Nice man! Sounds pretty good, you just need to work out the mechanics and it’ll sound even better. Always remember, if you can play it slow, you can play it fast. I suggest trying to learn it wayyy slow, then gradually up the tempo. I learned a lot of songs that way
to add onto what masehog was saying, play with a metranome to keep the tempo consistant. i noticed you sped up on the parts you know, so you could practice the parts you dont know and then the whole riff with a metranome. good work tho keep it up!!
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Nice man! Sounds pretty good, you just need to work out the mechanics and it’ll sound even better. Always remember, if you can play it slow, you can play it fast. I suggest trying to learn it wayyy slow, then gradually up the tempo. I learned a lot of songs that way
to add onto what masehog was saying, play with a metranome to keep the tempo consistant. i noticed you sped up on the parts you know, so you could practice the parts you dont know and then the whole riff with a metranome. good work tho keep it up!!