I don’t know if this was once a sound story but as now, it sounds mangled. The stone was found twice. Later in the story someone used the stone to execute a time jump that I missed because the coalition fleet arrived twice? But if the time jump did occur, how did commander Silva knew how commander Ros handled the “Titan situation”? Soo many questions… The concept of the plot is sound, I wish my brain could make up plots like this. - Plot 👍 - Execution 🫳
They found two Origin Stones or is this bad editing?
Im the same. 2 stones?. How are they using the Titans weapons if they arent manning it?
I don’t know if this was once a sound story but as now, it sounds mangled. The stone was found twice. Later in the story someone used the stone to execute a time jump that I missed because the coalition fleet arrived twice? But if the time jump did occur, how did commander Silva knew how commander Ros handled the “Titan situation”?
Soo many questions…
The concept of the plot is sound, I wish my brain could make up plots like this.
- Plot 👍
- Execution 🫳
Can we say the Coalition lies through its teeth?
The Titan was an ancient human warship, not a coalition warship. And so doesn't the coalition have no right to the Titan?
Great story.
Bad editing
Bad editing and another bad story from the author. I keep deleting and banning his stories from my feeds, but they keep showing up.