Some helpful tips... Remember to secure (tape) your sets down and your camera down as well. Be careful with the 'camera bumps', make sure that your camera is always in the same place. It helps to go back and review the shots that you filmed to avoid this. Also, what framerate are you filming at?
This film does have a fun feel to it. I think that it's important to point out that you are moving in the right direction as far as improvement in your animation. I do see potential here.
Some helpful tips...
Remember to secure (tape) your sets down and your camera down as well. Be careful with the 'camera bumps', make sure that your camera is always in the same place. It helps to go back and review the shots that you filmed to avoid this. Also, what framerate are you filming at?
This film does have a fun feel to it. I think that it's important to point out that you are moving in the right direction as far as improvement in your animation. I do see potential here.