How to Fix Your Art #24 - Jeremy never thought his machine would ACTUALLY work.

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[@SunnivaAB]

Thank you guys so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it! I did the woodland, girly Jeremy (😂) one. The idea is that the machine is calling for the animals. In hindsight it makes so much more sense that Jeremy would not be looking at the paper he’s feeding into the machine, if he’s waiting for the animals. He has a camera and a notebook, but I think they got lost in the composition, maybe I should put them closer to the light? I definitely have a history of unclear or overly complicated ideas for my illustrations😅 I’ve just started level 4 of the foundation courses, so I’ll be diving more into storytelling the coming month😊 Sadly I missed the livestream this time, it’s a late night event in my part of the world (Norway), and combined with a toddler who considers 6 am sleeping in, I was asleep on the sofa and missed the entire thing😮😅 Thank you again so much, it’s really motivating to get specific things to work on. - Sunniva

[@emmalatham2298]

Hahaha Lees game idea is awesome! Wish it was a real game I could play!

[@marcdraws85]

I actually thought the distinction between Pants = Trousers and Pants = Underpants would get lost in translation across the pond. Maybe I should have used "Underpants" to keep it universal.