I loved this Short Film, because it is a deep psychological horror that deals with the fight against grief after losing someone, where in the end Aria accepts that her father is gone and everything will be fine, and that he can rest in peace, just like that as was she, as well as her saying she didn't want to forget him, but him consoling her that everything would be alright, and that she was supposed to move on. Hands are actually a prison of grief when it causes the person, her friend seemed to suffer from the same affliction, but hinted that maybe she didn't handle it that well. On the part of the dance, it was like a dance of liberation, of hands that deny the fact of having lost someone, however, in the end, it seems that she can rest, and her last breath, can or she hasn't really accepted it yet, or It's a sigh that she can breathe in peace and live free now from the loss of her father. The house also counts, because the house is always or sometimes a metaphor of our body, that is, us, and she still stayed at home rummaging through boxes and the past of her father's death, which still hurt her, however, she was found outside the house with the spirit of her father inside with a light, perhaps it is also another aspect of what was pain and darkness inside her, now it has become her light to accept the facts. Well... that was my interpretation, and I don't even know if I wrote the English correctly, because I'm Brazilian, but this is my point of view.
Now THIS is what I call FILM. Thank you for breathing life into this story. The serene setting made this glow even more eerily. I’m sitting here wondering what could have caused the stagnant air in the home. The ghosts? If there were any? The connection between the family? What ACTUALLY was going on? Bravo!!!!!!!!
This is a work of art. A rare find in the horror genre. Beautifully made and acted. Loved the choreography! Well done to all involved. Please make more
This is a brilliant film. It's got atmosphere, beautiful characters, rustic cabins, dense green forest, a white gown, an abundance of nature and the chaotic feelings we have for our loved ones...death brings guilt. No wonder this was an award winner 🏆 it's phenomenal.
Wow, this was interesting. I may be interpreting it wrong of course, but once I realized that the 'supernatural presence' may not be what it seems.....that the film seemed to be about not only grief & loss....but the heartbreaking debate of whether to surrender to it (the groping, demanding hands/the whispered temptations: "You're mine/Stay here with us.". When you lose someone, its so tempting to follow them into the next world, its so painful here without them. But she realizes....whether its actually supernatural or a representation of such here....that her dad is telling her she must go on, that he is all right, that its not time for her to come with him. Beautifully-filmed, I must say. The hands-effect were done brilliantly as well.
Awesome work !!! This shows Horror need not be all blood & guts or human monsters to be scary & unnerving . The setting was superb & gave me those atmospheric ghostly vibes with such sadness for these two sisters . Death is final & though we love our spirits & ghosts not all of them are this malevolent at least we hope they aren't . Nice job ...
This beautiful work of Art lends itself to many interpretations ,from my perspective it is a whisper of regret,guilted from beyond the veil ,from the father as well as equally felt from his beloved daughter who also feels a deep regret for not having reached out to her dad when he was alive.. Thank you it was a touching piece of Art work ,We all have I believe ,felt it in certain stages of our lives ,these types of regret,guilt ,loss,words left unspoken. Taino Nation Elder Black Orchid
I love how powerful grief can be as a horror subject. It’s used quite well here. Plus the cinematography is really satisfying to watch. For short film to carry this theme, it’s very well done!
Loved the feel of the film and the creepy dark entities. I understand the sisters lost their father, and cleaning out his house, but who or what was the presence that took their father? And what does the end mean? Was she in her play? For real? The breath she lets out at the end, is it her last? What did the entity want with the sisters? There were two people waving from inside the house, who were they? Again, loved the creepiness and setting, but slightly confusing for me.
You put into words what I couldn't. I enjoyed this film and found it creepy. The lighting, acting, directing, music, cinematography, and atmosphere all were practically flawless. I just felt it got too metaphorical and that's when it lost me. I loved this film but there is so much I don't understand.
Such a great job, the talent of Arigto combined with some of these shots, especially during the climax scene gave me goosebumps. Can't imagine seeing the whole thing on IMAX, well done
Good Quality Filmmaking there, Bruce! 👏🏻 Kudos! Concept and Acting could've been much better. I mean, why is she yawning while delivering the dialogue?!
Amazing visuals man and near perfect atmosphere. I can’t be the only one that got chills from that chaotic choreographed dance. And the MUSIC! Reminds me a bit of LORN. Amazing composer you found for this film. To the director, you should be proud of this one man. Hope to see your name in the credits on a theater screen near me one day. Thanks for inspiring me to keep going And if you read this, what camera was this shot on?
The camera you used provides some stunning images, but I thought that the story was a bit confusing, maybe a bit too metaphorical. Some of the choreography worked like the hands wrapping around her intercut with the trees shaped like fingers, but other scenes like where she’s dancing seemed very out of place. I think my biggest critique for you (if you like making artsy films) would be having a strong detailed plot like an actual film, but learning how to modulate it between the artsiness. I think finding the right balance of the two is key. But when it’s just a bunch of artsy scenes linked together the film comes off as confusing and pretentious. But other than that, good job man!
@@antonioHR23 fr 😂😂. It’s just another way of saying I don’t get it. I just think we should come with our own interpretation of a project if we don’t get it. The film always provides enough information.
Good film. 👍🏽 My favorite parts are : The story is interesting, the soundtrack is good and fits perfectly the film, cinematography good as always and nice colours, I like the atmosphere and the dark elements, cast is good, I also like how nature resides in your film and Jade's artwork is a nice element too. Least but not last, is interesting how, once again dance is part of your work. My least favorite is the main actress who while her moves reminded me of the actress in "Embers" C. Garayoa was better (no way I mean she is bad but, I feel she needed a little more work). Generally, I see a quality material and potential.
I've been following Bruce and his work since pandemic, my goal is to achieve what he did and make a masterpiece like this one. I'm too young and don't have the opportunities in my place but I really wish I could do it, and then give thanks to Bruce, for the inspiration and the desire of this art.
Beautifully shot with excellent sound design. The subject matter is more sad than creepy, with the demon being a metaphor for mental degradation/illness (father) along with guilt, grief, and the dangers of losing oneself in them (Aria). Not a new idea, but the effort is very good. While the actors are all doing their best, and are clearly beautiful themselves, the dialogue delivery can be a bit overdramatic (Aria) and wooden (Ava) for my taste- though not enough to detract too much. Overall, well done! 8/10 will definitely show to others
Hope you can do a better casting after this, i think the sister acting is quite good compared to the mc...🏃🏻♀️ There are some shot that I don't think are necessary. Btw what a beautiful film, every shot is captured well but unfortunately few of them not related to the storyline. For your next project you can focus on screenplay and script instead of cinematography alone. But I know you can do better after this👊
This was really good and I noticed someone said it comes off as confusing and pretentious but I have my own interpretation of it and I think if they don’t get it. Think about it. Anyway I’m not a critic or something but I feel the acting could be a lot better and the dance could be better too. Idk maybe it’s just me. Anyways great work!
I’m confused and I don’t understand how this was “award winning”. The only thing I enjoyed was the atmosphere. Not a single thing about this screamed “horror”. I’d categorize it as “psychological”
I agree completely with you, definitely more thriller vibes if anything BUT everyone sees horror and fear differently, that said I still can't imagine anyone being scared about this but it's either they did or it was a lie and they fabricated the awards on the thumbnail. Easy to do.
I stopped watching at the 8:28 mark. Someone questioned as to why the girl kept opening her mouth before she spoke, saying it was distracting. Well, it certainly was! Not only did she simply open her mouth…it was totally WIDE open. You could drive a small truck in there. If this was to indicate a stammer it was all wrong.
Hey been following you on Insta for a few months and finally got the chance to see this short film. You did an amazing job! It was very unsettling and the cinematography was brilliant. The score for the short film was also fantastic! Great job and I look forward to seeing your next project!!!
I see dead people..that is just a state of the ones we are..we are peoples who sence more than usual..it is how it is. Glad that our aren`t conflicted with those issues
The half of this film was good. The other half, when those hands appeared and sisters began to dance, the film ended there, only the art remained... Consistency and logic was gone... Otherwise, the camera focus, acting and sound effects were great.
@@BruceTetsuya No, but if you're making a film for a wide general audience, then yes. The average viewer wants logic, answers, a nice bow on top. Films like this aren't made for that audience. It's like they say, music isn't made for musicians, comedy isn't made for comedians, etc. And when it is, you'll get the average joe popping their head in to tell you it doesn't entertain them.
Aww that's sweet her dad's final act before moving on was to help her with her play. Such a dad move.
In a word cinema-worthy! Intriguing and yet touching in the end. Bravo!
I loved this Short Film, because it is a deep psychological horror that deals with the fight against grief after losing someone, where in the end Aria accepts that her father is gone and everything will be fine, and that he can rest in peace, just like that as was she, as well as her saying she didn't want to forget him, but him consoling her that everything would be alright, and that she was supposed to move on. Hands are actually a prison of grief when it causes the person, her friend seemed to suffer from the same affliction, but hinted that maybe she didn't handle it that well. On the part of the dance, it was like a dance of liberation, of hands that deny the fact of having lost someone, however, in the end, it seems that she can rest, and her last breath, can or she hasn't really accepted it yet, or It's a sigh that she can breathe in peace and live free now from the loss of her father. The house also counts, because the house is always or sometimes a metaphor of our body, that is, us, and she still stayed at home rummaging through boxes and the past of her father's death, which still hurt her, however, she was found outside the house with the spirit of her father inside with a light, perhaps it is also another aspect of what was pain and darkness inside her, now it has become her light to accept the facts. Well... that was my interpretation, and I don't even know if I wrote the English correctly, because I'm Brazilian, but this is my point of view.
Great interpretation my Brazilian friend 😁
Obrigado.
The technical aspect of this movie is near flawless
Love the way it was shot. Story-wise, I think I can confidently place this work in the genre of "confusing"
Death, grief, guilt,
All powerful guises
10/10
Now THIS is what I call FILM. Thank you for breathing life into this story. The serene setting made this glow even more eerily. I’m sitting here wondering what could have caused the stagnant air in the home. The ghosts? If there were any? The connection between the family? What ACTUALLY was going on? Bravo!!!!!!!!
This is beautiful!!! Every shot is incredible and beautifully colour graded.
This is a work of art. A rare find in the horror genre. Beautifully made and acted. Loved the choreography! Well done to all involved. Please make more
The cinematography is astonishing. The score was pretty fkn crazy too.
Thank you!
This is a brilliant film. It's got atmosphere, beautiful characters, rustic cabins, dense green forest, a white gown, an abundance of nature and the chaotic feelings we have for our loved ones...death brings guilt. No wonder this was an award winner 🏆 it's phenomenal.
14:00 - This part looks as if it belongs to a French perfume advertisement. Imagine this voice over: ❝La Forêt - le nouveau parfum de Lancôme❞
😂😂😂
Très drole
I loved this! The main character also reminded me a good bit of Old Dolio from Kajillionaire, especially in terms of the way she moved and spoke.
Wow, this was interesting. I may be interpreting it wrong of course, but once I realized that the 'supernatural presence' may not be what it seems.....that the film seemed to be about not only grief & loss....but the heartbreaking debate of whether to surrender to it (the groping, demanding hands/the whispered temptations: "You're mine/Stay here with us.". When you lose someone, its so tempting to follow them into the next world, its so painful here without them.
But she realizes....whether its actually supernatural or a representation of such here....that her dad is telling her she must go on, that he is all right, that its not time for her to come with him. Beautifully-filmed, I must say. The hands-effect were done brilliantly as well.
Awesome work !!! This shows Horror need not be all blood & guts or human monsters to be scary & unnerving . The setting was superb & gave me those atmospheric ghostly vibes with such sadness for these two sisters . Death is final & though we love our spirits & ghosts not all of them are this malevolent at least we hope they aren't . Nice job ...
I can't wait for the day you make a feature film! Incredible stuff.
Amazing!! Glad to finally get to see this!
I wouldn't call this a horror film. It was more of a dream sequence with conscious moments in between. Excellent cinematography though.
This beautiful work of Art lends itself to many interpretations ,from my perspective it is a whisper of regret,guilted from beyond the veil ,from the father as well as equally felt from his beloved daughter who also feels a deep regret for not having reached out to her dad when he was alive..
Thank you it was a touching piece of Art work ,We all have I believe ,felt it in certain stages of our lives ,these types of regret,guilt ,loss,words left unspoken.
Taino Nation Elder
Black Orchid
This is amazing and beautiful, congratulations !!! 👏👏👏
Great storytelling Mr.bruce. hoping to see you make your first feature and improve time to time my friend🖤🙌god bless
I love how powerful grief can be as a horror subject. It’s used quite well here. Plus the cinematography is really satisfying to watch. For short film to carry this theme, it’s very well done!
So proud of you dude, this was awesome. A master of your craft.
Amazing job, it was incredible, I saw it with the lights off
Loved the feel of the film and the creepy dark entities. I understand the sisters lost their father, and cleaning out his house, but who or what was the presence that took their father? And what does the end mean? Was she in her play? For real? The breath she lets out at the end, is it her last? What did the entity want with the sisters? There were two people waving from inside the house, who were they? Again, loved the creepiness and setting, but slightly confusing for me.
Those are the same questions I have
You put into words what I couldn't.
I enjoyed this film and found it creepy. The lighting, acting, directing, music, cinematography, and atmosphere all were practically flawless. I just felt it got too metaphorical and that's when it lost me. I loved this film but there is so much I don't understand.
@@joegallicchio26 Thanks for the kind words.
Great questions. Thanks!
Such a great job, the talent of Arigto combined with some of these shots, especially during the climax scene gave me goosebumps. Can't imagine seeing the whole thing on IMAX, well done
Well done!!! The hand in the closet gave me shivers down my spine.
you have great potential, Bruce! this project here was stunning and shining!
I loved this!!!! Wonderful work and i loved the storyline as well.. one of the best cinematography 💖💖 NAILED IT
I love the beautiful sceneries... Wow you attached a rainy and dark place with green woods and leaves... Perfect💗
I liked this short, well done to everyone involved in this production.
Good Quality Filmmaking there, Bruce! 👏🏻 Kudos!
Concept and Acting could've been much better. I mean, why is she yawning while delivering the dialogue?!
Exactly man! Acting was so sad. It was horrible, she didn’t even pull off the dance well. Overall movie was good but the acting sucked
Amazing visuals man and near perfect atmosphere. I can’t be the only one that got chills from that chaotic choreographed dance. And the MUSIC! Reminds me a bit of LORN. Amazing composer you found for this film.
To the director, you should be proud of this one man. Hope to see your name in the credits on a theater screen near me one day. Thanks for inspiring me to keep going
And if you read this, what camera was this shot on?
The camera you used provides some stunning images, but I thought that the story was a bit confusing, maybe a bit too metaphorical. Some of the choreography worked like the hands wrapping around her intercut with the trees shaped like fingers, but other scenes like where she’s dancing seemed very out of place. I think my biggest critique for you (if you like making artsy films) would be having a strong detailed plot like an actual film, but learning how to modulate it between the artsiness. I think finding the right balance of the two is key. But when it’s just a bunch of artsy scenes linked together the film comes off as confusing and pretentious. But other than that, good job man!
I think he should be receiving advice from people who are more successful than him...
(not you)
avery i agree with you! brilliant film but confusing
@@antonioHR23 fr 😂😂. It’s just another way of saying I don’t get it. I just think we should come with our own interpretation of a project if we don’t get it. The film always provides enough information.
@@antonioHR23 if that is the case my friend, then why did thedanceofcinema criticized the movie the last airbender directed by m night shyamlam..
Everything about your video was spectacular. Great job. Great acting.
I wish these films would start having subtitles/ closed captioning again! Suddenly, most short-films on UA-cam no longer do! :(
amazing use of light and sound changes to drive the emotion. good job guys!
even better than I expected.. what. fantastic job!! well worth the wait!! oml
Good film. 👍🏽 My favorite parts are : The story is interesting, the soundtrack is good and fits perfectly the film, cinematography good as always and nice colours, I like the atmosphere and the dark elements, cast is good, I also like how nature resides in your film and Jade's artwork is a nice element too. Least but not last, is interesting how, once again dance is part of your work. My least favorite is the main actress who while her moves reminded me of the actress in "Embers" C. Garayoa was better (no way I mean she is bad but, I feel she needed a little more work). Generally, I see a quality material and potential.
At first I thought it was about her having a repressed memory
It looks incredible, Well Done Bruce and Crew!
I've been following Bruce and his work since pandemic, my goal is to achieve what he did and make a masterpiece like this one. I'm too young and don't have the opportunities in my place but I really wish I could do it, and then give thanks to Bruce, for the inspiration and the desire of this art.
Who says u can’t?
Don’t wish for it
WORK for it ❤
DM us your email address on Instagram, we are doing a filmmakers workshop next month!
The shot at 3:57 reminds me of the tree shot in the film Prisoners (2013)
the dancing scene was incredible man, you really did something with that!
Brilliant work Bruce 💐
Beautiful man. So proud of what you guys pulled off with this!
Beautifully shot with excellent sound design. The subject matter is more sad than creepy, with the demon being a metaphor for mental degradation/illness (father) along with guilt, grief, and the dangers of losing oneself in them (Aria). Not a new idea, but the effort is very good.
While the actors are all doing their best, and are clearly beautiful themselves, the dialogue delivery can be a bit overdramatic (Aria) and wooden (Ava) for my taste- though not enough to detract too much.
Overall, well done! 8/10 will definitely show to others
This hit just the right mood. Perfect work.
Holy shit!
Beautiful
Excellent movie 🎥🍿
Amazing!!
Hope you can do a better casting after this, i think the sister acting is quite good compared to the mc...🏃🏻♀️
There are some shot that I don't think are necessary. Btw what a beautiful film, every shot is captured well but unfortunately few of them not related to the storyline. For your next project you can focus on screenplay and script instead of cinematography alone. But I know you can do better after this👊
Hard hard brother
Wonderful film! 🎬 where was this film shot?
Well, I loved that.
Brilliant Man 👌🏻
A good little artistic horror short film, I enjoyed watching it.
Awesome work.
I loved this.
Entertaining!!
Great film good job 👍👍
This carry was way,way better.then the first one,I fell into it,.and the ending,oh,what an ending.
Notice the hand on her left shoulder at 1:43
This is art.
What happened to Aria's sister, Ava? Was there even an Ava?
had to watch this as a huge arigto fan
Mágicamente Hermoso
Outstanding ❤
Honestly, the cinematography was the only thing that kept me until the end of this film. I didn't really get the rest of it, lol.
What was this film shot on? So many times people never include the camera and profiles used.
This was really good and I noticed someone said it comes off as confusing and pretentious but I have my own interpretation of it and I think if they don’t get it. Think about it. Anyway I’m not a critic or something but I feel the acting could be a lot better and the dance could be better too. Idk maybe it’s just me. Anyways great work!
I’m still searching the comments for an explanation. I got bored relatively fast…
I didn't understand and how it is award winning, no single sign of horror here ?
I need this to be a movie
Love it 😁
Excellent movie
That was beautiful
I’m confused and I don’t understand how this was “award winning”. The only thing I enjoyed was the atmosphere. Not a single thing about this screamed “horror”. I’d categorize it as “psychological”
I agree completely with you, definitely more thriller vibes if anything BUT everyone sees horror and fear differently, that said I still can't imagine anyone being scared about this but it's either they did or it was a lie and they fabricated the awards on the thumbnail. Easy to do.
Maybe you lack brain cells.
If you ain’t got a gun, you all done.
Was great. Not scary, but great.
Bravo bravo clap clap nail it
I AM IN LOVE !@.@
Awesome job
gostei, muito bem feito, executado com maestria. so faltou eu sentir medo mesmo, a voz do além dos fantasmas me fez rir, desculpa
i loved it but wtf was happening lol i’m confused
You're not the only one.
I stopped watching at the 8:28 mark. Someone questioned as to why the girl kept opening her mouth before she spoke, saying it was distracting. Well, it certainly was! Not only did she simply open her mouth…it was totally WIDE open. You could drive a small truck in there. If this was to indicate a stammer it was all wrong.
can't help comparing this one to Creswick. And the winner is.....still, even being compared to Creswick is an honor.
Awesome cinematography! Love the reference to Prisoners
What reference was that?
@@iamethancarroll some shots of the forest remined me of it personnally
@@APERTURE_SC yea the zoom on the tree. Loved that shot
Hey been following you on Insta for a few months and finally got the chance to see this short film. You did an amazing job! It was very unsettling and the cinematography was brilliant. The score for the short film was also fantastic! Great job and I look forward to seeing your next project!!!
Also I'm working on a script
Why did she left The keys? No sense
Please add switchable subtitles.
Anyone else see an eye in the reflection of the window?
Please add subtitle please
Grade #1
I see dead people..that is just a state of the ones we are..we are peoples who sence more than usual..it is how it is. Glad that our aren`t conflicted with those issues
great achievement
What Happened to Her Sister?
Other than that Good 🎥
The half of this film was good. The other half, when those hands appeared and sisters began to dance, the film ended there, only the art remained... Consistency and logic was gone... Otherwise, the camera focus, acting and sound effects were great.
do films have to be logical? what are films, if not expression, abstractions, and catharsis?
@@BruceTetsuya No, but if you're making a film for a wide general audience, then yes. The average viewer wants logic, answers, a nice bow on top. Films like this aren't made for that audience. It's like they say, music isn't made for musicians, comedy isn't made for comedians, etc. And when it is, you'll get the average joe popping their head in to tell you it doesn't entertain them.
the house roofing is giving Filipino vibes
Why does she open her mouth before every line? Its distracting.