What if Naruto was Jiraiya’s apprentice from the start | Part 1

[@thebroneeds9635]

Amazing bro you and fox sage are the only channels that upload quality.
P.S i need part 2 please

[@isaacself1947]

Honestly I'm about getting tired of fox sage because he or she only does 2 or 3 episodes then leaves it for another one

[@jakeycharles5642]

​@@isaacself1947but you can't lie his stories do be good

[@LakshHasani]

I agree with it just continue the series and please completed it

[@Piano_improvisations]

I stopped watching fox sage because he never finished stories and I am tired of that. Like you think „omg this is one of the greatest stories of all time“ and then he doesn’t upload the next part…

[@kennethclark1485]

I've never seen Fox Sage not finish a fanfic, I've always had Dark Fox Sage post one or two episodes and never finish the story

[@Rajsakcham17]

I shall hunt you down to the deepest hells if you do not post part 2 🙂

[@DarkSage7]

that smiley looks rather ominous

[@Rajsakcham17]

Oh trust me… it is very ominous 😭😂 lmao

[@Rajsakcham17]

Pleaseeeee post part 2 now

[@LakshHasani]

Chill bro

[@noms4397]

But of a tame reaction, I was expecting something more devious 😁

[@DragoWhatif-rt7yz]

I always wondered why didn't hiruzen just use the death seal instantly on orochimaru instead of wasting it on the previous hokage and essentially punishing them.

[@montymont4192]

i like this writer

[@333.levelSzn]

Part 2 plzzz

[@kevinh8446]

Part 2 please this was awesome 🤩

[@Adam73.]

4:10:11: Never back down never what?

[@black1718]

Never give up

[@shadowkage.fanfic]

@@black1718ehhh mazing

[@reddemon7721]

this was super good, cant wait for part 2

[@strikejeremyhopkins7933]

Can’t wait for part 2

[@Lazimate]

Naruto vs mizuki the best jumping except for jjk

[@legacyplays6050]

The original jumping to start it all 😂

[@awhatif_fan]

agree jjk is on another level but always the naruto vs Mizuki is good

[@Lazimate]

Fax

[@Jeanny-c1o]

This Naruto looks more like Minato then the original

[@chrishosey7535]

Ooohhh this is gonna be good

[@AJANIAnderson-dy4by]

amazing video as always sage

[@justus4452]

Great what if please Part 2

[@freshlightening4040]

seems like a banger as always, keep up the amazing work :)

[@mrmodojosr4369]

Just decided to look at the chapter count it’s fuvking 98 with 450k words!

[@zA1336-c3h]

Part 2 ASAP please

[@fingermuncher443]

Part 2 fast

[@Kuro_701]

Keep it up man this is fire 🔥🔥

[@edgarhenriquez3712]

Part 2 please ❤

[@Your14DayTrialHasEnded]

Amazing as always

[@progamer_otaku6542]

Imma be honest stories like these make me realize how useless of a master Jiraiya actually was, at most Naruto came back to the village after 2 years learning the big ball rasengan.

[@PortgasDASCE]

Don’t forget his even sexier jutsu 😂

[@androxtempest3913]

Jiraiya would of been a better teacher if he wasnt a super pervert

[@nicholasficarella4531]

True he can learn anything but he refined his skills

[@TrippleH03]

I mean while that’s a part of it part of it was literally having to start naruto over from scratch that’s difficult to break a habit then correct it. Not to mention he did teach him taints and had him train his Chakra control he woulda been LEVELS BETTER if he had a good start

[@nicholasficarella4531]

@@TrippleH03 yah but he could’ve done better only making him high chiunin level

[@faheemzaka9172]

Part 2 quick time please

[@Kazuto_senju]

Part 2 plz

[@joshuamerriweather2861]

Naruto the toad sages apprentice by freowin

[@ertdder]

1 amazing everything

[@Adam73.]

Part 2 plssss

[@itsfunny_aj7749]

Part 2 part 2 😁

[@narutonamikaze8515]

🎉🎉

[@sebastianmichaels1561]

Pt 2 please

[@SandySpuuvy]

We need a part 2 frfr

[@DarkSage7]

Tomorrow likely❤️

[@jacobjacob4968]

U should make yugito nii x naruto

[@jacobjacob4968]

Yes they should

[@Monkeyboi133]

Bro commented on his own comment 😂

[@Jaymoney21-l5h]

Part 2

[@landisusmc1]

Man some of these writers are so lazy. Lets make the story exactly like the anime in some parts.

[@nixson8809]

Why do most of these writers call Orochimaru orochopitu 😅😅😅

[@landisusmc1]

@nixson8809 that part is just the AI having issues pronouncing his name. Probably using a free text to speech program.

[@nixson8809]

@@landisusmc1 and here I was thinking that orochopedo is a nickname given to him because of some of his jutsu's that make him throw himself headfirst at his enemies at a fast speed like a torpedo .

[@landisusmc1]

@nixson8809 if it's a nickname I'd say it has to do with his fascination with young boys lol

[@nixson8809]

@@landisusmc1 🤮🤮🤮

[@steezy2428]

I hope yugito doesn’t die from akatsuki

[@Owensaal]

Can you upload a what if naruto was madara's reincarnation

[@Michael60000]

Can you please make another part

[@mr.peckens5018]

God dam does the author know what a full stop and a comma is?

[@DarkSage7]

Its like that for the first couple chapters but it improves drastically

[@dannyzardy]

Punctuations will make this 100% better 😅

[@DarkSage7]

yeah. If im not mistaken, only the first 15-20 chapters are like that. after that it should be noticeably better

[@screamineagle3052]

I want to like this story the multiple parts long videos, but with how fast there speed running the story I can't help but feel if so little time spent on the small events like training how can I feel like they'll take the time on the big events they have exposed there lack of effort the main beats. The small stuff is what gives a story it's charm not the big events we have all seen the main fights in the anime why would we care about it done worse in a written/audio format

[@DarkSage7]

its like that in the beginning. after like chapter 15 there is much improvement

[@purgemystudioproductions5514]

1:52:41

[@vamble363]

Hey wheres the rest of this damnit 😂

[@jakeycharles5642]

@darksage is there any ships if so what are the ships w story btw

[@Lastofthesigilites]

If those two fuck does that make a beast with 12 tails and 2 backs?

[@rinkiifs]

Bro who made this story. The really said im the real author of the icha icha series with the title for yuginaru inspired forbidden love😂

[@thomasblanks2842]

Is this going to be Naruto x Ino.

[@DeniseWilliams0409]

what if naruto was a black man

[@Falchion1732]

Bro, I forgot about you honestly

[@DarkSage7]

🥲

[@Acesponge23]

My video bookmark:
1:05:18

[@victoradedayo2712]

why wind i mean wind is not a bad element but lighting is better

[@Adam73.]

Because Its Cannon

[@nk47596]

Wind is just more versatile

[@mrplayboyinternational.1999]

@@nk47596 Lightning: Umm ok... *strikes you* What do you think of me now?!!?

[@nk47596]

I’m not saying that lightning release is bad it’s just that wind release has more versatility @@mrplayboyinternational.1999

[@patrickdowden4291]

Wind is more versatile

[@destroyerguy908]

Some of these interactions seem forced ash

[@thetechgaming1942]

Bhit khit shit

[@jacobsifuentes8569]

Can't wait for part 2

[@djdriver2344]

Part 2 please

[@kee_bagchaser1951]

Part 2

[@camle0493]

part 2 please

[@AlexUrness-ke2ix]

Part 2