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  • @EelGood
    @EelGood 3 роки тому +863

    your simultaneous comparing and contrasting with jevil's and spamton's outcomes is astoundingly beautiful i love it sm

  • @Sammytheflaaffyfan
    @Sammytheflaaffyfan 3 роки тому +478

    I love how Gaster is drawn so much.

    • @themoonsrequest
      @themoonsrequest 3 роки тому +27

      This! The dripping effect the way he towers the two when he explains their exist to them! It’s so good! He looks so haunting and simple in the those two shots!!!

  • @Zero_Gyro
    @Zero_Gyro 3 роки тому +167

    it's my personal theory that Gaster doesn't make them crazy voluntarely, but knowledge comes at a cost after all

  • @deltaf.2005
    @deltaf.2005 3 роки тому +714

    0:37 I don't know if you intended or not but the transition from Jevil's "jail" into queen's battery acid glass, despite the shape of it, is actually really genius! Because there's a Jevil dialogue that refers the "Queen" after you fight him.

  • @themoonsrequest
    @themoonsrequest 3 роки тому +380

    0:00 - 0:21 I cant tell you THE CHILLS with the way you interpreted the two reactions to learning that their entire existence is fake. Jevils instantly laugh horrifically with a manic terrifying smile with his eyes shaded PITCH BLACK! Spamton staring with a blank face of just utter despair! So good!!!

    • @apollyonnoctis1291
      @apollyonnoctis1291 3 роки тому +40

      While Jevil went completely batsh1t, the truth causing him to lose his mind like an hp love craft character faced with the unknown,
      Spamton just… broke
      Probably going into stages of depressive denial.
      I have to be real!
      I can’t be a lie!
      Which after experiencing death, devolved into;
      I WILL SCREAM UNTIL I AM REAL
      I WILL BE FREE OF THESE STRINGS

  • @sansthecommenter1976
    @sansthecommenter1976 3 роки тому +94

    love how he only tried to help them ,basically giving them what they wished for: giving jevil a happy mindset and giving spamton success ,but he turned them both insane as the price

  • @Bo4is
    @Bo4is 3 роки тому +161

    Spamy without his glasses is adorble

  • @wisteria2249
    @wisteria2249 3 роки тому +62

    The way I see it is that spamton was thrown into the acid so it was like deleting a program so when he escaped he was just a fragmented program only able to keep doing it’s simple functions, that would explain why he bugs out and why the [hyperlink] doesn’t work because he lost access to it because of his broken code. I like to think that the hyperlink he tries to reach is the internet and it was his way of reaching out and showing more complex adds.

  • @neo1754
    @neo1754 3 роки тому +302

    i like the theory that spamton was thrown into the acid pit, hence why he is so short compared to the addisons

    • @S0NIC130
      @S0NIC130 3 роки тому +21

      I do too.
      Personally I just think it's canon.

    • @enthusiasticallydry
      @enthusiasticallydry 3 роки тому +11

      i don’t like that because although queen is selfish she would do that to anyone

    • @EmeraldBat67
      @EmeraldBat67 3 роки тому +22

      @@enthusiasticallydry doesnt she try to kill the protagonists on multiple occasions

    • @enthusiasticallydry
      @enthusiasticallydry 3 роки тому +9

      @@EmeraldBat67 it’s more like capturing (although queen in her giga robot got insane.) it’s just too evil

    • @RoyalFruitMan
      @RoyalFruitMan 3 роки тому +21

      I mean, he basically says so by saying he's the IT BURNS AAAA guy

  • @never_seeitcoming4686
    @never_seeitcoming4686 3 роки тому +46

    Did anyone else notice how at 0:09, Jevil’s eyes are shaped like Gaster’s? The transitions and references in this are so damn cool, would love a more complete version!!

  • @SnazzleTuft
    @SnazzleTuft 3 роки тому +5

    At first I thought it said “you all want in” which really fits for Jevil, being in his “freedom” but “you are one ant” also fits as i can see Jevil seeing everyone as a pawn to someone greater.

  • @honeytabbies
    @honeytabbies 3 роки тому +13

    OH MY GOD. (i *think* this is what happened but i could be wrong) your detail of spamton originally dying in the acid pool and having his soul repossess one of the addison mannequins?? which would explain a lot of his design??? I LOVE IT SM WOW WOW WOW

  • @shadysubject06
    @shadysubject06 3 роки тому +15

    I absolutely loved the part where Jevil cringes before growing that huge demented smile. It almost looked like he was fighting it, and you drew that expression so well! Amazing work!

  • @bumberquest3031
    @bumberquest3031 3 роки тому +4

    "Don't run out of breath" And then Spamton drowning in acid is GREAT.

  • @m3b02
    @m3b02 3 роки тому +67

    THE LEMON DEMON DELTARUNE BRAINROT NEVER ENDS

  • @jordanlopes7613
    @jordanlopes7613 3 роки тому +18

    A bit of sadness on your sadness friend ?
    Jevil probably thought seam imprisonned everyone but him because he couldnt support the thought that his best friend locked him away
    The addison were most likely speaking of the first time spamton died in the acid, meaning they regulary come mourn the salesman and spamton hide himself out of shame and hate for them

  • @roll4max
    @roll4max 3 роки тому +75

    I’m floored by how clever your scene transitions are. Such a heartbreaking fate these two share. My hat is off to you!

  • @maxskellington910
    @maxskellington910 3 роки тому +144

    YOO THIS IS SO FUCKING COOL!!!
    also I love that you ran w/ the theory that Spamton is a soul of a monster that got put into a dummy. It's perfect.

    • @louzo5175
      @louzo5175 3 роки тому +5

      lets just explain why his aspect is a cat

    • @defectivetoaster
      @defectivetoaster 3 роки тому +5

      @@louzo5175 what if he was

  • @neonflights5951
    @neonflights5951 2 роки тому +3

    The song itself always gets me to feel. But seeing this animation with what happens to Spamton in particular had me feel... Like crying, literally nauseous, I felt sick to my stomach.
    ... I mean this all without exxageration. It was a terribly brilliant and too deep animation.

  • @swiftspot3055
    @swiftspot3055 3 роки тому +47

    i would LOVE a longer version of this (mayhaps with a good n wholesome ending for spam,,) but this is absolutely amazing, wonderful depiction of movement. and while I don’t personally subscribe to the mannequin theory as much as other theories it is still awesome. idk much about the actual plot of DT, but seeing jevil apparently thrive from his corruption meanwhile spamton is driven to pure misery is,,,, yeah

  • @themoonsrequest
    @themoonsrequest 3 роки тому +16

    Seriously this interpretation of Gaster is so accurate and disturbing! It’s my favorite one yet!!!

  • @knines6279
    @knines6279 3 роки тому +3

    Gaster’s fannon in undertale: Super dark and mysterious scientist oooooooo
    Gaster’s fannon in deltarune:
    “Broooooo, wants some *cough* some CRAZY JUICE?!”

  • @alexstoll1756
    @alexstoll1756 2 роки тому +2

    i love how you draw jevil he is so scrunkly until he is evil and then his teeth are so so so cool!!! i also love how you draw gaster all bony and at 0:28 spamtons face and its all just so cool!!!

  • @yoyleb1711
    @yoyleb1711 3 роки тому +20

    theres so much personality and expression packed into every single frame and the transitions r on point. fucking stellar

  • @calt7964
    @calt7964 3 роки тому +17

    I wonder how Gaster and Spamton would work with the song Touch Tone Telephone. Since y’know, lot of phone stuff with Spamton obviously. Just an idea I wanted to throw out there. Loved the animatic by the way. I love how you showed the corruption of Spamton and Jevil. Great Job!

  • @gojifankotm7927
    @gojifankotm7927 3 роки тому +4

    Does anybody else notice the odd parallels there are between the Spamton acid theory and Gaster's supposed origin?

  • @MaeIsOkay
    @MaeIsOkay 3 роки тому +3

    The transition from jevils jail cell to the queen's glass was so cool. This entire animation is great

  • @M1CR0P0P
    @M1CR0P0P 3 роки тому +7

    the transitions
    the art
    the music
    the theory
    everything is perfect

  • @TheSpaceCommunist
    @TheSpaceCommunist 3 роки тому +2

    “Why are you guys freaking out, all I said was your Jordans are fake” - Wing Ding, probably

  • @dpadamm
    @dpadamm 3 роки тому +10

    OKAY BUT HOW COME YOU DRAW JEVIL SO,,, ADORABLE,,,,,, CRYING

  • @Hypedd64
    @Hypedd64 3 роки тому +11

    I love this so much, Spiral of Ants fits surprisingly well with Spamton and Jevil.

  • @oivatank
    @oivatank 2 роки тому +1

    The acid thing made me realize Spamton is like the Joker of Deltarune, which is funny, because Jevil is the LITERAL joker of Deltarune

  • @revivesyourgolder3130
    @revivesyourgolder3130 3 роки тому +69

    jevil: was some joker that some day met a guy that told him that his world was a game, went insane and got locked up and thinks that he is free meanwhile the others arent
    Story: simple self-explenatory,
    Spamton: a ghost that possesed a mannaquin that was later transformed into a puppet by addisons so it became a salesman, wich wasent very soucessful, one day got a phone call from a stranger that helped him to get fame, but when he was at the peak of his popularity one day the stranger dissapeared and spamton sales went down, spamton trying to get the stranger to asnwer the phone again, got himself currupted by garbage noise, then was turned into a encrazed spam program,
    Story: Sad, Dark, Disturbing,
    Now i see why people like Spamton rather then jevil

    • @defectivetoaster
      @defectivetoaster 3 роки тому +19

      Wait wait wait
      I thought Spamton was an Addison, became famous, moved into the queens mansion, got abandoned by the Addisons, got thrown into the acid, became smol(or drowned and possessed the mannequin , whatever floats your boat) then lived in the dumpster

    • @Jayesbe
      @Jayesbe 3 роки тому +10

      @@defectivetoaster You are actually correct and the original commenter said some things which are also correct^^

    • @louzo5175
      @louzo5175 3 роки тому +6

      corrupted by garbage noice is the same as getting the knowlage from gaster

    • @snowypuff9702
      @snowypuff9702 2 роки тому

      @@defectivetoaster spamton looks like a mannequin, addisons dont

  • @critter-wizard
    @critter-wizard 3 роки тому +31

    OHHH I ADORE THIS!!
    EXCELLENT STORYTELLING!!

  • @BlueSkyBirdies
    @BlueSkyBirdies 3 роки тому +2

    U tellin me that Queen legit just had Spamton murdered like a mafia boss? Just sent him to sleep with the phishes??
    Neat

  • @King0fPeasants
    @King0fPeasants 3 роки тому +4

    this song was a really good choice, for these two characters, and you utilized it well, matching the characters to the parts of the song that worked well with them. well done!

  • @bird9268
    @bird9268 3 роки тому +2

    WAHSHSUSAHSH WHY IS THE 0:26 FRAME SO FUNNY

  • @kristiwalton5374
    @kristiwalton5374 2 роки тому +2

    id like to thank this video for truly introducing me to lemon demon

  • @mazapan7829
    @mazapan7829 3 роки тому +1

    I LOOOOVE HOW THEY LOOK KINDA CREEPY IN SOME SCENES.....especially jevil who can go from silly little clown to. creepy clown. love that for them

  • @Lottabaggage
    @Lottabaggage 3 роки тому +4

    If any of these storyboard videos actually get completed, you would be one of the biggest youtubers ever

    • @marineflames
      @marineflames  3 роки тому +2

      One is in the works rn just u wait !!

  • @lockitty7263
    @lockitty7263 3 роки тому +4

    As a lemon demon fan and a Deltarune Fan, I loved this, if you also enjoyed this, I highly recommend the “Amnesia Was Her Name” Jevil animation, also encapsulates their backstory amazingly just like this animation does

  • @saltsaltius9831
    @saltsaltius9831 3 роки тому +2

    Gaster: hey you want some c r a z y j u I c e ?

  • @wazzupbruddahs6234
    @wazzupbruddahs6234 3 роки тому +8

    Oh Gaster you silly goose!

  • @0z8ro
    @0z8ro 3 роки тому +1

    i would like to see Spamton to put glasses in cool way after a call, and he be like: [HECK YEAH]
    and small detail, like glass sparkle.

  • @Bo4is
    @Bo4is 3 роки тому +3

    Gaster with his chill face is just funny to me

  • @dragar0th
    @dragar0th 3 роки тому +2

    this is gunna get real complicated when all 7 of the freedom lads are out

  • @rexhex3700
    @rexhex3700 3 роки тому +10

    DUDE! Your transitions betweens shots are insane! Fantastic job!

  • @pos_myra
    @pos_myra 3 роки тому +2

    god this looks so amazing, got me all emotional all of a sudden. great work on this!

  • @karenlinares7541
    @karenlinares7541 3 роки тому +3

    I love how you made an explanation for how spampton turned into a marionette
    Queem straight up killed him

  • @totaleclipse3528
    @totaleclipse3528 3 роки тому +6

    I legit love this so much!!!! The way it all just. Fits together!!!

  • @KaitlynG
    @KaitlynG 3 роки тому +1

    You have to make a full version, this is so good. I’ve been watching this on loop for a few days now, i love this video

  • @fishywshywell_22019
    @fishywshywell_22019 3 роки тому +7

    dang this is amazing and lucky for you abandonment is my bread and butter

  • @lockitty7263
    @lockitty7263 3 роки тому +6

    Spiral of Ants is a 6 minute song
    If you could make this animation include the 5 other secret bosses that’ll come with Chapters 3-7, oh my god, that would be awesome. Just a thought

    • @voidliss8
      @voidliss8 6 місяців тому +1

      Mabye then they can walk around in spiral

  • @King_SpinoX
    @King_SpinoX 2 роки тому +2

    This was amazing! Inspire me to make his origins lol i know that will be gaster who ruining all people who lucky meet him

  • @thescroingle
    @thescroingle 3 роки тому +1

    IVE BEEN WAITING FOR SOMEONE TO USE SPIRAL OF ANTS FOR SPAMTON AHAJRJFI I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!2!!!!! Your artstyle fits so perfectly for him ???

  • @sporksporkify570
    @sporksporkify570 3 роки тому +6

    I adore how you draw jevil so much! Your art is amazing have a lovely day my guy!

  • @soulful_soda
    @soulful_soda 3 роки тому +1

    I love your Addison spamton design I-

  • @ghostpantsanimates
    @ghostpantsanimates 3 роки тому +10

    this looks awesome so far!

  • @TFN_Araque
    @TFN_Araque 3 роки тому +1

    why is no one talking about the song choice? Its a banger and fits perfectly, at least in my opinion

  • @NekistTheCutie
    @NekistTheCutie 3 роки тому +2

    gaster: IM MAKING A EMO GROUP

  • @thatonehivetyrant1679
    @thatonehivetyrant1679 3 роки тому +2

    I would love to see this completed it looks amazing

  • @martinadini4142
    @martinadini4142 3 роки тому +4

    the drawing stile reminds me of the undertale intro sequence , i like it

  • @kisiel-z-kosmosu
    @kisiel-z-kosmosu 7 місяців тому +1

    I swear every lemon demon x deltarune animatic is so fireee and i never thought that song could work so great here 💕

  • @byjohan832
    @byjohan832 3 роки тому +1

    Man, some godly transitions... you're good.

  • @tennesseenews7649
    @tennesseenews7649 3 роки тому +2

    Y’all just remember this guy so makes the Spamton shitpost and I like it

  • @dizzyclown7131
    @dizzyclown7131 3 роки тому +5

    This is really good! Keep it up, pal! :D

  • @tailoredcrow
    @tailoredcrow 3 роки тому +1

    this is amazing and i hope you end up finishing it!!!!!!

  • @isabella-rosebud2571
    @isabella-rosebud2571 3 роки тому +7

    YOOOO THIS LOOKS SO GOOD AUGH LOVE THE WAY YOU DRAW THEM ALL

  • @ThEcOoL_pErSoN
    @ThEcOoL_pErSoN 2 роки тому +1

    Why is it that lemon demon always fits spamton

  • @HumeAnn
    @HumeAnn 3 роки тому +2

    Dude nice headcanons you got for spamton

  • @soulblightx9847
    @soulblightx9847 3 роки тому +1

    i really hope this gets finished

  • @wcat03blu
    @wcat03blu 3 роки тому

    Yoooo I love the way you drew gaster

  • @komakeira1045
    @komakeira1045 3 роки тому +2

    jevil so hot

  • @khitzy191
    @khitzy191 3 роки тому

    Ladies and gentlemen
    We found our that gaster is the master mind to break darkners

  • @trashrat8365
    @trashrat8365 3 роки тому +1

    Loving this

  • @Magolor2011
    @Magolor2011 3 роки тому

    I love the queen🔮🧿🔮 part is amazing. You deserve a cookie 🍪

  • @TheWizardOfFortune
    @TheWizardOfFortune 3 роки тому

    That was so tight, love the choice of music mate!

  • @yoyleb1711
    @yoyleb1711 3 роки тому +1

    OGUGGGGH THIS IS SO GOOD

  • @flamingobilly5109
    @flamingobilly5109 3 роки тому

    Ngl I was thinking of making something like this so I'm happy someone did it

  • @penumbragaming5072
    @penumbragaming5072 3 роки тому +2

    I guess I know what the meaning of [[silly strings]]

  • @sammyflipaclip
    @sammyflipaclip 3 роки тому +3

    This will be popular soon

  • @marscoric
    @marscoric 3 роки тому +2

    wow that hurted
    love it

  • @Lumberjack_king
    @Lumberjack_king 3 роки тому

    The acid mannequin theory intresting

  • @sh00t1ngst4rzz
    @sh00t1ngst4rzz Місяць тому

    I now I'm 3 years late for this BUT HOLY SHIT THIS SONG SOMEHOW FITS TO DELTARUNE HUH
    Like maybe if we see the future secret bosses in feature chapters, maybe there will be some kind of animatic or animation of them! But that's just me, but still
    Also really spectacular animatic Marine as always!! ^_^

  • @susgus13
    @susgus13 2 роки тому +2

    i didn't realize spiral of ants was the song, I just thought this was a storyboard referencing antz (the movie) with a lemon demon song in the background
    i dunno lmao

  • @IsisNiko
    @IsisNiko 3 роки тому +1

    i saw "spiral of ants" and deltarune characters and hit play on INSTINCT. also this rules

  • @cellophane02
    @cellophane02 3 роки тому +1

    This looks so fking good omg...

  • @kurgans
    @kurgans 3 роки тому +1

    I hope someday you finish this

  • @mayonnaise4729
    @mayonnaise4729 2 роки тому +2

    gaster why did you had to fuck up two perfecty good people?

  • @dispatch..
    @dispatch.. 3 роки тому +1

    I’d like this to be polished

  • @PUMPKINMANJACK
    @PUMPKINMANJACK 3 роки тому +2

    THIS IS SO COOL LOL

  • @kordacpz
    @kordacpz 3 роки тому

    HOLY FUCK THIS IS OUTSTANDING

  • @francoveron1082
    @francoveron1082 3 роки тому

    DANM YOU GASTER

  • @THE_ASVO
    @THE_ASVO 3 роки тому

    0:25
    he lookin like sad sponge Bob 😂

  • @ceronulo6858
    @ceronulo6858 3 роки тому +2

    This is cannon now.

  • @voidliss8
    @voidliss8 6 місяців тому

    Be kinda funny to see what happens in the hurricane part of the song

  • @Only_Fox2006
    @Only_Fox2006 3 роки тому +1

    LoL this is wonderfully :"3

  • @KeegAnimates
    @KeegAnimates 3 роки тому

    0:43
    I saw some art on twitter that looks almost exactly like this scene! Was that your Twitter post or someone else's you where inspired by potentially?

    • @marineflames
      @marineflames  3 роки тому +1

      Most likely my post! I haven't seen any other ghost-spamton possessing a mannequin comics so it was prbly mine :3

  • @trinstonmichaels7062
    @trinstonmichaels7062 3 роки тому

    Trinston was here.

  • @conhow5907
    @conhow5907 3 роки тому

    The background of this song sounds eerily similar to Until Next Time from detarune
    👌