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Such an awesome video! Really hope SoW comes back, it was such an incredible series!

How much does one episode of songs of war cost

This is so good! I had many of the same ideas about Tygren, but the way your rewrite executes them is chef’s kiss. I love the storyline you gave him. Ria and Senn are great too.

This series is literally my childhood. One of the best animated movies in my opinion

"Tygren is a Terrible battle Commander"

I think this video will play a big role for the return of songs of war

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GREAT VID

WE CAN ALL HOPE

That’s a great video with some amazing ideas!

It's beautiful to see that songs of war is still alive

Nestoris = Yellow Kaltaris = Green Sendaris = Blue Voltaris = Red/Orange Mandoris = Purple/Pink

I was skeptical going into this, but wow there was so much symmetry and symbolism that I absolutely loved! Ria and Senn being the redeemed versions of Tidesinger and Deathsinger is so poetic. Really really cool stuff!

I am no animator “I’m “A Miner, butcher or a baker” I’m just a simple author who’s been writing a book designed to be a prequel to SoW. But I can say that you CK Voltaris have shown you and your companions know how to create these unfinished chronicles. 🥲

I loved this rewrite video! After watching this I started to understand some characters and their goals even better. I hope Squared Media is going to use these rewrites cuz they´re just so good and I love the fact that Tygren is going against the Deathsinger and tries to earn the leadership by killing Ingressus and claiming Voltar.🙏🤩💯 Like✅ Subscribe✅ Leave a comment✅ Share✅

SoW S2-S3 2.0?

This is a cool video. I don't know how to write but I'd like to offer some suggestions lol Firstly, I feel like you should consider the way that the person feels about Ingressus towards the end. To me, the ending scene with Ingressus felt like a large reveal and it felt that everything in the series was leading up to it. It was built up really well, and that's what made it hit so hard. I think it's important not to reveal too much about Ingressus too early because that would take away from the impact of the big reveal. One thing that I have always thought about Ingressus is that he has acted out of reason. What would get him closer to his goals? I feel like somehow the part where he attacks Tygren should be somehow modified to reflect Ingressus's voice of reason. He has always valued the lives of his clanmates, and Tygren should be no exception, especially since pure-blooded Voltaris are in dwindling numbers at this point. In addition, I think it would be cool if also there was a ceremony for burial. I feel like it would be important for Senn's character if he decided to give a proper burial for every ardoni under the Voltaris, including Ingressus, Almrak, and Deltheus, but also the extremists such as Tygren, Lucidius, etc. I feel that this kind of proper burial could come from a place of understanding of the suffering and hardship that the Voltaris went through and how that made them the people they were. And if Senn hadn't been with good people and good company and mentorship, he would have wanted to do similar things as the people he despised. Not to mention, there are other characters that I would like to see more out of. The ardoni plotline is by far the most interesting plot line, and I feel like around the board every other character could be improved, from Lucan, Nikka, Abbigail, Pythus, Vulcannus, Xaria, Xan, Kiyoshi, etc. Especially Kiyoshi because he's supposed to be an important tragic character, according to the commentary.

4:01 It’s pronounced like Felina, but with a Th in place of the F. The P is silent.

Dabi 2.0 43:40 /j

Haw is that Christian symbolism?

Ingressus: “You were my clanmate Tygren. I loved you. I loved you all.” Tygren: “I HATE YOU”

This is great, ima sub. I can’t believe I haven’t already

Amazing work!

I hope senn is a little bit stronger once everything is rewritten he was kinda weak in season 2 and 3

i'm not sure i understand. Is Senn the last voltaris? Howcan he rebuild the clan?

This is amazing!

Amazing work can you rewirte please

I always love watching these videos and they are underrated! Amazing work!

If you added some things about how curious the voltaris were and that was why they were slaughtered, in the og script there is also nods to the possibility that the voltaris made the prime songs

Very nice! This rewrite elevated Tygren from my least favourite to most favourite villain in the series. I'm never a fan of villains in the first part of a story trilogy becoming less and less important as the story moves on, so I'm glad that Tygren remains just as important throughout. And then when you think he's becoming less important in Season 3... bam! He becomes the catalyst for the end of the Voltaris. Looking forward to what you have to say about the other characters if you decide to continue your re-write. Especially with Igneous.. one character I felt that got shafted and almost abandoned in the later seasons.

Incorrect Quotes for this Rewrite *Somewhere in the afterlife* Dominus: Your children got into a fight with my son. And Tygren. Osivian, worried: Are they alright?! Thalleous, curious: Did they win? Lucidius: *Taps table* Tygren: *Taps table in response* Ingressus: Stop that. Lucidius: Why? Ingressus: I know you are plotting against me in morse code Tygren: Yes, that is what we are doing. In our very limited free time, we took a class on a very outdated, very unnecessary form just so we could talk about you in front of you. *Later* Tygren, to Pythus: That is… exactly what we did. Ingressus: The plan is kind of changing so we’re just going to take you with us. Senn: Am I being kidnapped? Ingressus: No, no, no. Senn: Can I leave? Ingressus: No.

This story explained feels 10x more epic without the Felden Arc butting in every few scenes. I'm not a hater, I do like elements of it. But, I still believe it was more suited as one of the aformentioned spinoffs. It has its own good solid story, but pales in comparison to the main Ardoni plotline. Sorry for yapping, but hope I got my message across.👍

Listening to this while drawing (^///^) Awesome sauce

Ria is my favorite Ardonie and i love what you did with her in this re-write! the og reveal of her survival really rubbed me the wrong way in the original draft, it felt like they wanted a twist reveal so bad that they sacrificed logic, why would she go on missions on her own when she is part of a team? Why would she meet up with her team on the missions site instead of their hideout? And it makes no sense for her to be the leader while she is a literal child with barely any fighting or leadership skills, it's so much more satisfying to watch her rise up into that position over her arc. Little changes i would have made (that are probably beyond the scope of this video): -drop the 'Ardonie female are rarer' thing, it makes no sense and serve no purpose other than reasoning why Ria's father is so protective of her. which you can explain instead with the fact that he is, you know, her dad. Espessially if she is his only child, you dont have to resort to incel-style reasoning that she cant fight because she has responsibilities such as pumping out Ardonie babies in order to prevent the species and the clan from going extinct -Ria's spear get enchanted off-screan between season 1 and 2 iirc, which undermines the idea that enchanted weapons are very rare and special and you need an experienced enchater to enchanted even weapons that are made from low-grade meterials like Ria's. Instead i think it would be more intreasting to save that power-up for later in the series, maybe tie it to the Ender-knights' arc by having Saxon be the one who enchants it for her, making it the first proper weapon he manages to enchant (Saxon is the guy who got chosen to be an Ender-knight as their enchanter, he is very much in training at the point of his intruduction, and he doesnt get to grow at all because the original director of the show wanted to keep his arc for a future spinoff, but i dont think that allowing Saxon to enchant one iron weapon leaves him with no room to grow)