I always wondered this, if Mace had a problem with that powerful kid they recruited with dark within them. Why doesn’t the master of Vappad help train him at the very least or entirely. Anakin needed special attention and Mace was realist more qualified in the order.
I think in one of the novelizations of the prequels, the internal thoughts of Mace Windu exposed that he thought HE was the chosen one and held jealousy for Anakin.
Because at the time of Anakin’s recruitment, vapaad didn’t exist. It was created in the Clone Wars to fight Dark Jedi and Sith. So in the Phantom Menace, Windu hadn’t had the desire or need to create Vapaad. It was a completely different mindset. A lot can happen in 10 years. It was more of Anakin’s formative training years that put him at odds with Kenobi. That 10 year gap is where Anakin’s frustration started. Anakin has an inferiority complex, hence his desire to be the best to the point of arrogance.
Mace would have been a bad choice for anikin hands down. Just becaise mace uses the vapad doesnt mean he is a good fit for anakin. Windus attitude and personality makes him for a very poor mater for anakin.
Funny What If: What if the Clone Army refused Order 66, because Palpatine had technically removed himself as the Grand Chancellor, therefore could no longer give orders
There are literally only 3 Jedi that could have trained anakin more appropriately and would be the best teachers for him. 1. (Obviously) Qui-Gon Jinn 2. Mace Windu and 3. Plo Koon.
@@forthemysterians7630 more like not him when he was rushed to become a teacher. The council could've made a better job with Kenobi since it would have resulted in less mistakes that would have been detrimental to Skyguy
Anakin being able to use vaapaad would be gnarly. Given that Anakin generally is really aggressive and all, i'd argue he could surpass even mace windu in regards to the art of vaapaad (with time).
I don't think Mace would teach him Vaapaad. Problem is that even under Mace's training, Anakin had already been raised in a culture that promoted attachments and seeking justice for over nine years. Plus, _both_ Sora Bulq (who co-developed Vaapaad with Mace) and Depa Billaba (Mace's former apprentice) fell, so Mace Windu was probably already not too keen on teaching the form. If anything, I think he'd end up teaching a Anakin a "purified" version of Juyo rather than true Vaapaad. Still, even a Juyo-specialist Anakin would be a terrifying opponent to face. He was already a beast with Djem-So, but would sometimes overextend due to his overconfidence leading him to try and press an attack when he'd be better off withdrawing.
@@casartherandom3010 And she was also trained by Mace Windu. In fact, this probably makes her the youngest council member before Anakin and among the fastest to go from knighting ceremony to council master.
1) What if Maul was the chosen one? 2) What if Palpatine loved and cared for Maul like a son? 3) What if Qui Gon turned Maul to the light before what would’ve been their final duel?
@@alduintheanti-dragonborn oooh! Can you imagine what would happen if Qui Gon and Maul both trained Anakin? No Darth Vader! Because Anakin would have better mental and emotional shields; allowing him to see through Sidious’ lies and manipulative ways, and allowing for Luke and Leia to be born sooner and to be stronger. Allow me to put it another way: a stronger Luke and Leia=a stronger rebel alliance and for the Jedi to be reborn stronger and more resilient.
one thing is for sure anakin would have been way more powerful with the force if windu had trained and had wanted to train him and teach him everything, but as for his children its hard to say if he would have still had married and had luke and leaia. It is definetly a more powerful path being more in balance with light and dark and i think after being fully trained by windu, anakin would have wiped the floor with palpatine
Agreed, and I can see Anakin choosing to marry a Jedi instead of Padme in this scenario; as she would be able to relate to him emotionally and socially than anyone else could.
Plaguise in this universe: HA! Suck it Palpatine! That’s what you get for rejecting my offer to break the rule of two and have both of us rule the galaxy.
What if anakin had visions of order 66 instead of padme dying of childbirth? What if anakin went undercover instead of obi wan? What if order 66 was executed when anakin was with the bad batch? What if padme was never pregnant? What if tup went to the jedi temple instead of getting the atomic brain scan?
really liked this one, I especially like how Mace trained Anakin and helped him mature. I also loved Anakin training a future temple guard. All the best getting your degree I get how hard that is. I did like Mira to, she was unique and someone who could get to know Anakin.
What if C3PO never had his mind wiped at the end of Revenge of the Sith and told Luke and Leia about everything that their parents did from the start of the Phantom Menace to the end of Revenge of the Sith
Say Anakin was found as old as 2 and brought to the Jedi temple. If the Jedi truly believed him to be the chosen one then he would be trained by the best along side the hidden youngling Grogu a being looking like master Yoda. These two destined to train and grow strong together build a great bond.
I wonder what you could come up with if you were given, "What If The Father Introduced Anakin To The Mother". I find the story of Abeloth to be both fleshed out yet incomplete, and in need of some new material surrounding the monster she had become. I would love to see how you address the story. Keep up the great work and congratulations on your making it through the course in music.
Honestly I appreciate the fact that the quality of this story wasn't at all dampened by the school stuff, keep up the good work and I hope all your tests go well! 😀
what if anakin turned Maul and palpatine? The original Jedi of Reven’s time believed no one deserved death. Even the Sith were redeemable in their eyes and would duel to capture rather than kill a Sith. An Anakin Skywalker being beholden to the true teachings of the Jedi to show love and compassion even to his enemies would still genuinely attempt to save those clearly completely lost to the Dark Side.
Full-fledged honesty, out of all the mistakes the council made, the biggest ones single-handedly was letting Obi-Wan train Anakin. If any of the council members trained Anakin instead we would have seen a much more composed Anakin.
It comes down to Yoda's stupid question about Anakin being cold and jumping right on the fear doctrine. Nobody bothered to ask the kid if he needed a sweater. Sad.
Congratulations on getting through college man! While I understand that you have no desire to write crossovers (and I cant say I blame you) if the desire ever comes for you to something of such I think you'd do an excellent job doing it for a separate channel. That being said, your "what if..." stories of star wars remains the gold for audio books! And I look forward to more of your projects!!
The Jedi Order is the perfect example of an organization getting complacent. 1. An accomplished Jedi was turned away from the light because the order ignored his calls to prepare for the dark side. 2. A Padawan who obviously had deep routed darkness was trained by a master who himself couldn’t contain his emotions rather than a master who used the very thing the order was afraid of to power his light side abilities. 3. Why is the order so convinced there are no Sith in the first place when they understand how easy it is for one to turn to the dark side? There are literally thousands of force sensitives who face day to day struggles capable of corrupting and only a few planets in the galaxy that have been or are inhabited, some of these planets you know can corrupt force sensitive individuals. Ngl Yoda must’ve been the dumbest grandmaster.
@@logandelaharpe6362 but there are undiscovered Sith artifacts. Even if there were no Sith master to bestow the knowledge upon a fallen Jedi, one still could become a Sith through research and self-study.
"A Padawan who obviously had deep routed darkness" Slight correction: A Padawan who had already developed attachments and a sense of self before coming to the order, both of which contributed to his eventual fall. Saying that Anakin had "deep rooted darkness" makes it sound like he was inherently evil and ignores the multiple contributing factors to his fall.
Hi. I have three titles for you to ponder. 1) lost and found :asoka tano main character. Having been expelled from the jedi and then from asoka's point of view being bribed to return to the jedi order is lost and so must find herself. 2)rise of the apprentice :after many adventurers and much soul searching asoka finds her true self. 3)return to the jedi :asoka captures maul and learns of palpatine's plans for anakin. Uncovers intelligence that vaguely points to order 66 that when combined with the death of clone trooper fives and what clone trooper tup said just before he pulled the trigger is serious enough for the jedi to warn all jedi in the order about. As well as asking bail organa and Mon mothma to investigate this matter. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
Mace would have been the best choice seeing as though only Yoda rivaled him you need one of the best to train the best. It would of started rocky but mace knowing Anakin was different, would be the best to teach him balance
That and Anakin’s way worse then any student of his could be. Actions speak louder than words and Anakin’s the most reckless man in the Galaxy He does not care. He handles business however he sees fit and his methods are options no one even considered. Especially not his Padawans
There is *NO WAY* that *ANY* Jedi familiar with Yaddle’s history prior to her being reunited with the Order would *EVER* believe Yaddle would take her own life! This is a woman who survived *centuries* of being trapped in a cave, all but naked, starved, and fending off predators with a stick. A woman who, when finally freed, chose to spend decades helping the very people who imprisoned her advance out of barbarism. If there was *one* Jedi I would expect to be capable of enduring any adversity, it would be Yaddle. The Council knew this history, so the idea the Council would buy Yaddle going off to quietly take her own life is , well, it’s like imagining all these Jedi Masters suddenly and simultaneously lost 99% of their critical thinking skills. Without noticing the sudden deficit in the slightest. Otherwise, I rather dug the story. Even if I was kind of puzzled by the decision to use Yaddle that way. For a What If: What If Ky Narec survived to get him and his Padawan Ventress off the hell-world where Darth Tyrannus otherwise found Asajj, and back to the Temple?
Ok, big problem with the story, dooku never ever used the dark side to reinforce his ability with the light saber, he used his pure skill, it was for this reason that sidious knew dooku would beat him because if he was able to stand-off against yoda who uses the force very hard in a duel whereas dooku did not then imagine if he did use the force, that scared sidious to his core which made him always show dooku that the force powers is the only thing that sidious would win in. So dooku never used the dark side to enhance his skill, so that’s a big problem in the story. It was even stated in the novels that he never did in both cannon and legends, so vaapad would never work
He adds or rather embellishes to much on x force user being inherently dark as a kid or x user power just better in darkness. One being in use of the dark side never assumed they were much more powerful. They just simply had less inhibition in their application of the force. Jedi used it when necessary not just because they could. A sith used the force because it was convenient and helped their motives.
Thanks for another great story and enjoy graduating. Even though school never ends in life, it feels good to finish that particular stage of your personal development.
This was the first one I have managed to catch live and I just want to say your stories are incredible the details you add not only add to the the story but also the wider Star Wars universe and for that I thank your incredible work
Very well crafted story xD a really positive suprise to see Mace be portrayed well for a change (and yes, Mace is a good person). A bit sad to see Anakin train someone else then Daesha, tho ;D and good look for your graduation xD And, how else could it be, my suggestions for: 1. What if A'Sharad Hett had trained Anakin Skywalker? 2. What if Oppo Rancisis had trained Asajj Ventress as a jedi? 3. What if Yarael Poof had investigated Kamino?
I love how he still ended up with a snips but Ashoka will always be Snips first. Still this was beautiful none the less. I’ve just been listening to this with closed eyes imagining all of this.
If that was the case Jedi Order wouldn't have helped to be public and would have stayed away from politics and would have a more open role in the galaxy and helping others and again would still have been discovered and trained but he would probably allow attachments he would have been the greatest Grandmaster ever
Congratulations on being so close to graduating! I know it takes a lot of hard work to get there. Great fan fiction, and best of luck with your future endeavors :)
Just wanted to say good luck with your finals. Remember going through the same 25 years ago, while also starting my second attempt at song writing. So,.I've been there. Yes. I made it through it, and yes, still writing almost 3 decades later, for a few local bands. You got this Kid! Take your time, work on bettering you, we'll be waiting for the next one.
Quality over quantity my friend, it's great and don't worry too much about your time frame on the stories focus on your finals then worry about the stories
What if Anakin was trained by pong krell, tiplar, tiplee, or rahm Kota? What if Anakin fell in love with Riyo Chuchi? What if Anakin joined the separatist?
Crazy idea but what if sabine ren and Ezra Bridger get married after they find ezra and discover what happened to grand admiral thrawn. Sabine gives birth to ezra's daughter rey ren bridger. A possible retcon for the sequels. The reunited ghost crew find luke's hiding place and gradually help luke to heal his soul and help to bring peace to luke's troubled mind and spirit. Attempting to save han solo and redeem kylo ren's back to his true identity. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
Gotta admit, I'd be rather jealous of Ezra if that happens; Sabine gets hot in the intervening time between Rebels and Ahsoka (The ~heart length hair that goes from purple down to flaming orange looks so good and i don't even know why lol)
You have done fine in writing this "What If" story. Mira is a good original character that has potential. The alternate timeline is an interesting idea. Don't get frustrated with your writer's block for many famous writers of the past have had it from time to time.
Uh... She effectively did xD when she dies during the events of Rebels, the Daughter's companion finds her and guides her on a journey, which then results in her return being fully aligned with the Light xD (And in the process, she "Becomes" the Daughter)
Some have said that had Windu trained Anakin the latter would be even more inclined to turn to the darkside and betray the Jedi. I do believe there is a risk of this but there would also be the issue that Anakin would not chop off Windu's hand so readily had Windu been his master. On the other hand, Mace would not sideline Anakin and probably let him join the fight against Sidious.
I love how highly you think of Revan, i do too. He truly is the best story even though SWTOR really shit on him. His story should have continued after KOTOR 2...
Windu wasn’t a father but a teacher but you learn how to talk to a child that was a great father thing to do wow every young man needs a teacher like mace
I can see Anakin falling for Sabine, and maybe Sabe. But then why would Anakin choose Sabe? Would he be marrying her because of how closely she resembles Padme?
For the longest time I've believed that this would be a worst-case scenario. Mace was... well, to put it softly, not very enthused about Anakin even being trained to begin with, and had he been assigned to train Anakin (because I highly doubt Mace would take him as a Padawan willingly) I think he would have been extremely critical of ANY misstep Anakin might make, even more-so than Obi-Wan, and would have basically kept a very tight grip on Anakin at all times. This would be VERY bad for Anakin who spent his entire life under that kind of control and learned to hate it. In short, Mace is too by the book, too strict, and too hard-headed to be able to train someone like Anakin. He needs someone who's far more flexible, more open, and more perceptive about the emotions of others. But now that I think about it, there is one small advantage to Mace Windu training Anakin. I still don't think he'd be a good choice, but the silver lining of this very dark storm cloud would be that Mace, because he didn't believe the whole "Anakin is the chosen one" thing, wouldn't have put that burden on Anakin either.
What if Reva was Obi-Wan's apprentice? What if Reva stayed with Obi-Wan after the events of the Obi-Wan Kenobi show? What if Luke and Leia met each other as children? What if Beru and Owen Lars lived? What if Luke or Leia was adopted by Mon Mothma instead?
wow i loved the positive out come for my boy anakin lol i really like how this story worked out, and answered a lot of questions i had for sure if this were to happen! Thank you for making this :D
paused at 26:16 to say, this is an excellent fresh take. I love the Idea's that other people would have trained Anikin. Even if Obi won was a knight now, he wouldn't be taking padawans yet. Let alone the freakin "chosen one". I personally think that knowing his age and time was short Yoda should have taken him as his last apprentice and took him away from All the temptations of Coruscant Until he was of the mind to handle his emotions.
What if Depa trained Anakin? What if The Ones of Mortis raised Anakin? what if Arca Jeth trained Anakin? What if Galen Marek was Anakin's Padawan? What if Obi-Wan & Depa fell in love? What if Obi-Wan & Luminara fell in love? What if Shaak Ti was the Chosen One? What if Depa was the Chosen One? What if Depa was Anakin's mum? What if Depa was Caleb Dume's mum? What if Revan & Meetra showed up during the clone wars? What if Revan was Mand'alor? What if Riyo Chuchi was the Dark Lord of the Sith? What if Shaak Ti went to Kamino with Obi-Wan, in attack of the clones? What if Omega was in Attack of the Clones? What if Depa survived Order 66? What if Kal Skirata & Shaak Ti fell in love? What if Omega was Shaak TI's Padawan? What if Galen Marek was Dooku's Apprentice? What if Depa & Commander Grey fell in love? What if Ahsoka killed The Son of Mortis? What if Tarkin was framed for the temple bombing? What if Kal Skirata adopted Ahsoka? What if Ventress survived? What if Ventress was the Chosen One? What if Bail sent the Bad Batch to rescue little Leia? What if Anakin was raised in the Eternal Empire? What if Ezra redeemed Maul? What if Hondo was the Chosen One? What if Qui-Gon's ghost visited Dooku? What if Crosshair never betrayed the Bad Batch? What if Omega stowed away on the Havoc Marauder when it left for Onderon? What if Dooku and Jocasta Nu fell in love? What if Katooni and Petro fell in love?
Amazing Job as always and of course do take your time for as you have to do so much and do give time for your self when you can after finals and congrats to graduating you deserve it 😁
Obi wans innocence and nievity as a young trainer and the way he bonded with anikin was the reason he was ignoant to anikins fall he decived himself in believing anikin could not fall because of a profecy and the love kenobi felt for anikin hid the obvious signs from his sight
This was a story that I had thought was going to go down a completely different direction as you have already done the light ending so I was like "Any moment now Pente would have Anakin plunge down the darker path." I was surprised it didn't but the surprise came with the understanding that one cannot ever predict as you always throw in something with these videos. Lol
Was a good story, don't worry was enjoyable. Got an interesting take, would have to include a multiverse but a version of Anikan who remained as a Jedi meets Darth Vader. Perhaps they even battle. Just an idea from one creative mind to another.
I am currently writing and rewriting a story based on these two premises. In my story; parallel Padme is the chosen one of her reality, and crosses over to the main timeline just as Anakin was about to Force Jump and flip over Obi-Wan, and because of Padme’s assistance, he is able to land safely on Mustafar’s lava banks and charges Obi-Wan to protect Padme Prime
With Windu’s thing being to tap into the dark side, whilst still being in the light probably made him one of, if not the best choice to be Anakins trainer
“As windu put it Anakin was going to be the baddest motherfucker he’d ever seen” comedy gold 😂😂
NO CUSSING!!!!!!!
He was like let this kid whine one time I dare him 😂😂😂😂
*TRIGGERED*
Windu decides to break his character for once.
I always wondered this, if Mace had a problem with that powerful kid they recruited with dark within them. Why doesn’t the master of Vappad help train him at the very least or entirely. Anakin needed special attention and Mace was realist more qualified in the order.
I think in one of the novelizations of the prequels, the internal thoughts of Mace Windu exposed that he thought HE was the chosen one and held jealousy for Anakin.
Because at the time of Anakin’s recruitment, vapaad didn’t exist. It was created in the Clone Wars to fight Dark Jedi and Sith. So in the Phantom Menace, Windu hadn’t had the desire or need to create Vapaad. It was a completely different mindset. A lot can happen in 10 years. It was more of Anakin’s formative training years that put him at odds with Kenobi. That 10 year gap is where Anakin’s frustration started. Anakin has an inferiority complex, hence his desire to be the best to the point of arrogance.
Mace would have been a bad choice for anikin hands down. Just becaise mace uses the vapad doesnt mean he is a good fit for anakin. Windus attitude and personality makes him for a very poor mater for anakin.
@@elderliddle2733 you should read shatterpoint!
@@Soloong_Gaybowzer where did you get that rubbish from?
"As Mace put it, 'Anakin was going to be the baddest of the order had ever seen'" 😂😂😂😂😂😂
You mean the baddest motherfucking Jedi in the order
That was pure greatness
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Gives me “Luke, I am the ultimate rizzmaster.” vibes.
Yaddle, sitting decapitated in a car in an abandoned factory:
The jedi council: “Ah yes, she ‘unalived’ herself. Classic Yaddle.”
Killed not unalived that's a dumb word
@@wadereynoldsdeadpool5768 Family friendly
Que laugh track and Seinfeld music & credits
Kinda like Epstein...
This is hilarious
Funny What If:
What if the Clone Army refused Order 66, because Palpatine had technically removed himself as the Grand Chancellor, therefore could no longer give orders
Cody yes sir chancellor
Palpy it’s emperor now
Cody ah ok yeah we don’t take orders from an emperor
yess
amzing
one problem, inhibitor chip
WE NEED THIS
@@logandelaharpe6362 lmaoooo
“Yeeaaaa….😅 about that ole palps.. see the thing isss….”
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There are literally only 3 Jedi that could have trained anakin more appropriately and would be the best teachers for him. 1. (Obviously) Qui-Gon Jinn 2. Mace Windu and 3. Plo Koon.
An possibly Yoda
4. Shaak Ti
5. Dooku
6. Kit Fisto
7. Yoda
@@mariusconstantin6057 I would say yoda is higher
Aka literally anyone other than obi wan
@@forthemysterians7630 more like not him when he was rushed to become a teacher. The council could've made a better job with Kenobi since it would have resulted in less mistakes that would have been detrimental to Skyguy
Anakin being able to use vaapaad would be gnarly. Given that Anakin generally is really aggressive and all, i'd argue he could surpass even mace windu in regards to the art of vaapaad (with time).
I don't think Mace would teach him Vaapaad. Problem is that even under Mace's training, Anakin had already been raised in a culture that promoted attachments and seeking justice for over nine years. Plus, _both_ Sora Bulq (who co-developed Vaapaad with Mace) and Depa Billaba (Mace's former apprentice) fell, so Mace Windu was probably already not too keen on teaching the form. If anything, I think he'd end up teaching a Anakin a "purified" version of Juyo rather than true Vaapaad.
Still, even a Juyo-specialist Anakin would be a terrifying opponent to face. He was already a beast with Djem-So, but would sometimes overextend due to his overconfidence leading him to try and press an attack when he'd be better off withdrawing.
@@VestedUTuberwhat? Depa is a Master on the Council? In episode 3. Kanan's master?
@@casartherandom3010
And she was also trained by Mace Windu. In fact, this probably makes her the youngest council member before Anakin and among the fastest to go from knighting ceremony to council master.
1) What if Maul was the chosen one?
2) What if Palpatine loved and cared for Maul like a son?
3) What if Qui Gon turned Maul to the light before what would’ve been their final duel?
I like the last one!
I wanna see the last one!
Same here, I want to see Maul and Qui Gon.
@@alduintheanti-dragonborn oooh! Can you imagine what would happen if Qui Gon and Maul both trained Anakin? No Darth Vader! Because Anakin would have better mental and emotional shields; allowing him to see through Sidious’ lies and manipulative ways, and allowing for Luke and Leia to be born sooner and to be stronger.
Allow me to put it another way: a stronger Luke and Leia=a stronger rebel alliance and for the Jedi to be reborn stronger and more resilient.
I like the second one personally, I think it’s an interesting idea.
The Rule of Two still exists. Darth Plagueis still stuck inside a Gungan reject when Palpy killed his body while he was possessing JarJar.
one thing is for sure anakin would have been way more powerful with the force if windu had trained and had wanted to train him and teach him everything, but as for his children its hard to say if he would have still had married and had luke and leaia. It is definetly a more powerful path being more in balance with light and dark and i think after being fully trained by windu, anakin would have wiped the floor with palpatine
Agreed, and I can see Anakin choosing to marry a Jedi instead of Padme in this scenario; as she would be able to relate to him emotionally and socially than anyone else could.
@@9876KalelPalpatine in the afterlife: FXXK YOU WINDU, IF IT WASNT FOR YOU, I WOULD HAVE SUCCEEDED
Anakin basically becomes Windu but stronger due to having an absurd number of mitochlorians. Old man palps stood no chance in this version fr
Plaguise in this universe: HA! Suck it Palpatine! That’s what you get for rejecting my offer to break the rule of two and have both of us rule the galaxy.
I think with Windu in Anakin’s life it would’ve scared off Sidous from seducing him to the Dark Side
"Sorry Anakin, we can't free your mom. It's the will of the Force she remain a slave."
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What if anakin had visions of order 66 instead of padme dying of childbirth?
What if anakin went undercover instead of obi wan?
What if order 66 was executed when anakin was with the bad batch?
What if padme was never pregnant?
What if tup went to the jedi temple instead of getting the atomic brain scan?
Yeah these are good
I’d love to see what would happen if Anakin had visions of order 66!
@@hydrodrift I do
@@hydrodrift well of course. I am very curious about how it would turn out.
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really liked this one, I especially like how Mace trained Anakin and helped him mature. I also loved Anakin training a future temple guard. All the best getting your degree I get how hard that is. I did like Mira to, she was unique and someone who could get to know Anakin.
What if C3PO never had his mind wiped at the end of Revenge of the Sith and told Luke and Leia about everything that their parents did from the start of the Phantom Menace to the end of Revenge of the Sith
Ooh; yes! And as an result; Leia would be more accepting and be able to forgive Anakin for his actions
Say Anakin was found as old as 2 and brought to the Jedi temple. If the Jedi truly believed him to be the chosen one then he would be trained by the best along side the hidden youngling Grogu a being looking like master Yoda. These two destined to train and grow strong together build a great bond.
Anakin could've steam rolled Sidious in episode 3. Being trained by Mace he could've done it one handed
The master learns from the student as much as the student learns from the master
I wonder what you could come up with if you were given, "What If The Father Introduced Anakin To The Mother". I find the story of Abeloth to be both fleshed out yet incomplete, and in need of some new material surrounding the monster she had become. I would love to see how you address the story. Keep up the great work and congratulations on your making it through the course in music.
Honestly I appreciate the fact that the quality of this story wasn't at all dampened by the school stuff, keep up the good work and I hope all your tests go well! 😀
what if anakin turned Maul and palpatine? The original Jedi of Reven’s time believed no one deserved death. Even the Sith were redeemable in their eyes and would duel to capture rather than kill a Sith. An Anakin Skywalker being beholden to the true teachings of the Jedi to show love and compassion even to his enemies would still genuinely attempt to save those clearly completely lost to the Dark Side.
Underrated comment 😌
What If Cin Drallig Trained Anakin Skywalker
If mace ever trained anakin he would be a monster let alone mace was able to beat sidious
Anakin + vapaad = A Beast
Full-fledged honesty, out of all the mistakes the council made, the biggest ones single-handedly was letting Obi-Wan train Anakin. If any of the council members trained Anakin instead we would have seen a much more composed Anakin.
It comes down to Yoda's stupid question about Anakin being cold and jumping right on the fear doctrine. Nobody bothered to ask the kid if he needed a sweater. Sad.
Congratulations on getting through college man!
While I understand that you have no desire to write crossovers (and I cant say I blame you) if the desire ever comes for you to something of such I think you'd do an excellent job doing it for a separate channel.
That being said, your "what if..." stories of star wars remains the gold for audio books! And I look forward to more of your projects!!
The Jedi Order is the perfect example of an organization getting complacent.
1. An accomplished Jedi was turned away from the light because the order ignored his calls to prepare for the dark side.
2. A Padawan who obviously had deep routed darkness was trained by a master who himself couldn’t contain his emotions rather than a master who used the very thing the order was afraid of to power his light side abilities.
3. Why is the order so convinced there are no Sith in the first place when they understand how easy it is for one to turn to the dark side? There are literally thousands of force sensitives who face day to day struggles capable of corrupting and only a few planets in the galaxy that have been or are inhabited, some of these planets you know can corrupt force sensitive individuals.
Ngl Yoda must’ve been the dumbest grandmaster.
Just turning to the dark side does not make a sith
@@logandelaharpe6362 but there are undiscovered Sith artifacts. Even if there were no Sith master to bestow the knowledge upon a fallen Jedi, one still could become a Sith through research and self-study.
"A Padawan who obviously had deep routed darkness"
Slight correction: A Padawan who had already developed attachments and a sense of self before coming to the order, both of which contributed to his eventual fall. Saying that Anakin had "deep rooted darkness" makes it sound like he was inherently evil and ignores the multiple contributing factors to his fall.
Hi. I have three titles for you to ponder.
1) lost and found :asoka tano main character. Having been expelled from the jedi and then from asoka's point of view being bribed to return to the jedi order is lost and so must find herself.
2)rise of the apprentice :after many adventurers and much soul searching asoka finds her true self.
3)return to the jedi :asoka captures maul and learns of palpatine's plans for anakin. Uncovers intelligence that vaguely points to order 66 that when combined with the death of clone trooper fives and what clone trooper tup said just before he pulled the trigger is serious enough for the jedi to warn all jedi in the order about. As well as asking bail organa and Mon mothma to investigate this matter. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
Mace would have been the best choice seeing as though only Yoda rivaled him you need one of the best to train the best. It would of started rocky but mace knowing Anakin was different, would be the best to teach him balance
Plus Mac has a good understanding of being different, given his affinity with both light and dark. It would’ve definitely helped Anakin.
Question, why does Anakin get all the snippy ones? Because he's from the Outer Rim, he can handle it.
That and Anakin’s way worse then any student of his could be. Actions speak louder than words and Anakin’s the most reckless man in the Galaxy
He does not care. He handles business however he sees fit and his methods are options no one even considered. Especially not his Padawans
Quinlan Vos is pretty unorthodox himself.@@TheUncivilizedNation
There is *NO WAY* that *ANY* Jedi familiar with Yaddle’s history prior to her being reunited with the Order would *EVER* believe Yaddle would take her own life!
This is a woman who survived *centuries* of being trapped in a cave, all but naked, starved, and fending off predators with a stick.
A woman who, when finally freed, chose to spend decades helping the very people who imprisoned her advance out of barbarism.
If there was *one* Jedi I would expect to be capable of enduring any adversity, it would be Yaddle. The Council knew this history, so the idea the Council would buy Yaddle going off to quietly take her own life is , well, it’s like imagining all these Jedi Masters suddenly and simultaneously lost 99% of their critical thinking skills.
Without noticing the sudden deficit in the slightest.
Otherwise, I rather dug the story. Even if I was kind of puzzled by the decision to use Yaddle that way.
For a What If: What If Ky Narec survived to get him and his Padawan Ventress off the hell-world where Darth Tyrannus otherwise found Asajj, and back to the Temple?
Ok, big problem with the story, dooku never ever used the dark side to reinforce his ability with the light saber, he used his pure skill, it was for this reason that sidious knew dooku would beat him because if he was able to stand-off against yoda who uses the force very hard in a duel whereas dooku did not then imagine if he did use the force, that scared sidious to his core which made him always show dooku that the force powers is the only thing that sidious would win in. So dooku never used the dark side to enhance his skill, so that’s a big problem in the story. It was even stated in the novels that he never did in both cannon and legends, so vaapad would never work
True, but I still think dooku would lose but that duel will take a long ass time
I still figured he would use his emotions as a supplement just not focused into his blade, but either way I agree
Duku was 80+ years old of course he was using the force time aid his movements
He adds or rather embellishes to much on x force user being inherently dark as a kid or x user power just better in darkness. One being in use of the dark side never assumed they were much more powerful. They just simply had less inhibition in their application of the force. Jedi used it when necessary not just because they could. A sith used the force because it was convenient and helped their motives.
Thanks for another great story and enjoy graduating. Even though school never ends in life, it feels good to finish that particular stage of your personal development.
This was the first one I have managed to catch live and I just want to say your stories are incredible the details you add not only add to the the story but also the wider Star Wars universe and for that I thank your incredible work
Very well crafted story xD a really positive suprise to see Mace be portrayed well for a change (and yes, Mace is a good person). A bit sad to see Anakin train someone else then Daesha, tho ;D and good look for your graduation xD
And, how else could it be, my suggestions for:
1. What if A'Sharad Hett had trained Anakin Skywalker?
2. What if Oppo Rancisis had trained Asajj Ventress as a jedi?
3. What if Yarael Poof had investigated Kamino?
I love how he still ended up with a snips but Ashoka will always be Snips first. Still this was beautiful none the less. I’ve just been listening to this with closed eyes imagining all of this.
Dear PPSW. This is a year late. You have 110% respect for Georges work I love the fact that you always have a good story to listen to
What If Jedi Master Dooku was GrandMaster of the Order
If that was the case Jedi Order wouldn't have helped to be public and would have stayed away from politics and would have a more open role in the galaxy and helping others and again would still have been discovered and trained but he would probably allow attachments he would have been the greatest Grandmaster ever
A hugely better what if series than SWTheory because he ACTUALLY FINISHES THEIR STORYLINES and they tend to make SENSE
Also ppsw doesn't get into drama with other creators as much as theory
Congratulations on being so close to graduating! I know it takes a lot of hard work to get there.
Great fan fiction, and best of luck with your future endeavors :)
And you everyone have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year
Thank you for writing. Your stories are awesome. Sorry to hear that this took you a fortnight to complete.
20:13. 😂 I wasn’t ready and spit my drink.
Just wanted to say good luck with your finals. Remember going through the same 25 years ago, while also starting my second attempt at song writing.
So,.I've been there.
Yes. I made it through it, and yes, still writing almost 3 decades later, for a few local bands.
You got this Kid! Take your time, work on bettering you, we'll be waiting for the next one.
What If Eeth Koth Trained Anakin?
Quality over quantity my friend, it's great and don't worry too much about your time frame on the stories focus on your finals then worry about the stories
What if Anakin was trained by pong krell, tiplar, tiplee, or rahm Kota?
What if Anakin fell in love with Riyo Chuchi?
What if Anakin joined the separatist?
Rahm Kota? The Jedi who went, "f you, I don't need no clones."? That would be a well balanced, but even more stubbornly independent Anakin.
Take the time you need!! You make outstanding content and we will be here when you are ready
Crazy idea but what if sabine ren and Ezra Bridger get married after they find ezra and discover what happened to grand admiral thrawn. Sabine gives birth to ezra's daughter rey ren bridger. A possible retcon for the sequels.
The reunited ghost crew find luke's hiding place and gradually help luke to heal his soul and help to bring peace to luke's troubled mind and spirit. Attempting to save han solo and redeem kylo ren's back to his true identity. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
Gotta admit, I'd be rather jealous of Ezra if that happens; Sabine gets hot in the intervening time between Rebels and Ahsoka (The ~heart length hair that goes from purple down to flaming orange looks so good and i don't even know why lol)
You have done fine in writing this "What If" story. Mira is a good original character that has potential. The alternate timeline is an interesting idea. Don't get frustrated with your writer's block for many famous writers of the past have had it from time to time.
What if ahsoka got the powers of the Daughter
My Sith character: Please no
I’d love to see this!
I’d love to see this! Especially if they end up falling in love with each other
Uh... She effectively did xD when she dies during the events of Rebels, the Daughter's companion finds her and guides her on a journey, which then results in her return being fully aligned with the Light xD (And in the process, she "Becomes" the Daughter)
I really love the intro
Some have said that had Windu trained Anakin the latter would be even more inclined to turn to the darkside and betray the Jedi. I do believe there is a risk of this but there would also be the issue that Anakin would not chop off Windu's hand so readily had Windu been his master. On the other hand, Mace would not sideline Anakin and probably let him join the fight against Sidious.
What if Anakin was raised by the Mandalorians?
that what if already exist,the jedi version and the non-jedi version.
@@Spartan135 I know that.
I love how highly you think of Revan, i do too. He truly is the best story even though SWTOR really shit on him. His story should have continued after KOTOR 2...
Been waiting for this one- great video!
Windu wasn’t a father but a teacher but you learn how to talk to a child that was a great father thing to do wow every young man needs a teacher like mace
I love this version thank you
20:07 Nice one 🤣
He was the Chosen One for the Old Republic ❤ Revan will always be the best in my mind
What if Satine was a former Jedi?
Ooh; love this! Would love to see this get made!
Another great what if!! Awesome story.
What if Anakin fell in love with Dutchess Satine or Sabe. Also what if Anakin was trained by Bastillia Shan or Alayua Secura
I can see Anakin falling for Sabine, and maybe Sabe. But then why would Anakin choose Sabe? Would he be marrying her because of how closely she resembles Padme?
God bless you man for bringing new alternative stories for Starwars!
This is by far one of my favorite what ifs
Thank you for your work I appreciate your stories Or should I say I downright love them
For the longest time I've believed that this would be a worst-case scenario. Mace was... well, to put it softly, not very enthused about Anakin even being trained to begin with, and had he been assigned to train Anakin (because I highly doubt Mace would take him as a Padawan willingly) I think he would have been extremely critical of ANY misstep Anakin might make, even more-so than Obi-Wan, and would have basically kept a very tight grip on Anakin at all times. This would be VERY bad for Anakin who spent his entire life under that kind of control and learned to hate it. In short, Mace is too by the book, too strict, and too hard-headed to be able to train someone like Anakin. He needs someone who's far more flexible, more open, and more perceptive about the emotions of others.
But now that I think about it, there is one small advantage to Mace Windu training Anakin. I still don't think he'd be a good choice, but the silver lining of this very dark storm cloud would be that Mace, because he didn't believe the whole "Anakin is the chosen one" thing, wouldn't have put that burden on Anakin either.
What if Reva was Obi-Wan's apprentice?
What if Reva stayed with Obi-Wan after the events of the Obi-Wan Kenobi show?
What if Luke and Leia met each other as children?
What if Beru and Owen Lars lived?
What if Luke or Leia was adopted by Mon Mothma instead?
I love the idea of Anakin and Mace being gym bros
You should do a what if Anakin and Vader were different people
@UCCLZV8GD9yxm6KFANKLLVIA Lil shit
Amazing video man! Great story!
Great story everyone survives and has a bright future full of life ..amazing great work 👏
wow i loved the positive out come for my boy anakin lol i really like how this story worked out, and answered a lot of questions i had for sure if this were to happen! Thank you for making this :D
That story was great! Here's wishing you success with your finals. However long the next one takes, I'll be here to watch.
You should do more what if on Star Wars rebels Characters like Sabine Zeb or Chopper
In this universe:
Mace Windu: You are on this council, and I grant you the rank of master.
Palpatine: FXXK YOU WINDUUUU
LOL, Palpatine is Dead
paused at 26:16 to say, this is an excellent fresh take. I love the Idea's that other people would have trained Anikin. Even if Obi won was a knight now, he wouldn't be taking padawans yet. Let alone the freakin "chosen one". I personally think that knowing his age and time was short Yoda should have taken him as his last apprentice and took him away from All the temptations of Coruscant Until he was of the mind to handle his emotions.
these are almost like What If, it would be really cool if Disney did a animated series like that for star wars.
What if Depa trained Anakin?
What if The Ones of Mortis raised Anakin?
what if Arca Jeth trained Anakin?
What if Galen Marek was Anakin's Padawan?
What if Obi-Wan & Depa fell in love?
What if Obi-Wan & Luminara fell in love?
What if Shaak Ti was the Chosen One?
What if Depa was the Chosen One?
What if Depa was Anakin's mum?
What if Depa was Caleb Dume's mum?
What if Revan & Meetra showed up during the clone wars?
What if Revan was Mand'alor?
What if Riyo Chuchi was the Dark Lord of the Sith?
What if Shaak Ti went to Kamino with Obi-Wan, in attack of the clones?
What if Omega was in Attack of the Clones?
What if Depa survived Order 66?
What if Kal Skirata & Shaak Ti fell in love?
What if Omega was Shaak TI's Padawan?
What if Galen Marek was Dooku's Apprentice?
What if Depa & Commander Grey fell in love?
What if Ahsoka killed The Son of Mortis?
What if Tarkin was framed for the temple bombing?
What if Kal Skirata adopted Ahsoka?
What if Ventress survived?
What if Ventress was the Chosen One?
What if Bail sent the Bad Batch to rescue little Leia?
What if Anakin was raised in the Eternal Empire?
What if Ezra redeemed Maul?
What if Hondo was the Chosen One?
What if Qui-Gon's ghost visited Dooku?
What if Crosshair never betrayed the Bad Batch?
What if Omega stowed away on the Havoc Marauder when it left for Onderon?
What if Dooku and Jocasta Nu fell in love?
What if Katooni and Petro fell in love?
Amazing Job as always and of course do take your time for as you have to do so much and do give time for your self when you can after finals and congrats to graduating you deserve it 😁
Bra the opening of this video is gold
0:00 Bro 😂 That intro 😂😂😂
Absolute banger as usual
Love your stories. Regularly tune in to listen. Don't love the salty language. That said, thank you for all your hard work and good luck!
Obi wans innocence and nievity as a young trainer and the way he bonded with anikin was the reason he was ignoant to anikins fall he decived himself in believing anikin could not fall because of a profecy and the love kenobi felt for anikin hid the obvious signs from his sight
Congratulations with finishing up with school. Great story thanks for the hard work.
20:13
Caught me off guard that did but no surprise it is that windu talks like that he does
What if Ankin was born at the Jedi temple.
This was a story that I had thought was going to go down a completely different direction as you have already done the light ending so I was like "Any moment now Pente would have Anakin plunge down the darker path." I was surprised it didn't but the surprise came with the understanding that one cannot ever predict as you always throw in something with these videos. Lol
Was a good story, don't worry was enjoyable. Got an interesting take, would have to include a multiverse but a version of Anikan who remained as a Jedi meets Darth Vader. Perhaps they even battle. Just an idea from one creative mind to another.
Video idea that I haven’t seen mentioned anywhere :
What If Padme saw Anakin Burning
I’ve always wondered what would happen if the Ones were reincarnated after their deaths
1) What if Padmé Amidala was The Chosen One?
2) What if Anakin Skywalker and Padmé Amidala were The Chosen Ones?
I am currently writing and rewriting a story based on these two premises. In my story; parallel Padme is the chosen one of her reality, and crosses over to the main timeline just as Anakin was about to Force Jump and flip over Obi-Wan, and because of Padme’s assistance, he is able to land safely on Mustafar’s lava banks and charges Obi-Wan to protect Padme Prime
@@9876Kalel Send me a link/the links.
@@jacenskywalker507 haven’t published it yet
@@9876Kalel Well, when you do so, could you be so kind?
Congrats on graduation. We both graduated! Feels amazing!
With Windu’s thing being to tap into the dark side, whilst still being in the light probably made him one of, if not the best choice to be Anakins trainer
I like the fact in this story Anakin progresses much faster do to being trained by an experienced jedi
It was a tamer what if theory but I thought it was fantastic. Well done my guy
Your stories are awesome
I'm so glad you enjoy!
It's the "you little shit"at the end that got me
I was waiting for this one great work