Gah! I wish someone would write something like that for me. This seriously brought a tear to my eye. It was beautifully sculpted and you could just feel the love in his voice.
Wow. This is one of the only "love" poems that is so personal and genuine, but there isn't one line you can roll your eyes at. Also, everyone tends to be able to relate to love poems... this one, is very obviously just he and her. You don't relate to it directly, because you can't, even if you do have a wonderful relationship, as much as it just puts you in a place of wishing that you could. Rives' delivery always gives me a visceral reaction. I sincerely love his poetry.
Agreed. I also love when he says " I wish id been your bathroom mirror the day they took of your braces". Anybody who has ever had braces knows how much you smile an look at the mirror on that day.
Rega Jha ??
Still in love with this poem
Ugh. I just want to shake this man's hand. His poetry always does what few others have, for me.
this will always be one of my favorites. it really hits me on another level.
damn.
Gah! I wish someone would write something like that for me. This seriously brought a tear to my eye. It was beautifully sculpted and you could just feel the love in his voice.
I love listening to your poems and stories and talks. Even this ancient one is so beautiful.
Wow. This is one of the only "love" poems that is so personal and genuine, but there isn't one line you can roll your eyes at. Also, everyone tends to be able to relate to love poems... this one, is very obviously just he and her. You don't relate to it directly, because you can't, even if you do have a wonderful relationship, as much as it just puts you in a place of wishing that you could. Rives' delivery always gives me a visceral reaction. I sincerely love his poetry.
You should listen to “Kite” by him
these are the words I fumble for.
I love this guys poems, and his delivery is always on-point awesome
This man is the reason I bought a harmonica... I want to learn to play it like that!!
All of us from LowFiLitCo LOVE your work. We even look at these pieces as models for our projects. Thanks so much!!!!
beautiful, rives, beautiful.
Agreed. I also love when he says " I wish id been your bathroom mirror the day they took of your braces". Anybody who has ever had braces knows how much you smile an look at the mirror on that day.
god that was beautiful
i mean i thought 1 Rives at a time was about all this world could handle, two of ya'll together is just unfair :)
Damnit Rives just did it again...
"hell, i like your left shoulder devil"
nice
"Shit howdy sunshine, sit your fine self down. If you're looking for a compliment, I think you've come to the right place." :D
he actually did say it
does anyone know what Key that harmonica is?
Someone said that it was tuned to the key of “Georgia” but I have no idea what that means
the other one is better, the one with Joshua
your way with words makes me want to write better...
My birthday is in one month...can I have one of these? Pretty please? I've been a very good girl this year...