"Need Answers; Please Help" | MrCreepyPasta's Storytime
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- Опубліковано 21 сер 2024
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Welp. Vaguely erotic description of a horse...
***** Welp. A brony.
How about no erotic portrayals of equine beings? At all?
I honestly do not have a response to that.
I'm personally going with both, just to be on the safe side.
Suzanne Wood Can we change that from 'equine beings' to all non-human beings?
This story is based of the Scottish myth of a WaterHorse. The WaterHorse is a shapeshifting water spirit Kelpie. The horse attracts victims into riding it before drowning them.
Like Fiona?...I don't remember what that's a reference to, but it was a movie I saw as a kid...
And apparently after it drowns them it eats them
That's what keldeo is based off of and the 3 muskiters
PottedNai We have a myth about this creature in Sweden its called a "Bäckahäst- also known as a "Nokken" It portrays itself as this beautiful mare or stallion for people very often to children or younger people wanting them to ride it ..though when they get on its back to do so it will take off with the speed of a jet running towards the nearest body of water to drown these people it can also appear at fields at farms to work as a plow horse for a day for the farmer trying to fool the farmer to ride them but the steel in the bridle the farmer place on them keeps them bound so usualy at the days end they normaly run off not wanting to risk being bound again ..its true form can only been seen in the reflection of a lake or body of water..if one ever finds themselves on the back of one holy incatations or a mention of holy words will get them to throw you off and run away
Not all of them have murderous intent though! Some will be satisfied with taking you several towns over and leaving you there making you have to get back home on your own
Or the swedish mythology :Bäckahästen
Look For My comment where I discribe what It is :)
It's either a kelpie or a brook horse. It's fairly close to the same thing, though the kelpie can shape shift more, even extending its back to lure multiple riders.
Both have similar goals. Lure a human in, then race to water. Sometimes they drown them. Or times they turn into a massive serpent-like beast and devour them. The kelpie is known to leave the entrails along the shoreline.
The sign of the cross, supposedly, is enough to free you from it's grip. With the kelpie, the tale usually has it ensnaring several kids at once. One of them hadn't climbed on, but was merely petting it. This kid's hand would be just as stuck to the beast as the rest, but would then sever their own hand to free themselves.
Bluesit32 Kelpies and brook horses are so similar that they're almost indistinguishable. The only difference is that the brook horse is Scandinavian and acts as a sort of 'soul ferrier' to the afterlife and kelpies are more like 'real' animals. The thing is this kelpie was missing its golden bridle, so maybe it's a brook horse.
Friendshipismagic There is also a Slavic version of this creature, the _Utopiec_ or _Topielec_.
TheBlues32 Another fellow interested in mythical creatures and folklore!
Brook horse, kelpie? Nøkken has gotten himself some fancy names now
Friendshipismagic Do brook horsed shape shift?
So refreshing to here a Creepypasta based on folklore rather than slashers.
Yeah, I wanted more Kelpie storys
Just a homeless guy on bath salts dressed up as a horse. Happens to me like once every two weeks. Sometimes I ride him, sometimes I don't. Depends what kind of mood I'm in.
It happens to you too?!
Iopiop Iopiop doctor pepper? Usually it's after I drink Cola
+Riley Ayala Weiiiirrrddd...
No, I have no roosters.
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Anyone else think he was a little erotic in his definition of the horse? It sounded like he was a little too attracted to that horse.
DUDE YOUR PROFILE PICTURE IS SO FUNNY
Abby Avant You're right it is.
+Fred Max I was thinking that too! I was listening to it and was thinking; "Welp, here comes the bestiality."
+Nickolas Rebello-Lopes SAMEEE
+Fred Max Yuuup. Started to wonder just what kind of story this was, exactly.
In case anyone was wondering, this is not erotic at all. The creature described is a kelpie. A kelpie is a shape shifting creature that takes the form of a horse ,lures you onto its back, and drowns you. This mythical creature would pretty much enchant you.
THANK YOU! :D
Yes, I've added something on that myself now, thank you.
the way it's read is what makes it sound erotic.
"This is a True Story" and when that is said, I instantly lose all sense of fear this story could have given me.
OneWingedDash Rants ahahahah tru
Cool story bro me to
Well, your picture is a pony so your opinion is automatically invalid.
Creepypastaprodigy, mines a pony to. If i said you were an intelligent individual would my opinion be invalid then?
Gamer Mcmane Your opinion may be invalid, but the fact of whether or not he's an intelligent individual would remain the same.
So your opinion regarding his intelligence doesn't really matter anyway.
now kids, remember what professer Lupin tought you about strange majestic horses
Their usually kelpies
John Carver ha
I don't remember that from the book/movie.
John Carver damn those red booger things...
John Carver I should get this but I don't
Kelpies are a type of fairy from Gaelic folklore. They often took the form of beautiful horses, luring people to them and giving them the sense that they should ride them. When the person got on them, the person would stick to them, unable to escape before the Kelpie went into a source of water (usually a lake) and drowned them.
Usually, kelpie would have to shapeshift into a beautiful woman to seduce a man, but not this chap!
Youre thinking of a siren actually, kelpie is the horse version basically 👌
Thank you i couldn't remember how to spell that
This is so cool! It's based off of a Scottish legend, the "horse" is actually a common water spirit called a Kelpie. They're usually described as beautiful mares, people are compelled to ride them and they then race to the nearest body of water to drown the human, as a sort of sacrifice to a water goddess.
Moral of the story: Don't do drugs kids
He didn't do drugs... nothing even close he was a normal kid the mare was a kelpie
I actually have an answer for this I think.
The creature he was riding was probably the Brook Horse, it's a mythical creature that would lure children into the water where it would drown them. Now you know.
Or a Kelpie. Both are similar but just myths of different origin
Devon Potter Is it really a myth? O.o
Dylan Peters Yes, actually.
_Kelpies_ are Celtic, and are also the translation for the slavic _Utopiec_ (read: Oo-topiets), while _Brook Horses_ are Scandinavian. All are equine related.
I do not believe in paranormal creatures, but the fact that it's conversed and described in the same details across three different cultures is a bit spooky to me.
Sexy Beast This person obviously did their research.
Zan Man Well, not necessarily. I just happen to know a lot in the topic of folklore, myths and legends. The only reason I know anything of Slavic folklore, is because I'm of Slavic origin, but that's unimportant.
I want a guy to talk about me the way he talks about that kelpie horse the first half! 😖
+Hope Fanrir even the part about the long mane?
+Hope Fanrir I would, but ya need to link your google plus profile ;)
-Thirsty :P
Hope Fanrir U got to be a horse
Uh nice profile pic. Sorry but now knowing you I can't do much to help you in this regard
Oh wow, a Kelpie story! I was starting to piece it together when the creature had convinced the narrator to ride her and thought "Hmm, it couldn't be, could it?"
Then when he said he was stuck and couldn't break away, I was so glad I figured it out! Great story, very well done!
Nope its bäckahästen
Gutiu?
Bäckhästen was my first reaktion
It really did creep me out when he said he was in Puyallup, since I live not far from there. I hope he's not following me...
Fun Fact: the Pacific Northwest has the highest serial killer per capita in the entire world :O
saammmeeee
and seriously? damn I'm out 😂
Arthas Menethil well then I live in the Pacific Northwest...*looks out my window* hey is that a horse
The Variants horses and deer are statistically more dangerous then sharks, bears, or wolves. I want to say there's 5-10 times as many deaths per year in the US from deer than bear. And have you ever met a horse? Seen they're cold, dead eyes? Like a sharks eyes...
We have a myth about this creature in Sweden its called a "Bäckahäst- also known as a "Nokken" It portrays itself as this beautiful mare or stallion for people very often to children or younger people wanting them to ride it ..though when they get on its back to do so it will take off with the speed of a jet running towards the nearest body of water to drown these people it can also appear at fields at farms to work as a plow horse for a day for the farmer trying to fool the farmer to ride them but the steel in the bridle the farmer place on them keeps them bound so usualy at the days end they normaly run off not wanting to risk being bound again ..its true form can only been seen in the reflection of a lake or body of water..if one ever finds themselves on the back of one holy incatations or a mention of holy words will get them to throw you off and run away
Not all of them have murderous intent though! Some will be satisfied with taking you several towns over and leaving you there making you have to get back home on your own
It sounds like a kelpie.
Sounds like a nightmare.
Was that a genuine laugh or are you being sarcastic?
I get that pun
Poo-yallup 😂😂😂 it's pronounced like pew-allup. Sitting in my house in the city as we speak.
midgetpro74 Right? lol Ive never heard anyone who wasnt from this side of the mountains come even close to getting it right.
Dammit! XD I was even up there for college for a while. I was saying it wrong the whole time!
***** XD
***** you went to college around here? if you dont mind me asking, was it pierce?
midgetpro74 Yeah people who don’t live in Puyallup can’t pronounce it. Its really funny. I live in Puyallup too.
The kelpie!! There is a lot of lore behind these horse creatures, they're super creepy
No its Bäckahästen
Kept falling asleep.. Not because boring but your voice is extremely calming in this video. Also doesn't help that it's midnight.
SAME
Kelpie.
A myth in Scotland about a horse that roams the shorelines luring people to ride it, and then darts off into the nearest body of water, drowning them.
The creature you've encountered is an Each Uisge from Scottish folklore. They are said to appear as a man or a horse, they get people to ride them like normal horses but as when they go towards a body of water the unfortunate rider is stuck to the creatures back and as the Each Uisge dives into the depths of the deep (causing the human to drown) they will eat the poor unfortunate soul leaving the liver to float at the surface
Jordan Kurosabaku the creature is actually a kelpie not an each usaige, the two are so similar that it is easy to mix them up. The main differences between the two are that Kelpie's lived in shallower waters and each usiages live in deeper bodies of water. And each usaiges are far more vicious then a kelpie. I can completely understand the mix up though.
Moon Strike okay, thanks for clearing that up
Does anyone else notice that this involves a literal "night-MARE?" Brilliant.
cheesy but funny
+Lady Luna Pure class ;-) Still I wonder if the horse was supposed to be famine.
+Lady Luna mh
+Lady Luna not a night mare a Kelpie
The way that you spoke during this pasta matched the story and music perfectly. I could not stop listening to this one awesome job!
This was a great one! I've never heard such a good kelpie story! I love the description of the horse as if it were a beautiful woman. The writer really captured the hypnotic lure of a creature like this.
It's a kelpie, a mythological being that disguises itself as a beautiful horse infront of anyone who draws near, especially boys and once that person is on the kelpie heads to the water and starts morphing into its true form a half horse half fish being, normally whoever rides it doesn't escape until it's to late, kelpies once the person has drowned has a tendency to eat their victims.
Kelpie story! Yay, :)
I love the way you added "Deadly Sorrow" as the beginning music. It made me nostalgic about other creepypastas.
This sounds like the Dark brotherhood's Shadowmiure
Isn't this horse like some greek creature that lures people to the water to drown them or something? I swear I've heard of that before
DeAnte Bolden
Your thinking Kelpie however its not in greek myth more in celtic
Thats true.
***** i think you might be thinking of sirens. Those are simliar only that they r. Part women part bird. But like the kelpie can lure their victims to a watery death
Kelpie it's a Kelpie the Celtic water horse
DeAnte Bolden its Scottish
oh that's my horse dave, and it's actually a he
Creepy, that escalated quickly! Good listen, I like your panicked voice gives me chills.
I feel like there's been some kind of huge obsession with Kelpies this year. I've seen comics, and listened to at least 3 pastas about them.
Fun fact the video playing isn't water it's the ghost world flag
Whooooa I see that so different now
O_O so that's what a kelpie is...
Pretty much, dude.
I always love when pasta writers actually draw upon folklore from cultures around the world. For those of you who don't know this story was about an encounter with a kelpie, a water spirit from Scottish legends. The kelpie will entice an unsuspecting person into riding it. Then the creature will promptly gallop into a lake or river and drown the rider. In some stories they're also able to take on the form of a beautiful woman like a Siren. Other pasta writers should take heed. There are plenty of preexisting myths and legends that are far more horrifying than things like Jeff The Killer or Haunted Gaming Cartridges. I encourage more writers to write stories based on folklore like this one was.
listen you! you are getting better at narrating these stories! much better, in fact the quality of voice acting is so superb I am starting to get goosebumps just from listening to it. The immersion is so deep man i can fall into trance yoyoyo GJ GG
people saying it's reminiscent of kelpie, I'd also say it's similar to a nökken. anyone agree?
arent näkkin more like creatures who capture people IN or near the water instead of luring them into the deeps?
This horse seems a lot like a kelpie...
That's because it is
+Melissa DanielsMyers (Wildfire317) a kelpie?-?
Yeah, what's a kelpie?
+GlonX it's some mythological creature
i read about it once
just type it into Google and I'm sure you'll find all the info you want
stera No need somebody further down in the comments explained :P
you really have the best narrations, nice voice affliction as well. :)
I just realised how fast this channel has grown in the last year pretty damn close to a million subs I remember being shown this channel around a good four years ago when you were around 200k it feels like sooooo long ago anyways you deserve the subs you get and as always good job :)
Does anyone know the song that MCP uses in his outro? It sounds so familiar.
I suggest checking out some of +myuuji 's albums on iTunes ;)
It sounds like from a video that did top 10 creepypasta if not idk
Oh, I know. I actually knew it was Myuuji before I ever asked, I just forgot which song. I found the song the other day actually. But thank you for the response nonetheless!
It's called Reflection by Myuu
EyelessAlec I think its the lavander town theme song played backwards
I need answers.
Okay.... The Question???
***** A Potato Flew Around My Room
Jeff TheDragonSlayer
Why won't god ash love me?
@_@
♥Rare Commodity♥ I do too, but thank God I did good on my exams.
Magnificent story! Both well written and unnerving something I don't commonly find in some Creepypastas. Love it!
You read this so beautifully.
shes a kelpie
the writer should've just left out the "true story" part.. >_> 2spooky2real
***** sweet tokyo ghoul pic
***** ya I was just thinking of that
*clicks pasta*
"This is a true story."
*clicks away from pasta*
That was one of the most, if not the most, beautiful Creepypasta I have ever listened to.
At first i thought this was a story about beastiality LOL
did anyone else think this sounded sexual at start?
Love your channel man, its the only place I go to listen to creepypastas.
You look at the screen happily. You've always loved the look of water. You're enjoying the story until you realize...there's a dead fish in the corner.
What even is this comment section jfc 😂😂😂
I wanted a creepy pasta not a furry fan fiction
The Kilo Cael This is irish mythology
I know what a Kelpie is lol xD
I was kidding
Your voice is like calm and soothing yet oddly distant and creepy at the same time... Two thumbs up 👍🏻👍🏻 XD
I love how almost every one of your videos has at least one fun fact.
I love this style of reading so much.
"Puyallap Washington".....
me: "MOM WE'RE MOVING OUT AGAIN!"
its always chilling when the horror is close by. Great job on this one! :D
where I'm from, they're called Kelpie-Pookas (or just Kelpies). legend says that if one were to ride the horse, it would run to the nearest body of water and drown the rider.
This sounds exactly like a Scottish Kelpie. It's a kind of fairy that disguises itself as a beautiful horse, makes you entranced by it, then drowns you. I just learned about it last night, and I know I'm a bit late to be commenting on here, but holy heck...
I think the guy telling this story may possibly be "Mr. Hands" son. He sure does love his horses...LMAO Love this story!
I had to laugh for a bit as the dead fish slowly drifted onto the screen, brilliant.
You need answers and I need questions, lets work something out, Mr.Creeps.
aaaaaaah~ I've been writing a story about a kelpie encounter and this is so cool to hear~!! great voice acting, MCP; thanks for sharing :D
Hello Mr.Creepypasta ! You might not remember who I am, but I was that one girl who was freaking out at the Dallas Comic-Con from last month. Yeah, I'm the girl with all the fan stuff on. I just wanted to say thank you ! I would never think I'd ever meet you, and this is an awkward place to put a thank you, but it was the best I could. So again, thank you very much !
This is the exact description of a Kelpie-a horse with slimy, wet fur that drags people into the water and drowns them by tempting them into riding it. It is a kind of malevolent fairy which can be warded off with rowan wood.
Friendshipismagic Holy shit, it is a kelpie! I'm so glad that this author actually took real folklore and turned it into a modern pasta! Crepypastas are simply modern folkstories (eriously, if you look at folkstories they are almost identical to many pastas like Slenderman) so adding creatures from older folklores is perfect!
I love sitting back and listening to these!!!! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It sounds like a Kelpie. A ghastly water spirit assuming the form of a grayish black horse, the kelpie drowns then kills anyone who attempts to ride it.
It is often spotted wandering along the shores of rivers or lakes, appearing to be a lost pony. Kelpies can be identified by a constantly dripping mane and skin, which is like a seal's but cold to the touch.
The kelpie can be heard wailing before a storm and is able to cause water to rise high enough to flood.
If you manage to bridle a kelpie, it can be forced to do your bidding, but woe betide you should it slip the harness.
I always loved the sound effects its really a great mix with ur awesome reading mrcreepypasta!!
Kelpie! To kill a kelpie, stab with red-hot irons. To enslave it, draw a cross on a bridle and force it over the kelpie's head. (also, it's a type of fae, so iron stuff in general is effective in repelling it) I really liked this one! Thanks for narrating this!
There hasn't been a pasta like this in a while, so good
I told them horses would one day crave human flesh, but nobody listened! No-no-no.
As an equestrian, the beginning of this creepypasta is a dream come true.
Holy crap man! I forgot how amazing you were at voice acting!! Amazing!
This man is amazing at narrating stories.
This was brilliant. The story in itself war very stereotypical, even though it was well written. But your tone of voice and the way you read it were really, i'm impressed.
Old irish spirit, drowning mare. Get some iron, a blessed cross and you should be good.
Inanna Enigma Not enough monsters weak to iron these days. Iron was the silver of its day.
In case anyone was curious the horse monster is called a Kelpie from Irish mythology were it disguised a beautiful wild horse and drags people underwater to eat them.
I love these kinds of pastas, where it involves some form of not well known mythology. First thought was maybe the creature could've been a Pooka. Though I doubt it'll try to drown you, but it is known that they can bring bad or good luck. The moon reference also got me thinking, as Pookas have some sort of close relationship/devotion to the moon, as they are said to only come out during the full moon.
This creepy pasta is just gorgeous
2023: do you know how long I've been looking for this????
I always lay in bed always watching these because I love the thrill of listening in the dark. :) thank you for the good reading it makes the story itself better
Good Job MrCreepyPasta, I'm a long time fan!
As soon as the horse invited him to sit on its back I wondered if it was a Kelpie. Huh.
Where in hell did he find a video so perfectly fitting to the tale, as well as the length of his story?
BEST CREEPYPASTA EVER! THIS MADE ME SMILE OF EXCITEMENT!
Hears description of horse, gets to wet coat, "Yo, that's a kelpie. She gon drown you, don do it."
3:39 "What was I supposed to do if it was a cougar?"
Yes...
4:44 She was incredible. I forgot about the cougars immediately, that I'll admit.
YES
5:49 She smelled like a combination of wet horse, and the woods the morning after it rained hard.
YES!
6:05 I wanted to touch her, I NEED to touch her, I can't explain the pull.
YESSSSS!!!!!
7:04 And to my utter joy and astonishment, she began to scratch and groom my head with her lips.
Wait, what?
7:22 But she had... plants... in it.
Okay, I think I cna make this work, bring me a wood chipper and a couple of garden scissors thingys-
7:50 Now I know horses are smart, but this one seemed to be over the top-
Annnnnnd I turned myself into a brony.
Well that escalated quickly. ...loved it
I listened to this at 12:28am alone and now I can't sleep. I wish I could do this more often.
the story is drop-dead boring but the narration is DAMN. INCREDIBLE!! absolutely love your voice in this pasta! XD
I heard another creepypasta about someone finding a creature exactly like this, skin melting, slimy, going from a majestic horse to a horrible creature, water and all.
Very good pasta, I loved it! Keep up the good videos!
Father Ted: “Dougal....we want to keep out of the whole area of actually being in love with the horse.”
I´d sure feel a little hoarse after an experience like that!
*he gets on horse and everything is good*
Me: *waiting for it to turn horribly wrong*
*she starts going fast and wont stop*
Me: :D YES
Nice take on a Kelpie. Really enjoyed this piece :3