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The slavery anime boy part was funny lol

Do you have to shout "SUCK" everytime you say it

Finally someone talking about this

While I think that men's issues maybe overblown i do acknowledge their there. I dont think its fair that guys are treated as monsters or as incompetent. But at the same token i dont think you should prop up or negate another charecter. I think its best to let the charecters simply shine through on their own accord. Dont be afraid to give them flaws but also dont be afraid to give them virtues. Dont be afraid to let your charecter fail but also dont be afraid to let them win.

Gojo's writing is not better than Sukana, you ass 😂

Cosmic horror but good

Ryuji is written as the butt monkey who is always wrong. The one time he stands up for himself against the cat who mocks him the most, he's treated as the bad guy. Then he makes a bold move to save his friends, literally suffering from his injury, only to be beaten for daring to survive the maneuver. I know the last one is played as a joke, but it's in poor taste when you add up the list of his mistreatment.

Nah boruto's character made a comeback

Good video. Genuine question though, did you put Sukuna as pure clickbait, or do you genuinely think he isn't a good male character? I'm just wondering because he bassically covers all of your guidelines.

THE SUKUNA RAGEBAIT SITUATION IS CRAZY🤯

Ok but like what about nonbinary characters

Alright, I’m gonna lay out the rules for my worlds magic system that are gonna be told to the reader. I have my own explanation for why certain things work, but it’s still under construction so far so I don’t know how much I’m actually gonna tell: Rule 1: the physics of the universe the story takes place in makes it so that complexity and consciousness are linked in the same way space and time are. They are the same thing in different forms Rule 2: a sufficiently conscious or cognizant being (human level consciousness, or any being that displays use of complex emotions similar to ours) is able to utilize their mind to manipulate complexity around them within the confines of their understanding of reality. Rule 3: Virtual particles are largely what facilitates this process Rule 4: the laws of thermodynamics cannot be broken

this was very helpful thank you

Boruto is badly written??? Lol.

I would normally be iffed because you only focused on shonen but imo they are really good examples because they are very simple (no a criticism) Which makes it easy to scale. Btw have you read Re:zero coz I gotta tell you not all isekai are shit at writing characters

c'est quel niveau d'égocentrisme de faire une vidéos de 30 minutes sur ses préférences personnel et de dire "vous voyez ça c'est bien et le reste c'est pas bien" ?

The issue with the Sue debate is that Gary Stu have more ardent defenders than their female counterparts. We all know of the Batgod meme, yet no one talks about it in any serious media criticism.

This the type of shit that got Andy Warhol shot I fw it

Just get a list of gender personality traits list on google images, then you SWAP them with the other gender. Now you have a "deep character"

I would argue that an entity that had the same memories and form as me stops being me the moment it’s memories diverge. Basically the moment of its consciousness separated from my memories.

Gojo is just cool he's not that deep or interesting like jjk also the best mc in all of anime is gintoki

6:18 "a good male character is someone who has desire" I don't see how this is specific to men characters. A good female or no character is also someone who has desires

I think Kaname Tousen from bleach is a very good example of a black character. Unique and cool powers, an interesting role in the story, interesting motivations and a unique personality. He should honestly be the standard.

Majority of shonen MC's are super unrealistic there behaviour thoughts experience and growth all is unnatural

I appreciate the insight, although I did more or less know a fair amount of what you said I will definitely rewatch this video in the future if I get stuck. Having several brothers definitely helps-one of the 3 gals I guess lol

My favourite tv show. Especially when it comes to non-romantic relationships is Elementary, because it gives us a modern version of Sherlock & Watson with a twist. Both are exceptionally good examples of what Scrit has been talking. When he talks about the difference between women and men. Also because of them being companions without being romantically involved. It allows you to see how a woman would react to certain situations compared to how a man would. Both are intelligent in their own way. Both call each other out on their flaws without being abusive and both have their own inner conflicts and support each through those problems as true friends more. I honestly wish I could see more Anime do this. Especially Action anime because I honestly can’t think of a single female character in anime that has lots of fighting involved. That doesn’t lay hands on the male character and then proceed to treat them like garbage. And no offence but sometimes I sit here and ask myself if part of the social problems between gender right now is because tv shows do things too often and therefore teach things that you shouldn’t be learning. For example hitting a man is unacceptable. I totally understood that because you don’t hit someone. EVER. See this where things get interesting, because even with that understanding. It still slipped through the cracks of my morality that sometimes it was acceptable and when I realized that I had such thoughts… it was like hitting a WALL of realization. Like… how the 🤬 did that get though. It took me a bit to realize that a lot of my favourite shows. Especially the anime ones had female characters hitting men or treating them like garbage to the point where I had become immune to that behaviour without realizing it. I don’t even blame the writers. It’s one of those unintended consequences of something being seen as the norm. Basically it’s normal for women to hit men. Even though it’s mostly supposed to be seen as nothing more than a joke. Trying to figure out right & wrong gets harder as we get older. I hope to never slip into such opinions ever again and I hope all of you keep on your toes too.🧐

This is my first time hearing about the Woman vs. Tree thing... but it is so very vindicating.

As a woman writing two male main characters on my current story I needed this key takeaways: -Motivations -Desires -Inner and outer self

Why unnecessarily drag Boruto using the thumbnail through the mad? Are we still back in 2017 where its cool to clown on Boruto? Oh well... you do you

Imagine putting Sukuna as bad in the thumbnail when he’s a better character than Gojo

I don’t know why but since I was a child and as I started creating my own ‘stories’ and characters (I draw mostly) I made them almost always centered around males. My favorite plushies were always boys, my favorite cartoon characters were men, my first animes were shonen; I feel like I was able to look at this perspective from other points of view (as the girl that I am) and become able to feel empathy for the ‘male’ “emotions”. I was always taught to look at men as what they are: human beings, so I often feel like encapsulating some emotions,fears and motivations as masculine or feminine might take away the main message or lessons from a story. Great video 👍

1:49 To anyone wondering why “stupid” wasn’t listed, it’s because it’s an inherently factual male fact(kinda, hear me out fellow dudes) We, are all stupid. Because being a monkey, frankly, is fun Of course, we aren’t monkey’s ALL the time But generally, having your males be goofy himbos can be an accurate portrayal of males Just… make them stupid on purpose… we aren’t babies with no concept of intelligence. We ACT stupid, we aren’t stupid (An example would be having a guy do something really REALLY dumb, for the sake of it. Our stupid moments are INTENTIONAL. NOBODY, will drink water with chopsticks because they’re dumb. They’ll do it with intent. NOBODY, will use a mouse backwards because they’re dumb. They’ll do it with intent. The general rule of thumb, is intent with their stupidity) TL;DR Males are dumb because we want to be dumb, not because we are actually dumb. If you read through the whole thing and don’t understand the examples, go watch meme compilations(strike me down Zeus, you don’t have the ba-)

What is your novel about?

9:04 I remember watching westerns with my dad and to this day I still recall that one cowboy that strolled up and solved a problem and just walked away.

0:21 That's a rather bold assumption that I have seen disproven many times lol

Assumed and never said is real

Ngl that Sukuna take ain't it. I don't why Gojo fans have this weird complex about Gege's relationship with the character when Gege spends entire series up to his death glazing him and doing tricks on it. Like do you guys think someone else wrote all of Gojo's parts? It upsets me cuz you guys will genuinely have good takes but the second anything happens to Gojo it's immediately "oh this is an asspull" even though the prison realm was foreshadowed and you can literally see the exact moment that Sukuna figures out the world cutting slash. I'm willing to admit that hard cutting (hah) to dead Gojo was a bad choice and Gege should've just showed the scene of Sukuna using the World Cutting Slash but the lead up to it was a series of masterful plays on BOTH sides of the fight.

13:42 I strongly disagree. I tend to prefer the more reserved characters. I find over confidence very obnoxious. The only time it works is when the character is obviously in the wrong and is just making a fool of himself (think uncle ruckus)

So you're saying FNaF is trash

Hey I actually was wondering if you recommend any other channels about improving a story I love your videos but I just want to get other perspectives that are your standard writing criticism channels

So basically dont write characters around their gender

Lmao, I can only write good Male characters