I disagree. This is a very good story but it's finished. A sequel would almost certainly feel tacked on and could do nothing but tarnish it's predecessor.
@@boogrs55 The beast is a very limited character. What exactly does it do except hunting? What goals does it have? What perspectives does it have? Not much of any of that. Limited characters can be interesting but they are very poorly suited for long running stories. Take arthur fleck from the joker movie as an example. He too is a very limited character but the joker movie was a masterpiece. And now look at the utter embarassment that the sequel was. A sequel to this story would almost certainly be like the joker sequel.
I agree. It really felt like the perspective of such a creature; not a human interpretation there of. "Not-pray" really speaks to instinct informed intelligence.
I had assumed this was just amateur hour stuff and it would just grate on my nerves. Tried it anyway. I was mistaken. The story is riveting and the voice acting is top-notch. Happy to subscribe.
This is the type of story I like to find. It's not a retelling of 'humans show up and dominate everything' tripe. I have a question what did Barnes eat before he discovered the meat was edible? Your story glossed over that. Unique and well written. The beast's preception added needed depth to the story. How did the beast fit into the spaceship? The writing made it sound like it was too big to fit. Yet it could get through a doorway on the space station. You need another chapter describing how Barnes manages to keep the beast fed. Also need to address the seemingly inconsistencies on the beast's size. Looking forward to more stories about Barnes and his companion.
This was an awesome story. Id like more about these two, and who do I have to kill so they get a crossover with the Lead Dealer after a few episodes? I feel like that's a team up we all need to hear!
great story^^ And for one the world building is decent. Whoever wrote that story, get them to take a look at and fix the holes in the farien/miss rimiki series worldbuilding.
This is a nitpick. Pray is what people do. Prey refers to hunting. Thought you should know the difference. Of course the spelling you used can work as well.
I love your video the series with Sargent werewolf especially but my only thing I don't really like is the ai pictures during the videos bit other than that I will listen too every video
Wait, he followed the Beast for three days? No sleep? No shelter? Did the author miss that or not figure out how to include those critical details? Then, two months have passed, same questions remain. What shelter did he use to remain safe while he slept? When he slept, (he had to sleep) how did he reacquire the Beast's whereabouts? The Beast was always moving. Did it sleep and where? So many details missing from the hostile environment the author appears to be incapable of resolving. Barnes said he saw the Beast do something he'd never see it do before, simply walk away...wrong, the same response it had to Barnes on day one and since. Again, poor writing. Odd that the Beast had not encountered the prey that didn't back down in the past. That's highly unlikely. The only thing that kept me listening was the skillful narration. The writers need some serious tutoring.
I didn't think to mention it, but somewhat obviously the Beast sleeps too. Cycle might not match up to human ones but even a few hours is enough to go for days. As for shelter, story established that most of the rain is caught by the trees and obviously if the beasts knows all the "safe paths" it also knows the safe spots to rest; and furthermore is a territorial apex in this region so just being near it is by itself enough to dissuade the vast majority of possible threats.
dude napped when the beast did. and yeah he'd never seen the beast turn away from something it was hunting. didnt hunt Barnes, he was just in the way. Any other things you want filled in that my brain listed as minute details? Bathroom breaks? descriptions of alien feces.
This story definitely needs a sequel. With more from The Beast's perspective. Great story.
Agreed!
I disagree. This is a very good story but it's finished. A sequel would almost certainly feel tacked on and could do nothing but tarnish it's predecessor.
@tranquilthoughts7233 how about a strictly from the perspective of the predator b4 he was send down the moon
@@boogrs55 The beast is a very limited character. What exactly does it do except hunting? What goals does it have? What perspectives does it have? Not much of any of that.
Limited characters can be interesting but they are very poorly suited for long running stories.
Take arthur fleck from the joker movie as an example. He too is a very limited character but the joker movie was a masterpiece. And now look at the utter embarassment that the sequel was.
A sequel to this story would almost certainly be like the joker sequel.
love stories where the bad guys don't understand that humans can tame almost anything just give us time
I like the beast's perspective. Well done!
I agree. It really felt like the perspective of such a creature; not a human interpretation there of. "Not-pray" really speaks to instinct informed intelligence.
Great Story and great Voice Acting. Absolutely loved this one.
We need a part 2! Really interesting story. 👌
i love how the beast has literal awareness and is only limited by their environment.
That was brilliant and very well written. This is my favorite channel to listen to at work, home and before bed. Thank you !!❤
The Voice used for the Beast's Perspective made me think "Kratos".
VA here, I can definitely do a pretty solid Kratos impression haha
Boy...yes.
Oo the perspective hits hard
very good story i really enjoed it. BIG BIG Thanks. Love the style of the story. go aheat more please
Excellent. A little rough in some spots, but I laughed, I cried, it was fun a fun ride. Having the Beast provide some monologue was brilliant.
Excellent story! I enjoyed both perspectives and how you brought them to life.
I had assumed this was just amateur hour stuff and it would just grate on my nerves. Tried it anyway.
I was mistaken. The story is riveting and the voice acting is top-notch. Happy to subscribe.
Dude got dropped into pre-Imperial deathworld Catachan, made friends with one of the friendlier megafauna and survived lol. Needs a sequel for sure
Another video, another reason why this is the very best SciFi site! Keep up the good work!
Welp, new inspiration acquired.
Legally distinct captain Titus
Good one😂
love the narrator
Narrator sounds like Kevin Sorbo
Title made me think this was gonna be another Skipper story
Definitely enjoyed hearing this from the perspectives of both Barnes and the beast
Yeah. True rumors really are the worst kind.
Great story, excellent narration! I enjoyed every word!
Best story I have heard from one of these yet, and KUDOS to the voice work mate!
This is by far in top 1% of all the stories
This one was quite entertaining. Should do a follow-up. :D
Great story and fabulous narrator!! Thanks 👍
Good story. One of the few I'd have liked more of. Y'all have some good narrators, too.
Yup, this is gonna have to be the first in a VERY LONG running series. Maybe even collaborating with The Lead Dealer for a mission or 2.
wow, love the narrator's voice, and the story was actually fire !
Excellent.🙂👍
How far can this go?
You folks cranked out another humdinger! I don't know if it's the best one, but I'm putting it in my top three. For now, at least. 😏
This was a great story! 👍👏👏👏
This is the best story yet on this channel.
the guy looks like the Doom Marine
This is the type of story I like to find. It's not a retelling of 'humans show up and dominate everything' tripe.
I have a question what did Barnes eat before he discovered the meat was edible? Your story glossed over that. Unique and well written. The beast's preception added needed depth to the story.
How did the beast fit into the spaceship? The writing made it sound like it was too big to fit. Yet it could get through a doorway on the space station.
You need another chapter describing how Barnes manages to keep the beast fed. Also need to address the seemingly inconsistencies on the beast's size.
Looking forward to more stories about Barnes and his companion.
This was an awesome story. Id like more about these two, and who do I have to kill so they get a crossover with the Lead Dealer after a few episodes? I feel like that's a team up we all need to hear!
If I met a beast that called me “not prey”, I’d be ok with that. 😂 probably what my dogs call me in their own language anyway.
This was just ✨wholesome✨
This is Sci-Fi survival horror!
That guy is what a smart ogrin would be
Great story wish it was a little longer though.
I love to see the faces behind the voices.🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Thise needs a 2 part
This was a good one. Well done
Exilian Phobobeast, Large, Intelligent, pack-bondable, apex predator.
Station 47? Is that the same one that was run by pirates before the owner and his alien goo BBW security chief went legit?
Isnt in other story
Love these adventure stories
Good one
great story^^ And for one the world building is decent. Whoever wrote that story, get them to take a look at and fix the holes in the farien/miss rimiki series worldbuilding.
Third series officially started!!
It was fren shaped c:
Please tell me there are more stories with these two in them.
I wanna cuddle the cute spiney creature
The story is banger but I can't stop getting distracted by the fact that the ai generated dude looks like the player character from ARK
good story, moar pls
pray and NOT PRAY
This is a nitpick. Pray is what people do. Prey refers to hunting. Thought you should know the difference. Of course the spelling you used can work as well.
Wehnever i hear the "Hay everybody" from ya, i cant help an heare the "everybody hits the flore" from asdf movie
:looks over at ten pound dog sleeping on its pillow: :sighs:
I wonder If this Is similar/In the same Universe/Multivers of the Skipper one.
Will there be anymore Frieran and miss rimiki stories?
Can we just appreciate how cursed this AI image really is, when one looks at it for longer than 10 seconds? (7:40) ^^
Cool
Hope none of the voice actors live in California😅 stay safe guys
Anonther grand story.
Yey!
Now I want a story about the gossip guy with all the stories to be an information broker, who shares crazy true stories with his drinking buddy's.
I love your video the series with Sargent werewolf especially but my only thing I don't really like is the ai pictures during the videos bit other than that I will listen too every video
Ok this is going in my fav i have heard since coming down this rabbit hole and i hate audio books.
Wait, he followed the Beast for three days? No sleep? No shelter? Did the author miss that or not figure out how to include those critical details? Then, two months have passed, same questions remain. What shelter did he use to remain safe while he slept? When he slept, (he had to sleep) how did he reacquire the Beast's whereabouts? The Beast was always moving. Did it sleep and where? So many details missing from the hostile environment the author appears to be incapable of resolving. Barnes said he saw the Beast do something he'd never see it do before, simply walk away...wrong, the same response it had to Barnes on day one and since. Again, poor writing. Odd that the Beast had not encountered the prey that didn't back down in the past. That's highly unlikely. The only thing that kept me listening was the skillful narration. The writers need some serious tutoring.
Humans are persistence hunters. When trained and fit, we can follow, track and keep bothering the prey over and over. It's why humans can nap.
I didn't think to mention it, but somewhat obviously the Beast sleeps too. Cycle might not match up to human ones but even a few hours is enough to go for days. As for shelter, story established that most of the rain is caught by the trees and obviously if the beasts knows all the "safe paths" it also knows the safe spots to rest; and furthermore is a territorial apex in this region so just being near it is by itself enough to dissuade the vast majority of possible threats.
Have you heard of naps?
dude napped when the beast did. and yeah he'd never seen the beast turn away from something it was hunting. didnt hunt Barnes, he was just in the way. Any other things you want filled in that my brain listed as minute details? Bathroom breaks? descriptions of alien feces.