Motherly - Short Horror Film - Shot on original BMPCC

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  • @HeatherClarkafterdark
    @HeatherClarkafterdark Рік тому +30

    What a true depiction of the way the darkness has overcome our world. Great job on this film, I was impressed. Do not see many films of this candor that are actually good. I agree with the comment about leaving the baby alone, negligence though, is a real thing as well as ritual killings. Great film, I will share it with others. Maybe this can help be an eye opener for the world.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +7

      Aw Heather what a lovely comment! Thia made my day!! Yes i am so fed up with these dull horror shorts of a woman in darkness with her flash light. I really wanted a dark storyline that one can follow along! Again thanks so much. And please do share it :) lets go to hollywood😊

  • @Warrior_Spirit_Experience-Jen
    @Warrior_Spirit_Experience-Jen Рік тому +11

    I loved the idea behind the movie, the actresses were fun to watch but in the end I really wanted to see some REVENGE!! From the spectral plane, since there were 2 ghosts now, or for the 2nd Mom to not give up but just let her crazy loose!! Maybe that's your next short? Great videography and editing too! Congrats 🎉

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +2

      What a lovely thing to read. Thank you so much! We did put in alot of work :)! My next short will be different and is being planned right now!

    • @Warrior_Spirit_Experience-Jen
      @Warrior_Spirit_Experience-Jen Рік тому +2

      @@DerrykSchieck I can't wait to see the next one!

  • @AtashaStaggs
    @AtashaStaggs 6 місяців тому +2

    5:50 is that bird a paid actor?? 😮😂 Literally, all i could think about was how great of a shot that was!

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому +1

      yeah that bird was our neighbour! We asked him if he wanted to join this little project :) it wasn't my intention to make this shot so great but thanks for appreciating it! I will tell the bird now.

  • @lisamorales4286
    @lisamorales4286 Рік тому +3

    Bravo!! great story. The end threw me for a loop, but I loved it!!

  • @jellybean2256
    @jellybean2256 Рік тому +9

    Therapist: Writes Possible Schizophrenic.
    Also therapist: Proceeds to explain the history of her home and shows a photo.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +1

      Hmm. Possibly for the 'fake' documentation? It'd be quite interesting to think that the therapist does in fact not know that the woman (as a ghost) IS real?

    • @NightPhoenixPress
      @NightPhoenixPress 8 місяців тому

      That’s called gaslighting.

  • @SergioRamirez-cs9dq
    @SergioRamirez-cs9dq Рік тому +5

    Excellent Picture. The photography was beautiful and the story was captivating. I enjoyed every bit and I could appreciate the work effort behind the film. Congrats to everyone behind the project.

  • @IvWaldo
    @IvWaldo Рік тому +4

    Amazing job! Interesting story, i really enjoyed it!

  • @evetko
    @evetko 2 місяці тому +1

    A mother's love to keep her daughter alive while other mothers suffer for it and not help each other.
    So many questions like where are her parents, friends, how does she finance herself to have a house like that, where's the child's father, and why 70 years later ...
    The bookshelf wallpaper was amazing, the location of the film too. Loved the inside of the house, the toys (especially the hippos and the knitted elephant). Quiet, clean little village, would love to live there myself.
    Scenes of seeing the baby wasn't wearing a hat while carried by someone who was wearing a scarf and gloves; the cat's tail; and baby's foot were silently sinister to me. Had a knot in my stomach as the story unfolded feeling these scenes were telling me the 'who' but it was the 'what' happened to the baby that turned my stomach.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  2 місяці тому

      Thank you so much for you elaborate reaction! there certainly is alot going on, and it took me a long time to get the story at least somewhat straight in my own head :)!

    • @CindyLouWho77
      @CindyLouWho77 11 днів тому

      Some women are single (*gasp*) and have jobs that pay quite well (*shocking*).
      What a narrow minded view of the world.
      An education is so very important for EVERYONE.

  • @wacajuibelka4171
    @wacajuibelka4171 Рік тому +8

    Very weird story. The reaction of the Mother is unhuman

    • @lisamorales4286
      @lisamorales4286 Рік тому

      You're absolutely right, that woman killed her baby and she did nothing, instead she killed herself just like the woman in the beginning of the story. They would drink the blood of newborns thinking it would reverse aging. Obviously it must be working because the man was her grandfather and the woman in bed was her daughter. It's a crazy story but I think it's a great one!!!

  • @LADodgersfan00
    @LADodgersfan00 4 місяці тому +1

    Absolutely loved this short story… the twist and everything I see a bunch of complaints in the comments but coming from a horror fan of movies and short stories you did an amazing job because you completed it most leave you hanging or not really showing what happened and make people have to guess and I don’t care for those..Great Job ❤️

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  4 місяці тому +1

      aw! Thank you so much for that kind comment :)! I am very happy I actually finished this.. there was a time it didnt seem like it would ever get finished ^^. Glad you enjoyed it.

    • @DelilaSloan
      @DelilaSloan 3 місяці тому

      I agree. Almost every short I have watched does the ending with no ending, just cut to credits at the exact moment the story should be getting to the good part, the part that makes it all make sense!
      I stopped watching short horror for a while becauze all of the shorts ended that way and it didn't leave me guessing or intrigued or even entertained, just frustrated and tired of that ending done over and over.

  • @RachelAmbler
    @RachelAmbler Рік тому +4

    @Derryk Schieck
    It’s been 20 year since I left the shores of Mother England, but I’m a Warwickshire lass through and through.
    Was this actually filmed in Warwickshire? For some reason I had vibes of North Warks, South West Mids watching it here in the USA.
    I can forgive the acting as your hearts were quite obviously on full display. Great job!

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +3

      Aww rachel, thank you so much! Yes. This was filmed in stratford upon avon and the maternity hospital was ACTUALLY build on the premise!! Cheers

    • @JOHNWLOUCKS
      @JOHNWLOUCKS Рік тому +1

      I've been to Stratford Upon Avon and it is lovely just like the rest of the U.K.@@DerrykSchieck

  • @ameynoolkar4604
    @ameynoolkar4604 Рік тому +5

    It reminds me of Hannibal Lecter but one who has a knack for infants.
    Good stuff!
    👏

  • @billieallor5418
    @billieallor5418 8 місяців тому +2

    ok you don't leave your baby at home alone -not even to pick up your cat!

  • @jenniferd107
    @jenniferd107 Рік тому +31

    In this day and age, who leaves a newborn baby alone in the house, chillin' in a crib...on its back? - just meaning it's not believable, in what feels like a very obvious and lazy way (one of my pet peeves). Aside from that, I really liked it, and didn't mean to sound so negative without any positive. :)

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +3

      Completely agree, no one. Silly girl she was to make this mistake!:) i guess that is what miss T was waiting for 😉

    • @sumchoimai1490
      @sumchoimai1490 Рік тому +3

      Terrible woman

    • @angelalove7018
      @angelalove7018 Рік тому +2

      More than you think

    • @gabrielbronan7521
      @gabrielbronan7521 Рік тому

      ​@@DerrykSchieck Wait, sir. Who's the another person on the bed? And did she meet those 3 old people before committing suicide?

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +4

      @@gabrielbronan7521 if youve read the newspaper carefully you shouldvr realized that the baby is STILL missing, in 1951. The old lady in the bed at the end IS the missinf baby. Tje grandfather took het back then and framed the motherl in 1951, therefore she commited suicide after noone believed her. Isabel has never met those 3, only mrs Thompson of course. Isabel killed herself right after her baby was taken.

  • @RohitBSrivastava
    @RohitBSrivastava 6 місяців тому

    Incredible work! 🌟🎥 So well done! 👏 How do you see the future of short films in the film industry?

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому

      Great thank you, dark! I'm not getting in to it ;)

  • @staceywebber8808
    @staceywebber8808 Рік тому +2

    Awesome little film, I do wonder what happened to her umbrella 🌂 when she sat at the lake then it reappeared after she continued to walk into town lol 😆 and did she walk into town but drove home 😁

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +2

      Haha stacey. No no she drove both ways but i showed but one :) the umbrella was a mistake :)

    • @staceywebber8808
      @staceywebber8808 Рік тому +2

      @Derryk Schieck lol no worries I was just having a bit of fun 😄 good little movie well done 👍

  • @racheldoesacrylic4089
    @racheldoesacrylic4089 8 місяців тому +2

    Knowing that the spiritual activities have been increased worldwide because of people knowing and unknowingly have opened up because of Ouija boards ,occult etc ,these tings should not be laughed at /i know weird stuff happens i have had my fair share x

    • @SamuelBlack84
      @SamuelBlack84 2 місяці тому

      Ouija boards were originally created to contact your own subconscious
      The idea that they contacted ghosts came about because of the Exorcist

  • @marziamartignoni5585
    @marziamartignoni5585 9 місяців тому

    Hello, mister Film Director!
    Great flick indeed. Love the British location. Where was it shot? Wiltshire? ❤❤😊

  • @diontaedaughtry974
    @diontaedaughtry974 Рік тому +1

    Great film good job 👍👍

  • @VictoriaByrne-j1l
    @VictoriaByrne-j1l 2 місяці тому

    Where was this filmed at ? I’m assuming Ireland if so where at ?

  • @CarlaFriends
    @CarlaFriends 3 дні тому

    Does anyone else go straight to the comments before watching these shorts?

  • @pirate4763
    @pirate4763 2 місяці тому

    That was twisted 😲 loved it

  • @sukenaut
    @sukenaut Рік тому +1

    Good job! Really nice film!!! Love it!

  • @LandryMckenzie-q8v
    @LandryMckenzie-q8v 3 місяці тому

    It’s been 20 year since I left the shores of Mother England, but I’m a Warwickshire lass through and through.

  • @db3536
    @db3536 7 місяців тому +1

    Neat call back to The Exorcist III hospital scene. IYKYK😮

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  7 місяців тому +1

      well spotted! :) we all take inspiration from somewhere ey :)?

  • @tinabrownell9123
    @tinabrownell9123 4 місяці тому

    I liked this. I watched it twice but i really need someone to explain it to me because i missed something and coulsnt figure out what the real point was.

  • @iamamayzn5371
    @iamamayzn5371 6 місяців тому +1

    I got so many questions when did she get pregnant? Why the baby so small? And why wpild she leave a new born to go getva cat?

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому

      when: in the "1 year later" time quite obviously. The baby is so small because it's a newborn. and why would she leave it? well the character was clearly pretty upset and made a huge mistake :) as many ppl in movies do! thanks for watching.

    • @tinabrownell9123
      @tinabrownell9123 4 місяці тому

      Is there a site where i can read discussions about your movie. I have questions and would love to read a explanation or discussion forum.​@deyomash

  • @Masterduo
    @Masterduo Рік тому +2

    Great job! I love this!

  • @debiconnolly1605
    @debiconnolly1605 Рік тому +1

    I was sort of into it in the beginning but as soon as she just left her baby, to get a cat she wasnt even enthused was found in the first place i stopped watching.

  • @gabrielbronan7521
    @gabrielbronan7521 Рік тому +3

    So in the end, she commits suicide? :(

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +2

      Yes. Just like the woman in 1951 whose baby got stolen ...have you fogured out by whom?:)

    • @gabrielbronan7521
      @gabrielbronan7521 Рік тому

      ​​@@DerrykSchieck Freaking Mrs Thompson ofc. I guess suicide is the only answer since she might not have evidence of the kidnapping. Or maybe she already killed Mrs Thompson and her family, before committing suicide.
      Great job, btw, Derryk and the Underwoods !

  • @000aleph
    @000aleph 11 місяців тому

    When it said "1 year later" I thought that feels about right

  • @cxavierap
    @cxavierap Рік тому +3

    Very nicee! 😊

  • @no_321
    @no_321 4 місяці тому +1

    Now I'm sorry not to put a negative comment just the movies all over the place can't make sense out of it and if this is a real story that happened it's tragic for the child that happens all the time and it's really sad for God is the judge and he will take care of her of those who hurt their children.

  • @paulcooper6953
    @paulcooper6953 8 місяців тому

    Half way through this and one thing is bugging me. The intro is set in 1901, then we skip to 70 years later. This would put the rest of the film in 1971, but it's clearly not. Apart from obvious giveaways to this, the main character clearly asks about the maternity hospital :- "wasn't it knocked down in the eighties".

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  8 місяців тому

      hey! You misread the beginngin :) It is set in 1951 :) and 70 years later puts us in 2021 :) and again a year later in 2022 which puts us in the year of release :)

  • @3l3ments001
    @3l3ments001 11 місяців тому

    Poor baby. This was good!!😬

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  11 місяців тому +1

      Thank you alot! Glad you liked it :)

  • @laurapaura84
    @laurapaura84 8 місяців тому +5

    I don’t actually think I’ve ever seen worse acting than this. It had potential but the stiff emotionless acting was almost funny in how bad it was.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому +1

      Thank you for the kind words >.< We did our best being total amateurs :)!

    • @NICKEYBLACK35
      @NICKEYBLACK35 Місяць тому

      Facts

  • @GillianFontaine
    @GillianFontaine 11 місяців тому

    Fantastic short horror second time watching

  • @LadyTee16
    @LadyTee16 10 місяців тому

    Wait a min did she leave her baby by themselves so many question good movie but omg

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  10 місяців тому

      Hey thank you! Glad you liked it. Yes she just 'ran off' quickly, fatal mistake! any othr questions?

  • @Prettychicdancer
    @Prettychicdancer Рік тому +2

    This was so good!! Great job❤

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +1

      Hi Natalli, Thank you, that means a lot to me. It was plenty of work so it's always nice if it goes noticed and appreciated :) Cheers.

  • @marcoantoniomarquezperez2652
    @marcoantoniomarquezperez2652 2 місяці тому

    I enjoyed the first and second acts of the film. The main actress who plays the role of Isabel was ok with her part. She looks really good in some scenes, and has the look of a big screen actress, but needs to be directed better. The ending threw me off though, and also kind of seemed rushed. So these people waited for her to have a child before showing up again? I was a a confused as she was when she visited with her shrink that one last time. That last conversation about her cat was also weird. Took her a while to react to the news, and yes just like everyone else here, I would like to know why she left her newborn alone. She seemed a bit hypnotized at times. Especially in the last 15 minuets. Kudos for cutting the baby's head off. You don't see that often.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  2 місяці тому

      Thanks for your elaborate comment :)! Directing her better?! I take that personally ( im kidding). Yes at times it was hard to be consistent as almost 1.5 years went by over the course of shooting. I'd say leaving her kid alone was the great mistake the shrink and family was waiting for so they could finally " harvest" the blood that would feed the child (old woman at end). Cutting the head of a baby was integral to the story too =). Cheers!

    • @marcoantoniomarquezperez2652
      @marcoantoniomarquezperez2652 2 місяці тому

      @@DerrykSchieck By directing her better I meant like when the director tells the actor ok now you feeling this and reacting this way etc.. At times it seemed and looked like she was guessing at how she should react. Anyway both of you could get a lot better if you keep working together. That I'm sure of.

  • @CatherineDover
    @CatherineDover 3 місяці тому

    Beautiful photography. I would not have left my Baby on his own to go to the vet, would have taken him with me, plus if I found the door to my house open the first thing I would do is check my baby, sod the cat! Good film though I liked it.

  • @barbarapineda9062
    @barbarapineda9062 Рік тому +1

    These new actor's had made it's congradration most of yous,

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +2

      They were untrained professionals and friends :) we had a lot of fun making something new :)

  • @mentalhealthpoet
    @mentalhealthpoet Рік тому +1

    I love this! If you want me to write something for the next one let me know. It can be something small

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +2

      That is a great offer! Thank you very much. Right now I am in no need of something, but always feel free to react with a good story idea and i'll see what I can do with it :) Currently writing/planning a new short!

    • @mentalhealthpoet
      @mentalhealthpoet Рік тому

      @@DerrykSchieck
      Hearts dream of relief
      Finding peace within
      The fractured sunset
      Gravitating towards
      The shine of the mask
      Covering the brutal truth
      Beneath the lies

  • @BeauteOr
    @BeauteOr 6 місяців тому

    The post synchro is so bad . At the beginning the sound of the brush and the actual movement, oh my goodness 😂😂😂
    Good try.
    I stopped there. But an advice be careful on these” details “ !

  • @mentalhealthpoet
    @mentalhealthpoet Рік тому

    Id love to write something for the next film

  • @Iso_800
    @Iso_800 Рік тому

    wow. Amazing.

  • @barbarapineda9062
    @barbarapineda9062 Рік тому

    The therapist's it's the person's she's been chatting with but it's nothing wrongs with sharing yours situational with other's, if they's copes abouts your's, behaviors, but this person might be a mental patients her's self, why's she's chatting with her's clients, and listening and knitting too, explained about hers uncles, might be the mummy,
    Her's self maybe or not sures..

  • @sarahnashuhatj
    @sarahnashuhatj 10 місяців тому

    Why do therapist don't understand their patients

  • @jamesrae7246
    @jamesrae7246 Місяць тому

    Cheers to the foley artist. Excellent capture of the crunch and squelch of an infant's noggin.

  • @jessicagarcia7558
    @jessicagarcia7558 Рік тому +2

    Reminds me of tales from the crypt back in the days ... Old horror shows back in the 90's...

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому

      Yes, it does have something of an 'odd' story in it :)! (that was my goal :P )

    • @msberly1975
      @msberly1975 7 місяців тому

      It gave me Night Gallery vibes

  • @UpnAbout99
    @UpnAbout99 9 місяців тому

    not too bad. acting skills need to be polished abit, overall not bad. isabelle's reaction at the end should have been hysterical!!

  • @kareneastman9695
    @kareneastman9695 Рік тому

    How sad.EEEwww.Not the cat .:-O😞😲

  • @barbarapineda9062
    @barbarapineda9062 Рік тому +1

    A foreign films United kingdom's, she's a splendid actress, for the first time's, she's rose Mary baby,

  • @LilyLee25
    @LilyLee25 8 місяців тому

    Good film i loved this

  • @marietellez6021
    @marietellez6021 5 місяців тому +1

    The colors are vivid , the short is weird!!

  • @dollysen644
    @dollysen644 5 місяців тому

    How can a mother leave her new born alone in the house and she goes out strolling ?
    Which mother does that ??
    My son is 2 now by the grace of God
    I dont let him out of my sight even for a mint

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  5 місяців тому +2

      we're all bound to make a mistake at some point in life :(

    • @dollysen644
      @dollysen644 5 місяців тому

      @@DerrykSchieck
      Sad but true :(

    • @lardo1978
      @lardo1978 3 місяці тому

      Ci sono mamme assassine che lasciano settimane bambini soli, in che mondo vivi?

  • @evaduarte6786
    @evaduarte6786 9 місяців тому

    ¡Qué madre deja a su hijo recién nacido sólo para ir a recoger un gato o para cualquier otra cosa!!!!?! Absurdo.

  • @85Studios
    @85Studios 6 місяців тому

    F*cking tragic dude.. Oof.. I saw it coming too.. So depraved.. It relates to the world we live in now, people doing sick things just to get power or some kind of edge in life. I look at things like this and I think of Bohemian Grove and all of these Celebrities and Political figures doing their "Spirit cooking" Parties, and I am just thinking.. ugh.. I can't stand blood, it makes me squeamish. Especially my own. anyone else's just makes me feel nautilus, the Metallic smell of it, mixed with whatever else is in it sets off my urge to vomit. 🤮also looking at it as it Gels up and Coagulates. Clots. 🤮 Just the thought of it and the mental image makes me feel ugh..

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому +1

      nice HAHA. Weirdly specific comment for someone that has such a problem with blood, but i dig it! I suppose you enjoyed the movie then!

    • @85Studios
      @85Studios 6 місяців тому

      @@DerrykSchieck Yes actually.. It's weird to say this, but that phobia is feeding into my.. Disturbia attraction.. It's hard to explain. I am a horror Junkie, it's wierd, it's like a Massichist likes pain, but pain hurts??? kind of.. get it? Yeah I am weird. I know.. I was born this way and it has only gotten worse since I got older.

  • @countrygirl9059
    @countrygirl9059 Місяць тому

    So first, why the whole boiling cat thing? I mean yes, the fake Vet call had to get her out of the house. Still, psychos will be guided by the portrayed abuse. So, please, no visually detailed animal violence. Didn't really add too much. There were plenty of other ways to get her attention away from her baby in order for the infant to be kidnapped. I thought the acting was decent. Really. The therapist was looking LIKE A THERAPIST. A creepy one at that. The ghost scenes and sound effects/music were really good!! I'm a bit confused though. The kidnapping of the first child, and the kidnapping and murder of the 2nd child, what's the connection? Did Grandpa and the therapist become Satan worshippers over the years? Are they want-to-be vampires in the making? What?? The sound effects of the baby being dissected were absolutely disgusting. THAT ENTIRE realization of what was happening was like, WHAT? WHY? And I guess that's where I'm left. What? and Why?
    All in all. I give it a 6 out of 10.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  25 днів тому

      I'll take a 6 :) we did our best to create a disturbing yet not-too-gory cool kinda of anti-cliche ghost story. The connection is that the grandpa back in the 50's already introduced this 'eternal life' energy drinking baby blood. He continued this to stay young-ish. They have continued kidnapping babies over the years to keep this 'youngish life' together. The ghost was an addition that I thought was cool that we have an initially thought to be dangerous ghost but turns out to be the helper. I hope that makes any sense :)

  • @MaríaPeña-k1x
    @MaríaPeña-k1x 22 дні тому

    😘😚xx

  • @durasaxon5131
    @durasaxon5131 Рік тому +2

    History repeats itself.
    So who was watching the baby whenever she went out to the Doctors or into town?
    There needs to be another character
    The Doctor she was seeing was
    the devil herself.
    The Doctor even cooked the Cat?
    Disgusting.
    Her only answer was to commit suicide.

  • @adammassey2559
    @adammassey2559 Рік тому +2

    very nice work!

  • @roxanarosado8706
    @roxanarosado8706 Рік тому

    OMG it’s a very creepy movie. It made me think about many missing children…she would have taken the baby with her

  • @lizhiggins4805
    @lizhiggins4805 10 місяців тому

    Her dress is beautiful lovely on her very pretty and summery looking ❤

  • @Avalonserena
    @Avalonserena 3 місяці тому

    I’m confused why 3 generations were all the same age hahaha

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  3 місяці тому +1

      Great question! The babies are kidnapped > "slaughtered" > and then the blood is drunken to maintain age as good as possible. The grandfather at the end was the first first to start doing at at the age when he was the police officer in the 50s. The therapist (his grandchild) has the age she has simply because thats only when she started drinking it and the woman at the end that also drinks it is the baby that was kidnapped at the 50s in order for them to be a family, she is fed the blood as well so they can be together forever.

    • @Avalonserena
      @Avalonserena 3 місяці тому

      @@DerrykSchieck cool! Thank you for explaining!

  • @akashjagtap136
    @akashjagtap136 Рік тому

    Want more like this creation

  • @sharonmurphy7679
    @sharonmurphy7679 Рік тому +4

    God story but acting not very good.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +2

      Hey Thanks for watching. No one was a professionally trained actor here, all in for the fun :)

  • @iamamayzn5371
    @iamamayzn5371 6 місяців тому +1

    One star

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому

      Amazing single comment aside from all your questions! thanks for making the effort to comment this! :)

  • @theyoohoogyrl9000
    @theyoohoogyrl9000 6 місяців тому

    - alright story
    - acting needs help, kinda made it boring. there was no emotion especially when your baby dies, how are you not devastated?
    - the audio sometimes didn’t match with the visual, like the footsteps be out of sync
    - many questions i had throughout like where is the father? who made the call acting as a cop? was isabel already targeted because she lived there? did the therapist know she was gonna have a baby? and more questions..
    - a lot of unneeded scenes (filler) when could’ve been more to add to the characters and their stories
    - like others, i was upset when she left a newborn baby alone. as much as we don’t like it, it does happen in the world i guess
    - the baby was obviously seen as a doll, but i guess no big deal. probably hard to borrow someones baby lol
    - good camera work though

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому

      Thank you so much, people should see this comment and actually take an example of how to be _constructive_. I'd like to answer some of your questions :) The father was kept out of picture on purpose, we didn't want to add something as arbitrary and unneccessary as a romantic relationship. Isabel was targeted because she lives at the place, the old maternity hospital where the psychologists grandfather (the guy at the end) faked the disappearance of one baby, thats why the ghost lady killed herself, it was framing. I don't think there's a call from a cop? only the fake Vet. That was the grandfather who just verified she'd be out so that the psychologist, his granddaughter could enter the house and steal the baby as a blood sacrifice to keep the blonde woman at the end in the bed, which is the stolen baby from 1953, alive :) If you have any questions hit me up!

    • @tinabrownell9123
      @tinabrownell9123 4 місяці тому

      Yes why was the baby old but the person who stole her not? Is the blood a deal with the devil to keep the man and the granddaughter young but then they need blood but the baby is older than them now because she didn't make a deal

  • @tjoe8386
    @tjoe8386 11 місяців тому

    Didnt understand the story ...

  • @Gary-nl3zb
    @Gary-nl3zb 5 місяців тому

    Lead actress walked weirdly, very stiff. Maybe she'd wrecked a bike the day before filming began.

  • @HanneHansen-sd6tw
    @HanneHansen-sd6tw Рік тому

    4k betyr at det er fra den andre passasjen der hun er katta selv.

  • @madannikabermudez
    @madannikabermudez Місяць тому

    she acts so boring lol, a mother would never act like that what waste of time

  • @techenstein5519
    @techenstein5519 6 місяців тому

    Leaves baby in house to walk to the vets 🤷‍♂️

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому

      Horrific mistake :(

    • @tinabrownell9123
      @tinabrownell9123 4 місяці тому

      ​@@DerrykSchieckI assumed from how she was acting she was still on some strong meds.

  • @Nichole-rv4th
    @Nichole-rv4th 8 місяців тому

    Who leaves a baby home alone? Wtf

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  8 місяців тому

      I know you gotta be seriously anxious and distracted if that happens... :)!

  • @barbarapineda9062
    @barbarapineda9062 Рік тому

    I admired the new generational, and the reason for saying becuz.. its,nt factually they's gots its..better m..generational, and m parental, generational, eithers they goes on internet turn its on. Do researched abouts old timers, I did sames too gets books from the libraries, check it's out and read abouts'em and next generational, all haves a situational,

  • @jcsantana6947
    @jcsantana6947 Рік тому

    😍😍

  • @isabelladecandia1222
    @isabelladecandia1222 Рік тому

    At least not leave a nweborm alone
    The filmaker is too young to know

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +2

      Heyah! No I'm not "too young to know" It's common sense. But clearly, the character in the movie made a fatal mistake :)

    • @tinabrownell9123
      @tinabrownell9123 4 місяці тому

      ​@@DerrykSchieckI thought it was because the vet was literally next door

  • @HanneHansen-sd6tw
    @HanneHansen-sd6tw Рік тому

    This was her life from the other passasje. The cat was her baby from that passasje. She lived the life from the other passasje

  • @trianaimmaculata4494
    @trianaimmaculata4494 Рік тому

    Gantung diri koq ada kursinya atau pijakannya, gimana naiknya?? 🥺

  • @barbarapearce9738
    @barbarapearce9738 Рік тому

    Satin Cyberjammies?

  • @annh5627
    @annh5627 Рік тому

    You hear so many stories of a parent leaving baby and young child alone at home in car or even murder them, putting alcohol in baby bottle, or baby's diaper infested with maggots. ALL cases in America as well. It's sooooo sad. 🙄

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +1

      Absolutely. I think this was a fatal mistake of her, but for sure some people do it on purpose. Thanks for watching :)

    • @brianpan6453
      @brianpan6453 Рік тому +2

      Hmmmm .... plenty of child abuse cases out of the UK on a daily basis.

    • @annh5627
      @annh5627 Рік тому

      @@brianpan6453 WELL IM TALKING ABOUT AMERICA WERE ITS FULL OF CRIMES, RACISM AND CHAOS. CLEARLY AMER6IS NOT PERFECT OBVIOULY THERES STILL A LOT OF TO BE DONE WITH AMERICA

  • @kareneastman9695
    @kareneastman9695 Рік тому

    And or the Baby.No!😞>:-(>:-( 😲

  • @cameronball8095
    @cameronball8095 4 місяці тому

    Blaaahhhh.... Terrible short, bad acting, sound effects timed poorly, many useless scenes bad story.

  • @leo-unddieAnderen
    @leo-unddieAnderen Рік тому +1

    Shorts should not be so long and drawn-out at the beginning. Not interesting enough to hold most people's attention span.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому

      The fact that the word "short" is in the title made you subconsiously do that? In any way if people see "36 minutes" its their decision to watch that right? Just like it's someones own decision to watch a almost 4 hour version of lord of the rings :)

  • @NICKEYBLACK35
    @NICKEYBLACK35 Місяць тому

    I need my 30 something minutes back. This story was rubbish.

  • @kibbleandquibble1732
    @kibbleandquibble1732 Рік тому +3

    Great premise. It's let down by terrible acting.

  • @snowbaby1962
    @snowbaby1962 Рік тому

    That was messed up.

  • @cheriaanderson5036
    @cheriaanderson5036 Рік тому +14

    A lot of unnecessary scenes, the acting subpar, the writing leaves something to be desired. Even if you just want to waste some time, dont watch this. It's just bad.

    • @Yo_Gma
      @Yo_Gma 11 місяців тому +6

      How nice of you to leave such a sweet note of endearment.

    • @galambposta459
      @galambposta459 8 місяців тому +5

      Exactly my thoughts. Those scenes (she is stepping out of the car, we see both her feets for a few seconds; she is slowly walking; and always the noise of her steps as she is walking; the other woman knitting, than slowly walking to the phone; etc.) do not add to the story at all, just fill out time.

    • @galambposta459
      @galambposta459 8 місяців тому +6

      ​@@Yo_Gma, so nobody can leave their honest opinion about a film, because just positive opinions are allowed?

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому +4

      How many short films did you actually come up with, write, act and shoot and edit? I wish you alot of luck on your first!

    • @theyoohoogyrl9000
      @theyoohoogyrl9000 6 місяців тому

      agreed

  • @astarsheran9788
    @astarsheran9788 19 днів тому +1

    👎🏽👎🏽

  • @leo-unddieAnderen
    @leo-unddieAnderen Рік тому

    Who would go out and leave their tiny Baby all alone? And but she sure made sure to take that i-phone with her didn't she? I would not leave that precious little one by themself.

    • @leo-unddieAnderen
      @leo-unddieAnderen Рік тому

      Do humans "chip" their Babys too or just their cats and dogs in case they go missing?

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому

      I'm sure every now and then someone on this planet makes a very stupid decision :) in this case this was hers :)

  • @sunilyt4
    @sunilyt4 11 місяців тому

    I don't like the twist.

  • @marca2752
    @marca2752 Рік тому

    "Promo sm" ✨

  • @barbarapineda9062
    @barbarapineda9062 Рік тому

    Thus short horrors stories, it's a guessed...games, it's a tests and it's reminds me a classical films, titles, rose Mary baby's artisted, patty dukes..Sharon takes, Mia farrow, she's still a lived now ages, 77s yrs old,

  • @kirtywright1974
    @kirtywright1974 Рік тому +7

    Horror? The real horror was the poor acting. Seriously. You could see the baby was a doll. Don’t give up your day jobs! This made me feel like everything was moving in slow motion , it was that bad.

    • @Catsmeow90
      @Catsmeow90 Рік тому +2

      Have to agree. It was all over the show.. Even had a bit of Fatel Attraction thrown in , with the boiling pan bit.

    • @sarahsummerlin_4
      @sarahsummerlin_4 9 місяців тому

      It was a bit over the top but i agree the acting was absolutely awful 😮

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  6 місяців тому +1

      Tja, when the standard is a multimillion production i can imagine a home made movie is not gonna cut it, we tried ;)! How many did you make?

    • @tinabrownell9123
      @tinabrownell9123 4 місяці тому

      I think the baby doll thing was smart because I was still trying to figure out if she really had a baby or it was part of her mental illness.

  • @lindseyyannxo
    @lindseyyannxo Рік тому +6

    this was the worst short movie i’ve ever seen in my life.

  • @julierodriguez2676
    @julierodriguez2676 8 місяців тому +1

    Had to stop watching this. Acting and dialogue is terrible.

  • @PattyMardis
    @PattyMardis 3 місяці тому

    This is the worst acting I've ever seen! Absolutely full of unnecessary scenes. This could have been condensed to 10 maybe 15 minutes tops. Not only was the acting bad but the story itself was predictable and dull.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  3 місяці тому

      predictable? Did you get the story? Have you watched any recent multi million Hollywood horror movies XD I'm sorry I dont want to be defensive but..

  • @sumchoimai1490
    @sumchoimai1490 Рік тому +3

    14:47 Leaves with umbrella.
    15:10 No umbrella.
    16:41 Umbrella magically returns.
    😅😅😅

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +3

      Yay someone who spotted it haha. The number of continuity errors is..wow. 😅

    • @laurarhodes8170
      @laurarhodes8170 Рік тому +4

      It’s no big deal. It doesn’t take away from the movie at all.

    • @DerrykSchieck
      @DerrykSchieck  Рік тому +2

      @@laurarhodes8170 i dont think so either laura, thank yoi! Hope u liked it!!

    • @blondie4208
      @blondie4208 4 місяці тому

      And?

    • @sumchoimai1490
      @sumchoimai1490 4 місяці тому

      @@blondie4208 so pay attention punk. You missed it the first time.

  • @StockHypers
    @StockHypers Рік тому +1

    Nice work!