Fun fact: even the voice actors did not like how one coarse meal turned out. It’s also rumored that Clancy Brown, the voice actor for Mr. Krabs, claimed to have felt uncomfortable reading his dialogue. And that really says something about this one.
Austistic or not, NOBODY should be given the feeling that they should have never been born. Especially children should be loved and appreciated unconditionally.
I feel like the industry grossly misunderstands autism. With only 1 exception, none of the films or shows I’ve seen in my life portray Autism correctly (that one exception is the Temple Grandin biopic, even if it does dramatise a few things). They either portray autism as a curse, or as some superpower like in the disastrous movie The Predator 2018.
Most of the time Benson is actually a pretty decent boss, its just that Mordecai and Rigby are so lazy and incompetent that he genuinely gets pushed over the edge. That episode was a criminal case of flanderization if you ask me.
@@Mudfire15Benson was not ooc in the episode at all. Mordecai and Rigby had been putting off doing all the chores in the park for the last week. Benson was pushed to his limit. We’ve seen him cocky and condescending before by the way. The pie episode for one.
@@ironrevenger9386 Yeah, but maybe he grew past that or something. I mean he talked about the Scooby Snacks in the 10 Cartoon Foods in real life video.
Where the the hell is the SpongeBob episode called A Pal 4 Gary on this list? That episode is by far the worst SpongeBob episode making all the other SpongeBob episodes on this list seem like good episodes.
The only funny thing in Stewie is Enceinte is: Cleveland: Hey, I went by your house the other day. Is your baby pregnant? Peter: I don't know. Lois is in charge of the kids.
Plot twist: Bendy does his pranks, but it’s so specific and it does the opposite of what it’s meant for. For example, Jumpscare prank backfires and cures Edwardo’s Hiccups and things like that regardless of how small or big it is, and either Bendy frustrated by all the backfired pranks doing the opposite exiles himself, or he becomes a more angsty spongebob and is continued to be used throughout the series
@@phantomstrider I dont think Darwin and Tina should be in love with Tina since Darwin is 8 and Tina is 14 but then again, Carrie is probably centuries older than Darwin since it's confirmed she had a boyfriend before Darwin who she dated for 2 decades eve though Carrie looks like a child.
Another fix idea for "A Pal For Gary": What if the new 'pet' explicitly has hypnotic powers that it uses to make spongebob obliviously loyal to it. We could add somebody else like Sandy or something who is watching it unfold, trying to reason with spongebob, and gradually getting more concerned. Finally, have spongebob snap out of it at the end and help get this creature out of his house? This is from a fan of more action-oriented cartoons who hasn't seen the episode, so I don't know if its a good idea or not.
As someone who has seen the episode: I like this solution. Because honestly, this would explain why Spongebob treats Gary so poorly. Like he literally sees the pet trying to eat Gary and is yelling AT GARY for it like it's his fault. I mean he's so neglectful it's literally mean and out of character. Even Patrick wouldn't be that oblivious. So for it to be something the new "pet" is doing - would help. Especially having someone trying to point it out to him and him being like "What? Fluffy? That's silly!" but when he sees Gary in trouble he finally snaps and saves his friend, apologizing to him the entire time and they work together to get the create out. Maybe Sandy or whoever else is there can help. Heck I'd love to see the help be Squidward. Like at first amused "haha Spongebob's so dumb" but slowly gets concerned because he sees him mistreating or neglecting Gary and being like "Okay so something is wrong here" and maybe he gets Sandy who can burst in at the last minute and help them get the monster out and then she can be like "Actually Squidward told me." And Spongebob can be like "oh wow you do care!" and squidward can pretend not to but it could end on him smiling that things are back to normal.
I feel like One Course Meal would be 10x better if Pearl was made aware of what her dad was doing and tried helping Plankton overcome his fear. It'd be an interesting duo to explore
I agree! That direction would’ve definitely fixed my biggest problem with the original episode, which was the weird continuity error of whales in Spongebob never being depicted as eating plankton until that episode. I mean, we see Pearl enthusiastically devouring normal food in that one episode where she has a growth spurt, so I highly doubt eating plankton is necessary for whale survival in the SpongeBob universe. The og episode’s conflict is extremely forced, and I think this rewrite would’ve remedied that. It would portray Plankton’s fear of whales as more irrational than anything, so he’s battling with his own perception with reality rather than being tortured by a very real thing that happens in nature constantly.
For the hey Arnold one, I think it would also be great if the students still laugh at them, however Arnold and Iggy can’t hear them from the fun they’re having on stage. The students see it as some kind of comedy routine while Iggy and Arnold are dancing and having fun.
One episode I think would be easy to fix is "Spongebob Your Fired". Keep the fact that krabs wants sponge bob gone to save money, but change how he does it. Have Krabs show more care and suggest Spongebob to look for better employment by saying something like"You've got alot of talent that's wasted here". Then have spongebob try out some jobs, throw in some comedy and then have him come back to Krabs saying something like "I enjoy this job, so I I'll stay" and Krabs accepting it whilst silently sulking because he did save that extra money. What do you think?
Nah, that seems out-of-character for Mr. Krabs. I feel like a better option would be the Krusty Krab isn’t making the money is use to so Mr. Krabs has no choice but to fire SpongeBob. That way they can make use of the scene where SpongeBob makes his own snail food that Gary actually likes and when Mr. Krabs hires him back, SpongeBob makes more of the snail food to bring business back up for the Krusty Krab.
He is a very nice boss to those that actually do their work. Like,he's always showing his appreciation for his good employees,like taking them out for a nice dinner and stuff like that. Mordecai and Rigby are awful employees,so they don't get that treatment.
Same here. Benson is just a strict boss most of the time but’s still a decent guy and wants the best for you. Heck even when he is mean, outside of the episode mentioned in the vid, he still isn’t cruel like Krabs can be. Plus he’ll actually pay which is something Krabs isn’t likely to do unless given incentive (or forced to do by inflicting or threatening bodily harm onto him)
"Arthur's Big Hit" - Instead of the dad telling Arthur he now knows how D.W. felt after he hit her, the dad and mom should've been scolding D.W. for breaking Arthur's model plane. He told her repeatedly to not touch it, she didn't listen, and most kids can only get so frustrated before they lash out, either through actions or words. It could've easily been made into teaching kids the lesson, "Listen to what others are telling you," instead of, "Don't hit, because someone else might hit you."
Oh yes, Arthur should have been punished for hitting his sister, not saying he didn't deserve a punishment. I just hate how that story is framed as if to imply we should feel sorry for D.W. getting hit, but not Arthur.
I think "It's a Wishful Life" would be so much better if everyone's lives seem better on the surface but secretly feel empty or unfulfilling. AJ could go on to college early but is bullied a lot for being so young and naive. Chester could still have Cosmo and Wanda but we see why, going into his family dynamic or find his life is boring if he gets everything he wants. And the bully (i forget his name) could be a quarterback but he is prone to injuries and is constantly going to the hospital and, as such, is in debt. That level of nuance could be a more intriguing take and would justify Jorgan's take and Timmy would earn the ending where he changes Jorgan's mind.
I saw what was going to be at number 1, and instantly wanted to know how you would fix it. You took the piece of cartoon media you hate the most, and instead of drawing more attention to how bad it is, you managed to somewhat fix it, and i really like that.
He didn’t really fix it though. He made it an overtly serious episode of Bojack Horseman instead of an episode of Ren and Stimpy.. the show is supposed to be fucked up.
I loved how he recreated that head thump; it was pretty funny. On top of that, the whole vid felt fresh & nostalgic simultaneously, especially with how Strider can now go back & forth between himself & Dark Strider now!
@@voiceunderthecoversTo be fair, as far as I'm aware, this IS the darkest & most messed up episode of Adult Party, so Strider most likely prioritized fixing the messed up elements by treating them with care & respect. As far as I know, yes, Adult Party Cartoon as a whole was kinda just an unfunny mess that had jacked up stuff. Unfortunately, at least in this context & only this context, I haven't seen any of the episodes nor have I any info on them outside of the fact that it's painfully gross & unfunny with an absolute piece of crap creator, to put it lightly; however, I do at least have the basic idea of just bettering the humor & having some of it appropriately sprinkled into the rewritten version of Ren Seeks Help. TL;DR: Strider focused on fixing what was horrendously botched in the episode as opposed to making fit in as Ren & Stimpy - or Adult Party for that matter.
I like the idea of Meg moving out and doing her own thing. While lately the writers have been treating her character than they have done i just know it isn't gunna last. So i'd love Meg to move out and actually show her doing well without her family, and her friendship with Bruce is wholesome as hell too so i'd love to see more of that.
I know Family Guy can’t do other full-length episode parodies of other blockbusters due to a lot of major film corporations being overprotective when it comes to the rights of their IPs, but I’d do an episode parodying Raiders of the Lost Ark but with Meg taking the role of leading lady and love interest Marion Ravenwood just to get some well-deserved payback for her father putting her in minor roles as aliens in the Star Wars parody episodes. I can imagine in the scene recreating Marion punching Indy, Meg saying, “THAT’S for putting me in minor roles in your Star Wars Original Trilogy retelling and not giving me any lines!”
@@hunterolaughlin Yes. Hell freakin' yes to this. Oh and as a callback to when Stewie pulled her heart out she could do it to Peter...cause i can't see her doing it back to Stewie...just for the hell of it. As i'm pretty sure that was taken from Temple of Doom if memlory serves.
15:32 An idea that I had for how to fix The Wringer would be to more or less make it a bottle episode. Have Spongebob be stuck in the wringer and unable to detach it from the floor. Fortunately, Gary manages to call Sandy for help, unfortunately she cannot figure out how to get him out immediately and has to leave to create something that will save Spongebob. Thus, while Sandy is out trying various inventions (possibly with mixed results), Spongebob has to figure out how to do various things like brushing his teeth or getting a drink of water while still stuck in the wringer. Ultimately, Sandy would figure out how to get him out, but maybe by that point he is so used to doing things while in the wringer that he has forgotten how to do them normally and the episode ends with him comically messing up a basic task and both he and Sandy laughing about it.
Honestly, Arnold betrays Iggy could've been fixed simply by delving into why Iggy was wearing bunny pajamas. Perhaps he wears them because they were the last gift he got from his grandma before she passed away and the episode ends with him confessing that. That would've ended things with both Arnold and Iggy being in a likeable position
“Arnold Betrays Iggy” is a prime example of what not to do to a background character when he/she is given a major role. Surprisingly, “My Leg” did this “Background character with a major role” much better in my opinion. Tell me what do you think down below.
I’ve always had the idea of Meg officially moving out of the Griffin household after Seahorse Seashell Party for a long time time. The writers had a golden opportunity to take advantage of Meg’s character and have her be more than just the 'butt of the joke' considering that’s how her character has always been since Season 4. It could have been a continuous arc in the show where we see how both the lives of Meg and the Griffin family function without one another. We were robbed of great storytelling.
I'm actively really happy & stimming rn thank you so much for doing this idea!! Some of these choices are giving me a lot of nostalgia from your older vids!!
Tbh, the burger episode is not a good indicator of who Benson is as a character, he's usually far more likeable imo. Also, I kinda get where he's coming from? Like, the episode said that the chorse Mordecai and Rigby had to do were the chores they'd put off doing throughout the entire week. It's a self-inflicted backlog, and Benson was frustrated and fed up with their slacking. Doesn't help that they were giving him attitude about it when he called them out.
I think an episode that does something similar to “The Best Burger In The World” but done right, is the Chowder episode “Mahjong Night” where Chowder is really tempted to eat Mevilled Eggs that were made for Mung’s Wife Truffles’ game night with her friends. Mung promises Chowder that he can eat all the Mevilled Eggs he wants tomorrow, but Chowder is so excited that he can’t fall asleep. He basically spends the entire episode trying to get some Mevilled Eggs from Truffles. At the end of the episode, Chowder accidentally helps Truffles win her game, and offers him a Mevilled Egg as a reward, only for Chowder to taste one and say they’re disgusting. Also the stuff that happens in the episode is pretty funny. I won’t give too much away. Go watch it for yourself.
Also I should mention that that episode was completely out of character for Benson, as while he was always painted as a strict boss with anger issues, he genuinely cared for Mordecai and Rigby’s well being and wanted them to be happy. Also, Pops would have probably been the one to tell them that they didn’t want to get their hopes up.
For the fairly odd parents one, there's something I haven't seen anyone mention. Chester. He doesn't have fairies in the main show but in "It's a Wishful Life", he does. Wouldn't that mean he's finally miserable enough WITHOUT TIMMY he needs fairies? Maybe because timmy isn't there, AJ isn't friends eith Chester and he's super lonely. I know it'd be a bit more basic plot line wise but I'm surprised I haven't seen anyone mention that.
@@XJIcequeen But then they couldn't have had Timmy wish for the entire world to not age for like decades out of his anger towards his entire existence being harmful to everyone. We can't have Timmy learning to be nice and such!
I've got some alternative fixes for some of these episodes: In "Arnold Betrays Iggy", we could've had Arnold revealing Iggy's secret not knowing why it's a secret and everyone makes fun of Iggy for it, much to Arnold's shock. Arnold then stands up for Iggy in order to atone for his mistake and lift the shame and embarrassment that Iggy feels. In the end, the people making fun of Iggy either back off or get put in their place, Arnold learns to be more careful with revealing things to other people and Iggy learns to own his "embarrassing" traits and not be ashamed of them. "The Girlfriend" would've been so much better if only for the message of staying quiet had been later corrected, as Jamie only gets worse and worse, forcing Gumball and/or Darwin to either stand up to her or get help, a very daunting task that thankfully results in Jamie getting put in her place. The message finally being that situations like this can be dangerous and scary to try and get out of, but things won't get any better if you stay. "It's a Wishful Life" could be improved by revealing that Jorgen Von Strangle was LYING about absolutely everyone else's lives being better off without Timmy and he just wanted to torment the poor boy from the start, resulting in TImmy having to stand up to Jorgen as well as the ingrates he tried to help only to be mistreated in return. In the end it would be revealed Timmy's existence has bettered some peoples' lives after all, whether or not they actually realise it and the message is something along the lines of "If you're feeling unappreciated, you can still take solace in the fact that some people's lives are better off because of you and what you've done, even if no one seems to realise that.".
I think that at the end of Family Guy's 'Seahorse Seashell Party' Meg should move out, but only for the episode. At the end Peter and Lois apologise to her, promise to stop treating her like trash, and she then forgives them and moves back in. And after that episode, they do stop treating her like trash, and instead treat her like they did in the first two seasons (they weren't horrible to her back then).
My idea for fixing One Coarse Meal is to have Plankton discover Krabs' ruse much earlier in the episode (before all the paranoia and suicide parts), and do some research to discover Krabs' fears. The episode then becomes an arms race between the two to exploit each other's fears and scare them the hardest. It will be a much less one-sided conflict, but Krabs will ultimately come out on top, though not in an overly cruel or dark way.
For One Coarse meal, I think all it needed to do was instead of SpongeBob finding Plankton on the street, it was Mr. Krabs that found him that way. Krabs realizes what he’s been doing is wrong and swallows his pride later that night when he comes back to seemingly torture Plankton but instead confirms he wasn’t trying to eat Plankton, rather his Chum. It then ends with Plankton relieved of his fears and everything goes back to normal
I know how to fix a pal for Gary! Make Puffy Fluffy just want to give Gary a hug, but he doesn't know how to express it, so Spongebob teaches Puffy Fluffy.
Of course! Most autistic people like myself are uncomfortable with certain social or intimate gestures like hugs, so this could be a teaching moment for both of them. The trouble would then be getting Puffy Fluffy to stop hugging Gary
There’s actually a season 4 episode of the original Ren and Stimpy that is somewhat similar to your fix called Ren Needs Help where Stimpy calls a Mental Hospital after finding out that Ren is losing his mind and being self destructive. Ren later finds some other patients who have similar mental illnesses and phobias as Ren and relates to them.
Yeah and that ep ends with Ren getting lobotomized and being forced into a government conspiracy lol. There is no possible good ending for this story in either interpretation.
Now this sounds like a great idea! Fixing the worst episodes in Cartoon Shows sounds great! It'll make the episodes much better and not mean spirited or boring at all. Also you actually talked about Regular Show Episodes this time!😁👍🏻
@@rainbowtoyfunrandomess1982 Pops wanted Benson to control his anger. Mordecai and Rigby caught on, so they kept annoying him purposefully. Pops uncharacteristically ignored that and fired Benson after one last outburst
My thoughts on Bendy, He just never existed. Bloo sees him, but he's just delusional from sleep or something. The house still becomes a mess, and the blame is there on the now non-existent Bendy.
@phantomstrider, you got that right about Bendy he the one of absolute worst character in cartoon Network history I hope the creator learn them lesson for there mistakes 🙏🏻
23:25 I'd actually like it if Benson tried the burgers and got food poisoning because the truck people saw the injustice towards Mordecai and Rigby, so he purposely undercooked Benson's burger as punishment, then gave both Mordecai and Rigby a free burger
You know it really bothers me that in the stuck in the wringer episode, the way Spongebob got out of the wringer was by crying his way out. Why tf didn't the glue from the wringer dissolved when Spongebob got outside? They live in the freaking ocean!
Did anyone notice this in SpongeBob? (1) Karen went from a computer screen to having a whole robotic body without anyone noticing. (2) The show never hints if Pearl was adapted or if Mr. Krabs married a whale.
Sweet! The category I voted for was chosen! Here's my idea for fixing SpongeBob's infamous "A Pal For Gary" episode. SpongeBob misunderstands Gary by thinking he's lonely. He gets an idea from the other residents of Bikini Bottom who have been given cute pets by a con woman that hypnotizes everyone. SpongeBob is lured in by its cuteness when in fact it's in cahoots with the con woman who uses it to brainwash the masses and make them their servants. The cute pet manipulates SpongeBob into thinking that Gary is terrible, so he throws Gary out but realizes at the last minute (through a quick montage of memory clips) that Gary would never do terrible things. SpongeBob and Gary reconcile and then gather up animal characters from previous episodes (Mystery the Seahorse, No Name the Blue Jellyfish, Junior the (now adult) Scallop, Snelly and Rocky from The Great Snail Race episode, and the partying jellyfish and dolphins) to help the brainwashed crowds see sense with their own cuteness by wearing costumes. With the con woman and her cute pets defeated and arrested, SpongeBob learns to listen to Gary more often, while Mr. Krabs makes more money selling action figures of the heroic animals.
Hey PhantomStrider! It’s rare that I’ve been early on any of your videos at all. Even though my comment would probably get buried in the comment section, I wanna say some stuff about your channel. First of all, thank you for making a lot of videos, no matter whether it’s about anything from the animation media, legos, restaurants or anything related to food/drinks, I would usually put any of your videos on to listen to them while I’m either working, playing video games or even drawing! Second of all, I’ve been watching your content since 2016 (or 2017? I’m not exactly sure), and I’m happy to see you improve and grow throughout the years, while I’m excited to learn more neat facts about yourself as well as Australia! And third of all, I don’t know if you’re also planning to retire this year, but I still hope that you can still make to fulfill your heart’s content, even if it’s not on your main channel anymore. If you’re still planning to retire, I’m sad to see you go, but I hugely respect that you wanna take care of yourself as well as spending more time with the ones you love. Besides, thanks for the memories, and fingers crossed to see you reach one million subscribers! 🤞B)
Yeah. I definitely could've covered 10 of them 😄 But in the polls they requested I cover all the cartoons even if I miss some. If this video doesn't bomb, I'd definitely consider doing fixing worst spongebob :)
Fun fact: the voice actor of bendy in foster home was Jeff Bennett, same voice actor of Johnny Bravo, dexter dad in dexter laboratory, ace in the powerpuff girls, hamster in stitch the movie, monkey boy in samurai jack, mole in modifyers pilot, choose ghoose in adventure time, hi five ghost in regular show, raj and Samson in camp lazlo, and finally joker in 2008 Batman bravo and the bold.
How I'd fix Seahorse Seashell Party: After the "Lightning Rod" conversation, Meg gets a call from a college advisor she emailed. Dr Daria Morgendorfer calls to check on her application, gets a trauma dump and tells her that 1) If one person is the lightning rod, nobody changes. 2.) She's so close to leaving Rhode Island and going away to college.
I actually like the idea of having One Coarse Meal be a sequel episode to Patty Hype where after the citizens of Bikini Bottom drove Mr Krabs out of town, Pearl takes over as a temporary boss until Mr Krabs gets his act together while also integrating Plankton's fear of whales without having Mr Krabs be the one to torment him for weeks. Who knows? We can finally see Plankton over come his fear of whales instead of getting himself ran over by a bus, i would definitely give this One Coarse Meal rewrite a 7/10.
I love how you fixed these episodes, Strider! I especially like the Spongebob and Hey Arnold ones. I've been considering re-writing bad episodes myself. On a different note, I have become obsessed with classic tv channel bumpers, they are very interesting. Especially for defunct channels like Britan's CITV. Speaking of CITV, I recently discovered the Engie Benjy show and I adore it, I wish they brought Engie Benjy to America like they did with Bob The Builder and Thomas The Tank Engine.
This was a fun video, Strider! And it's inspired me to rewrite some bad cartoon episodes too! First off, I would rewrite THE ENTIRITY of the Bob The Builder reboot, starting with keeping the original claymation/stop motion designs while updating them to CGI. Second, I would introduce new machines, which would be the ones making mistakes, but none as dumb as in the actual reboot, and the old machines would help the new machines out. Third, I'd try to keep the writing for the reboot similar to the original Bob The Builder. I'd also rewrite bad episodes from good cartoons, such as three episodes of Engie Benjy: Jollop To The Rescue, Jollop Mixtures, and Night Of The Sherbert Stars. Jollop To The Rescue: Jollop would still be jealous of his cousin Jelly, but Benjy would figure out quickly what was wrong and actually talk to Jollop about that. Jollop would also stop Jelly from giving Plane the orange fizzy drink [which worsened Plane's hiccups] and would figure out another way to get rid of Plane's hiccups. Jollop Mixtures: While Jollop still broke the computer board, he and Dan come clean to Benjy about it, and Engie Benjy's friends don't get angry at him for making mistakes like in the OG episode. Night Of The Sherbert Stars stays mostly the same, but Trucker Troy [Engie Benjy's cousin] and Farmer Fred actually try to help Benjy, and we find out WHY Jollop and Dan were mad at each other. But aside from the aforementioned three bad episodes, I think Engie Benjy is a delightful show, and I cannot recommend it enough! It also has a ton of fun dry British humor.
Here's how I would fix what is considered the worst episode of Caillou: The story would start with a cold morning. Snow is covering the road and nothing is happening. In the start,we are shown that the gramma and her grandchildren (which tjey normally started the old episodes) are snowed in. While the gramma is quite happy for taking care of her grandchildren (being their babysitter), the kids are annoyed,as TV is out because the snowstorm that brought all that snow broke the antenna of their house and since their old snow clothes don't fit them anymore and they don't even have other snow clothes,so they can't even play on the snow. The gramma decides to bring them something to keep their minds off the fact they can't watch cartoons on the TV or make snowmen, so he gives them some cookies, hot cocoa and decides to read a story - Big Brother Caillou. The story starts with Caillou playing in his room with his good ol' train set, in his own world, with not a care in the world. We do see a small scene where Caillou is imagining being the train conductor, altought that scene doesn't last for long,as the doorbell rings. Caillou sees his dad and mother going down the stairs as fast as they could, so Caillou gets curious what is happening and goes down along side his parents, as Caillou is imagining who could be at the door, from something as comom (maybe he imagines it is his gramma going to babysit him) to more fantastical (Maybe he thinks it is an astrounaut). He tries to go as down the stairs should as fast as he could (altought because he knows he can't run down and the fact he has short legs, he isn't that fast). His parents bring inside their home a huge box that the mailman brought. Caillou goes to the box and thinks it is a gift for him for his birthday, altought his mother remembers him that his birthday was 3 months ago. Caillou keeps trying to figure out who was the box for, until his Dad tells him a suprise for him - He is gonna get a sister and the box has a crib inside of it. While most kids wouldn't like it or would be excited to getting a sibling,but oddly enough, Caillou doesn't seem to have an opinion about it. He doesn't seem to see any good or bad on having a sister,so his parents tell him that when he gets a sister, he will have someone to play and have sone fun. Caillou doesn't seem to change much his mind,but after some months, when Rosie is born, he instantly loves his sister. Like the title says, during the episode, Caillou tries to be a good big brother,but keeps failling due to what he tries due to Rosie's age and his methods. For instance: Caillou would see the baby toys Rosie has and thinks she wouldn't like them,so he decides to give her some of his old toys for her, altought it is clear his toys aren't for Rosie's age (Like he gives him a robot toy that is the size of Rosie or a Nerf gun) or how Rosie can't stop crying, so Caillou dresses himself as a clown and tries to cheer her up,but it gives the opposite effect he was trying to achive due ti scaring the little baby. After many and many attempts to be a good big brother, Caillou gives up, because no matter what he does, he can't seem to help take care of Rosie,making him sad and go to his room to cry. His mother goes to his room and she tells him that he is a good brother,but he needs to understand her age and what he thinks it would be good for his sister isn't always going to work. The mother says that case is similar to when Gilbert was a kitten: When he was a kitten, he needed to drink milk out of a baby bottle and how it was hard to make the kitten get used to their family,but older Gilbert doesn't have those problems anymore. Caillou's mother tells him that since Rosie is a newborn, he should hear his parents and what he should do if he can even do something and,when Rosie grows up, Caillou could use the ideas he tried to use in the episode and they might have a different effect (maybe when she grows up, she is gonna like clowns or would like to receive Caillou's old toys), but for now, he has to understand her age and let his parents take care out of stuff before he can act. Caillou accepts this idea and,in the end, he finally makes Rosie happy by holding her in his arms (with his parents looking out for them) and kissing her on the forehead. Meanwhile,the gramma manages to buy time enough so her daugther can return with Take Out food for her,the grandchilren and gramma, so the episode ends with them having a good lunch. (I know it isn't as good as this other ideas in this video,but I liked doing this.)
Arnold Betrays Iggy was definitely hard to watch, and your ideas on how to fix it sound way, way better. Like, I understand that Iggy wanted to maintain a reputation, but I also agree that it would've sent a better message if he learned to embrace his bunny pajamas or any other embarrassing secret of his. Plus, it wasn't actually Arnold's fault that the secret came out, as instead, Sid and Stinky simply guessed it.
23:57 Arnold actually doesn't reveal Iggys secret; the bullies guess it, which is stupid. Just though you ought to know, Strider, since I think your interpretation of events is a little skewed towards Arnold being the antagonist.
That’s true. When I saw a review of the episode, near the end when Arnold was going to get humiliated, Iggy over heard Sid and Stinky mentioning that Arnold was innocent and they were the ones that spread the secret around. I don’t know if he misremembered that detail (it can be easy to miss out on small details, I know I miss on details a lot), but that entire episode assassinated Iggy’s character into ashes.
Love the hand-drawn artwork and the suggestions! As an artist and cartoon fan(and fanwork creator at that), I love this kind of brainstorming exercise. The fact that there's 14 spots only makes it better! Awesome video as always, your videos never fail to make my day.
A little late to this video but Stride you are killing it with these uploads even moreso recently. Loved this video. Also, at 4:33 Nin's animation and delivery was so spot on 😂
Thanks! Sadly, it bombed so I'll probably skip cartoons for a while, but it's nice to get a little feedback on some of those extra details Nin and I put into this one 🙂
Yeah, Benson can be harsh at times in Regular Show. But the more you watch it, the more relatable he becomes, especially to adults. However, this episode is definitely him at his worst in my opinion. But I'm surprised that this episode of Regular Show was recommended instead of 'Think Positive'. I always thought that one was everyone's least favorite Regular Show episode.
It felt great to watch all of Josh, Nin, Dark Strider, and Fix-It PhantomStrider come together to save these abominable pieces of cartoon media! And seeing the clips from the worst cartoon episode videos from all those years ago, and now seeing all of these new characters, new editing, and even new animation for Nin for this new progression in the worst cartoon videos, just makes me all that much more happy, seeing how far Strider’s come as a content creator. Keep being awesome, Strider! 💖💖💕💕💕💕
Semi fun fact: for the bendy episode of fosters it was originally meant to be a full 22 minute episode but the creators were forced to cut it down to be around 11 minutes so they weren’t able to tell the full story they wanted for the episode which led to the awful ending and the episode being amongst the worst episodes in the series
@@Simipourfangirl not much is known about what it could have been, but the story would have most likely had ended with bendy finally be exposed for being the troublemaker and being punished for it.
A suggestion I made was Bloo and Bendy could’ve been friends but Bloo has to try to save the house and Mac when Bendy makes his biggest prank yet. We can show a montage or them getting along and joking with the other residents but when Bendy wants to make a prank harming Mac when he sees him, Bloo gets worried.
Same thing that happened to the goofball episode um make em up pals as well as that episode, goofball is going to meant to be a 30 year adult inpersonating a imaginary friend. However CN told them to changed goofball into a teenager ruining the episode as Lauren Faust. I feel bad for her as i appreciated all of her work in animation and especially her husbands 4 cartoons.
0:47 that *FOURTH damn chaos emerald* scene is pretty wholesome :3 edit: also the original sketches shown here and there look really true to the original source material!
I broke the sound barrier pressing on this video Also, love the different names for Lady Gaga XD (one of my favorite artists ever) Thank you so much for the video! Perfect for today before sing GxK As well, thank you for bringing Dark Strider into the equation!
I remember in Mr. Enter's review for Wishful Life he suggested Tootie being the one person who'd be better off with Timmy around, since while he doesn't reciprocate, her feelings for him are the only bright spot in a life where Vicky's her sister (and nuts to her being an anesthesiologist).
Alternate idea to fix "The Splinter": Spongebob has as accident at work and sprains his spatula hand, and rather than tell anyone and risk getting in trouble he keeps trying to work around/hide it. Eventually Mr. Krabs finds out and has no choice but to... give Spongebob time off to rest. As weird as it feels to rewrite an episode without including the titular splinter I think it's for the best. Not much to do with a splinter as an injury aside from the gross-out.
My rewrite for "So funny I forgot to laugh" would be let dora winifred (the villain of the whole franchise) be the bully, makes infinitely more sense. Also "Arthur's big hit" make sure dora winifred gets punished and eventually learn the importance of following directions and/or NOT destroying other people's property/lives
Here Are Some Cartoon Episodes I Feel Are Impossible To Fix: Love Loaf - Breadwinners Herpe The Love Sore - Family Guy 1 Night In Gottlieb - Allan Gregory American Fung - American Dad The Human Centipad - South Park Hired - 12 Oz Mouse Got Surgery - The Nutshack The Lair - Mr Pickles All This And Rabbit Stew - Looney Tunes
"American Fung" can be fixed like this: take out the dumb subplot with that Fung-Wa guy entirely, and have the CIA go to the mental hospital before they get lobotomies and have Stan and Francine released after explaining the situation. Then maybe Bullock could send them on vacation somewhere to properly celebrate their anniversary.
All this and rabbit stew actually wouldn’t be that bad without the blackface and stereotyping TBH. Also maybe the love loaf episode could’ve worked if instead of using the loaf to drug Jennie, he just thought it looked cute and wanted to give it to her as a gift? (And have him act less creepy about it).
I think darwin's words could still work if he was told by outside sources that what he thinks isn't healthy and it let's him learn that he should stand up. It would get a message of not being quiet in abusive relationships across while giving a reason for why Darwin would be in the relationship
For the Hey Arnold episode, Arnold did not tell everyone about Iggy's Bunny Suit pajamas. Sid and Stinky did. The problem with the ending is that Iggy didn't figure that out until after it was too late. How I would fix that episode is that I would have Iggy find out the truth sooner and that Sid and Stinky would get some comeuppance.
Yeah I definitely should've made that clearer that he accidentally tells Sid and Stinky. I agree they definitely should've got some comeuppance for it.
It just occurred to me that you could be a great writer. I was actually debating on making a rewritten series a while back of rewritting popular media, but never got to it. Thanks for inspiring me with this one. Also I love the new fluid animations with Nin.
Honestly, as much as it's fun to analyze and "fix" bad episodes. I say the existence of these bad episodes is important in their own right, it lets the creators, artists and writers know what went wrong and how they can improve next time. Thou of course there are probably better ways to do it, but hey you gotta try to see the positives in everything.
Here’s how I’d fix the South Park episode Stanley’s cup: still have the kindergarteners lose the hockey game, but have Randy beat up the hockey players after they harm the children. Also have the kid with cancer not die, instead have Stan go to the hospital and release that real hope doesn’t come from winning a sport, but at least trying to help…
Or maybe Stan has to help with hockey kids his age If you want the kindergartens, maybe make Kyle join with Stan, because Ike his little brother and one of the hockey players
So, about the Regular Show episode, I agree with Strider’s fixes and wanna add to it myself. When Mordecai and Rigby are worried about finishing their work to get the burgers, Benson says “Okay, guys, how about this? If you do your jobs, I’ll buy them myself. How’s that sound?” And this makes the duo motivated to finish their work for the day. Then, when they do finish, Benson has the burgers ready and rewards them, telling them to keep up the good work. As a regular show fan, I can say Benson is actually a good boss. He’s trying to teach Mordecai and Rigby how to be responsible adults and he has a nicer side. In another episode, the duo have been working harder and while they were a little rude in asking Benson for a raise, he recognises their hard work and says they’ll negotiate new wages later that week and gives them 20 bucks for their effort.
Hi Strider! Just wanted to say that your videos always brighten up my day! I've been watching for a while, and the videos kept me happy while I had Covid. I definitly like your rewrites, although some episodes I'd rather just erase completely [that first Family Guy one 🤮]. I've actually decided to try rewriting some bad cartoon episodes myself! First off is ALL of the Bob The Bulder reboot, Step One is keeping the original claymation designs, but in CGI form, as they did it for Ready, Steady, Build. Step Two is making new machines that are learning from the old machines, that way there is no character assassination, and also the new machines would not be as dumb as the reboot versions of old machines. Step Three is trying to keep the writing like the original. I'd also rewrite the episodes "Jollop To The Rescue", "Jollop Mixtures" and "Night Of The Sherbert Stars" from the obscure British cartoon Engie Benjy [which is usually a really good and sweet series, being like Bob The Builder but for mechanics]. Jollop To The Rescue keeps Jollop's jealously of his cousin Jelly, but Benjy assures Jollop that he still cares about him, and Jollop stops Jelly from giving the fizzy drink to Plane, and figures out a way to scare the hiccups out of Plane. Jollop Mixtures still has Jollop accidentally break the computer board, but Engie Benjy's friends are more understanding and less angry. Night Of The Sherbert Stars stays mostly the same, but Farmer Fred and Trucker Troy actually stop to try and help Benjy, while we actually find out why Jollop and Dan were angry at each other. Aside from those three episodes, I do recommend checking out Engie Benjy, as it's quite a fun show.
If you ever do this but with movies, then here are my two ideas: 1. "The Cat in the Hat" 2. "SCOOBY-DOO 2: MONSTERS UNLEASHED" These are two movies that had a lot of potential and a great plot concept, but were so horrifically botched up that many consider them to be the lowest form of entertainment. The reasons why are way too plentiful, so I won't be going into detail, but you may want to consider them. Good luck.
I dig the idea of Pearl being in charge of the Krusty Krab with Mr Krabs absent. She may have already done that in The Kuddly Krab, but being in defense of The Secret Formula, and unintentionally Scaring Plankton away, who tries to overcome his fear of whales, would have led to some great development for both characters.
Remember the creators of these cartoons don’t make episodes this bad on purpose, they are mostly by accident. There’s a lot that can go wrong behind the scenes for example with SpongeBob specifically seasons 6 through 8 they had less time to produce the episodes so they had to rush through animation, plot, voice acting etc
A particularly broken episode was the Peanuts special “Someday You’ll Find Her, Charlie Brown” Basically in the special, Charlie Brown falls in love with a girl he sees on TV, and then enlists Linus to help find her. Essentially, it’s stalking…. Even besides that, the characters are so botched. Charlie Brown makes Linus do all the dirty work because he’s too cowardly to do it himself. Then when they DO find the girl, it’s not even cathartic, because they make Linus so oblivious to Charlie Brown telling him that they found the right person, and Linus ends up with her. It ends up depressing.
You did Ren seeks help?! You brave soul. Thank you for talking this way about these though, never actually had a conversation about it. But I wanted to because wooooow....what does it take to write that? A product of a past era, it wasn't too long ago really.
Seahorse seashell party sounds like a 0/10 episode. The way you fixed it makes it sound like a 9/10 episode. (HONESTLY your change for the episode was awesome)
For "A Pal For Gary" i think that that the plot should be about Spongebob Finding a Perfect Pal For Gary and have a montage of Spongebob Looking for the different types of pets that might be perfect for Gary. That way, the episode might be educational for children because it includes the different Species in the ocean so the episode can be both enjoyable and educational.
The overworking message with that idea over the Splinter would have been interesting. The plot could be about the challenge Spongebob would have, because he loves his job so much that he cant stop himself from thinking about work or even subconsciously trying to fry patties by just habit or urge to, and thus someone could try to show him how to take breaks or meditate for a while and he comes back comedically a lot more laid back and more oblivious until he readjusts himself again.
33:20 I think maybe if it was say Muffy or Francine as the bully then it could have worked. Even Binky makes sense since he was a bully at times. Ira a small change but at least the main character isn’t bullying anyone
I have a few ideas on my own (that could be built on) for how some of these episodes could be fixed. For One Course Meal, the first part can be kept (the part where Plankton tries getting the formula and Spongebob and Mr. Krabs try stopping him) afterwards, similarly to what you said, Mr. Krabs could be removed after but what I would do is for Mr. Krabs deciding to go on a vacation due to him being tired of dealing with Plankton all the time and leave Pearl to cover for him (similar to what you said), Plankton would of course be scared, but also feel a anger and begin scheming since his family was killed by the whales and he wants revenge. Off screen (or on screen), Spongebob could warn Pearl about what Plankton tries to do, so that she is prepared to stop Plankton. There would be more here I could explain, but essentially, this removes a good portion of the problems in this episode. Stuck in the Wringer could be done different than it originally was in the episode as well. After being stuck, Spongebob would go to Sandy for help, but Patrick also finds out that Spongebob was stuck, so he decides to go help Spongebob as well (like actually TRY to help despite not being smart), and of course there could be some humor in some of the ideas Patrick has in mind and it would also show some of Sandy's ideas and eventually they free Spongebob from the wringer. There could be more explained, but this at least removes problems like Patrick being a terrible friend, and the townspeople being in the episode. For Splinter, you could actually keep the splinter, but remove the gross portions of it. Instead of all the gross stuff and "help" from Patrick, Spongebob could have a more difficult time making Krabby Patties and even have some pain because of the Splinter. Mr. Krabs would periodically check on Spongebob feeling like something is off, especially when his hardworking fry cook is taking a bit longer to get orders done and Spongebob denying that something is wrong. After some time, Mr. Krabs could eventually insist on finding out why Spongebob is struggling to make the Krabby Patties and eventually would find out why. So, Mr. Krabs decides to help out Spongebob and the splinter is pulled out. He could also tell Spongebob at the end of the episode that if Spongebob ever needs any help to not be afraid to ask him. More can be added in the episode obviously, but this removes the gross splinter problems, Patrick being dumb in the episode, and actually utilizes the splinter where it can become an obstacle while also there being a message at the end. Wishful Life could be done differently as well. Similarly to what you said, the alternate universe can be kept and there can be some characters doing better without Timmy (the bad people like Vicky, Crocker, Francis (or whatever the bully's name was), and other minor bad people we've seen) and the good people feeling worse without him (Cosmo and Wanda, Timmy's Parents, Timmy's friend group, and even minor characters like Chip Skylark). There could be showings of how life has been affected (I'll explain in a moment) and Timmy eventually feels bad as those people he cares about and have cared back are in a struggle because he's gone. Vicky could have improved as she wouldn't babysit as often and get away with being rude to kids on occasion. Crocker wouldn't be insane anymore and not believe in Fairy God Parents while working somewhere else that isn't a school. Francis would still bully kids but without Timmy there, he would become much more feared by students, even fearing some of the school staff. For good people, Cosmo and Wanda would be Fairy God Parents for another kid but it makes them feel pretty bored of their jobs and hoping something interesting can actually happen. Timmy's friend group wouldn't even be a friend group anymore as they have previously argued and disagreed a lot without Timmy stopping that from happening, and each of them would feel miserable without having any friends. Timmy's parents would be happy to be able to relax but deep down, they feel pretty bored without a child. Some minor characters could also be affected but I'll give a small example. Chip Skylark for instance would have lost his job, fame, and money as Timmy wasn't there to help him when his teeth get stolen and would end up homeless. Overall, it makes the effects a bit more realistic and have more of a real impact on the characters and remove bad elements like EVERYONE doing better without Timmy and it can actually make Timmy become more sympathetic after this since he actually had an impact on others and build more of his character. Again, more can be added to these episodes, but I wanted to bring some ideas out there that can at least slightly improve the episodes and remove the problems that were originally made in them.
Fun fact: even the voice actors did not like how one coarse meal turned out. It’s also rumored that Clancy Brown, the voice actor for Mr. Krabs, claimed to have felt uncomfortable reading his dialogue. And that really says something about this one.
I’d love to hear more from them about certain episodes because that says a lot.
Yeah, I remember Clancy Brown hated recording those lines in that episode.
I don't blame him,
This coming from a man who's voiced Lex Luthor is pretty concerning.
Where is the proof for this? This seems incredibly false.
Austistic or not, NOBODY should be given the feeling that they should have never been born. Especially children should be loved and appreciated unconditionally.
Absolutely.
True, but a lot of people even kids have questioned their worth before. Maybe not like Timmy.
I feel like the industry grossly misunderstands autism. With only 1 exception, none of the films or shows I’ve seen in my life portray Autism correctly (that one exception is the Temple Grandin biopic, even if it does dramatise a few things). They either portray autism as a curse, or as some superpower like in the disastrous movie The Predator 2018.
@@phantomstrider I had to take special education classes and called the r word all my life, that episode pissed me off and hurt terribly
@@girlscanbedrummers5449 That's terrible. I hate that word and think very little of people who use it. I'm so sorry you went through that in the day.
Most of the time Benson is actually a pretty decent boss, its just that Mordecai and Rigby are so lazy and incompetent that he genuinely gets pushed over the edge. That episode was a criminal case of flanderization if you ask me.
I think that's part of why people hated it so much. It was *way* out of character, on top of being generally... not okay.
@@Mudfire15Benson was not ooc in the episode at all. Mordecai and Rigby had been putting off doing all the chores in the park for the last week. Benson was pushed to his limit. We’ve seen him cocky and condescending before by the way. The pie episode for one.
Strider is known to dislike Regular Show, so I was surprised it even appeared on this list
@@ironrevenger9386 Yeah, but maybe he grew past that or something. I mean he talked about the Scooby Snacks in the 10 Cartoon Foods in real life video.
Where the the hell is the SpongeBob episode called A Pal 4 Gary on this list? That episode is by far the worst SpongeBob episode making all the other SpongeBob episodes on this list seem like good episodes.
The only funny thing in Stewie is Enceinte is:
Cleveland: Hey, I went by your house the other day. Is your baby pregnant?
Peter: I don't know. Lois is in charge of the kids.
I liked how one of stewie's babies, Finn, looks just like brian, but with human skin.
@@hannahmartin9705 Yeah he was actually ADORABLE. They could have kept little Finn and I might have been alright with that.
Plot twist: Bendy does his pranks, but it’s so specific and it does the opposite of what it’s meant for.
For example, Jumpscare prank backfires and cures Edwardo’s Hiccups and things like that regardless of how small or big it is, and either Bendy frustrated by all the backfired pranks doing the opposite exiles himself, or he becomes a more angsty spongebob and is continued to be used throughout the series
Really like this idea 😄 His pranks keep backfiring and doing good. Until he eventually gives up and exiles himself.
@@phantomstrider I dont think Darwin and Tina should be in love with Tina since Darwin is 8 and Tina is 14 but then again, Carrie is probably centuries older than Darwin since it's confirmed she had a boyfriend before Darwin who she dated for 2 decades eve though Carrie looks like a child.
Another fix idea for "A Pal For Gary": What if the new 'pet' explicitly has hypnotic powers that it uses to make spongebob obliviously loyal to it. We could add somebody else like Sandy or something who is watching it unfold, trying to reason with spongebob, and gradually getting more concerned. Finally, have spongebob snap out of it at the end and help get this creature out of his house?
This is from a fan of more action-oriented cartoons who hasn't seen the episode, so I don't know if its a good idea or not.
As someone who has seen the episode: I like this solution. Because honestly, this would explain why Spongebob treats Gary so poorly. Like he literally sees the pet trying to eat Gary and is yelling AT GARY for it like it's his fault.
I mean he's so neglectful it's literally mean and out of character. Even Patrick wouldn't be that oblivious. So for it to be something the new "pet" is doing - would help. Especially having someone trying to point it out to him and him being like "What? Fluffy? That's silly!" but when he sees Gary in trouble he finally snaps and saves his friend, apologizing to him the entire time and they work together to get the create out. Maybe Sandy or whoever else is there can help.
Heck I'd love to see the help be Squidward. Like at first amused "haha Spongebob's so dumb" but slowly gets concerned because he sees him mistreating or neglecting Gary and being like "Okay so something is wrong here" and maybe he gets Sandy who can burst in at the last minute and help them get the monster out and then she can be like "Actually Squidward told me." And Spongebob can be like "oh wow you do care!" and squidward can pretend not to but it could end on him smiling that things are back to normal.
It's actually a good idea. It would give a good reason for SpongeBob from being so oblivious to Gary.
@@Simipourfangirlyeah, have it that when some character is OOC, its clear that something is amiss.
It's a WONDERFUL idea. Somebody make it happen!
I made a video on that episode, my idea was to instead have Spongebob getting a worm instead of a monster, and have the fighting be more dogs vs cats.
I feel like One Course Meal would be 10x better if Pearl was made aware of what her dad was doing and tried helping Plankton overcome his fear. It'd be an interesting duo to explore
That's a great idea!
Plankton and Pearl having a dynamic is something I never knew I/we needed
@@XJIcequeen yeah but we need M O A R
A Plankton and Pearl team up would be more interesting.
I agree! That direction would’ve definitely fixed my biggest problem with the original episode, which was the weird continuity error of whales in Spongebob never being depicted as eating plankton until that episode. I mean, we see Pearl enthusiastically devouring normal food in that one episode where she has a growth spurt, so I highly doubt eating plankton is necessary for whale survival in the SpongeBob universe. The og episode’s conflict is extremely forced, and I think this rewrite would’ve remedied that. It would portray Plankton’s fear of whales as more irrational than anything, so he’s battling with his own perception with reality rather than being tortured by a very real thing that happens in nature constantly.
" i like wearing a stupid hat"- strider 😂😂
lol
Hilarious.😂
I love wearing a stupid orange shirt as well 🤣🤣
Aliens
Random af but that's what makes it funny
For the hey Arnold one, I think it would also be great if the students still laugh at them, however Arnold and Iggy can’t hear them from the fun they’re having on stage.
The students see it as some kind of comedy routine while Iggy and Arnold are dancing and having fun.
One episode I think would be easy to fix is "Spongebob Your Fired". Keep the fact that krabs wants sponge bob gone to save money, but change how he does it. Have Krabs show more care and suggest Spongebob to look for better employment by saying something like"You've got alot of talent that's wasted here". Then have spongebob try out some jobs, throw in some comedy and then have him come back to Krabs saying something like "I enjoy this job, so I I'll stay" and Krabs accepting it whilst silently sulking because he did save that extra money.
What do you think?
Nah, that seems out-of-character for Mr. Krabs. I feel like a better option would be the Krusty Krab isn’t making the money is use to so Mr. Krabs has no choice but to fire SpongeBob. That way they can make use of the scene where SpongeBob makes his own snail food that Gary actually likes and when Mr. Krabs hires him back, SpongeBob makes more of the snail food to bring business back up for the Krusty Krab.
Sure, Benson might not be the nicest boss in the universe, but I’d honestly take him over a boss like Mr. Krabs ANY day of the week
He is a very nice boss to those that actually do their work. Like,he's always showing his appreciation for his good employees,like taking them out for a nice dinner and stuff like that. Mordecai and Rigby are awful employees,so they don't get that treatment.
Benson is like the best boss ever ❤
As long as you aren’t like Mordecai and Rigby
@@ironrevenger9386 you got that right 👍
Same here. Benson is just a strict boss most of the time but’s still a decent guy and wants the best for you. Heck even when he is mean, outside of the episode mentioned in the vid, he still isn’t cruel like Krabs can be. Plus he’ll actually pay which is something Krabs isn’t likely to do unless given incentive (or forced to do by inflicting or threatening bodily harm onto him)
"Arthur's Big Hit" - Instead of the dad telling Arthur he now knows how D.W. felt after he hit her, the dad and mom should've been scolding D.W. for breaking Arthur's model plane.
He told her repeatedly to not touch it, she didn't listen, and most kids can only get so frustrated before they lash out, either through actions or words.
It could've easily been made into teaching kids the lesson, "Listen to what others are telling you," instead of, "Don't hit, because someone else might hit you."
PLus Arthur went EASY on DW comapred to Wendy beaten up Cartmna or Quagmire beating uo Brain
Oh yes, Arthur should have been punished for hitting his sister, not saying he didn't deserve a punishment. I just hate how that story is framed as if to imply we should feel sorry for D.W. getting hit, but not Arthur.
@@labyrinthgirl17 why it's not like DW lost a tooth or her arm broke it was one hit not a beat down
@@nicholassims9837 Why what?
@@labyrinthgirl17 why should he be punish when it wasnt a brutal beat down siblings hit each other all the time.
I think "It's a Wishful Life" would be so much better if everyone's lives seem better on the surface but secretly feel empty or unfulfilling. AJ could go on to college early but is bullied a lot for being so young and naive. Chester could still have Cosmo and Wanda but we see why, going into his family dynamic or find his life is boring if he gets everything he wants. And the bully (i forget his name) could be a quarterback but he is prone to injuries and is constantly going to the hospital and, as such, is in debt. That level of nuance could be a more intriguing take and would justify Jorgan's take and Timmy would earn the ending where he changes Jorgan's mind.
That would be better. Oh and the bullies name is Francis (I do believe)
@@Simipourfangirlit is Francis, great job (:
@phantomstrider, Also this episode is banned the reason for the the wrong morals lesson for the review.
@@XJIcequeen Like, if anyone should have gotten the fairies in Timmy's absence, Tootie is the only logical choice. Why give them to Chester?
I saw what was going to be at number 1, and instantly wanted to know how you would fix it. You took the piece of cartoon media you hate the most, and instead of drawing more attention to how bad it is, you managed to somewhat fix it, and i really like that.
He didn’t really fix it though. He made it an overtly serious episode of Bojack Horseman instead of an episode of Ren and Stimpy.. the show is supposed to be fucked up.
I loved how he recreated that head thump; it was pretty funny. On top of that, the whole vid felt fresh & nostalgic simultaneously, especially with how Strider can now go back & forth between himself & Dark Strider now!
@@voiceunderthecoversTo be fair, as far as I'm aware, this IS the darkest & most messed up episode of Adult Party, so Strider most likely prioritized fixing the messed up elements by treating them with care & respect.
As far as I know, yes, Adult Party Cartoon as a whole was kinda just an unfunny mess that had jacked up stuff. Unfortunately, at least in this context & only this context, I haven't seen any of the episodes nor have I any info on them outside of the fact that it's painfully gross & unfunny with an absolute piece of crap creator, to put it lightly; however, I do at least have the basic idea of just bettering the humor & having some of it appropriately sprinkled into the rewritten version of Ren Seeks Help.
TL;DR: Strider focused on fixing what was horrendously botched in the episode as opposed to making fit in as Ren & Stimpy - or Adult Party for that matter.
I like the idea of Meg moving out and doing her own thing. While lately the writers have been treating her character than they have done i just know it isn't gunna last. So i'd love Meg to move out and actually show her doing well without her family, and her friendship with Bruce is wholesome as hell too so i'd love to see more of that.
that might make for a better spinoff series than The Cleveland Show tbh
I feel that it isn't gonna last long either, tbh.
I know Family Guy can’t do other full-length episode parodies of other blockbusters due to a lot of major film corporations being overprotective when it comes to the rights of their IPs, but I’d do an episode parodying Raiders of the Lost Ark but with Meg taking the role of leading lady and love interest Marion Ravenwood just to get some well-deserved payback for her father putting her in minor roles as aliens in the Star Wars parody episodes. I can imagine in the scene recreating Marion punching Indy, Meg saying, “THAT’S for putting me in minor roles in your Star Wars Original Trilogy retelling and not giving me any lines!”
@@hunterolaughlin Yes. Hell freakin' yes to this. Oh and as a callback to when Stewie pulled her heart out she could do it to Peter...cause i can't see her doing it back to Stewie...just for the hell of it. As i'm pretty sure that was taken from Temple of Doom if memlory serves.
15:32 An idea that I had for how to fix The Wringer would be to more or less make it a bottle episode. Have Spongebob be stuck in the wringer and unable to detach it from the floor. Fortunately, Gary manages to call Sandy for help, unfortunately she cannot figure out how to get him out immediately and has to leave to create something that will save Spongebob. Thus, while Sandy is out trying various inventions (possibly with mixed results), Spongebob has to figure out how to do various things like brushing his teeth or getting a drink of water while still stuck in the wringer. Ultimately, Sandy would figure out how to get him out, but maybe by that point he is so used to doing things while in the wringer that he has forgotten how to do them normally and the episode ends with him comically messing up a basic task and both he and Sandy laughing about it.
“Guess who’s back? Back again?”
-Ren Seeks Help and DarkStrider
Honestly, Arnold betrays Iggy could've been fixed simply by delving into why Iggy was wearing bunny pajamas. Perhaps he wears them because they were the last gift he got from his grandma before she passed away and the episode ends with him confessing that. That would've ended things with both Arnold and Iggy being in a likeable position
This is really in the spirit of what the show would do too.
@phantomstrider, if I remember correctly lggy is no longer a main character in Hey Arnold because the infamous episode.
“Arnold Betrays Iggy” is a prime example of what not to do to a background character when he/she is given a major role.
Surprisingly, “My Leg” did this “Background character with a major role” much better in my opinion. Tell me what do you think down below.
They
Background characters are in the background for a reason,just keep them there and nobody gets hurt.
I’ve always had the idea of Meg officially moving out of the Griffin household after Seahorse Seashell Party for a long time time. The writers had a golden opportunity to take advantage of Meg’s character and have her be more than just the 'butt of the joke' considering that’s how her character has always been since Season 4. It could have been a continuous arc in the show where we see how both the lives of Meg and the Griffin family function without one another. We were robbed of great storytelling.
I'm actively really happy & stimming rn thank you so much for doing this idea!! Some of these choices are giving me a lot of nostalgia from your older vids!!
I am too 😁
Tbh, the burger episode is not a good indicator of who Benson is as a character, he's usually far more likeable imo. Also, I kinda get where he's coming from? Like, the episode said that the chorse Mordecai and Rigby had to do were the chores they'd put off doing throughout the entire week. It's a self-inflicted backlog, and Benson was frustrated and fed up with their slacking. Doesn't help that they were giving him attitude about it when he called them out.
You still don't eat someone's food, no matter what they did, that's a big jerk move.
I think an episode that does something similar to “The Best Burger In The World” but done right, is the Chowder episode “Mahjong Night” where Chowder is really tempted to eat Mevilled Eggs that were made for Mung’s Wife Truffles’ game night with her friends. Mung promises Chowder that he can eat all the Mevilled Eggs he wants tomorrow, but Chowder is so excited that he can’t fall asleep. He basically spends the entire episode trying to get some Mevilled Eggs from Truffles. At the end of the episode, Chowder accidentally helps Truffles win her game, and offers him a Mevilled Egg as a reward, only for Chowder to taste one and say they’re disgusting. Also the stuff that happens in the episode is pretty funny. I won’t give too much away. Go watch it for yourself.
Also I should mention that that episode was completely out of character for Benson, as while he was always painted as a strict boss with anger issues, he genuinely cared for Mordecai and Rigby’s well being and wanted them to be happy. Also, Pops would have probably been the one to tell them that they didn’t want to get their hopes up.
@@t918thebladeOh well, at least Benson got what he deserved in Death Sandwich.
@@t918theblade Chowder is goated in my household
For the fairly odd parents one, there's something I haven't seen anyone mention. Chester. He doesn't have fairies in the main show but in "It's a Wishful Life", he does. Wouldn't that mean he's finally miserable enough WITHOUT TIMMY he needs fairies? Maybe because timmy isn't there, AJ isn't friends eith Chester and he's super lonely.
I know it'd be a bit more basic plot line wise but I'm surprised I haven't seen anyone mention that.
Yeah that would've been really good too
@@XJIcequeen But then they couldn't have had Timmy wish for the entire world to not age for like decades out of his anger towards his entire existence being harmful to everyone. We can't have Timmy learning to be nice and such!
“You’re more horrible than Megan Fox’s acting in Transformers!” Alfred Hitchcock
I don’t remember much about her acting, but I don’t remember her acting being that bad.
Did he actually say that or was that just an ERB line?
Its all about mother f**king money!
@@OrangePikmin-cv9uiit's just an ERB line
@@OrangePikmin-cv9ui it’s an ERB line.
I've got some alternative fixes for some of these episodes:
In "Arnold Betrays Iggy", we could've had Arnold revealing Iggy's secret not knowing why it's a secret and everyone makes fun of Iggy for it, much to Arnold's shock. Arnold then stands up for Iggy in order to atone for his mistake and lift the shame and embarrassment that Iggy feels. In the end, the people making fun of Iggy either back off or get put in their place, Arnold learns to be more careful with revealing things to other people and Iggy learns to own his "embarrassing" traits and not be ashamed of them.
"The Girlfriend" would've been so much better if only for the message of staying quiet had been later corrected, as Jamie only gets worse and worse, forcing Gumball and/or Darwin to either stand up to her or get help, a very daunting task that thankfully results in Jamie getting put in her place. The message finally being that situations like this can be dangerous and scary to try and get out of, but things won't get any better if you stay.
"It's a Wishful Life" could be improved by revealing that Jorgen Von Strangle was LYING about absolutely everyone else's lives being better off without Timmy and he just wanted to torment the poor boy from the start, resulting in TImmy having to stand up to Jorgen as well as the ingrates he tried to help only to be mistreated in return. In the end it would be revealed Timmy's existence has bettered some peoples' lives after all, whether or not they actually realise it and the message is something along the lines of "If you're feeling unappreciated, you can still take solace in the fact that some people's lives are better off because of you and what you've done, even if no one seems to realise that.".
I think that at the end of Family Guy's 'Seahorse Seashell Party' Meg should move out, but only for the episode. At the end Peter and Lois apologise to her, promise to stop treating her like trash, and she then forgives them and moves back in. And after that episode, they do stop treating her like trash, and instead treat her like they did in the first two seasons (they weren't horrible to her back then).
I think people like phantom strider should be writers for tv shows :) these ideas are way more exiting and genuine.
Haven't seen Dark Strider in a while, It's great we got to see him back again!
My idea for fixing One Coarse Meal is to have Plankton discover Krabs' ruse much earlier in the episode (before all the paranoia and suicide parts), and do some research to discover Krabs' fears. The episode then becomes an arms race between the two to exploit each other's fears and scare them the hardest. It will be a much less one-sided conflict, but Krabs will ultimately come out on top, though not in an overly cruel or dark way.
Omg that sounds awesome ngl
For One Coarse meal, I think all it needed to do was instead of SpongeBob finding Plankton on the street, it was Mr. Krabs that found him that way. Krabs realizes what he’s been doing is wrong and swallows his pride later that night when he comes back to seemingly torture Plankton but instead confirms he wasn’t trying to eat Plankton, rather his Chum. It then ends with Plankton relieved of his fears and everything goes back to normal
I know how to fix a pal for Gary!
Make Puffy Fluffy just want to give Gary a hug, but he doesn't know how to express it, so Spongebob teaches Puffy Fluffy.
@XJIcequeen
Ooh, yeah. That's good too, I think that's important.
Of course! Most autistic people like myself are uncomfortable with certain social or intimate gestures like hugs, so this could be a teaching moment for both of them. The trouble would then be getting Puffy Fluffy to stop hugging Gary
That's actually a cute idea for this episode.
There’s actually a season 4 episode of the original Ren and Stimpy that is somewhat similar to your fix called Ren Needs Help where Stimpy calls a Mental Hospital after finding out that Ren is losing his mind and being self destructive. Ren later finds some other patients who have similar mental illnesses and phobias as Ren and relates to them.
s4 but i agree
Yeah and that ep ends with Ren getting lobotomized and being forced into a government conspiracy lol. There is no possible good ending for this story in either interpretation.
Now this sounds like a great idea! Fixing the worst episodes in Cartoon Shows sounds great! It'll make the episodes much better and not mean spirited or boring at all. Also you actually talked about Regular Show Episodes this time!😁👍🏻
Regular Show was definitely a surprise, as Strider bashed it in the past
@@ironrevenger9386 Yeah! I know! I saw the video about his opinion of Regular Show, maybe he's willing to give it a chance this time.
@@rainbowtoyfunrandomess1982 If there’s a part 2 of this which there very well should be, then “Think Positive” definitely makes the cut
@@ironrevenger9386 Think Positive? Why?
@@rainbowtoyfunrandomess1982 Pops wanted Benson to control his anger. Mordecai and Rigby caught on, so they kept annoying him purposefully. Pops uncharacteristically ignored that and fired Benson after one last outburst
My thoughts on Bendy, He just never existed. Bloo sees him, but he's just delusional from sleep or something. The house still becomes a mess, and the blame is there on the now non-existent Bendy.
@phantomstrider, you got that right about Bendy he the one of absolute worst character in cartoon Network history I hope the creator learn them lesson for there mistakes 🙏🏻
23:25 I'd actually like it if Benson tried the burgers and got food poisoning because the truck people saw the injustice towards Mordecai and Rigby, so he purposely undercooked Benson's burger as punishment, then gave both Mordecai and Rigby a free burger
That's a great idea!
@@phantomstrider keep up the great videos man! Remember to take breaks when needed and don't overwork yourself💙
It wouldn’t make any sense for them to give a fk about the conflict between mordecai and rigby and benson
@@Beast_the_smash_guyActually, Benson did got what he deserved in Death Sandwich.
You know it really bothers me that in the stuck in the wringer episode, the way Spongebob got out of the wringer was by crying his way out. Why tf didn't the glue from the wringer dissolved when Spongebob got outside? They live in the freaking ocean!
Never question SpongeBob logic, it will save you the head ache.
Theirs fire in the ocean, wind, and even water under the sea in the series… It’s not that weird to have tears wash glue away lol
How did it work at all if it's water soluble
Animation logic like in the road runner Wiley coyote shorts that gravity only works when you look down
@jakedebruin2246 Hey of were underwater, how could there be....?
*Fire goes out*
Wow, Phantom and DarkStrider’s bond is closer than ever! He can transform at will! No more thunder, rain, and lightning.
This video was actual really good. Someone that can rewrite and fix a worst bad episodes into decent good ones.
Did anyone notice this in SpongeBob?
(1) Karen went from a computer screen to having a whole robotic body without anyone noticing.
(2) The show never hints if Pearl was adapted or if Mr. Krabs married a whale.
For the first one, I always just sort of imagined that she can transfer herself between the big screen and the robot body as per Plankton's needs
People did notice the first one. All spongebob superfans know that body was introduced in the movie
A theory says that Mr Krabs DID marry a whale, But died after Pearls Birth.
Same I know
Plankton is so lonely he has to build himself a wife.
Sweet! The category I voted for was chosen!
Here's my idea for fixing SpongeBob's infamous "A Pal For Gary" episode.
SpongeBob misunderstands Gary by thinking he's lonely. He gets an idea from the other residents of Bikini Bottom who have been given cute pets by a con woman that hypnotizes everyone. SpongeBob is lured in by its cuteness when in fact it's in cahoots with the con woman who uses it to brainwash the masses and make them their servants. The cute pet manipulates SpongeBob into thinking that Gary is terrible, so he throws Gary out but realizes at the last minute (through a quick montage of memory clips) that Gary would never do terrible things. SpongeBob and Gary reconcile and then gather up animal characters from previous episodes (Mystery the Seahorse, No Name the Blue Jellyfish, Junior the (now adult) Scallop, Snelly and Rocky from The Great Snail Race episode, and the partying jellyfish and dolphins) to help the brainwashed crowds see sense with their own cuteness by wearing costumes. With the con woman and her cute pets defeated and arrested, SpongeBob learns to listen to Gary more often, while Mr. Krabs makes more money selling action figures of the heroic animals.
Endgame Wishes.
*A pal for Gary (and a sense of right.)*
The new One Coarse Meal actually sounds like a banger :)
I think the biggest issue with Arnold Betrays Iggy is that we never learned why Iggy has pajamas.
Hey PhantomStrider! It’s rare that I’ve been early on any of your videos at all. Even though my comment would probably get buried in the comment section, I wanna say some stuff about your channel.
First of all, thank you for making a lot of videos, no matter whether it’s about anything from the animation media, legos, restaurants or anything related to food/drinks, I would usually put any of your videos on to listen to them while I’m either working, playing video games or even drawing! Second of all, I’ve been watching your content since 2016 (or 2017? I’m not exactly sure), and I’m happy to see you improve and grow throughout the years, while I’m excited to learn more neat facts about yourself as well as Australia! And third of all, I don’t know if you’re also planning to retire this year, but I still hope that you can still make to fulfill your heart’s content, even if it’s not on your main channel anymore. If you’re still planning to retire, I’m sad to see you go, but I hugely respect that you wanna take care of yourself as well as spending more time with the ones you love. Besides, thanks for the memories, and fingers crossed to see you reach one million subscribers! 🤞B)
Spongebob definitely has more than 3 episodes that are worth fixing. But we only have so much time for one list.
Yeah. I definitely could've covered 10 of them 😄 But in the polls they requested I cover all the cartoons even if I miss some. If this video doesn't bomb, I'd definitely consider doing fixing worst spongebob :)
@@XJIcequeen It definitely would've been nice to cover. It's a real shame this vid bombed 😆 I might do it as a member vid sometime instead.
Alpha Jay basically did this concept but it would be interesting to see Phantom Striders consept.
Fun fact: the voice actor of bendy in foster home was Jeff Bennett, same voice actor of Johnny Bravo, dexter dad in dexter laboratory, ace in the powerpuff girls, hamster in stitch the movie, monkey boy in samurai jack, mole in modifyers pilot, choose ghoose in adventure time, hi five ghost in regular show, raj and Samson in camp lazlo, and finally joker in 2008 Batman bravo and the bold.
With how much hate bendy gets, I'm surprised that's still on his voice acting page.
How I'd fix Seahorse Seashell Party: After the "Lightning Rod" conversation, Meg gets a call from a college advisor she emailed. Dr Daria Morgendorfer calls to check on her application, gets a trauma dump and tells her that
1) If one person is the lightning rod, nobody changes.
2.) She's so close to leaving Rhode Island and going away to college.
Also, have Joe FINALLY know about the abuse in the Griffin household. I feel like he lets it slide far too much.
I loved this! I love how much you had fun with it and the fun back and forth between you and your shadow side
I actually like the idea of having One Coarse Meal be a sequel episode to Patty Hype where after the citizens of Bikini Bottom drove Mr Krabs out of town, Pearl takes over as a temporary boss until Mr Krabs gets his act together while also integrating Plankton's fear of whales without having Mr Krabs be the one to torment him for weeks. Who knows? We can finally see Plankton over come his fear of whales instead of getting himself ran over by a bus, i would definitely give this One Coarse Meal rewrite a 7/10.
I love how you fixed these episodes, Strider! I especially like the Spongebob and Hey Arnold ones. I've been considering re-writing bad episodes myself. On a different note, I have become obsessed with classic tv channel bumpers, they are very interesting. Especially for defunct channels like Britan's CITV. Speaking of CITV, I recently discovered the Engie Benjy show and I adore it, I wish they brought Engie Benjy to America like they did with Bob The Builder and Thomas The Tank Engine.
For The Splinter, have Spongebob be knocked out and have a surreal dream about his last moments with the splinter, which is sentient in his dream.
This was a fun video, Strider! And it's inspired me to rewrite some bad cartoon episodes too! First off, I would rewrite THE ENTIRITY of the Bob The Builder reboot, starting with keeping the original claymation/stop motion designs while updating them to CGI. Second, I would introduce new machines, which would be the ones making mistakes, but none as dumb as in the actual reboot, and the old machines would help the new machines out. Third, I'd try to keep the writing for the reboot similar to the original Bob The Builder. I'd also rewrite bad episodes from good cartoons, such as three episodes of Engie Benjy: Jollop To The Rescue, Jollop Mixtures, and Night Of The Sherbert Stars. Jollop To The Rescue: Jollop would still be jealous of his cousin Jelly, but Benjy would figure out quickly what was wrong and actually talk to Jollop about that. Jollop would also stop Jelly from giving Plane the orange fizzy drink [which worsened Plane's hiccups] and would figure out another way to get rid of Plane's hiccups. Jollop Mixtures: While Jollop still broke the computer board, he and Dan come clean to Benjy about it, and Engie Benjy's friends don't get angry at him for making mistakes like in the OG episode. Night Of The Sherbert Stars stays mostly the same, but Trucker Troy [Engie Benjy's cousin] and Farmer Fred actually try to help Benjy, and we find out WHY Jollop and Dan were mad at each other. But aside from the aforementioned three bad episodes, I think Engie Benjy is a delightful show, and I cannot recommend it enough! It also has a ton of fun dry British humor.
Dec does the voice of Engie Dosen't ahe
@@jacobjcb8883 Yes.
I love watching my favorite youtubers when i'm dying of a cold
Hope you get better soon! 🙏
@lenindominguez1986is that a threat
@lenindominguez1986huh
@lenindominguez1986 I couldn’t understand what u were saying
@lenindominguez1986 right?
Here's how I would fix what is considered the worst episode of Caillou:
The story would start with a cold morning. Snow is covering the road and nothing is happening. In the start,we are shown that the gramma and her grandchildren (which tjey normally started the old episodes) are snowed in. While the gramma is quite happy for taking care of her grandchildren (being their babysitter), the kids are annoyed,as TV is out because the snowstorm that brought all that snow broke the antenna of their house and since their old snow clothes don't fit them anymore and they don't even have other snow clothes,so they can't even play on the snow.
The gramma decides to bring them something to keep their minds off the fact they can't watch cartoons on the TV or make snowmen, so he gives them some cookies, hot cocoa and decides to read a story - Big Brother Caillou.
The story starts with Caillou playing in his room with his good ol' train set, in his own world, with not a care in the world. We do see a small scene where Caillou is imagining being the train conductor, altought that scene doesn't last for long,as the doorbell rings. Caillou sees his dad and mother going down the stairs as fast as they could, so Caillou gets curious what is happening and goes down along side his parents, as Caillou is imagining who could be at the door, from something as comom (maybe he imagines it is his gramma going to babysit him) to more fantastical (Maybe he thinks it is an astrounaut).
He tries to go as down the stairs should as fast as he could (altought because he knows he can't run down and the fact he has short legs, he isn't that fast). His parents bring inside their home a huge box that the mailman brought. Caillou goes to the box and thinks it is a gift for him for his birthday, altought his mother remembers him that his birthday was 3 months ago. Caillou keeps trying to figure out who was the box for, until his Dad tells him a suprise for him - He is gonna get a sister and the box has a crib inside of it. While most kids wouldn't like it or would be excited to getting a sibling,but oddly enough, Caillou doesn't seem to have an opinion about it. He doesn't seem to see any good or bad on having a sister,so his parents tell him that when he gets a sister, he will have someone to play and have sone fun. Caillou doesn't seem to change much his mind,but after some months, when Rosie is born, he instantly loves his sister.
Like the title says, during the episode, Caillou tries to be a good big brother,but keeps failling due to what he tries due to Rosie's age and his methods. For instance: Caillou would see the baby toys Rosie has and thinks she wouldn't like them,so he decides to give her some of his old toys for her, altought it is clear his toys aren't for Rosie's age (Like he gives him a robot toy that is the size of Rosie or a Nerf gun) or how Rosie can't stop crying, so Caillou dresses himself as a clown and tries to cheer her up,but it gives the opposite effect he was trying to achive due ti scaring the little baby.
After many and many attempts to be a good big brother, Caillou gives up, because no matter what he does, he can't seem to help take care of Rosie,making him sad and go to his room to cry. His mother goes to his room and she tells him that he is a good brother,but he needs to understand her age and what he thinks it would be good for his sister isn't always going to work. The mother says that case is similar to when Gilbert was a kitten: When he was a kitten, he needed to drink milk out of a baby bottle and how it was hard to make the kitten get used to their family,but older Gilbert doesn't have those problems anymore.
Caillou's mother tells him that since Rosie is a newborn, he should hear his parents and what he should do if he can even do something and,when Rosie grows up, Caillou could use the ideas he tried to use in the episode and they might have a different effect (maybe when she grows up, she is gonna like clowns or would like to receive Caillou's old toys), but for now, he has to understand her age and let his parents take care out of stuff before he can act. Caillou accepts this idea and,in the end, he finally makes Rosie happy by holding her in his arms (with his parents looking out for them) and kissing her on the forehead.
Meanwhile,the gramma manages to buy time enough so her daugther can return with Take Out food for her,the grandchilren and gramma, so the episode ends with them having a good lunch.
(I know it isn't as good as this other ideas in this video,but I liked doing this.)
Arnold Betrays Iggy was definitely hard to watch, and your ideas on how to fix it sound way, way better. Like, I understand that Iggy wanted to maintain a reputation, but I also agree that it would've sent a better message if he learned to embrace his bunny pajamas or any other embarrassing secret of his. Plus, it wasn't actually Arnold's fault that the secret came out, as instead, Sid and Stinky simply guessed it.
16:46 That joke feels like something The Red Guy from Cow and Chicken would've done.
23:57 Arnold actually doesn't reveal Iggys secret; the bullies guess it, which is stupid. Just though you ought to know, Strider, since I think your interpretation of events is a little skewed towards Arnold being the antagonist.
That’s true. When I saw a review of the episode, near the end when Arnold was going to get humiliated, Iggy over heard Sid and Stinky mentioning that Arnold was innocent and they were the ones that spread the secret around.
I don’t know if he misremembered that detail (it can be easy to miss out on small details, I know I miss on details a lot), but that entire episode assassinated Iggy’s character into ashes.
I am so glad someone else pointed this out because it kinda got on my nerves and I dunno why.
True. I definitely should've made that clearer. As technically Arnold's peer-pressured into accidentally revealing info for them to guess it.
@@phantomstriderIts alright, Strider. I actually think your fix it for this episode was a lot funnier!
Love the hand-drawn artwork and the suggestions! As an artist and cartoon fan(and fanwork creator at that), I love this kind of brainstorming exercise. The fact that there's 14 spots only makes it better! Awesome video as always, your videos never fail to make my day.
Fun Fact: “Stewie is Enceinte” is the last Family Guy episode to air on Adult Swim.
A little late to this video but Stride you are killing it with these uploads even moreso recently. Loved this video.
Also, at 4:33 Nin's animation and delivery was so spot on 😂
Thanks! Sadly, it bombed so I'll probably skip cartoons for a while, but it's nice to get a little feedback on some of those extra details Nin and I put into this one 🙂
Yeah, Benson can be harsh at times in Regular Show. But the more you watch it, the more relatable he becomes, especially to adults. However, this episode is definitely him at his worst in my opinion. But I'm surprised that this episode of Regular Show was recommended instead of 'Think Positive'. I always thought that one was everyone's least favorite Regular Show episode.
It felt great to watch all of Josh, Nin, Dark Strider, and Fix-It PhantomStrider come together to save these abominable pieces of cartoon media!
And seeing the clips from the worst cartoon episode videos from all those years ago, and now seeing all of these new characters, new editing, and even new animation for Nin for this new progression in the worst cartoon videos, just makes me all that much more happy, seeing how far Strider’s come as a content creator.
Keep being awesome, Strider!
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Semi fun fact: for the bendy episode of fosters it was originally meant to be a full 22 minute episode but the creators were forced to cut it down to be around 11 minutes so they weren’t able to tell the full story they wanted for the episode which led to the awful ending and the episode being amongst the worst episodes in the series
I wonder what the full story was then. Could it have saved him from being the most hated cartoon network character?
@@Simipourfangirl not much is known about what it could have been, but the story would have most likely had ended with bendy finally be exposed for being the troublemaker and being punished for it.
A suggestion I made was Bloo and Bendy could’ve been friends but Bloo has to try to save the house and Mac when Bendy makes his biggest prank yet. We can show a montage or them getting along and joking with the other residents but when Bendy wants to make a prank harming Mac when he sees him, Bloo gets worried.
Same thing that happened to the goofball episode um make em up pals as well as that episode, goofball is going to meant to be a 30 year adult inpersonating a imaginary friend. However CN told them to changed goofball into a teenager ruining the episode as Lauren Faust. I feel bad for her as i appreciated all of her work in animation and especially her husbands 4 cartoons.
@@UltimateDragonX9999Me 2.
0:47
that *FOURTH damn chaos emerald* scene is pretty wholesome :3
edit: also the original sketches shown here and there look really true to the original source material!
I broke the sound barrier pressing on this video
Also, love the different names for Lady Gaga XD (one of my favorite artists ever)
Thank you so much for the video! Perfect for today before sing GxK
As well, thank you for bringing Dark Strider into the equation!
Now this is something I look forward to for future videos
You may have gone on a journey, but you did pretty good!! These sound like fun ideas!!!
12:19 OH MY GOD HELL NO, NOT CAILLOU!
32:28 AND “Ren Seeks Help”?! THE HORROR!!
caillou was a well behaved person in season 4 and 5
I remember in Mr. Enter's review for Wishful Life he suggested Tootie being the one person who'd be better off with Timmy around, since while he doesn't reciprocate, her feelings for him are the only bright spot in a life where Vicky's her sister (and nuts to her being an anesthesiologist).
What about Mark Chang?
@@MrTimshellscherber Depends if this episode was before or after he started living on Earth.
@@justinpullen1097 Good point.
Alternate idea to fix "The Splinter": Spongebob has as accident at work and sprains his spatula hand, and rather than tell anyone and risk getting in trouble he keeps trying to work around/hide it. Eventually Mr. Krabs finds out and has no choice but to... give Spongebob time off to rest.
As weird as it feels to rewrite an episode without including the titular splinter I think it's for the best. Not much to do with a splinter as an injury aside from the gross-out.
Phenomenal work there mate
Putting extra effort to rewrite
My rewrite for "So funny I forgot to laugh" would be let dora winifred (the villain of the whole franchise) be the bully, makes infinitely more sense.
Also "Arthur's big hit" make sure dora winifred gets punished and eventually learn the importance of following directions and/or NOT destroying other people's property/lives
For Its a Wishful Life: it completely doesn't make sense that they never mention Tootie. Especially considering what she does in Channel Chasers
Here Are Some Cartoon Episodes I Feel Are Impossible To Fix:
Love Loaf - Breadwinners
Herpe The Love Sore - Family Guy
1 Night In Gottlieb - Allan Gregory
American Fung - American Dad
The Human Centipad - South Park
Hired - 12 Oz Mouse
Got Surgery - The Nutshack
The Lair - Mr Pickles
All This And Rabbit Stew - Looney Tunes
"American Fung" can be fixed like this: take out the dumb subplot with that Fung-Wa guy entirely, and have the CIA go to the mental hospital before they get lobotomies and have Stan and Francine released after explaining the situation. Then maybe Bullock could send them on vacation somewhere to properly celebrate their anniversary.
All this and rabbit stew actually wouldn’t be that bad without the blackface and stereotyping TBH. Also maybe the love loaf episode could’ve worked if instead of using the loaf to drug Jennie, he just thought it looked cute and wanted to give it to her as a gift? (And have him act less creepy about it).
breadwinners was the og brainrot
I think darwin's words could still work if he was told by outside sources that what he thinks isn't healthy and it let's him learn that he should stand up. It would get a message of not being quiet in abusive relationships across while giving a reason for why Darwin would be in the relationship
Gumball did try to do that in the episode, it just sadly didn't get through to him.
For the Hey Arnold episode, Arnold did not tell everyone about Iggy's Bunny Suit pajamas. Sid and Stinky did. The problem with the ending is that Iggy didn't figure that out until after it was too late.
How I would fix that episode is that I would have Iggy find out the truth sooner and that Sid and Stinky would get some comeuppance.
Yeah I definitely should've made that clearer that he accidentally tells Sid and Stinky. I agree they definitely should've got some comeuppance for it.
21:00 Honestly, great idea. The show's no stranger to endings like this so it's pretty fitting.
PhantomStrider: Let's go to the Honorable Mentions.
Super Vector: More like Dishonorable Mentions.
0:45 My Grandma trying to find the remote she has in her hands be like
Fun Fact: SpongeBob's voice actor Tom Kenny hates the episode The Splinter.
It's not fun getting splinters, so it can't be that fun to pretend having one, let alone an infected one! 🤢
Also Mr. Krabs's voice actor hates One Coarse Meal
It just occurred to me that you could be a great writer. I was actually debating on making a rewritten series a while back of rewritting popular media, but never got to it. Thanks for inspiring me with this one. Also I love the new fluid animations with Nin.
Honestly, as much as it's fun to analyze and "fix" bad episodes. I say the existence of these bad episodes is important in their own right, it lets the creators, artists and writers know what went wrong and how they can improve next time. Thou of course there are probably better ways to do it, but hey you gotta try to see the positives in everything.
“Would you be bothered by Meg living somewhere else?”
Normal viewers wouldn’t, but for “loyal” Family Guy fans… 😒
Here’s how I’d fix the South Park episode Stanley’s cup: still have the kindergarteners lose the hockey game, but have Randy beat up the hockey players after they harm the children. Also have the kid with cancer not die, instead have Stan go to the hospital and release that real hope doesn’t come from winning a sport, but at least trying to help…
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Or maybe Stan has to help with hockey kids his age
If you want the kindergartens, maybe make Kyle join with Stan, because Ike his little brother and one of the hockey players
I had a bad fall out with a artist I enjoyed but seeing your ghost giggling along brings me joy :,)
So, about the Regular Show episode, I agree with Strider’s fixes and wanna add to it myself.
When Mordecai and Rigby are worried about finishing their work to get the burgers, Benson says “Okay, guys, how about this? If you do your jobs, I’ll buy them myself. How’s that sound?” And this makes the duo motivated to finish their work for the day. Then, when they do finish, Benson has the burgers ready and rewards them, telling them to keep up the good work.
As a regular show fan, I can say Benson is actually a good boss. He’s trying to teach Mordecai and Rigby how to be responsible adults and he has a nicer side. In another episode, the duo have been working harder and while they were a little rude in asking Benson for a raise, he recognises their hard work and says they’ll negotiate new wages later that week and gives them 20 bucks for their effort.
Hi Strider! Just wanted to say that your videos always brighten up my day! I've been watching for a while, and the videos kept me happy while I had Covid. I definitly like your rewrites, although some episodes I'd rather just erase completely [that first Family Guy one 🤮]. I've actually decided to try rewriting some bad cartoon episodes myself! First off is ALL of the Bob The Bulder reboot, Step One is keeping the original claymation designs, but in CGI form, as they did it for Ready, Steady, Build. Step Two is making new machines that are learning from the old machines, that way there is no character assassination, and also the new machines would not be as dumb as the reboot versions of old machines. Step Three is trying to keep the writing like the original. I'd also rewrite the episodes "Jollop To The Rescue", "Jollop Mixtures" and "Night Of The Sherbert Stars" from the obscure British cartoon Engie Benjy [which is usually a really good and sweet series, being like Bob The Builder but for mechanics]. Jollop To The Rescue keeps Jollop's jealously of his cousin Jelly, but Benjy assures Jollop that he still cares about him, and Jollop stops Jelly from giving the fizzy drink to Plane, and figures out a way to scare the hiccups out of Plane. Jollop Mixtures still has Jollop accidentally break the computer board, but Engie Benjy's friends are more understanding and less angry. Night Of The Sherbert Stars stays mostly the same, but Farmer Fred and Trucker Troy actually stop to try and help Benjy, while we actually find out why Jollop and Dan were angry at each other. Aside from those three episodes, I do recommend checking out Engie Benjy, as it's quite a fun show.
If you ever do this but with movies, then here are my two ideas:
1. "The Cat in the Hat"
2. "SCOOBY-DOO 2: MONSTERS UNLEASHED"
These are two movies that had a lot of potential and a great plot concept, but were so horrifically botched up that many consider them to be the lowest form of entertainment. The reasons why are way too plentiful, so I won't be going into detail, but you may want to consider them. Good luck.
I dig the idea of Pearl being in charge of the Krusty Krab with Mr Krabs absent. She may have already done that in The Kuddly Krab, but being in defense of The Secret Formula, and unintentionally Scaring Plankton away, who tries to overcome his fear of whales, would have led to some great development for both characters.
Remember the creators of these cartoons don’t make episodes this bad on purpose, they are mostly by accident. There’s a lot that can go wrong behind the scenes for example with SpongeBob specifically seasons 6 through 8 they had less time to produce the episodes so they had to rush through animation, plot, voice acting etc
You’ve got a good point there.
I'm glad to see you do a new kind of video. It's to see a instead of complaining about a episode try to improve it.
A particularly broken episode was the Peanuts special “Someday You’ll Find Her, Charlie Brown”
Basically in the special, Charlie Brown falls in love with a girl he sees on TV, and then enlists Linus to help find her. Essentially, it’s stalking….
Even besides that, the characters are so botched. Charlie Brown makes Linus do all the dirty work because he’s too cowardly to do it himself. Then when they DO find the girl, it’s not even cathartic, because they make Linus so oblivious to Charlie Brown telling him that they found the right person, and Linus ends up with her. It ends up depressing.
HEY! I actually have that episode on DVD!
@@chrisbarone515 Ah yes. Charlie Brown Gets Cucked.
You did Ren seeks help?! You brave soul. Thank you for talking this way about these though, never actually had a conversation about it. But I wanted to because wooooow....what does it take to write that? A product of a past era, it wasn't too long ago really.
Seahorse seashell party sounds like a 0/10 episode. The way you fixed it makes it sound like a 9/10 episode. (HONESTLY your change for the episode was awesome)
For "A Pal For Gary" i think that that the plot should be about Spongebob Finding a Perfect Pal For Gary and have a montage of Spongebob Looking for the different types of pets that might be perfect for Gary. That way, the episode might be educational for children because it includes the different Species in the ocean so the episode can be both enjoyable and educational.
Great idea, Zach. I like the way you think.
Don't think I didn't see that Amazing Digital Circus Background for Number 9, Strider!
EDIT: Dang you got a LOT of TADC in there! I'm impressed.
The overworking message with that idea over the Splinter would have been interesting. The plot could be about the challenge Spongebob would have, because he loves his job so much that he cant stop himself from thinking about work or even subconsciously trying to fry patties by just habit or urge to, and thus someone could try to show him how to take breaks or meditate for a while and he comes back comedically a lot more laid back and more oblivious until he readjusts himself again.
33:20 I think maybe if it was say Muffy or Francine as the bully then it could have worked. Even Binky makes sense since he was a bully at times. Ira a small change but at least the main character isn’t bullying anyone
Plankton being terrified of whales is stupid to begin with because in the episode “The Algae’s Always Greener”, Plankton wasn’t terrified of Pearl.
I always thought Plankton thought Pearl wasnt an ACTUAL whale; he was saying that line metaphorically.
I have a few ideas on my own (that could be built on) for how some of these episodes could be fixed.
For One Course Meal, the first part can be kept (the part where Plankton tries getting the formula and Spongebob and Mr. Krabs try stopping him) afterwards, similarly to what you said, Mr. Krabs could be removed after but what I would do is for Mr. Krabs deciding to go on a vacation due to him being tired of dealing with Plankton all the time and leave Pearl to cover for him (similar to what you said), Plankton would of course be scared, but also feel a anger and begin scheming since his family was killed by the whales and he wants revenge. Off screen (or on screen), Spongebob could warn Pearl about what Plankton tries to do, so that she is prepared to stop Plankton. There would be more here I could explain, but essentially, this removes a good portion of the problems in this episode.
Stuck in the Wringer could be done different than it originally was in the episode as well. After being stuck, Spongebob would go to Sandy for help, but Patrick also finds out that Spongebob was stuck, so he decides to go help Spongebob as well (like actually TRY to help despite not being smart), and of course there could be some humor in some of the ideas Patrick has in mind and it would also show some of Sandy's ideas and eventually they free Spongebob from the wringer. There could be more explained, but this at least removes problems like Patrick being a terrible friend, and the townspeople being in the episode.
For Splinter, you could actually keep the splinter, but remove the gross portions of it. Instead of all the gross stuff and "help" from Patrick, Spongebob could have a more difficult time making Krabby Patties and even have some pain because of the Splinter. Mr. Krabs would periodically check on Spongebob feeling like something is off, especially when his hardworking fry cook is taking a bit longer to get orders done and Spongebob denying that something is wrong. After some time, Mr. Krabs could eventually insist on finding out why Spongebob is struggling to make the Krabby Patties and eventually would find out why. So, Mr. Krabs decides to help out Spongebob and the splinter is pulled out. He could also tell Spongebob at the end of the episode that if Spongebob ever needs any help to not be afraid to ask him. More can be added in the episode obviously, but this removes the gross splinter problems, Patrick being dumb in the episode, and actually utilizes the splinter where it can become an obstacle while also there being a message at the end.
Wishful Life could be done differently as well. Similarly to what you said, the alternate universe can be kept and there can be some characters doing better without Timmy (the bad people like Vicky, Crocker, Francis (or whatever the bully's name was), and other minor bad people we've seen) and the good people feeling worse without him (Cosmo and Wanda, Timmy's Parents, Timmy's friend group, and even minor characters like Chip Skylark). There could be showings of how life has been affected (I'll explain in a moment) and Timmy eventually feels bad as those people he cares about and have cared back are in a struggle because he's gone. Vicky could have improved as she wouldn't babysit as often and get away with being rude to kids on occasion. Crocker wouldn't be insane anymore and not believe in Fairy God Parents while working somewhere else that isn't a school. Francis would still bully kids but without Timmy there, he would become much more feared by students, even fearing some of the school staff. For good people, Cosmo and Wanda would be Fairy God Parents for another kid but it makes them feel pretty bored of their jobs and hoping something interesting can actually happen. Timmy's friend group wouldn't even be a friend group anymore as they have previously argued and disagreed a lot without Timmy stopping that from happening, and each of them would feel miserable without having any friends. Timmy's parents would be happy to be able to relax but deep down, they feel pretty bored without a child. Some minor characters could also be affected but I'll give a small example. Chip Skylark for instance would have lost his job, fame, and money as Timmy wasn't there to help him when his teeth get stolen and would end up homeless. Overall, it makes the effects a bit more realistic and have more of a real impact on the characters and remove bad elements like EVERYONE doing better without Timmy and it can actually make Timmy become more sympathetic after this since he actually had an impact on others and build more of his character.
Again, more can be added to these episodes, but I wanted to bring some ideas out there that can at least slightly improve the episodes and remove the problems that were originally made in them.