What if Naruto was Jiraiya’s apprentice from the start | Part 1

[@thebroneeds9635]

Amazing bro you and fox sage are the only channels that upload quality.
P.S i need part 2 please

[@isaacself1947]

Honestly I'm about getting tired of fox sage because he or she only does 2 or 3 episodes then leaves it for another one

[@jakeycharles5642]

​@@isaacself1947but you can't lie his stories do be good

[@LakshHasani]

I agree with it just continue the series and please completed it

[@Piano_improvisations]

I stopped watching fox sage because he never finished stories and I am tired of that. Like you think „omg this is one of the greatest stories of all time“ and then he doesn’t upload the next part…

[@kennethclark1485]

I've never seen Fox Sage not finish a fanfic, I've always had Dark Fox Sage post one or two episodes and never finish the story

[@Rajsakcham17]

I shall hunt you down to the deepest hells if you do not post part 2 🙂

[@DarkSage7]

that smiley looks rather ominous

[@Rajsakcham17]

Oh trust me… it is very ominous 😭😂 lmao

[@Rajsakcham17]

Pleaseeeee post part 2 now

[@LakshHasani]

Chill bro

[@noms4397]

But of a tame reaction, I was expecting something more devious 😁

[@kevinh8446]

Part 2 please this was awesome 🤩

[@DragoWhatif-rt7yz]

I always wondered why didn't hiruzen just use the death seal instantly on orochimaru instead of wasting it on the previous hokage and essentially punishing them.

[@strikejeremyhopkins7933]

Can’t wait for part 2

[@reddemon7721]

this was super good, cant wait for part 2

[@Adam73.]

4:10:11: Never back down never what?

[@black1718]

Never give up

[@shadowkage.fanfic]

@@black1718ehhh mazing

[@NathanSeaney-q9q]

Ts is absolute gold... 🤣🤣🤣 I'm glad I seen these comments brus... Thank y'all 😂

[@AJANIAnderson-dy4by]

amazing video as always sage

[@freshlightening4040]

seems like a banger as always, keep up the amazing work :)

[@333.levelSzn]

Part 2 plzzz

[@chrishosey7535]

Ooohhh this is gonna be good

[@leptonparticle238]

That Naruto speach about overcoming fate while being an undersog is even more BS than in the original. WTF you mean, you are literally broken, not inly you have insane stamina and chakra anount, not only you are being trained by Jiraya, you also have the fucking 9 tails which by the way is the reason you won the fight

[@Your14DayTrialHasEnded]

Amazing as always

[@Kuro_701]

Keep it up man this is fire 🔥🔥

[@justus4452]

Great what if please Part 2

[@edgarhenriquez3712]

Part 2 please ❤

[@mrmodojosr4369]

Just decided to look at the chapter count it’s fuvking 98 with 450k words!

[@Jeanny-c1o]

This Naruto looks more like Minato then the original

[@zA1336-c3h]

Part 2 ASAP please

[@fingermuncher443]

Part 2 fast

[@progamer_otaku6542]

Imma be honest stories like these make me realize how useless of a master Jiraiya actually was, at most Naruto came back to the village after 2 years learning the big ball rasengan.

[@PortgasDASCE]

Don’t forget his even sexier jutsu 😂

[@androxtempest3913]

Jiraiya would of been a better teacher if he wasnt a super pervert

[@nicholasficarella4531]

True he can learn anything but he refined his skills

[@TrippleH03]

I mean while that’s a part of it part of it was literally having to start naruto over from scratch that’s difficult to break a habit then correct it. Not to mention he did teach him taints and had him train his Chakra control he woulda been LEVELS BETTER if he had a good start

[@nicholasficarella4531]

@@TrippleH03 yah but he could’ve done better only making him high chiunin level

[@SandySpuuvy]

We need a part 2 frfr

[@DarkSage7]

Tomorrow likely❤️

[@montymont4192]

i like this writer

[@faheemzaka9172]

Part 2 quick time please

[@Kazuto_senju]

Part 2 plz

[@screamineagle3052]

I want to like this story the multiple parts long videos, but with how fast there speed running the story I can't help but feel if so little time spent on the small events like training how can I feel like they'll take the time on the big events they have exposed there lack of effort the main beats. The small stuff is what gives a story it's charm not the big events we have all seen the main fights in the anime why would we care about it done worse in a written/audio format

[@DarkSage7]

its like that in the beginning. after like chapter 15 there is much improvement

[@itsfunny_aj7749]

Part 2 part 2 😁

[@Owensaal]

Can you upload a what if naruto was madara's reincarnation

[@jacobjacob4968]

U should make yugito nii x naruto

[@jacobjacob4968]

Yes they should

[@Monkeyboi133]

Bro commented on his own comment 😂

[@landisusmc1]

Man some of these writers are so lazy. Lets make the story exactly like the anime in some parts.

[@nixson8809]

Why do most of these writers call Orochimaru orochopitu 😅😅😅

[@landisusmc1]

@nixson8809 that part is just the AI having issues pronouncing his name. Probably using a free text to speech program.

[@nixson8809]

@@landisusmc1 and here I was thinking that orochopedo is a nickname given to him because of some of his jutsu's that make him throw himself headfirst at his enemies at a fast speed like a torpedo .

[@landisusmc1]

@nixson8809 if it's a nickname I'd say it has to do with his fascination with young boys lol

[@nixson8809]

@@landisusmc1 🤮🤮🤮

[@Lazimate]

Naruto vs mizuki the best jumping except for jjk

[@legacyplays6050]

The original jumping to start it all 😂

[@awhatif_fan]

agree jjk is on another level but always the naruto vs Mizuki is good

[@Lazimate]

Fax

[@narutonamikaze8515]

🎉🎉

[@ertdder]

1 amazing everything

[@sebastianmichaels1561]

Pt 2 please

[@Adam73.]

Part 2 plssss

[@jakeycharles5642]

@darksage is there any ships if so what are the ships w story btw

[@Dinky_Noob]

God dam does the author know what a full stop and a comma is?

[@DarkSage7]

Its like that for the first couple chapters but it improves drastically

[@Michael60000]

Can you please make another part

[@dannyzardy]

Punctuations will make this 100% better 😅

[@DarkSage7]

yeah. If im not mistaken, only the first 15-20 chapters are like that. after that it should be noticeably better

[@vamble363]

Hey wheres the rest of this damnit 😂

[@steezy2428]

I hope yugito doesn’t die from akatsuki

[@Lastofthesigilites]

If those two fuck does that make a beast with 12 tails and 2 backs?

[@purgemystudioproductions5514]

1:52:41

[@Acesponge23]

My video bookmark:
1:05:18

[@Jaymoney21-l5h]

Part 2

[@rinkiifs]

Bro who made this story. The really said im the real author of the icha icha series with the title for yuginaru inspired forbidden love😂

[@thomasblanks2842]

Is this going to be Naruto x Ino.

[@joshuamerriweather2861]

Naruto the toad sages apprentice by freowin

[@Falchion1732]

Bro, I forgot about you honestly

[@DarkSage7]

🥲

[@DeniseWilliams0409]

what if naruto was a black man

[@victoradedayo2712]

why wind i mean wind is not a bad element but lighting is better

[@Adam73.]

Because Its Cannon

[@nk47596]

Wind is just more versatile

[@mrplayboyinternational.1999]

@@nk47596 Lightning: Umm ok... *strikes you* What do you think of me now?!!?

[@nk47596]

I’m not saying that lightning release is bad it’s just that wind release has more versatility @@mrplayboyinternational.1999

[@patrickdowden4291]

Wind is more versatile

[@destroyerguy908]

Some of these interactions seem forced ash

[@thetechgaming1942]

Bhit khit shit

[@jacobsifuentes8569]

Can't wait for part 2

[@djdriver2344]

Part 2 please

[@kee_bagchaser1951]

Part 2

[@camle0493]

part 2 please

[@AlexUrness-ke2ix]

Part 2