I Never Lose Anyone's Attention Again After Learning THIS

[@onepenshow]

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[@bill_jennings]

Great visual and fantastic message. I actually laughed out loud when you checked the ingredients and said “oh, onions “! 😂

[@Jerry-ii3uk]

This series is getting very technical. But I think I've got your major points: 1) use inks that work on vegetables; 2) eat salad while writing; 3) make the reader cry. Got it!

[@talosthoren5409]

🤣

[@JoKeR93007]

Good job. entertaining. thanks. good night.👍😎

[@TheDarivan]

😁😁😁 No tears!!! I´m impressed.

[@johnrolph8838]

I've been told by readers and editors that I'm a decent writer, but I wrestle daily with being consistent. Like a dog, easily distracted by - Everything!

[@talosthoren5409]

How does this video not have a thousand likes already? MOAR LIKES FOR THIS MAN!

[@onepenshow]

Thanks Talos

[@mrsllcp]

I can't believe you actually sliced and ate an onion to make your point!

[@onepenshow]

Raw onions are an excellent digestive

[@dakshdayalani7601]

Mr , i would like to meet u one day , u are THE BEST

[@onepenshow]

Thanks that’s nice of you to say,

[@archivist17]

Pushing the boat out on the props budget! 🧅

[@TheDarivan]

😂😂😂 Where are the tears?

[@onepenshow]

I actually quite enjoy raw onion