Rhyming Childrens Books - 6 INSTANT Tweaks to Improve Your Story (+ EXAMPLES)

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  • Rhyming Children's Book - 6 INSTANT Tweaks to Improve Your Story (+ EXAMPLES)
    If you've ever considered writing your children's book in rhyme, this video is for you! And if you already have, this video will give you 6 insightful ways you can use to tweak your rhyming story to make it even better!
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  • @EeviJones
    @EeviJones  Рік тому +1

    Thanks so much for watching! I hope you found this video on writing rhyming childrens books helpful. Be sure to find me over on Instagram & TikTok, so we can connect there as well!

  • @ruwaniravinkumar5945
    @ruwaniravinkumar5945 2 місяці тому +1

    Thank you for the tips, Eevi! It was very helpful.

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  2 місяці тому

      That's so, so wonderful to hear!!

  • @tyee2cool
    @tyee2cool 11 днів тому +1

    Great tips!

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  10 днів тому

      I'm so, so very happy to hear this!!

  • @bluebull1246
    @bluebull1246 6 місяців тому +1

    I thought I knew quite a bit about rhyme but your video certainly raised a few points that I had not considered. Thanks Eevi.

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  6 місяців тому

      You're so very welcome! Hearing this makes me so happy!

  • @rajnisarma8162
    @rajnisarma8162 25 днів тому +1

    Awesome and informative ❤

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  25 днів тому

      I'm so, so happy to hear this!

  • @carlachapin1233
    @carlachapin1233 Рік тому +1

    Thank you for encouraging me to rhyme one day. No-for-now-but-not-no-forever. I read every book into a hand-held recorder then, play it back, and go to editing with a vengeance! :) As I move onto this new career, your reminders of line-breaks and synonyms were particularly valuable. Appreciate all you do!

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  Рік тому

      Ohhh, I love hearing that, Carla!

  • @tobiasware
    @tobiasware 7 місяців тому +1

    Thanks for this video Eevi. I have been writing nonsense verse for decades and only recently realised that some of them would make wonderful children's books. I have three poems which are slowly being bludgeoned into appropriate shape, and making illustrations at the same time, too. Your rhyming and rhythm points are absolutely on-point, neatly reflecting my own experiences. I firmly advise: never accept an inferior rhyme, word, or phrase when a little rearrangement or rethinking might metamorphose a light rhyme into a masterpiece. Sorry, I went into lecture mode again.

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  7 місяців тому

      Haha! I love it! And it's so wonderful to hear you've had similar experiences. Here's to a beautiful masterpiece, Tobias!

  • @anjuly17
    @anjuly17 11 місяців тому +1

    Loved your tips. I run an animal hospital and recently wrote a children’s book about dogs and cats in rhyme. I have no idea if the lines are in meter, I just based it off of how the lines sound when read aloud and your video gave me confidence to move ahead with the project.

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  11 місяців тому

      I'm so happy to hear you loved the tips!

  • @annwalker8907
    @annwalker8907 10 місяців тому +1

    This was very helpful, thank you!!

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  9 місяців тому

      I'm so happy to hear this, Ann!

  • @hollyrampone
    @hollyrampone Рік тому +1

    This is great, thanks!

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  Рік тому

      You're so, so welcome, Holly!

  • @abenitez34
    @abenitez34 8 місяців тому +1

    great work Eevi! You inspire me 🙂

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  8 місяців тому

      Hearing this makes me so happy!

  • @charmaineclancy
    @charmaineclancy Рік тому +1

    Very helpful - thank you.

  • @TheCeeCeeH
    @TheCeeCeeH Рік тому +2

    Hi Eevi. This is the BEST Rhyme tutorial! I love writing in rhyme. I'd love for you to read my stories for critique and review. Do you offer this service?

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  Рік тому +1

      I'm so, so happy to hear this, Carolyn. Thank you so much. I do offer these services, but am unfortunately currently fully booked.

  • @piasemi-goldberger6435
    @piasemi-goldberger6435 9 місяців тому

    Thank you Eevi! Very helpful!
    I just never seem to find the descriptions and links that are supposed to be below? I am not very phone/computer savvy.

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  9 місяців тому +1

      I'm so happy to hear this! I so hope you will be able to see this comment right here. I went head and made quick video to show you how to get to the links I'm mentioning in my videos. www.loom.com/share/c90cc7e04c7b49f1bd9d0dca391b3349?sid=1bb69641-6efc-4fa2-99ac-c77fbca83d58

  • @mozimiga
    @mozimiga Рік тому +1

    Wonderful, thank you!! Can you speak to punctuation in a children's picture book? Must there be a comma at the end of every line that doesn't already have another type of punctuation?

    • @EeviJones
      @EeviJones  Рік тому

      You're so welcome! Unless that line calls for a comma, we would not put one at the end of every line. We will still use regular punctuation rules, regardless of how the lines are displayed/ broken up on our page. I'll have some tips about punctuation in tomorrow's video as well. I so hope this helps!