Hey y’all, I am the author of this fic. Big shout out to DarkSage for publishing my content. This man is a hero providing content for us to soak in. I have agreed to partner with him and publish my future works through him. I have written two so far that will be able to give you 10-12 hours of entertainment a piece. They should be out by the end of February. If you have any questions, any preferences, any critiques, please let me know. Enjoy my first ever fic!
@@thomasblanks2842 I’m afraid I don’t understand what you are asking. I listened to a bunch of what ifs and I wanted to contribute to the fanfic community so I wrote one. I just did it in a way that I wanted to see it happen.
😮I have to be honest: a story this specific of one part the timeline that would have truly change Everything is astonishing! I'm surprised is not as common as we thought, but done in other ways indirect by other individuals, instead of the entire village actually listening to their so called "hero" Instead of dwelling in their grief and blind hatred to truly give their dues to the real Hero of their village!
@bradleykucera6371 : Wow, I think it's the second time I met the author in these comment sections of other UA-camrs that narrate these Stories with the computer voice. I've been to see that others like me would try to correct the Part of the original story that truly turned the fan base against the very village that the main character was trying to defend Despite his very home indirectly betraying they're supposed "heroic 4th Hokage" my desecrating his legacy. Ever since the Reveal the full story of the 9-tails attack, Receive time and time again how the shinobi, civilians, Hiruzen, Jiraiya, and the Clan heads have truly let Minato & Kushina down by going back on their promises and not truly raising or taking care of Naruto, when he truly needed it. This is the true origins of Naruto was so nuckle-headed stupidly desperate clown with no sense of tact nor fashion , Wearing the mask of the fool to hide the Inner scars that his own home put him through throughout his entire childhood That left an inner darkness that has more justification against Konoha than Orochimaru, obito, and Sasuke combined! The Nerve of many constantly bashing Naruto's head for his suppose stupidity, Yet half of them knowing the reason why because no one would actually help him or give him the time of day to actually teach with sadly mirrors The disgrace of the leaf village that started surprisingly all the way to Hashirama: hunting down the bijuu and giving them away like prizes To promote peace by giving weapons to the other villages ( Proving Madara was right the whole time); caused the death of Toka Senju Who was meant to be the second hokage, leading Tobirama to take charge and let his obvious hidden racism for the uchiha to Be passed down to Danzo & rig Konoha's political system; Hiruzen's passive sympathy clouding his judgment & leadership in his second term that allowed a Orochimaru, Danzo, Tsunade, & others to get away with their own agendas & behaviors without consequences, Even his short-sighted decision-making of stringing naruto along to stay loyal to the village by hiding the truth from him in all the time leaving him in poverty without adoption; Jiraiya not taking steps of upholding his role as the godfather by only making it up for later on while still keeping important secrets from naruto ; the clan heads And other high ranked ninjas like Kakashi & Genma not doing enough to help Naruto and just do nothing during his childhood, Despite them personally knowing Minato and Kushina; The removal or dismissal of the Uzumaki Clan in the history books, despite their close alliance starting with Mito being married to Hashirama and the first Jinchuuriki to Karama (relates to the red swirling symbols on the uniforms & leaf symbol); & Tsunade ,though supportive, never fully trusted naruto either with the secrets of his family line, His help in the fourth great ninja war, and delaying his rise to Hokage (according to 6th Hokage Kakashi's novel). All these examples is a sad reflection of the Untrustworthy Hypocrisy of the leaf village with Neji symbolizing this point that is reflected throughout the entire show ( No wonder why he was killed off), And due to this Domino effect Plus the seventh hokogae term right after his marriage, even Naruto have sir come to the hypocrisy of his own show, breaking his own promises in Boruto which that did his children as well by being under his father shadow, becoming a Stigma that's even worse than Legend of Korra. Even if I was in the Naruto Universe I would rather be a Samurai Of the land of Iron than A ninja in any of the villages even the minor ones! [ Which is exactly why fans like us Are here to try to fix things with our own Storytelling and finish where the original creator started it all 😁]
To be fair the second hokage was a part of the same clan as the first and that clan was directly related to the uzumaki clan as the two clans used to be one much larger clan but the uzumaki left them do to the discrimination they faced do to the differences they had such as red hair and chakra chains it was similar to how tailed beasts jailers are treated but not quite as bad but the uzumaki have a short temper as a result they refused to lay down and take it giving the clan head a choice let us leave without issue or we will declare war on the rest of you it would be a civil war within the clan and given the issues they had with the uchiha at the time the clan head knew there was no real choice but to let them leave beside the clan was in the wrong for treating family is such an awful way that they were determined to leave even if it meant committing the ultimate taboo killing one’s own kin.
With the whole summoning scroll thing it’s should have been the uzumaki clan got the kitsune contract and namikazi got the toad because his father already had it and the kitsune is red the color of the uzumaki but that just my opinion I doesn’t really matter because this video came out about a month before this comment😅
Spoiler alert also dont spoil me lol Im only an hour in, I hope this is a Naruto x Ino. Ive seen many ships but never one with Ino. I've actually began to write what ifs myself and i planned to do some with Ino. I hope this takes that route as it's unique and not done too often.
Hehe, well it was my first fanfic and I couldn't contain myself once my idea took root. I hope that you enjoy the ride. Spoiler, NaruxIno is probably my favorite ship.
Loving the story so far, but every time i listen to a new fanfic all i can think is "please not another Naruto Hinata love story" I'm sorry but she is sooooo fucking boring
Hey y’all, I am the author of this fic. Big shout out to DarkSage for publishing my content. This man is a hero providing content for us to soak in.
I have agreed to partner with him and publish my future works through him. I have written two so far that will be able to give you 10-12 hours of entertainment a piece. They should be out by the end of February.
If you have any questions, any preferences, any critiques, please let me know. Enjoy my first ever fic!
Thanks, bro. I enjoyed this video and your last story. You are a good author.
@@sliven410 Thanks dude, I really appreciate the stories!
Sure thing. Any feedback for the childhood segment that was covered in this video?
How do you go about writing What if. Then how do you get someone to read your what if like you did with Dark Sage.
@@thomasblanks2842 I’m afraid I don’t understand what you are asking. I listened to a bunch of what ifs and I wanted to contribute to the fanfic community so I wrote one. I just did it in a way that I wanted to see it happen.
I love that half of the Naruto what ifs really just come down to what if hiruzen was competent
Yep, competent and courageous
Guess he just a monkey brain xd
This is a premise I've never heard before.
Usually it's just a konoha, Rookie 9, or Jiriya/Kakashi bashing.
I'm excited for this one!
The pranking of the Hyuga, turning the elders pink and blinding them was priceless 🤣
I would love a part 2 of this~
I love this one man keep it up
😮I have to be honest: a story this specific of one part the timeline that would have truly change Everything is astonishing! I'm surprised is not as common as we thought, but done in other ways indirect by other individuals, instead of the entire village actually listening to their so called "hero" Instead of dwelling in their grief and blind hatred to truly give their dues to the real Hero of their village!
thanks for the feedback, i hope you continue to enjoy it. I wrote this one to completion so sit back and enjoy the ride.
@bradleykucera6371 : Wow, I think it's the second time I met the author in these comment sections of other UA-camrs that narrate these Stories with the computer voice. I've been to see that others like me would try to correct the Part of the original story that truly turned the fan base against the very village that the main character was trying to defend Despite his very home indirectly betraying they're supposed "heroic 4th Hokage" my desecrating his legacy. Ever since the Reveal the full story of the 9-tails attack, Receive time and time again how the shinobi, civilians, Hiruzen, Jiraiya, and the Clan heads have truly let Minato & Kushina down by going back on their promises and not truly raising or taking care of Naruto,
when he truly needed it. This is the true origins of Naruto was so nuckle-headed stupidly desperate clown with no sense of tact nor fashion , Wearing the mask of the fool to hide the Inner scars that his own home put him through throughout his entire childhood That left an inner darkness that has more justification against Konoha than Orochimaru, obito, and Sasuke combined! The Nerve of many constantly bashing Naruto's head for his suppose stupidity, Yet half of them knowing the reason why because no one would actually help him or give him the time of day to actually teach with sadly mirrors The disgrace of the leaf village that started surprisingly all the way to Hashirama: hunting down the bijuu and giving them away like prizes To promote peace by giving weapons to the other villages ( Proving Madara was right the whole time); caused the death of Toka Senju Who was meant to be the second hokage, leading Tobirama to take charge and let his obvious hidden racism for the uchiha to Be passed down to Danzo & rig Konoha's political system;
Hiruzen's passive sympathy clouding his judgment & leadership in his second term that allowed a Orochimaru, Danzo, Tsunade, & others to get away with their own agendas & behaviors without consequences, Even his short-sighted decision-making of stringing naruto along to stay loyal to the village by hiding the truth from him in all the time leaving him in poverty without adoption; Jiraiya not taking steps of upholding his role as the godfather by only making it up for later on while still keeping important secrets from naruto ;
the clan heads And other high ranked ninjas like Kakashi & Genma not doing enough to help Naruto and just do nothing during his childhood, Despite them personally knowing Minato and Kushina; The removal or dismissal of the Uzumaki Clan in the history books, despite their close alliance starting with Mito being married to Hashirama and the first Jinchuuriki to Karama
(relates to the red swirling symbols on the uniforms & leaf symbol); & Tsunade ,though supportive, never fully trusted naruto either with the secrets of his family line,
His help in the fourth great ninja war, and delaying his rise to Hokage (according to 6th Hokage Kakashi's novel).
All these examples is a sad reflection of the Untrustworthy Hypocrisy of the leaf village with Neji symbolizing this point that is reflected throughout the entire show ( No wonder why he was killed off), And due to this Domino effect Plus the seventh hokogae term right after his marriage, even Naruto have sir come to the hypocrisy of his own show, breaking his own promises in Boruto which that did his children as well by being under his father shadow, becoming a Stigma that's even worse than Legend of Korra. Even if I was in the Naruto Universe I would rather be a Samurai Of the land of Iron than A ninja in any of the villages even the minor ones!
[ Which is exactly why fans like us Are here to try to fix things with our own Storytelling and finish where the original creator started it all 😁]
@@tianoc-g4811 I agree. It is what drives me to write a better version of Kishimoto’s story.
@@bradleykucera6371 the one peeve i have is you saying the kage bunshin was created by the uzumaki. when it was created by the second hokage
To be fair the second hokage was a part of the same clan as the first and that clan was directly related to the uzumaki clan as the two clans used to be one much larger clan but the uzumaki left them do to the discrimination they faced do to the differences they had such as red hair and chakra chains it was similar to how tailed beasts jailers are treated but not quite as bad but the uzumaki have a short temper as a result they refused to lay down and take it giving the clan head a choice let us leave without issue or we will declare war on the rest of you it would be a civil war within the clan and given the issues they had with the uchiha at the time the clan head knew there was no real choice but to let them leave beside the clan was in the wrong for treating family is such an awful way that they were determined to leave even if it meant committing the ultimate taboo killing one’s own kin.
W fanfic I’ve been watching u for years
I love it !
Ok I got say I hope part 2 will come outside soon.
Part 2 please this is good
Bruh how did u finish a 4 hour video in 1 hour 💀
@@dark_boy_gaming3317hahaha😂😂
I love this story well written and love how it was told keep up the great work can't wait for part 2 😊😊😊❤❤
I like this one gg
Need a part 2
Please make more of these videos
Part 2 please
17th to like
I hope this is as good as *Regret* if you know you know
Could we get the next part of jinjurikis brother and emperor
Jinjurikis brother is unfinished
Love the story but they did Tobirama dirty stealing his jutsu and giving it to the Uzumaki clan
why is sharing a summoner taboo in so many fanfics? when sasuke was summoning snakes and hawks in cannon?
It’s only taboo if it’s either two major summoning clans or enemy summoning clans.
@@scottbrooks3403 where'd you get that info from?
@@kingslum2342Even if it’s not canon it makes sense why a clan wouldn’t want a summoner to have another major clan or an enemy clan
@@VR-xr1wy then don't make them enermies??????? that's completely up to the fanfic writer
@@kingslum2342 Yeah that’s true but I think it’s because of his own animals are in real life but who knows why they do that in Canon & fanfic
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66th like ☝️😎
With the whole summoning scroll thing it’s should have been the uzumaki clan got the kitsune contract and namikazi got the toad because his father already had it and the kitsune is red the color of the uzumaki but that just my opinion I doesn’t really matter because this video came out about a month before this comment😅
3:35:46
What if Naruto had the barbatos
Spoiler alert also dont spoil me lol
Im only an hour in, I hope this is a Naruto x Ino. Ive seen many ships but never one with Ino. I've actually began to write what ifs myself and i planned to do some with Ino. I hope this takes that route as it's unique and not done too often.
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Hey dark sage, where do u get this art from the thumbnails? Im curious
I make them myself. It takes time but idk i just do it that way
@@DarkSage7Wow, ur awesome
❤️
@@DarkSage7 props to you, i would've just commissioned for it. Regardless u do a good job
Love this what if I hope this be a Naruto x Ino. I always thought Naruto should been shipped with Ino in Naruto.
She def was, best choice. Otherwise, I felt that It should have been an older ninja or foreign ninja based on plot and Interest 😅
Hehe, well it was my first fanfic and I couldn't contain myself once my idea took root. I hope that you enjoy the ride. Spoiler, NaruxIno is probably my favorite ship.
Loving the story so far, but every time i listen to a new fanfic all i can think is "please not another Naruto Hinata love story" I'm sorry but she is sooooo fucking boring
Happy to inform its not a naruhina🤣
@@DarkSage7 I just did a little happy dance ^^
Damm , people really hate naruhina ship for some reason
@@MinatoNamikaze-wc4fp It's mostly because Hinata is about as interesting as a piece of burnt toast.
Please Don't be a naruhina