This is great guys! Really well written out, and we used the same soundtrack 3 minutes in lol, good to see FilmStro is helping out the film making community :) Keep up the good work!
11:00 on.. WTH is with all the hand to hand nonsense.. pick up your guns and SHOOT the SOB!!! She dies stupidly... went after the goon and left her AR behind?? Same with the guy afterwards.. Filming was good tho.. Just sad they did not think combat tactics more in that fight..
Good story, great film work/cinematography! The cast was little too young for what you were trying to portray; don't get me wrong they were really great actors, just too young and my opinion... But all in all great job; I was enthralled, I was on the edge of my seat!!! I don't know why they were all so eager to have an old cassette player; but it was great, I enjoyed it thoroughly thank you.
We've improved on our fight sequences. You can check out of latest work, Ebullition, which was inspired by the John Wick films. Thank you for your feedback and we hope you enjoyed the film!
Good stuff couple questions: 1) What camera did you use for this? 2) Editing software? 3) Where did you acquire you props (Guns,outfits etc...)? 4) Did you use any lights?
Sorry for our late response, We used a Canon 70D with Sigma Art lenses. The editing program used on this production was Final cut Pro X. Most of the film was shot using natural light because of our budget on this project. The guns, props, and outfits were bought online. Some props were made by our costume team. I hope we answered all of your questions! Thank you for your feedback!
For this production, we used the Canon 70D with Sigma Art lenses. As for our recent film Ebullition, we've upgraded to a Canon C100 mkii along with a Red Raven. Thank you for your feedback! We are glad you enjoyed the film.
+Aeri Productions This movie clip was and is a total disaster and I'm being conservative... It's like someone decided to take part in a deliberately awful movie had a meeting and said "I want to make a short movie suck"....'what would a dick do" !
Thank you, everyone, for watching our Indivisible short film! We appreciate everyone's feedback. If you have time, we would really appreciate if you watched our recently released film, Ebullition, it is our latest work! We've listened to your feedback and tried our best to improve on our next projects.We look forward to future projects. Let us know what type of films you guys would like to see. We will try our best to make it happen.
Honestly I thought the dialogue was a bit bland the characters didn’t sound overly interested, the music was pretty good, the action was ok, overall it was pretty decent just my opinion.
Passenger in back shoots driver in front through spine but only problem is he’s wearing a plate. No handgun round can penetrate a plate. Pretty good otherwise.
Sound effects could use a lot of work. Like when the girl got stabbed.. you didn't even know she was stabbed until blood was running down. And many more things, the hand to hand combat could use better sound effect.. etc. The whole film lacked good audio in general. But the idea was good none the less, I think older actors would have been better as well. The editing was very good, just the audio could have been much better. Voices should have been louder and they should have had more energy. Their voices kind of make me think about when a kid starts swearing for the first time and they're super quiet but still try to look cool.
I found this a good film, I liked the plot, fighting scenes were entertaining, you also made the main villain seem invincible. Though I have to say the acting wasn't the best, actors lacked emotion, were a bit robotic, and lacked character. I felt the acting was a bit corny too. I'm not saying acting was bad, just not suited to action, and actors need a personality. Also the back round music should have changed when they were at the hideout and noticed the headlights.
The main critique I would mention is that the acting was very monotone as was the vocals. Just have your actors add more emotion to their lines and do a bit more ad-live at times. Other than that, great film!
This project was a rushed project for our first film festival in 2016. We hope to improve on this in future films. In our latest film, Ebullition, we did make the guards a bit more of a struggle for our protagonist, Aiden Vo. We would love if you could go check it out and give us feedback!
Hated it when the hot blonde chick bit it. Just sayin' . Didn't trust that Asian dude either . Somebody else coulda looked after his sister . That made me suspicious . Gotta give them this : They all had great hair!
12:31 Great death-acting there. Lovely death stare too!
then you will love our most recent film. 😉
my son is in this!!!! Love it! Great acting all of you!
He’s wearing armor dude! You’re not going to punch him out!
I'll say this much. Great camera work and choreography in the final fight
This is great guys! Really well written out, and we used the same soundtrack 3 minutes in lol, good to see FilmStro is helping out the film making community :) Keep up the good work!
The Action scenes were Amazing!
You tellin me that he most tactically dope looking dudes I think I've ever seen didn't have a nade? Da gum... I was rooting for that guy.
Good short film! I like the camera angles!
Clear to breach. Thump.
The villian is like Deathstroke.
This was Amazingly Entertaining
The cinematography was outstanding just the acting was... uninspired
exactly
One of a kind.. keep it up guys.. good job.
good movies very nice
7/10.
The cinematography was REALLY good. The only problem I have is the audio and some of the acting. Overall, it was awesome. Keep it up!
Superb film with thrilling audio had goosebumps on my body
Look at the shadow of the camera man... you can see his cup.. i think the cup that he use was the beach cup.. so crazy for him..
The audio is not that great
Senzar HD +But the video is
Paxs
11:00 on.. WTH is with all the hand to hand nonsense.. pick up your guns and SHOOT the SOB!!! She dies stupidly... went after the goon and left her AR behind?? Same with the guy afterwards.. Filming was good tho.. Just sad they did not think combat tactics more in that fight..
Good action sequences, awesome, keep it up
I Liked the Short Movie.
That's pretty damn good.
Good Action Film, however the audio needed some improvement and perhaps some one or two older actors for some roles...
Great video
Good story, great film work/cinematography!
The cast was little too young for what you were trying to portray; don't get me wrong they were really great actors, just too young and my opinion...
But all in all great job; I was enthralled, I was on the edge of my seat!!!
I don't know why they were all so eager to have an old cassette player; but it was great, I enjoyed it thoroughly thank you.
Hey guys, cool video. Keep up the good work!
Nice video
the bad ass moment 7.58
This was great!!!!!
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Good, my only criticism is that the guns shouldn't make random *chk* noises everytime they move and that the vocals may need more intensity.
No such thing as " over and out" over is over and out is out. Not used together. Next time yes?
Cool fight scene how do you do that so well?
We've improved on our fight sequences. You can check out of latest work, Ebullition, which was inspired by the John Wick films. Thank you for your feedback and we hope you enjoyed the film!
This short flim fire good job bro
great job guys
Good stuff couple questions:
1) What camera did you use for this?
2) Editing software?
3) Where did you acquire you props (Guns,outfits etc...)?
4) Did you use any lights?
Sorry for our late response, We used a Canon 70D with Sigma Art lenses. The editing program used on this production was Final cut Pro X. Most of the film was shot using natural light because of our budget on this project. The guns, props, and outfits were bought online. Some props were made by our costume team. I hope we answered all of your questions! Thank you for your feedback!
What part of Florida was it filmed in????
Epic Ghost
I really did like this film and it was awesome I really do hope a second part comes out and you guys keep filming great films 😎😎😎😎😎😎✌️✌✌✌
What focal lengths were used, and was it on crop sensor?
this reminds me of arrow live action mixed with cod ghost
Comments are even more baffling than the shockingly bad short!! Only talent individuals are those behind the camera.
What was that sniper you were using and where did you get it?
Kinda hard to shoot with lens covers on
Who taught these guys how to salute...
love it
I Love You and plus grand fan and You film super cool 😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👌
I just say make the guards better fighters, they were kinds storm trooper ish.
Love it! What camera did u guys used?
For this production, we used the Canon 70D with Sigma Art lenses. As for our recent film Ebullition, we've upgraded to a Canon C100 mkii along with a Red Raven. Thank you for your feedback! We are glad you enjoyed the film.
+Aeri Productions
This movie clip was and is a total disaster and I'm being conservative... It's like someone decided to take part in a deliberately awful movie had a meeting and said "I want to make a short movie suck"....'what would a dick do" !
Amazing
3:42 telescope is close. LoL
Thank you, everyone, for watching our Indivisible short film! We appreciate everyone's feedback. If you have time, we would really appreciate if you watched our recently released film, Ebullition, it is our latest work! We've listened to your feedback and tried our best to improve on our next projects.We look forward to future projects. Let us know what type of films you guys would like to see. We will try our best to make it happen.
Honestly I thought the dialogue was a bit bland the characters didn’t sound overly interested, the music was pretty good, the action was ok, overall it was pretty decent just my opinion.
Passenger in back shoots driver in front through spine but only problem is he’s wearing a plate. No handgun round can penetrate a plate.
Pretty good otherwise.
Owasome and really owasome
Filmstro?
the angles and editing is amazing but the acting is a bit dry
Movie all around excellent but actors a bit Young on both side to be in that organize structure but a thumps up on acting great film
Sound effects could use a lot of work. Like when the girl got stabbed.. you didn't even know she was stabbed until blood was running down. And many more things, the hand to hand combat could use better sound effect.. etc. The whole film lacked good audio in general. But the idea was good none the less, I think older actors would have been better as well. The editing was very good, just the audio could have been much better. Voices should have been louder and they should have had more energy. Their voices kind of make me think about when a kid starts swearing for the first time and they're super quiet but still try to look cool.
This was straight.
Pt. 2?
I found this a good film, I liked the plot, fighting scenes were entertaining, you also made the main villain seem invincible. Though I have to say the acting wasn't the best, actors lacked emotion, were a bit robotic, and lacked character. I felt the acting was a bit corny too. I'm not saying acting was bad, just not suited to action, and actors need a personality. Also the back round music should have changed when they were at the hideout and noticed the headlights.
the package?? WAS A BOOMBOX!! ( batteries not included )
Music is way to loud
Ok what the hell How can you see what your shooting at when the end caps are on the scope 🤣🤣🤣
Pretty girls, who is she
The main critique I would mention is that the acting was very monotone as was the vocals. Just have your actors add more emotion to their lines and do a bit more ad-live at times. Other than that, great film!
Next time work on the audio
Could you not just pull the caps off of the scope of the sniper for more realism? Also, the dubbing was kind of distracting in my opinion.
The acting was decent but the voice over ruined it by making every monotone, should have kept the real voices imho
Not bad.
2 fight scenes......
And the ghost was probably the best villain.
But the music them was annoying and the title should be called The Pakage
The scope caps where still on🤣
Andrew Ellis You notices that too?😂😂
Military unit should be more experienced and that should of been shown 》《
This project was a rushed project for our first film festival in 2016. We hope to improve on this in future films. In our latest film, Ebullition, we did make the guards a bit more of a struggle for our protagonist, Aiden Vo. We would love if you could go check it out and give us feedback!
1st ver your facts straight, then distort the at your leisure.
So much technical inconsistency its almost unwatchable.
Actors shouldn’t quit their day jobs.
The acting was fairly weak but well shot,realistic looking props and the fight choreography was good
Audio sounds like a dub
I need this movie The Walking Dead
10:02 fuuuuu〜!!!!
it is always so amusing to see 15 years old kids to wear military uniforms and full faces and "playing " soldiers. . .
Hi
Yay Ghost i love this Charakter but his own game is not so good and destroy the Charakter.
P.S. I love this Movie
Army run by a bunch of high school kids😂.. spy kids anyone
The costumes did not fit the story.
Good idea but the acting made me cringe so hard 🤣
kids crap and soft air guns = b/s video
this was weird
Like its a joke sorry peps couldn't even watch it
I tried, I really did. Just that awful, had to bail.
Hated it when the hot blonde chick bit it. Just sayin' . Didn't trust that Asian dude either . Somebody else coulda looked after his sister . That made me suspicious . Gotta give them this : They all had great hair!
Not a very good film...
Not so good
1 min in and it's garbage
Unlogisch und beschissene Story
bloody awful !
Bull shit!
Entertaining. Good job to everyone involved.