Painful Desires │Spoken Word Poetry

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  • Опубліковано 21 січ 2025

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  • @jenniferwindham3733
    @jenniferwindham3733 5 років тому

    All your poetry speak what my heart won't say

  • @VinoVenitas
    @VinoVenitas 6 років тому +8

    "As I repeat it in my mind that I will be ok." That line really got to me. This was beautiful. Well done

  • @Vervain_land
    @Vervain_land 5 років тому +1

    I am SO IN LOVE WITH ALL THESE!

  • @ayushikumari7368
    @ayushikumari7368 4 роки тому

    The last line :- "Soon my hopeful soul will also be crushed" this hit so badly.
    When nothing is there then there is only one thing bcoz of which a person tries to live or tries to try again or think again something positive and that is HOPE. but one day when that hope is crushed or over then it will fell like there is nothing left and everything was a bullshit and now its over for ever.

  • @KAUSHALSINGH-vb7ie
    @KAUSHALSINGH-vb7ie 6 років тому +3

    Poetry dear ..❤️😍😄😍 o my god seriously o my god...I have no words what to say but yaa one thing I want to say you are Amazing, mind-blowing, cute, Excellent and all ...Keep it up..❤️

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому

      KAUSHAL SINGH Thank you very much! 😊 I'm glad to know you enjoy my poetry! Thank you for the kind words and I will keep going and do my best! 😁

  • @sidney4544
    @sidney4544 3 роки тому

    I love your videos, I can relate to all of them.

  • @melindapemberton999
    @melindapemberton999 5 років тому

    I know just actually how you feel my friend thanks for words of comfort

  • @mothusingobeni7029
    @mothusingobeni7029 5 років тому +1

    your poetry touches my heart

  • @circleofideas9549
    @circleofideas9549 4 роки тому

    Love you mel,you make me so emotional.

  • @thandekagumede2146
    @thandekagumede2146 4 роки тому +2

    Do you cry when you write this wonderful poem
    I do 😭

  • @DeuceDevil
    @DeuceDevil 5 років тому

    Mel, you will NOT be broken. You can rise above all that haunts you. Love and Light to you my sister.💙

  • @noone8474
    @noone8474 6 років тому +2

    It hurts how much I relate -_-

  • @tasniarashid4135
    @tasniarashid4135 6 років тому +1

    I love your poetry so much

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому

      Kohinoor Zaman Thank you so much! 😊 I appreciate the support and the love! ❤

  • @itzmrsyed7315
    @itzmrsyed7315 3 роки тому

    My soulmate.. If you're out there i don't know who you are but if you are in pain remember this is temporary, sunshine is right outside, where I'll be waiting for you

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 роки тому

    you will receive your brother

  • @fallengoddess3767
    @fallengoddess3767 6 років тому

    That was good thank you

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому

      Dire Wolf Thank you very much for listening! 😊

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 роки тому

    I don't know where to go and what to say , I am in great confusion which eats me daily

  • @slsppp7851
    @slsppp7851 Рік тому

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 роки тому

    he has no mercy on me

  • @myphuonghuynhthi1423
    @myphuonghuynhthi1423 3 роки тому

    U work for Be Mi ?

  • @izanas_leftearring5191
    @izanas_leftearring5191 6 років тому

    You are almost at 1k! 👀💛

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому

      I just noticed that today 💛 That's really amazing!

  • @mystiquelou1277
    @mystiquelou1277 6 років тому

    Don't let that monster win fight it one day at the time....every day you can win

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому

      Mystique Lou Thank you ❤ I will try my best!

  • @hairbb4406
    @hairbb4406 5 років тому

    I really love you

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 роки тому

    don't worry,

  • @richathapamagar8022
    @richathapamagar8022 4 роки тому

    Hey ! Are you on Instagram. Wanna know

  • @thedebster68
    @thedebster68 4 роки тому

    Oh God...I...how do u have a hidden camera in my bedroom? You are narrating this week of my life to a T. It ... is horrible... u seem so young... I thought this was the result of a 46 yr life with depression but... oh poor you that u are able to write this way... exactly what I am right now... I pray for u if so... and for me... and thank u and did u write this? Peace and Love to u. ❣

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 роки тому

    what to do

  • @narimankarimi9903
    @narimankarimi9903 3 роки тому

    After all you said goodbye … don’t worries
    My love ….. good luck ….

  • @fasilatsanusi7431
    @fasilatsanusi7431 4 роки тому

    It's so sad

  • @rashidatoluwatoyin2548
    @rashidatoluwatoyin2548 3 роки тому

    We are coming back home now my love

  • @heshithsachintha6032
    @heshithsachintha6032 4 роки тому +1

    I'm so poor at relationships.

    • @mikebaldwin686
      @mikebaldwin686 4 роки тому

      Only because the one guy that can show give and desires to have the one relationship made to last is ready impatiently waiting for you to just sit somewhere let me see you yell what ever nickname you may have for him. A guy who sees who he loves call-out for him would instantly be nervous but in happiness to finally have the new beginning they both need and deserve with each other.

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 роки тому

    I am not your friend, you hurt me more

  • @shreyapaul5945
    @shreyapaul5945 3 роки тому

    If you want to meet .. meet ... meet my grandparents . Aisa aur mushkil hogaa .. can we meet without any expectation ? Are you ok ?

  • @judylockhart9503
    @judylockhart9503 3 роки тому

    You are going to be fine. I'm thinking about you so much.

  • @marciakirkbride4210
    @marciakirkbride4210 4 роки тому

    Step up, before I’m gone. Sorry! 😭😭😭♥️💋🌹🙏✝️ communication, listen talk pray love you

  • @EFman2
    @EFman2 3 роки тому

    Baby please I’m begging you not to isolate you fro me I love ❤️ nyo Union so much that even me feel depressed cuz of not having you near me I am always so sad I suffering everyday crying of your whereabouts Pls love me don’t go away from me I need you everyday in my life Please embrace me cuz I need ur body and strength of not to fall on I’m beginning to weaken myself cuz your departing from me Please baby I’m sorry for all those shortcomings I have Be back to me cuz I need you baby! Kiss me hold me baby! Don’t go away from me!I LOVE ❤️ YOU SO MUCH BABE BABY!

  • @sosower4871
    @sosower4871 4 роки тому

    But I have prayed for your strength to arise and that every annoyance cease. Listen for the Voice of the Holy Spirit. He is ever present. Walk according to the Word of God. For He ever watches over it.. to perform according to THE WORD OF GOD.. As you abide in it. You are shielded and protected. The bellows and fiery seas may come in your life. But as you stay with God He will hold you above the roaring waves and keep you calm. Believe the Word of God based on what the Lord Jesus Christ has done for you. God loves you. I love you. Trust in God. Forgive yourself. Cast those depressing thoughts away. Give not them any place nor abode period. This is a resistant action when you don't give place nor agree with THE devil and his lying attacks to your mind and memory. Those reminders of your failures and mistakes of the past. Forgive yourself by repenting of what was said and done. Believe that you are forgiven. And release the guilt. For now you are clean. Do this act, repent. Oh the devil will leave. He must..
    he will leave because it is Written. Resist the devil and he will flee.
    I love you. Have you in my heart. Be... Encouraged.

    • @sosower4871
      @sosower4871 4 роки тому

      A good thought concerning troubles that we face in life.. is this.
      We can be doing everything right and still find ourselves in uncomfortable situations. That make us sad. But know this.. just keep doing the right things and watch for good things to come. They will.
      Being human it is natural to react to adversity. It's okay to be honest about how we feel. Express yourself. Release it. Continue on in your life and again I say, those bad things will be removed. Keeping it real.

  • @mystiquelou1277
    @mystiquelou1277 6 років тому

    Some people you just should have never met...they are out to detroy

  • @heshithsachintha6032
    @heshithsachintha6032 4 роки тому

    You're not alone
    I still stay with you. I'm extremely sorry about my harsh comments. Don't be rude. I know you're forgive me. Because I know you're way better than think you're

  • @noorjanhashim2198
    @noorjanhashim2198 5 років тому

    I see you I am very sorry, I do not want you to be sick or sad.I want you to have fun, I'm afraid to be with you during the day ok

  • @mikehouting5896
    @mikehouting5896 4 роки тому

    I am sorry baby if you suffer from depression. Please let me know if I can do anything to help you.

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 роки тому

    I lost trust in you , you will win, you don't enter in my life

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 роки тому

    let you cheat your daughter in the name of love, again and again

  • @marielessard9066
    @marielessard9066 5 років тому

    You sound desperate

  • @nightlight8124
    @nightlight8124 6 років тому

    Listening to you while going through the worst I’ve ever gone through love wise. It really really help. Oh how love is so STUPID. The boy that I’ve loved for months now reached out to me and gave me his email. then before I know it BOOM. The email is fake, and he played my heart.