Say no to this (workshop version) // Hamilton Animatic
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- Опубліковано 12 вер 2024
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This has been the toughest one yet wow. I'm really happy with how it has turned out though. I used the workshop version to avoid copyright but I really like the extra bit with Eliza signing. I think it really adds to the impact of the affair.
I hope you enjoy it, I'm thinking my next animatic will be either be Guns and Ships or my shot (the workshop version of both)
All credit for music and characters belong to Lin Manuel Miranda and the Hamilton Cast. I only own the drawings.
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Thank you so much again for all your comments! You guys are so lovey and it gives me so much motivation! 💕
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No problemo! :D
DaisieDoodle it want let me see the video can you help me unblock it this is starting to get on my nerves it show me last time now it want let me see it at all
Jonay Grey I’m sorry the video seems to be age restricted there isn’t anything I can do about it that I know of 😕 unless you have an account that is 18+. I didn’t even know myself until a friend told me
DaisieDoodle it’s ok I made up another account to watch it😂😂I saw it and I love it 😍😍 I love how you did it and thank you for responding back I really appreciate it
I love how he says "hOw cOuLd YOU dO tHiS" Like ALEXANDER YOU DAMN WELL KNOW YOU COULD HAVE LEFT THAT ROOM
But what about maria's child and her self without Alex she would've been dead the moment she married James. And its Alex and james fault
In my opinion. Maria is a victim.
Jayna Shields don’t worry I’m pissed too
Fucking THANK YOU.
Jayna Shields he’s mad about her telling her husband not about her screwing him
I love this so much. It truly shows how Maria was a young, naive victim who was meant to believe sex was all she was good for. A lot of times she's shown as a villain, and I think that's unfair. Beautiful art as well!
Franki Cormier thank you so much! I’ve always loved this song as there’s a lot of emotions in there voices that say things other than just them having an affair.
naive my ass.
That all happened because Of Hamilton - he was thinking with another part Of The body
Franki Cormier ik I feel so bad for Maria QwQ. I also think Jasmin deserves more than just this song and "and pEGGY". Her voice is stunning
I felt especially bad for her when she looked at the picture of Hamilton and Eliza, and she realized why he was upset. he had a wife, and she felt bad. I like it when ‘villain’ characters don’t know if what they’re doing is bad, then realize they messed up and feel guilty.
I love how she puts down a photograph of Ham and Eliza even tho there were no cameras whatsoever in the 18th century xd
jupis0990 hahahah it’s a painting shhh 🤫
Oh ok ㆍㅂᆞ
Kwaiigirl15 yeh, but paintings weren’t put behind glass when framed, neither were they so small, alas it’s more probable it is a photograph rather than a painting. I said it as a fun fact, I really loved the whole animatic, sorry for not addressing it, @DaisieDoodle
Did Hamilton pick Eliza up and kept smiling in that position with her hair defying gravity for hours on end to get that painting?
In this fictional Hamilton universe that isn’t historically accurate the painting can be whatever it wants to be 😂
I cried for two reasons (lies)
-how you showed the kids asleep in the cart because they feel safe going back home
-how Maria passed the Hamilton family (including Angelica)
-how beautiful the animation is
-how you hear Eliza singing bits of that would be enough and helpless (how you also hear Angelica sign bits of satisfied which made me laugh and cry because I realized how fucking smart she is)
-how you showed that Maria is just a human
-a lot of other things
I cried for a lot of reasons
OmegaRwbyFox those weren't 2 reasons but whatever
MARIA REYNOLDS DESERVED BETTER SQUAD
DearSofu_ Hansen~ that's the point
Banana Bread Aesthetic bro i cried out of anger, him lying, fucking her, and many more God Damn it
Let this be a lesson to us kids. Never entertain strangers.
Pillow Gaming true .... true......
No. It means dont be a ass and cheat.
*cough cough* ouran high school host club
Or how about just don't have sex with them. Especially when they "look so helpless". Just sayin.
No Name good point XD
Sort of how it went
Alexander Hamilton WTF
Do tell
Hey Alex can I just *LE SLAP*
Hej, Alexander, say no!
Why did you cheat on eliza dammit
1:11 I've never seen anyone do that before, and it literally broke my heart :'D
Riley Murrieta it does make sense because in the musical Eliza and Maria have similarities. In “helpless” Eliza said “Yo, this
One’s mine.” and in “say no to this” Maria says “This one’s mine sir”. In “Take a Break” when Eliza says “stay” and in “say no to this” when Maria says “stay” they are both in the same vocal power.
oh gosh.
THAT'S STRONG!
MY HEART
Hamilton Trash yeah. Lin knew what he was doing when he wrote this!!😢😢😢
I love how in this animatic Maria didn't seem to know Alex was married until she saw the photo\painting(?) and that's why she had such a shocked expression and started to cry feeling guilty for what she was doing. It shows so much emotion to her character in that part, keep up the amazing work! :)
no ._. if you pay attention to the lyrics it actually seems like she knew about the letter " if you give him what he wants you can HElP MeEeeEeEEe"
Food taste weird actually it’s more like “if you give him what he wants then you can Have Me” not help me.
l o w k e y then she puts down the photo..
She knew, Alexander at that point was famous, being the secretary of finance or something, what she felt was guilt
Maria and the whole town knew Alexander was married to Elizabeth Schuyler. It's was a big thing back then as the Schuyler's was well known and had money.
I love the detail of Maria putting down Alex and Eliza's Picture, also the ending, and I love it all to be honest! 💜💜
SavvannahDoesStuff2 thank you ✨
DaisieDoodle I love the grin James flashes and how he drags her away as Maria gives Alex that look that she really didn't want to go with him.
OH. MY. GOD. THIS IS PERFECT! THIS SHOWS THAT MARIA IS IN FACT NOT THAT BAD! And backstory Eliza changing with Mari and the photo! Its just perfect like mushie said you need more attention!
Marquiz de Lafayette No, she really is that bad. She was probably in on the scam just to get some money for her and her husband. They ended up divorcing though..
Actually Maria cheated on her husband with many people she even moved multiple times and changed her name to cheat on james reynolds sorry im a history nerd
Graciehasalife I'm glad somebody is here, she actually was in on it (not in the musical, the artist did a great job on portraying Mariah) but in real life she had 2 sons and here and her husband, James Reynolds, used her to get money from Hamilton and many others
@Rain T I'm sorry, I made that comment a lot ago, and that was incorrect
Ur right.... except the part where she flips down Eliza and alexes picture
Ik this has nothing to do with The animatic but when the ensemble says no in the chorus, they sound so sad
In the workshop version, I imagine people who had looked up to Alexander as a hero and seeing him like this is a huge bust to them but in the Broadway version, they seem more void of character as the other reply says
Well........yeah.
I love how you show that Maria is actually a victim in this
Angelica Schuyler, historically speaking, we really don’t know if she was a pawn or a queen in the whole mess... for all we know, her husband could have been pimping her out or she could have been in it for the money too... no one knows
Exactly! She was helpless and conditioned that she was only good for the enjoyment of men!!
Imposter.
Supposedly she was sexually active but she could be a victim
Also
ua-cam.com/video/7EYoA2_jvLc/v-deo.html I did a hamilton Mashup if you're interested
ua-cam.com/video/9nIBvAuOueU/v-deo.html
And this one
I like how Maria felt bad for Eliza and Alexander
She better😂
Ayy,
I was hesitant to watch Alexander’s downfall this early in the morning, but
I love how you try to be very inclusive of characters other than Alex. Although the song is telling from his perspective, your addition of small details such as the way Maria saw and turned down the framed picture or the way two women cross each other or the slight detail of Maria looking back with regret and her bruised eye showing and so many more tiny details make this a much more enjoyable work. In this way you didn’t completely demonize her but still showed the gravity of the situation. And the body movement in this animatic is also quite dynamic and varied! Well the intimate scenes between Alexander and Maria, yeah, but also in the way James Reynolds moves around Alex and also the way he drags Maria from the doorstep.
This work is awesome and I’d love to see more from you >v
Phương TRinh Nguyễn Ngọc thank you so much 💕
Couldn't have said it any better!!
yup I said the same thing but 10x shittier. well said!
Hamilton: *_DONT TELL MY WIFE!_*
Also hamilton: lemme just tell the world i did this real quick
Nobody:
Literally nobody:
Absolutely Nobody: Hates Hamilton in say no to this instead of James, maybe Maria
Also nobody: doesn't hate the Reynolds Phamplet, *WHICH WAS THE REAL PROBLEM IN HAMILTON*
* was expecting Lin to sing maria *
*Oh you did not*
What is my Life mariaaaa~ maKE WAY MAKE WAY-
オオカミ HHH NO
That's the demo not the workshop but honestly me
Wait what when
2:44 “how could you do this?!”
you guys probably know this but-
the song was actually changed to “how could i do this?!” so that the blame was not put on Maria but also showed that Alex felt guilty
Washington: go home Alexander
Alexander:no
Angelica & Eliza: take a break
Alexander:no
Maria:stayy..
Alexander: wELL I don’t know hOw to say NO to this!
Bread Girl good point
Everyone begged him to take a break, and relax. All of a sudden a random lady does it and it's HoW cOuLd i SAy nO?
Bread Girl 😂😂
You Forget that during that time he was trying to get his movement across to the Congress so he refused to take a break to get that Threesome from Angelica and Eliza out of sense of Duty. With her well he didnt exactly have that much of a duty anymore so fuck it....
I-
1:36 I WASN'T EXPECTING THAT!! My heart broke. You draw so good!!
3:24 you did not just-
Ummm hey dude haven't you heard the lyrics beat me cheat me something me it means yeahhhh u know now her husbandu forced her to have sexsu to get money.
Just look at her eyes doesn't she look bad to herself and wut she done?to be honest iam using my dad's account just watch this vid k.
Poor Maria though.. I do feel bad for her though...
XxIzaya TrashxX he was put in a horrible position. His wife and kids, but on the other hand this poor girl was being beat and had her own child to protect.
Daxvinax W James set up the whole thing, if she didn’t do it her daughter would of been beaten by James so she did it to save her daughter.
Same honestly it's an unpopular opinion but shes one of my fave characters 😁
trash bucket lacey i love her!
Daxvinax W James was the one who set up the whole thing, she had no choice in who she could chose my guy.
THIS IS THE BEST SAY NO TO THIS ANIMATIC!
I love the emotions and how Maria sees the photo of Eliza and feels bad. For once it’s not a joke animatic of SNTT!
Well done, this if really good!
This is actually well made like in the historic story, Maria slept with Hamilton so she can get money for james
I want to say a curse word but she needed the money, after all.
2:12 damn just gonna say it like that?
Before he was like "fuuuuuuu"
Now he's just like "FaCk"
"That's why her hair is so big...its full of secrets."
I love Maria’s look of shock and realization as she saw Hamilton’s picture with Eliza! This isn’t like the other animatics where she’s the villain. She’s only human!
Hamilton in ¨Take a Break¨ No. No. No. No. No.
Hamilton in ¨Say no to This¨: I am not able to say the english word for no.
I gotta say, this is one of the fluent animatics I've seen, and your drawing skills are interesting and unique, well done!
The ending was so original and heartbreaking and everything about this is amazing! Great work!
the only reason she wanted to let hamilton cheat on his wife is to have her daughter not be takin away by james
OH WAIT THAT'S A FANFIC--
@@trashboat9848 No. It's history.
@@estherbonaparte7461 Yeh I'm aware just that I was reading fanfic with that piece of information-
The part where Maria turn the picture down OH MY GOD !!!! She just wanted a happy relationship with her husband omg !!!!
Lets all be honest here, Hamilton didn’t deserve Eliza
@Weenie Beanie TRUE!! Eliza was so pure and a precious little bean who was kind enough to accept his apology, but you’re right, Hamilton didn’t deserve her. She was such a saint.
He even says so him selfe
I loved the parallel at 1:25 where we see Eliza with her ring on. Then Alex without his.
This is amazing!!!! I love it so much!! I love this original version: They should have left the helpless/stisfied part.
Your art is incredible!!! I love the Mariah/Eliza comparison.
Dramatic, sexy, sad animatic 😍😍😍😍
Beautiful, just beautiful
.
“When I’m alone in my room, sometimes I stare at the wall.”
I can relate.
"There's nowhere I can go"
The door: Am I a joke to you?
It's just so amazing !! The artstyle, the shadows, colors..... everything about this is just amazing !!!
I love how when Maria saw the picture of Eliza with Alex she was shocked and was guilty she probaly (i can't spell-) did not know that he was married so she put down the painting/photo just creative and shows that Maria is also a human with feelings
I keep saying No the whole video..even though I know what will really happen..
*BUT STILL*
ANYWAYS I REALLY LOVE IT
THISSS IS SOOOO GOOOOD ❤❤❤
I think this may be the best animatic I've ever seen. the art is expressive and clean, every frame looks purposeful, the movements are fluid and connected, and the concepts are original! you manage to put so much character into just a few minutes, I especially love how you portray maria! very well done!
it brakes my heart when eliza’s part comes in
The parts with Eliza and the kids made me cry, I don’t know why but it just made me feel even more upset with Alexander. But keep up the amazing work!!
Whoa I really love this! Maria looks so attractive
*literally breaks the replay button*
Nobody needs to know......
*shuts phone off*
The flashes to Eliza when he looks at Maria’s body I’m crying 😭
Omg Maria crying broke my heart
Ikr?! ;-; I cried too when that happened... ;-;
*The tune of “Helpless”*
“HELPLESS!”
“Mariah looked at me and my mind went “YESSS!””
“ A few weeks later, I’m cheatin’ on my wife Eliza nightly”
Alex: *has* *an* *affair*
Ensemble:ideot!
Ahhh I‘m absolutely in love with this!
It’s really dynamic, not a second passes that‘s boring. And I’m always a big fan of the frames and dynamics of the song matching the beat.
ALSO the inclusion of Eliza in this had me quaking. Like?????????? Idek how to express it, the parallels? the picture ?? when Maria and Eliza cross paths??
Also I loved that you showed Maria’s emotion and regrets and doubts since a lot of other people usually focus on alexanders‘ emotions when doing this animatic which is honestly kinda a waste so kudos to you I’m crying I luv this
Maria:my husband beat me ,cheat me, mistreated me
Eliza: am I a joke to you
There are no accidents
Actually, that would be the aftermath
I love everyone screaming "NO!" in the background because that's an accurate representation of pretty much everyone watching alexander ruin his own life
Person: who was the victim? Maria or Alexander?
Me: ....Eliza. change my mind. You can't.
Having Eliza and Maria pass each other was genius!! So AMAZING!!!!!
Fun fact: James made Maria do that so he could get Hamiltons money or he would hurt Maria and her child more.
I kinda feel bad for Maria
She was abused, she was forced to blackmail Alex, *AnD hEr hUsBanD iS uGlY*
Ive been waiting for a decent animatic that tells the story for ''Say No To This'' This was amazing good work. But this was truly amazing, beyond decent
Your edit is incredibly 💖💖 but really, if the Eliza’s and Angelica’s part would had been included i would certainly CRY A LOT
2:26 Hey, Ham?! What dat neck do? Whatever it does, save it for ur WiFe
lol
Is it bad that I can’t stop watching this? 😂
this is honestly amazing, i love this- my favorite by far
Oml she had a black eye Im crying 😭
Davina Woods, she did it to protect her daughter. She was married off to James when she was 15 so she could help her poor family. Maria was forced into having the affair because James would’ve taken away their daughter from her. Remember: Susan was the only good thing left in Maria’s life at the time.
Davina Woods don’t forget she was doing to it protect her child
Animation goals!!!! Ily and your art!!! ❤️❤️
WOW WOW WOW IVE STUMBLED UPON ANOTHER PIECE OF AMAZING ART AKFKROJGT
OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO AMAZING. this shit made me so emotional in so many ways. I loved the little gestures Maria did like putting down the photo of them. Or when it was their first time together and it flashed between her and Eliza. IT WAS JUST AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU
Omg! I love the fact that you made a sequence where Maria shifts to Eliza like, DAMN! He’s thinking about his wife and trying to focus on being loyal! Love it!
i feel the "NOOOOO" in this version is fare better
~Inhales~
Literally Hamiltrash here
Peggy M. Schuyler
~Screams~
TrashingMusicals ~says no in hopes Alexander will stop~
Peggy M. Schuyler
~listens again~
BOI
My tears fall when I heard Eliza sing :((
Good job!
Omg that ending broke my heart
I like how they sing "nooo" so lifelessly.
3:34 you can hear Maria saying say no to this!! Ahh!! I just love how much this shows how she didn't want it to happen and she was a victim.
“I don’t know how to say no to this”
Say no.
How to say no to this : I Have A Wife .
Why was Eliza not bothered by an unfamiliar woman leaving her husband's house?!!
Can I just say that tHIS IS AMAZING
1:37 honestly, I wish that part was still in the musical, it really just gives more perspective to the song
Every time Hamilton says "Nobody needs to know" I wanna say "And the world will know!" from Newsies
3:22 and when her tears started falling gave me absolute chills oh my
this is s t u n n i n g
But that was my wife you decided to
Fuuuuuuuuu-
Best line
2:12 when you realize you didn’t study for the test
This animatic is amazing! I love your drawing style, the animation is so fluid and the way they move I so realistic. The small details made it so much better like how Maria's bruises stay there and don't just dissapear. I love how Maria turns down the picture of Eliza and looks guilty for what she's doing and how it switches between Eliza and Maria.
It took listening to this version for me to realize he said, " I raced to her place and said how could you to her face." Instead of, " I'll cut you in the face!"
I don't think Hamilton is even THAT hot-headed lmao! 😂😂
This actually killed me. 🤣
AAAAAA I ALSO THOUGHT HE SAID “I’ll cut you in the face!” I’M NOT THE ONLY ONEEE
@@theatheat6368 Dude yes! I imaged him busting down her down with a pocket knife and EVERYTHING!!
Omg this is probably the best Hamilton animation I've ever seen!! 😍😍
WORK!
You put so much depth into Maria's character, thank you! Because everyone has one. Like that she seemed to feel so guilty for what she was doing when she saw the painting and realized whose other life she was destroying. But since she is just "the girl Alexander cheated with" she recieves little notice.
It’s so sad to think that my father did this when I was just a child and he had kids of his own and a wife....
(P.s fun fact: Maria was actually Eliza’s 3rd cousin)
Damn
I forgot to say:
-The transitions from frame to frame are so well done
-I loved the colors you used, considering how many frames you used plus the color, props to you!
-The expressions I also enjoyed, I feel you really showed every part of every character in the animatic, specially Eliza a the end.
-I really liked that you included the fact that they were coming back from her father’s summer home.
-I also thought it really clever how you made the Reynolds’ letter to Alex
Is it just me or does at 0:33 does it sound like she said " I don't have the memes to go on" 😂😂😂
THIS IS SO WELL DONE AND MEANINGFUL? LIKE I'M CRYING OVER THIS SONG AGAIN FOR THE FIRST TIME IN FOREVER? BECAUSE THERE'S WHOLE NEW CHARACTER MOTIVATIONS? POOR ELIZA? POOR MARIA? I'M SO IN LOVE WITH THIS RN!
Maybe Hamilton could’ve said “I have a Wife” but no.
I-
@@baddieb4658 *sigh...*
@@baddieb4658 very disappointed
@@angie-kv2oj :(
The animation is so great!!!
The emotions, and the fact that it looks original! A lot of the people’s who animate songs end up looking a lot alike. But yours stand out!!
3:08 that "HOOOW" from alexander though oh my god
I HAVE BEEN WAITING SO LONG FOR SOMEONE TO PORTRAY MARIA LIKE THIS.
THIS IS AUTOMATICALLY THE BEST SNTT ANIMATIC FOR MAKING ME SAD, HAVING FANTASTIC SCENE COMPOSITION, FLUID CHARACTER DESIGN, AND, MOST IMPORTANTLY, SHOWING JUST HOW DEPRESSING THIS IS IN EVERY WAY.
AAA MY HEART
Take a break
Alex:no
Talk less
Alex:no
Cheat on your wife and ruin your life
Alex: what is the word that means to decline such an offer
Nein or nee is just as easy to say
@@treycooper2036 You Dutch/German? XD
@@treycooper2036 Uhmm.. hate to break it to you bud, but I can decide for myself if I reply or not. Now if you excuse me I'm going back to sleep bc it's like 3AM in here. I only asked that bc the word 'nein' is German (you could've been German, idk) and the word 'nee' is Dutch (you could've been Dutch, idk) 'Nee' and 'say' rhyme as well
@@treycooper2036 Also, what is this America thing you deleted in your comment? I didn't try to offend you but if you scream about it like (excuse me) a little kid, don't expect me not to reply! Do I care that someone is French, American or German, I thought you said mu comment rhymed!
@@treycooper2036 apologies accepted. But what made you so mad though?
Wow...this animatic puts a lot more emotion into the song with glimpses of Eliza and the kids and also that ending just makes it perfect.
Hamilton says " nobody needs to know" and then writes a paper about it later on and everyone finds out.
And if he had just taken a break like Angelica said none of this would have happened.
This is- is just golden like the ideas in this animatic are just amazing I love it!❤
The thumbnail: *exists*
Me:
Me: *demonic screech*
*Y e s*
I expected ham to say fUuU- so when he just straight up cursed I laughed so hard
I’m crying, so much. For Eliza and Maria, and my heart really hurts. This was so great lovely job 😭😭♥️