
Pichli episodes mein maala nay mahir ko yeh kaha tha kay Pakistan say Canada log sirf weekends par kaam nhi kernay aatay....iss liye kaif sirf weekends par photography iss liye karta ha agar ussay baqi days kay liye kissi nay hire kiya hua ha...aur woh zyad ha. This was that conversation's point. Maala nay yeh nhi kaha tha kay woh photography kerta hi nhi ha. And kaif Canada mein Paison kay liye ha...woh tou paisay kay liye kuch bhi keray ga chahay photography ya jasoosi. So it was a valid point from Nemra. Btw I did not like Maala being illusionist. And one more thing maala used to change her mood and mind by controlling her breadths but she could not do it for four years and has same anger.
Malaa is a regular girl unlike zaid ,talia ,Faris or cihan,her going all James Bond is out of character.
She says zaid won’t kill me when she knows he is a serial killer and tried killing even Sabrina ,the woman he loved m.malaa trusts zaid but not mahir.
The way she is rude to mahir why she never takes that tone with moeed,kaif,zaid or sarkar they all more then deserved that.
Mahir tells her he is getting married and she had absolutely no regard for his right to move on,no respect for his boundaries,she demands him to help her and that too with so much dhons kis haisiyat se?
Nemrah kinda gaslights her readers by saying you guys don’t understand or have regressive mindset… why because we expect a strong emancipated woman to also be civil and capable of regulating her emotions while keeping her boundaries intact.
Valid points ,!!
Exactly
The last fight was actually stupid.. Mala was literally finding a reason to cut him off.. That was so not needed..
🙋♀️ 4:56 Mujhy bhi Shaq tha کچھ کھٹک رہا تھا or Mera pehla guess thek hua hai is novel bary main 😅 clap for me👏
I strongly agreed with the missing of birbel plot at the end as he was the most joyous n interesting character of the story i seriously loved his dialouges n they always brings smiles on my face 😊😊 and 2ndly i guess tht Malaa being hyper n show anger on Mahir just on helping her was the worst part n thts so childesh when she said tht i dont wanna see u again n sadly their story ended 😢 i just wish this story turns towards a good happy ending cox i personally dont like sad endings n its very difficult to digest tht two ppl who r in love falls apart 😔😔
Boht Acha review. Or mala KY character m char sal BAAD development dikhani CHahye thi.
Ek point ap bhool gai jb "mala" &"hilal" container me hoti hen or mala hilal se conversation kr rhi hoti hai tb suddenly hilal kehti hai mala tm sb kuch nhi janti tm or mahir bhai sb nhi janty kuch asa hai jo tmhe nhi maloom
One can be an average photographer but one with such skills without training😮
Thank you rabia ap k review ka mujhe itna hi intizar hota jitna ki episode k or har dafa ki tarha yeh review bhi best tha👏❤
Madam I really like your voice
And please give reviews on Sulphite novel and Kohqrarm ka Taj mahal please
Please do a review of,"The stationary shop of Tehran" you might like it❤
Yaram novel py review zroor kryn fabulous novel I must say......7 br prh liya h mainy lekn fr b dill nhi bhra❤❤❤
When I read Halim's 2 to 3 episode and I came to know the story was just a mixture of some English novels and Bollywood movies so I left that novel to read, but then my friend said it was just your over thinking but I totally lost my interest as I didn't digest the plagerism which contain in HALIM. I LEFT reading nimrah's novel. Maala was the novel which again drag my attention towards nimrah's writing, but this time her behaviour towards her readers shocked me. I think she should listen to her readers , we are very mature readers, she should think about us as she is the only one modern Urdu writer we are considering to read.
Why shocked?
She is so busy in writing Quran tadubaur and Allah's name tafseer and now seerah also .... We shd appreciate her.... She is compromising her novel( her real career) for Allah's book
I have a question what about ziad, Ziad is also a kid of sehar-e- ishq
Sehr e Ishq se paida hone wali aulad, Saahir k lye qeemti hoti hai, wo use har haal me hasil krta hai.
In Ziad's case, Saahir uski Ammi (Nageena Begum) hoti hai, wo khud hi kisi pr sehr e ishq krti hai, to us sehr e ishq k nateje me hone wali aulad (Ziad) uski APNI hi aulad hoti hai. That's why no one abducts Ziad.
but ziad waisa react nhi kata jaise halal karti hai@@mudassar1
@@user-nh1nl4wp1j *Point to be noted.* Maybe age chall k is bare me bhi kuch pata chal jae. btw next episode 22 ko publish ho ri hai.
Bohat acha review dia ap ne❤
Review of Mala by Nemrah Ahmed ❣️
Episode 17
Read or not
Birbeel was there in the story moatly to give relief but i think this episode was not like that... It was meant to be like this without birbeel... only thing is time travel which is sometimes not understandable...
Honest Review ❤😊
Nagina ki death miss kr gain hn qp??
Maala boht khudgarz hai
Feeling sad for mahir
I was waiting for your review 😁
ThAnk you ❤
When are you going to review episode 17? Do you have any update about episode 18?
All points in your reviews I'm agreed to it... I love nemra's all novel, loving mala to, completely different style qnd tuch.but she gives the episode very late by that time you forget it what happened in to the previous episodes.... that's irritating me, otherwise would be the best novel.
Jo sarkar ki made Hoti ha I think us ki bi koi clue ha or Maher ka uncle ka bi beacaus in the hole novel in dono character ka bary ma abhi tk Kuch khas ni btya Kuch to missing ha or bader ka jahn tk ha to us ka Kuch khas smj ni Ara ku ka wo Jo mala ko restaurant ma bi larka milta tha mala usy bi dekh ka shocked Hoti thi or jb mahir us sa us larky ka bary ma puchta ha tb bi wo confused ho jati thi or one more important think yar mahir ko to dream ma Jo sarkar Nazar ata tha wo koi men HOTA tha but wo zaid ki mother Hoti thi I thought ka Maher ka uncle bi koi sarkar han ku ka wo mahir ko hospital ma asa Kuch kehty bi thy apny kareeby hi enemy hoty han anyway ab ye to next ep ma hi PTA chla ga I am waiting long time
Whenever mala and mahir come together they get apart
Not justified😢
Maala's reaction to. Mahir paying was absurd. Aisa hai tu friends ko aik dosry ki madad ni krni chyay
kaif may be us ne photography ka sucha ho q ke zaid use paise nae de raha tha or us ni photography ki to nae na blke dhoke se sirf paise hi lie the.
second full episode bht achi thi except last part
mahir ko nae chahiye tha ke wo us ka debt deta Bcz wo janta tha ke mala bht gusa kre gi or mala Mahi or malik se bhi madad mang skti thi magar wo kisi ki madad nae lena chathi thi to mahir ko us ki madad nae krni chahiye the
Berbel ko waqai hona chahiye tha us ke begair bilkul bhi nae maza nae ata
Badr ka first 85 percent lgta tha wo zinda hai q ke mala janti thi ke kaif us peecha kr raha so us ne acting ki or phir nemrah ne Hme mala ke side ka koi seen nae bta magar jb mala nageena se kehti "magar mujhe marne se dr lgta" then 100 Percent hogaya ke Badr zinda hai
and your missing point mahir ne last pe ye bhi kaha hai ke wo shadi kr raha
OR Yahan main itna hasi yr jis badar ko pori dunya mil kr readers sameet dhond Rahi thi wo to abhi dunya main hi NAHI aya😅 4:45
17th episode ka b review bnay Mam
Thanks alot Rabia ❤
11:21 Yes ye conversation mahir ke Sath hui thi but at this point ye plan bhi zeyada ka tha I think pehly Kaif ne larki se commitment ki or phir bhag gya or phir Jo SB hua Maala ko social media main log insult krny lgy ye SB mala ko phsany ke Liye Tha i think
Plzzzz or novel k reviews b dijiye mala k bad konsy achy hn
Ye jis epi ka review hy wo to abhi april main ai ye 7 months phly kasy review deya ?
12:32 yupppp i agree
I was crying at that movement 😭💔 3:42
Mujhe bhi maala ka attitude achha nahi laga
Mala ep 17 ka review b de den
Where are you getting PDF for novels I really want to read can you plz share the link for that
google
Badar and hilal will grow together
I agree with youu.
aapne hilal aur mahir ka meetup miss kerdia sarkaar ki death pe bhi kuch nhn kaha..And one thing about the last scene jahan maala mahir se itna behas kerti hai k tumne paise kyon diye I predict k uska koi reason hoga maybe novel mein jaake aage explain ho yeh baat.Aur doSra jo woh scene tha yeh sara photograpy wala I think woh sahi tha ek to humein yeh idea mila k maala ko ek job kese mili and dosra writer humein batati hai k log beauty k iliye kis extreme tak jaate hain..Ya kitni bodyshaming hai uske baad social media ka jo tha woh bhi sahi tha.But the major last scene jahan maala maahir k office mein jaati hai wahan maala ka behaviour buht irrevelant aur kisi had tak galat tha..
For me, this episode was the far most boring episode throughout the novel
Hi rabia why you haven’t review mala episode 1 to 8 bab 1 😢
photography conversation was b/w mala nd mahir
Kia sarkar ki maut itni asan honi chaye the. Mahir tu badla bhi na lesaka apna itne saal sirr Sarakar ko dhomdne mai laga dia bechara neib mili tu kia hoa😮. And nagina k bachpan mai aisa bhi Kuch bura nahi hoa jo iska hisab sa AGG jaisaa tha
Mala aur mahir ko milna chahiye lzmiii
Mahit bey badal gya hai epi:16 ne mahir ko badal diya hai wo baar baar maala ke peeche jata hai 😂
Api Mala Ki New Episode Kb Ay Gi 😢
Please umera ahmed ka interveiw kar dein
review on episodes 17 and 18.
rabia g please do review of more eng/urdu novels please alos review mein anmol by nemra ahmed
Novel kb complete hoga
Please new book ka review post kareyn api rabia ❤
What's about episode 18
اسکا نام زیاد نہیں تھا؟
Ep 17 review
nageen pay jadoo kesy ulta par gaya ??
itna asan hai jadoo ka. tor ???
mahir konsa wali tha.jo.urdu main dailouge kahay aur jadoo.palat gaya ???
ye tow tamil.movie main hota hai gun say.goli nikal.k.wapis villan ko.lagti thi
bohat childish scene tha
aur mahir ko.marna kiun zaruri tha nageen k liye uska aoni beahn.ko dhoondna konsa ghalat tha??
sub say buri baat bar bar ye kaha.gaya gumshuda bachy nahi milty.
kuch arsa bad log bhool.jatay han
how.how.??
kon.bhool.jata hai ???
agar bacha mar jaey sabar ajata hai gum.hojaey zindagi bhar ka rog hota hai
bohat toxic tha 3 saal pehly ka parhna
ab again 5 saal pehly ka parhna parega
why ??????????
cant bear again
Ep 17 ka kisi ko kuch pata hai k kahan ho ge
Ap ki video mai back side pu ziad nazar aa ra hai 😂
Why does Hilaal have ghaib ka ilm koi mujhe ye bta dey...😑
Cos she's child from seher e ishq so she has some super powers like seeing and talking to jinaat and foreseeing future
She is a child of sher e ishq and maybe sarkar apni power hilal m transfer kr chuki ha
Ap nay sarkar k marny peh kloi baat nehi ki Kiya ap ko nehi lagta k sarkar ko itni jaldi nhi marna chahiye Tha kiyu k abhi to sarkar ka raaz khula aur forn he ussay maar diya this is soo wrong abhi us say intkam Lena chahiye Tha mahir ko
Sarkar bachon ky sath krti kia thi jo sehr e ishq sy paida hoty hain i don't understand q kh us ny hilal ko zinda rkha q
17 episode kab aye gi ???????
22 jan
missing point : mahir shadi
Mujhey lagta h mahir shaadi nhi karraha sirf bahana bana raha tha maala k saamne.
He's not marrying for sure. he's just acting to get married
mere khyal se woh zahra se shadi karrha
May be.. but he won't in real
12:55 Maala ko isliye mahir p ghusa tha qk woh janti ha k mahir loves her awr mahir k intentions kiya ha ,woh maala ko hi chahta ha , tou ise lye maala ko ghusa aya k ye mere is kaam me involve na hota use lgta h me us pe dependent hu ya( mujhe uske zrurt ha ya par skti ha)
Awr abhi tlaq ko zyada months bhi nhi hue
Maala Mahir k intentions janti thi isliye ghusaa hue thi , that's it
that was 636364th time I felt nimra has done unfair with mahir. Mahir has always been soo kind and caring towards his every relation. From that episode till now after just reading 19 I feel maahir deserves a better and caring partner unfortunately maala only cares about her son and herself. Maahir deserves better😭😭😭
Madam please masood bukhari ko invite krain
Its ziyad not zaid, rabia
I hate this novel now due to so much delay
Wont read it anymore because cannot wait again again
Nimra osumed is supebbbb mala is supebbbb
Mala ko itna our react nahi karna chahiye tha... mahir ne toh help bhi ki thi, iske bawajud ke mahir uski bahen ke liye aaya tha phir bhi... aur sarkar ki maut itni asani se nhi hona chahiye tha usne kitni logo ki zindagi barbad ki thi...
Koi bta skta hy aliyan kon hy?
Son of kabeera tai jisy nageena ne kidnapp kar dia tha