1990 Enigma it’s called the qwerkywriter keyboard. www.qwerkywriter.com/collections/frontpage/products/qwerkywriter-s-typewriter-inspired-mechanical-keyboard
I've been developing a book idea for YEARS, and I'm finally ready to start. I have no formal training, so UA-cam is my writing mentor. I appreciate your humility, and your generosity in sharing tips like these for apprentices like myself. Thank you Jerry!
1. Establish your writing space. 2. Assemble your writing tools. 3. Break the project into small pieces. 4. Settle on your big idea. 5. Construct your outline. 6. Set a firm writing schedule. (Firm Deadline) 7. Conduct your research. 8. Write a compelling, reader-first, opener. 9. Fill your story with conflict and tension. 10. Turn off your internal editor. (While writing) 11. Don't quit during the Marathon of the Middle. 12. Write a resounding ending. 13. Become a ferocious (aggressive) self-editor. Edit: I highly recommend watching the video too for a better explanation, this is just an overview of the content.
I have decided it's time to attempt to write a novel about my life . I was a heroin addict for 12 years bringing up my son, today I have been clean 18 years but I feel now is the time to inspire other addicts to getting the strength they might need to get clean. Wish me luck :) Thanks for the video.
Yes!!! How many great stories /films have really poor endings when they promised so much!!! Be honest and give them the reward you promised them throughout
I remember reading "Lord of the Rings" (the Korean title is 반지의 제왕). The start was great. But the midle was so bad I feel asleep. The book dropped out of my hand.
Idk why but it reminds me of ratatuil cartoon line anyones can cook and for some reason it puts smile on my face 😅 I don't consider myself a pro author but I do have passion for writing and just creating a story, good luck to anyone who thrives to write 💜
I am 74 years old and have never written a book. I am debating between writing a screen play or book. It is a compelling story about a friend of mine who was disabled and ended up being one of the most talented musician, singer and song writer I have ever known. I just hope I can due him justice so other people can know his story. You have filled in many pieces for me so that Ii think I can at least start. Thank you.
Your friend's story already captured my heart from how you described him i am sure you will write a great book or screenplay! I wish you the best, you got this!
1. Establish your writing space. 2. Assemble your writing tools. 3. Break the project into small pieces. 4. Settle on your big idea. 5. Construct your outline. 6. Set a firm writing schedule. (Firm Deadline). 7. Conduct your research. 8. Write a compelling, reader-first, opener. 9. Fill your story with conflict and tension. 10. Turn off your internal editor. (While writing). 11. Don't quit during the Marathon of the Middle. 12. Write a resounding ending. 13. Become a ferocious (aggressive) self-editor.
I don't think you need to write your amazing first line first at all. I think you could write your whole book and find or write your first line as the very last thing you do. Writing doesnt have to be linear. You don't have to write it in the order its gonna be read.
People really responding like “you dont know me” or “you dont know my life” like??? They said “To whoever needs it:” so just scroll past if you dont need it, stop acting like a goddamn 9 year old.
I have a favorite bit of advice given to me by my grandmother, “Don’t write it right, just write it down.” Easier said than done at times! Thanks for the list of tips!
I wrote 2 stories on Wattpad. "The Remaining Few" and "Tomorrow's Edge". Both look good on paper and my friend is the only one reading it. Sometimes I think he's just biased when he's reading and doesn't see the flaws. So I can't really know if my writing is as good as I think it is. Mind giving them a read? Name of the writer: RAZORTALES/RazorTales
Thank you so much for this... at nearly 48.... after raising 7 kids and putting off the urge to write since I was 14.... I AM DOING THIS.... and Jerry, this helped me more than you know. ♡ To any young people reading this.... DON'T WAIT UNTIL YOU'RE 48. Go for it ♡
I’ve been writing the same book since I was 13. I’m 20 now and the book has transformed over and over and I know I’ll never publish it but it’s nice to write something for myself and have my own world to escape to
Right, like so many videos with loud background music one has to strain to hear the speaker clearly. The videos should not have music distracting from the content if the subject is worthy on its own merit.
I am a ten year old. I love reading and writing books. This is my time to shine. I have this competition to write a book and I will be competing against people from 17 other countries. You have helped me complete my book, The awesome adventure of Mom-o-tron. Now all that’s left is winning. Thank you Mr.Jenkins ❤ Anvi
The biggest problem I had when I begun writing was wanting to do it "correctly". I wanted to know what outlines, structures, templates, and exactly how each detail should be carefully placed. I spent way too much of my time scavenging the internet for step-by-step guides and not actually writing a single word. Don't do what I did. Just write, eventually you'll begin to feel the flow and the words will piece together in the beautiful art form we call writing. Your first draft is inevitably going to be horrible, so don't waste your time and effort focusing on it. Get out your pen and paper, open up your laptop, do whatever you need to do to get started, and just write. Trust me, it'll all come together in the end.
Learned that you should just write first draft. The second draft should be more detailed and bigger. Eventually you have so much that you wrote it all down and have to piece those parts together into the eventual novel. (tip I got from a Jo Nesbo interview). :)
You do know what you are talking about with keeping the audience's attention, because I never thought I would watch the entire 17 minutes of this video, but I was at the end before I knew it and I wanted more. Thanks so much for your videos.
I've adapted to writing anywhere, any time at all for any length of time at all times of day; never at night. Every morning I eagerly look forward to writing, proofing, editing, voicing, rereading as often as it takes. Staying grateful and excited. In busy public places I slip on headphones, put on songs I like that keeps out distractions. Writing by the seat of my pants like I live, never outline or predetermine how much I plan to write daily. Never do disappoint myself because I WANT to do this.
I'm 16. I've been developing a story from the age of twelve through roleplaying, bits of writing and art. I know the characters like the back of my hand. I have grown with them through their and my own development during life. Going to try writing a book soon about it. You've really inspired me, thank you.
Im also young and get so many story ideas that i want to put on paper, but i dont know how to. I always worry it wont be good and seem weird, could you give me some tips on how to fix that it seems like you have a lot of experience .
@@starry_venus first off, try to just push yourself to write! The first step is the hardest but it makes the rest easier. Don't worry about the quality of it just yet, just start getting yourself into writing. The more you write, the more you improve and enjoy it. If you have a single story or characters you already have quite planned out, I'd say building off them further. I feel very emotionally bonded to the characters I've made as well as the world I've created. It helps me motivate myself into writing, because I want to express the beautiful things on my mind.
@@starry_venus I'm sure you have wonderful ideas, and the more you work on them the more it'll improve. Not all ideas begin as something fantastic, it takes time and effort. Don't expect so much from yourself in the beginning. My story began as such a simple and cliche thing ahaha. Enjoy the process. It's fun~
@@starry_venus if you do want proper tips of how to write, you can look up videos for that sort of thing. But don't get too caught up in it, try to focus on the way you want to write first. Everyone has their own writing style, you'll find what yours is the more you write.
You wanna know how stunning of a writer he is , just think how he walked you through the whole video without getting bored for a second .. Love it , and I'm following for more ♥️
I didn't have to read any of his books to know that he is a real deal of a writer. Every word in this video is very beautifully put together. Very smooth yet very impactful in every point he is trying to make. Thank you.
How ironic that I just discovered this video the day after I finished writing my first novel! I feel even more confident about it after watching this wonderful video by such a talented, thoughtful and ambitious soul. It took me over 14 years of procrastination, frustration, and typing to achieve this goal. My message to everyone on here working on their book: please don't give up. Be patient with your writing, and even more importantly, be kind to yourself. Keep at it. You'll get there.
@@fredrikahaggblom5877 Hello! And thank you for your support of my little novel in progress.The working title is "Master of Puppets" inspired by the Metallica album of the same name. It will be in a similar style to my first collection of poetry and prose "The Muse of Love and Pain". I'm shooting to finish revisions and hand it over to my editor by December. Wish me luck, my friend!
Writer's block during the above? Write something, anything. 'The cat sat on the mat' becomes 'The cat, weary from a long morning of being a cat, sat on the mat'. That morphs to 'The cat, weary from a long morning of being a cat, decided to add some variety to its daily life by not sitting on the mat'. And you're up and running.. 'Deeto opened the door and walked in...' can easily become a dramatic paragraph, and it doesn't even matter that you don't have a character called Deeto (you do now..).
@Madison Daily taking time off for stress can certainly help in certain cases, but often the point of writing everyday isn't actually to add words to your book consistantly, the stuff you force is obviously forced, and will end up in the trash. The point is to write everyday so that you are in the mindset of writing everyday, and you'll end up wanting to write more days than not. Its a cumulative effort rather than a truly consistant one.
I’m a 47 year old postman from Ireland who absolutely loved writing when younger . I’ve always wanted to write a book , just so I can say I did it. Tried , failed , every single time . I have watched countless videos , read an array of books promising me it knew how to do it. I just opened a beer and happened to see this video on my feed. In all these years this is the only advice that makes any sense to me . Thank you so much. I am now on a quest to consume everything you have inadvertently laid out for me . Thank you mr Jenkins - and I mean that Edit - I don’t want this video to end
I can recommend NaNoWriMo to you. it won't make you write a great book normally, but it will make you actually WRITE a book and it will make you want to write a better book once your finished.
Same here. I love this man and I've never met him. From an author to another author it's beautiful to gain more knowledge and find those with great wisdom and experience. You're going to write an incredible book! Get started my friend ❤
I'm not a writer - at least, not for books. But I am making my first indie game. I don't know why or how I stumbled on this video, but I'm glad I did. This is how my game will be brought to life. Thank you for the advice, sir! PS: Loved the quote "Quality is the point."
How do I start with game development? I feel like I have so many stories to tell but I have no idea what and how to do things. Any videos I should watch?🙏
Yes! There are so many authors on UA-cam that talk about the importance of hiring a really good "editor" and then describe how the editor completely rewrote the story as if that's normal. They might as well just hire a ghostwriter and be honest about it. 😂
I really appreciate this as it's probably saved me lots of time. I realize that I simply don't have the internal drive to do any of this stuff. My writing dreams are just pipe dreams, I think I'll keep them that way. But I'll keep reading, and supporting writers who actually produce fine work!
10yrs+ to write a book is such a long time wtf. The dude on the video wrote 190+ books in 40 years meaning it takes him on average around 2 months to write 1 book.
@@smartquotes6838 so? no need to be rude, maybe the guy that took 10+ years is just writing for fun, while the guy on the vid makes a living out of writing
Nuno Correia writing is different for everyone...'Speed is not the point' as said in the video, 'Quality is the point'. write until you're happy with the finished product. Writing is fun. If you force yourself to be quick, you'll most likely not be happy with what you got AND you'll burn yourself out AND hate writing. Doesn't matter how long you took to write the book, as long as you're happy with it, the time taken to write doesn't matter
I don’t usually comment and I’ve watched a lot of tutorials and videos (I guess we all have) but something about him is so paternal, you want to keep listening. The points he raised are all so valid and he explained fiction and non-fiction in the simplest language.
Anya, I agree 100%. Some tutorials tend towards verbosity, or include distracting bells & whistles. Other presenters are chirpy or droll. His voice was kind, encouraging, and he made each point clear, crisp, and short. Best of luck!
@Arrowshard good method but don’t edit too much while I’m the midst of writing, definitely counter productive. Best to let all your ideas flow and then cut it down later on.
Usually it's a hit or miss too lol. Like the "To kill a mockingbird" author didn't expect much from the book but it ended up being one of the most popular that they force kids to read in school 🤣
I'm sorry excited for my 24 hour challenge! I've listened to this video 3 times, once a day at work for the last 3 days. And this coming weekend is my time. I have 2 kids, 1 on the way, 2 jobs, hubby has 2 jobs, we're swamped and exhausted. But I know exactly what I'm gonna write! So excited
"Cut to add power," "Readers remember what moves them, "if it seems boring to you, your reader is asleep." Thank you for this helpful list spoken succinctly and effectively.
This man has this aura coming even through the screen. I dont know how he manages to,but the calm voice he speaks,makes your ears want to listen anyway.The atmosphere is quite calm and quiet,the perfect atmosphere for writing a book and he knows it,cause he has a very long experience on it. The steps are so thought-well and helpful. This whole video sends you to a whole other dimension. It honestly hypnotized me and my ears caught every word. Never been this focused in something in my life. And i have a story,which is fictional,and i feel so happy for it and i have this idea with me everywhere i go. My mind creates new opportunities for the characters in the book when it sees places.Its like,the more i get inspired,the more i want to see.I will succeed on this work and i know it. Not just to make it to the best-seller’s,but because thats my passion, *writing* ....
Honestly,couldn’t go any better! I have about a year thinking of the story but at the last six months i have worked on it more.Still preparing the outline but at times when i have nothing to do and i get inspierd,i keep notes.I really appreciate the fact you asked! 😄
@@lampyrisnoctiluca9904 Its going really really good! I still havent written like book pages BUT i am trying to build the world and my characters onto advancing more and more,and i have written a few scripts too! Thanks for asking! 😋
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1) Establish your Writing Space 0:29 2) Assemble your Writing Tools 1:31 3) Break the Project into Small Pieces 2:12 4) Settle on your Big Idea 2:41 5) Construct your Outline 3:30 6) Set a firm Writing Schedule (Firm Deadline) 6:04 7) Conduct your Research 7:51 8) Write a compelling, Reader-first, Opener 9:00 9) Fill your story with Conflict and Tension 11:10 10) Turn off your Internal Editor (While Writing) 12:46 11) Don't quit during the Marathon of the Middle 13:52 12) Write a Resounding Ending 15:06 12) Become a Ferocious Self-Editor 16:09
Tension is one thing but i find that not every page has to be super interesting since it will make your payoffs less influential since the reader gets served on every single page. Think of it as a boring GoT episode but at the end there is this big moment: 49min boring + 1 min exciting. You wanna know what will be discussed after the episode? Yes, only that 1 minute.
I'm 17 and wrote my first YA novel when I was 15. I'm working on seven more novels and hope to make it successful one day. Writing means the world to me... one of the most effective tips I personally use are: 1. ensuring that the leading character or protagonist has a character sketch and a proper outline before I decide to add him/her in my book. 2. Every character should have a unique personality trait and should not be Bland 3. NEVER exclude the emotional aspect of your characters! always ensure you express your characters feelings and thoughts throughout the book. 4. Make effective use of figurative language (etc metaphors, smilies, personification) it really helps. 5. reconstruct your sentences when editing your book, you can always come up with attractive and creative ways to rephrase sentences. 6. Avoid cliche dialogue at all cost... If you're aiming at a romance theme it's easy to get carried away with typical and overused dialogue. Try to change that and create dynamic and original phrases that is heartfelt. 7. incorporate realistic emotions in your character. To do that, try analyzing your surroundings and the people around you to get a better picture. 8. Don't rush the writing process. As tedious as it seems, writing a book isn't too hard, however it's a carefully crafted art that shouldn't be rushed. make sure every single page has quality and depth in it. So write slowly even if it takes over a year. 9. Take short breaks because it's important to clear your mind and come up with fresh ideas 10. learn synonyms 11. enjoy the process 😊
@@billymotric2124 well, they're centered around conceptual plots that aim at sending a positive/comforting message. So far I've completed 2 novels. They're in the process of being published.
I suggest one way to know if your idea is "big enough" is if you find that it seems to have A LIFE ALL ITS OWN, and constantly suggests and connects more and more ideas, associations, and emotions. This way you KNOW that your project is a LIVING thing that will thrive in your mind-space. It also insures that you have no shortage of ideas (aka things to writer about!) and your task, then, is reduced to an editorial one, rather than searches for inspiration and, well, just simply "things to write about" in your project. It is a double-edged sword, as the editorial challenge---finding what is vital and should be included vs.what is better left out----IS the heart of the whole deal. (Having a lot of notes/thoughts jotted down ahead of time means you won't be caught-up bereft of possibilities and stimulus. This helps get into that divine state known as FLOW! I might also suggest turning to simple tablet and pen---or pencil, better yet--- which, for some, can help get into the kind of meditative state in which ideas often find themselves being conceived: The hand-movements across the page in hand-writing can find parallels with drawing and painting, and may help some people slow down into that often sought-for creative mind-space.
Jerry, I cannot thank you enough for these tips. I learned so much - about MYSELF and why I have 10 unfinished manuscripts sitting in my computer. I now understand the 'Marathon of the Middle'. Thank you, thank you, thank you for not only identifying my greatest challenge, but also for helping me understand how to thrive in it and through it. I feel restocked with more arrows in my quiver and a clearer path! Thank you again!
"Reader first" is so important, and also, to remember that YOU ARE the first reader. I don't know about other people, but I find that writing pours out of me and has a life of its own, such that the writer part of me is a different entity to the reader part of me. These two parts of me, reader and storyteller, are what makes writing so magical for me - the reader in me is always nagging the writer to write more, and the writer knows what's good when the reader gets excited. I have a lot of trust in that process.
He’s realistic and sophisticated. He lived his life as a productive writer who knows the right way to make ideas written out on the computer the way it should be. He seems like he doesn’t believe in too much pressure. He says a lot of ideas. Big ideas. This man is so knowledgeable. Why do I keep on coming up with good things about this man? I hope that I see him more often. My friend is a great motivator too. So is this man. Publishers want to rush people. This man doesn’t believe in rushing the writer. A good book takes patience.
You really hit the nail on the head. I never finish writing my book cos I never put a deadline on it. I never also schedule my writing....I only write when i feel bored and thats bad. Thanks alot sir. You talk like you care and want to guide us into. Glad i found this video. Will follow each step. This was really helpful...Thank you very much. You have helped me alot.😪❤
Sometimes i get the most amazing tutors on you tube and when i listen. I know were it not for the grace of sharing in them, whatever they are teaching me, i cannot pay or say thank to them enough.. so thank you and may God bless you even more.
I've dreamt of being an author since I was 7 years old and I've never felt I was good enough. I'm 25 now and I've finally decided to take the plunge and start writing again. All of these tips are things I definitely needed to hear, so thank you very much!
you can easily write a book through Albat Diaz who is a professional book writter from promotional department in ghostwriter venture who can even help you publish them just contact him...
Right until a few moments ago, I had no idea who Jerry Jenkins was. Fast forward 17 minutes, or so, & I'm now a subscriber. I sense in this learned man an authentic desire to freely share his many, many years of hard-earned knowledge, insight & wisdom. "While wondering wearily o'er the dry, spreading ground... saw from the corner of my eye a feint reflection in the dust. Downcast and depressed, I turned to see - and found a diamond hidden between that mile-upon-mile myriad of stones, on a land that was once a sea!" Thank you ever so much, Mr. Jenkins!
One of my favorite King opening's is from The Dark Tower The Gunslinger: "The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed." Awesome video!
When I found myself in this passion, I started to get lazy to everything. I got tired. I don't want to do anything but to write and write and write. Writing found me!
Teachers in Elementary school always said “it’s alright to write the ending first” but I think it’s more natural to right the middle. It can help you dissolve into that end in a way that satisfies the reader. Of course you can write a rough draft first then input it back more smoothly when you have the middle done.
*"Spill your guts. THEN clean it up!"* Just let the story flow. I have to do that at home because at work, I have people who are CLUE- *LESS* about the writer's zone. One guy thinks all I'm doing is writing 'memoirs' , and another woman who thinks I'm writing a diary. I don't think she reads novels because I tell her what I'm doing and she thinks I'm either crazy or she has NO idea what I'm talking about. It's sad.
Fun fact: I stardet writing a short story about 2 weeks ago it became so long that I am going to try making it into a book. Wish me luck. I am a 15 year old boy trying to write a book about ww1. (I hope I once will write books about multiple time and events in histor told out of many diffrent views) Edit: Thanks for all your kind support! My book is currently on a hold because I need to focus on school now because of final exams (my school decided that every student has to make the finals of a lower education too so I have two years of final exams) For I what I wanted to write originally and what the my "experiment" (to see what I can do) book is about. It is about ww1 but to write as I would want my books about history to be I need much more knowledge and experience in history. So I had an idea I will start with other forms of drama but really realistic stuff I am someone who enjoys it when things are extremely realistic. So I am going to try to write books that follow stories of people that have problems that effect many people today (f. E. Depression, PTSD, anxiety,....) and the books should also work as guides for those people our people that want to help those people
Don't give up dude. I gave up when i was your age and feel the last 13 years of my life were wasted in doing so. You can do it - get it written, we want to read it.
All of these years, I've found it hard to write the things that came up down, but you really helped me more than you will ever realize, thank you so much. I love your advice, and you're truly very admirable.
I really appreciate him giving tips that actually help. Most videos would start off with how to write a story, his video starts off with how to prepare for writing a story. And I can testify to how important it is to have the proper writing tools and your own writing space.
For years, actually decades, literally, I have been searching for a trusted, truly experienced, writing expert, a mentor, to give me the advice I felt I needed, to help me get my many ideas out of my head and onto paper. Or onto a screen. Now finally, I believe I may have found that person. Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge on this subject. I'm sure you will never know how much it helps those of us who are trying to find our way in this craft. Even when we are in our 60's ... Wishing you all the very best.
College student here in the very long editing process of my first book with any time I can find. These videos are crazy encouraging and get me excited to sit down again to focus on my writing. Thank you for all the help!
Esteban Reyes depends on what you mean by improving your writing. Improving by being "correct" or improving as in the creative side? I would say not to worry about the first because it will smother your creative flame too much. The second, I recommend just taking any creative writing style classes or clubs in your school. Even poetry clubs or classes or film writing. Anything that requires you to be creative will certainly help.
Do you know how to emphasize neutrality in a story? like in reality? I don't really know how to convey randomness in a book that tries to delineate morality or subjective theories. I know that each event needs to have a purpose but in the real world not every event is essential, get what I mean? I'm open to any suggestions.
Esteban Reyes at the school I’m at they have a creative writing minor with a slew of available writing courses. I’m sure your school would have similar courses. Most of the schools I’ve looked at have some form of writing/creative writing minor option.
It's harder when you're trying to write a trilogy and you're 13 years old and have to deal with school and studying and many other struggles but still want to write the books and finish them while you're still young and your imagination and ideas extra fresh. Goddamnit, it has taken me three whole days only to write 2000 words
Thank you all so much 😊 I'm trying to spend all the time I can writing and I really really really hope I'll actually be able to finish my books one day!
This guy is a true advocate for genuinely wanting to help others succeed. double thumbs up for this quality and non marketing/promotion video. Nice to find they still exist!
I just finsihed writing my second draft of a science fiction slash fantasy novel three years ago, before I even wrote one word, I searched youtube and found this video, and yes. This exactly the video that led me to start among good you-tubers who provide me with great advices. Today, exactly this hour and time, I finished my 80k words second draft, after I wrote the first one with 95k words. Before this video there’s a good advice which I found helpful for me and others: the first draft is meant to be finished not published or perfect. only after you finish the first draft, you will have the well and strong mental muscle to say, every time you struggle with compensation, is: “I already did this, I can continue writing until I finish this one. “ It will keep you writing.
I love how he talks like he actually cares about you writing your book. I feel like I don't want to disappoint him 😂😅 I will write my book for you Sir
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Samee!😂😂
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😂😂😂I cant
Lol...
... Can we just take a moment to acknowledge his AMAZING keyboard?!
Yeah, what kind of keyboard is that?
@@joseph4185 looks like a USB typewriter
1990 Enigma it’s called the qwerkywriter keyboard.
www.qwerkywriter.com/collections/frontpage/products/qwerkywriter-s-typewriter-inspired-mechanical-keyboard
AMEN!!! I LOVE it. It's almost old world and I LOVE it. It's the sound of the keys that put me in the zone and a keyboard like that would be hypnotic!
Yes!!!
His voice is so soothing. It’s like he’s really calm about it all because he trusts you.
Hana Guérin this is why we wont disappoint him
IKR!?!😅I'm listening to him, and I'm like, "Aaaahhh😄💓🏞🌳💆🏾♂️"!
Does someone not trust you!? I'm not picking up what you are suggesting.
Very soothing
Thank You
I've been developing a book idea for YEARS, and I'm finally ready to start. I have no formal training, so UA-cam is my writing mentor. I appreciate your humility, and your generosity in sharing tips like these for apprentices like myself. Thank you Jerry!
Which best book for development writer
Also I have the same questions, but I am concern about intelectually propierty
Nice!
I hope I can be written I always struggling like you
How're things going with your writing?
“You Can edit a Bad page But you cant edit a Blank page”
No shit there’s nothing to edit. You can’t fuck a girl that doesn’t exist
@@someman6395 Hahaha...hilarius
First,
awesome advice,
Second, your name almost made my heart skip a beat
r/woooosh?
JustSome Lad Unless..
1. Establish your writing space.
2. Assemble your writing tools.
3. Break the project into small pieces.
4. Settle on your big idea.
5. Construct your outline.
6. Set a firm writing schedule. (Firm Deadline)
7. Conduct your research.
8. Write a compelling, reader-first, opener.
9. Fill your story with conflict and tension.
10. Turn off your internal editor. (While writing)
11. Don't quit during the Marathon of the Middle.
12. Write a resounding ending.
13. Become a ferocious (aggressive) self-editor.
Edit: I highly recommend watching the video too for a better explanation, this is just an overview of the content.
Thank you for this.
Nanri thala
Thanks a lot !!!!
Thanks because I'm looking for a how to on self publishing
Thank you :)
"I dont promise you a best seller." Thumb's up for your genuineness sire.
I have decided it's time to attempt to write a novel about my life . I was a heroin addict for 12 years bringing up my son, today I have been clean 18 years but I feel now is the time to inspire other addicts to getting the strength they might need to get clean. Wish me luck :) Thanks for the video.
I wish you the best of luck❤ are you stil😊 clear an doin
Do it! it'll inspire many from your story!
15:55 If you have several ideas, pick the one that is the most emotional because readers remember what moves them. Excellent advice.
yo that one was 👌
Yes!!! How many great stories /films have really poor endings when they promised so much!!! Be honest and give them the reward you promised them throughout
Agreed
Literally read your comment while he was saying it. I'll take that as the universe making a point.!
Thank you! This is what I came for.
"If it seems boring to you, your reader is asleep."
hello fellow army
Yes I know
BTS
What if you're someone who struggles with self doubt? You could write a masterpiece and think it sucks
I read this right as he said that
I remember reading "Lord of the Rings" (the Korean title is 반지의 제왕). The start was great. But the midle was so bad I feel asleep. The book dropped out of my hand.
"A writer can write ANYWHERE!" That actually helped me. 👨🏾💻✍🏾
Right
Idk why but it reminds me of ratatuil cartoon line anyones can cook and for some reason it puts smile on my face 😅
I don't consider myself a pro author but I do have passion for writing and just creating a story, good luck to anyone who thrives to write 💜
Black excellence you love to see it
444 likes this is a good sign for me
I use wherever i can and then just put the pieces together
I am 74 years old and have never written a book. I am debating between writing a screen play or book. It is a compelling story about a friend of mine who was disabled and ended up being one of the most talented musician, singer and song writer I have ever known. I just hope I can due him justice so other people can know his story. You have filled in many pieces for me so that Ii think I can at least start. Thank you.
Your friend's story already captured my heart from how you described him i am sure you will write a great book or screenplay! I wish you the best, you got this!
I'm 72 kid just do it !!!
Go for if my Dude!! That sounds fascinating!
Sir i don't care about your age Please write the book. I'll definitely gonna read it
That soundsbeautiful.
This is like having a masterclass on youtube for free
Rae you are right
1. Establish your writing space.
2. Assemble your writing tools.
3. Break the project into small pieces.
4. Settle on your big idea.
5. Construct your outline.
6. Set a firm writing schedule. (Firm Deadline).
7. Conduct your research.
8. Write a compelling, reader-first, opener.
9. Fill your story with conflict and tension.
10. Turn off your internal editor. (While writing).
11. Don't quit during the Marathon of the Middle.
12. Write a resounding ending.
13. Become a ferocious (aggressive) self-editor.
Thanks alot
this kind of works, but he has some great advice to the deeper meaning behind all of these
You rock ✨
Use full. Thanks very much. Like it
I don't think you need to write your amazing first line first at all. I think you could write your whole book and find or write your first line as the very last thing you do.
Writing doesnt have to be linear. You don't have to write it in the order its gonna be read.
He's like the Bob ross of writing
Ian Whittal yes I’m waiting for him to say, “pretty little fluffy clouds...” I love this guy! ❤️❤️❤️
Happy little words right over there... Yeah isn't that fantastic.
Lets put some big words in too. Yeah that's it. Look at that.
👍👍💓💓💓
I with you. Totally agree
Hit the nail on the end.
"You don't just survive, you thrive" facts! 💯🔥
To whoever needs it: stop watching videos about writing and write, you've got this
Thanks.
You don't know my life!!
haha. shut up. you don't know me!
People really responding like “you dont know me” or “you dont know my life” like??? They said “To whoever needs it:” so just scroll past if you dont need it, stop acting like a goddamn 9 year old.
I’ll try
I have a favorite bit of advice given to me by my grandmother, “Don’t write it right, just write it down.” Easier said than done at times! Thanks for the list of tips!
Thanks to your grandmother - this video and her words are exactly what I needed to see right now!
Or dont get it right, get it written.
Awesome quote x
I wrote 2 stories on Wattpad. "The Remaining Few" and "Tomorrow's Edge". Both look good on paper and my friend is the only one reading it. Sometimes I think he's just biased when he's reading and doesn't see the flaws. So I can't really know if my writing is as good as I think it is. Mind giving them a read? Name of the writer: RAZORTALES/RazorTales
ua-cam.com/video/JCrqGOH39DY/v-deo.html
Thank you so much for this... at nearly 48.... after raising 7 kids and putting off the urge to write since I was 14.... I AM DOING THIS.... and Jerry, this helped me more than you know. ♡ To any young people reading this.... DON'T WAIT UNTIL YOU'RE 48. Go for it ♡
Housewife In The Woods ❤️❤️❤️
I'm 14 and I wanna write a novel so bad ! I have 2 bookcases filled with books in my room 😭
@@agouti5321 then do it. Write that book
49 here and have been pushing down my desire to write. Maybe this will be the year.
🔜
I’ve been writing the same book since I was 13. I’m 20 now and the book has transformed over and over and I know I’ll never publish it but it’s nice to write something for myself and have my own world to escape to
You should definitely publish it
That's me❤
"I wouldn't show this first draft to my worst enemy" 😂 mood every time
The Smoke Watcher I have certainly learned to hold back but I used to scribble off a few sentences and want everyone to read it!
@CHIGGS 58TH It took me 3 drafts too.
@CHIGGS 58TH Right... I tell people all the time writing a novel isn't a simple task at all.
@CHIGGS 58TH I agree 100% they say, write like it's your last novel.
Eres santera?
Criminally underrated. The rest of the young writing world needs to hear these nuggets of wisdom!
Yeah, needs to hear, so he should speek up, I agree, my speakers are on 90%
Right, like so many videos with loud background music one has to strain to hear the speaker clearly. The videos should not have music distracting from the content if the subject is worthy on its own merit.
Why? Do you want more competition?
Hello I'm a kid I am writlg a book and I want it to be published
well if they're writers that is.
"Speed is not the point. Quality is the point,". This quotes slap me in the face really hard. Thank you Sir!
Slap me too 😀
@Timothy A Schuler ??
@Timothy A Schuler ?
Me too
@Timothy A Schuler ?
I am a ten year old. I love reading and writing books. This is my time to shine. I have this competition to write a book and I will be competing against people from 17 other countries. You have helped me complete my book, The awesome adventure of Mom-o-tron. Now all that’s left is winning. Thank you Mr.Jenkins ❤ Anvi
You appear to be in your 40s, if that photo is of you.
Did you win? Whatever what place you got, congratulations.🎉
Sick man, rock that competition!!
Wow congrats🎉🎉🎉
👍
The biggest problem I had when I begun writing was wanting to do it "correctly". I wanted to know what outlines, structures, templates, and exactly how each detail should be carefully placed. I spent way too much of my time scavenging the internet for step-by-step guides and not actually writing a single word. Don't do what I did. Just write, eventually you'll begin to feel the flow and the words will piece together in the beautiful art form we call writing. Your first draft is inevitably going to be horrible, so don't waste your time and effort focusing on it. Get out your pen and paper, open up your laptop, do whatever you need to do to get started, and just write. Trust me, it'll all come together in the end.
Thank you for this
True
Learned that you should just write first draft. The second draft should be more detailed and bigger. Eventually you have so much that you wrote it all down and have to piece those parts together into the eventual novel. (tip I got from a Jo Nesbo interview). :)
Oh Chuck! I'm writing my first fanfic and I'm doing this. Now that I know, I'll just write and then edit it later.
I need this. Thank you 😭 this really helps.
You do know what you are talking about with keeping the audience's attention, because I never thought I would watch the entire 17 minutes of this video, but I was at the end before I knew it and I wanted more. Thanks so much for your videos.
Watching the entire video, leaning forward to catch his soft speaking voice... =)
Me too
@@taitjones6310 thats what he just said.
I just realised how true that statement was
So did I
I can't take that much wisdom in a single video
jajajaj I know.
Yeah, should be 13 intensive tips. I got so much out of this, it's crazy that it was free!
therealnightwriter damn you really are a night writer huh 💀
I'm at 5:45 and my brain nees a breather!
I've adapted to writing anywhere, any time at all for any length of time at all times of day; never at night. Every morning I eagerly look forward to writing, proofing, editing, voicing, rereading as often as it takes. Staying grateful and excited. In busy public places I slip on headphones, put on songs I like that keeps out distractions. Writing by the seat of my pants like I live, never outline or predetermine how much I plan to write daily. Never do disappoint myself because I WANT to do this.
Thanks for the calm, non-dominating advice.
Lmao
@@t3rrellgovender392 hehehehehheehhehehehehe
@Corvus Morve I suppose you are book writers yourselves?
I'm 16. I've been developing a story from the age of twelve through roleplaying, bits of writing and art. I know the characters like the back of my hand. I have grown with them through their and my own development during life. Going to try writing a book soon about it. You've really inspired me, thank you.
Im also young and get so many story ideas that i want to put on paper, but i dont know how to. I always worry it wont be good and seem weird, could you give me some tips on how to fix that it seems like you have a lot of experience .
@@starry_venus first off, try to just push yourself to write! The first step is the hardest but it makes the rest easier. Don't worry about the quality of it just yet, just start getting yourself into writing. The more you write, the more you improve and enjoy it.
If you have a single story or characters you already have quite planned out, I'd say building off them further. I feel very emotionally bonded to the characters I've made as well as the world I've created. It helps me motivate myself into writing, because I want to express the beautiful things on my mind.
@@starry_venus I'm sure you have wonderful ideas, and the more you work on them the more it'll improve. Not all ideas begin as something fantastic, it takes time and effort. Don't expect so much from yourself in the beginning. My story began as such a simple and cliche thing ahaha. Enjoy the process. It's fun~
@@starry_venus if you do want proper tips of how to write, you can look up videos for that sort of thing. But don't get too caught up in it, try to focus on the way you want to write first. Everyone has their own writing style, you'll find what yours is the more you write.
I have been role-playing since I was 11 years old. Started on wolf quest. I'm almost 26 and I am writing my first book and its tough. Stay with jt ^^
"Speed is not the point. Quality is the point."
Stephen King didnt get that memo.
@@MrHtowntrucker for sure 😏
Writer k teh?
@@dnasawn8783 frustrated writer 😂
@@mariaallaine same
You wanna know how stunning of a writer he is , just think how he walked you through the whole video without getting bored for a second .. Love it , and I'm following for more ♥️
I love the thing on his bookshelf that says
Let's eat Grandpa.
Let's eat, Grandpa.
Commas save lives.
15:20
How in the world did you noticed that....you're very observant!
Thanks for catching that! Hilarious!
It's so true!
😩🤣
Bozo my 6 grade teacher had a ton of stuff like that
I wrote 119 books in the last 40 years:
no one :
My brain :
That's three books a year!
Wiki actually says 220 books in 40 years, which is 5.5 books per year. Now what level of quality is going to be put into that quantity?!
@@pulmonarypro9250 i wish that was me! Thanks for the link though
Sally Rose whoops! apologies 😬
@@daledearing4399 no problem! Are you currently writing a book?
Sally Rose yes ☺️
12 year old girl, hoping to start a new hobby and express myself through writing stories..
Thank you for the tips!
I am 67 and I started writing when I was 13. Just keep writing you're going to get published someday soon😉
Lol same here 😂
Good luck 👍🏽
Cyber Potato Starting at a very good time. I’m 31 and I started my first book just a week ago. When you are 31, you’d have written 31 books
Me too
Same age
But not as a hobby
Hoping to be an all time writer
Inspired by books and so I thought to inspire someone else too
I didn't have to read any of his books to know that he is a real deal of a writer. Every word in this video is very beautifully put together. Very smooth yet very impactful in every point he is trying to make. Thank you.
How ironic that I just discovered this video the day after I finished writing my first novel! I feel even more confident about it after watching this wonderful video by such a talented, thoughtful and ambitious soul. It took me over 14 years of procrastination, frustration, and typing to achieve this goal. My message to everyone on here working on their book: please don't give up. Be patient with your writing, and even more importantly, be kind to yourself. Keep at it. You'll get there.
Your book sounds interesting! What have you decided to call it?
@@fredrikahaggblom5877 Hello! And thank you for your support of my little novel in progress.The working title is "Master of Puppets" inspired by the Metallica album of the same name. It will be in a similar style to my first collection of poetry and prose "The Muse of Love and Pain". I'm shooting to finish revisions and hand it over to my editor by December. Wish me luck, my friend!
@@ozymandias6817 Will do! Thank you for your support, my friend.
14 years?? Damn thnks for the demotivation 😂
I'm writing a science fantasy trilogy and when people ask when it will be done I always reply "sometime in the next century" lol
Writer's block during the above? Write something, anything. 'The cat sat on the mat' becomes 'The cat, weary from a long morning of being a cat, sat on the mat'. That morphs to 'The cat, weary from a long morning of being a cat, decided to add some variety to its daily life by not sitting on the mat'. And you're up and running..
'Deeto opened the door and walked in...' can easily become a dramatic paragraph, and it doesn't even matter that you don't have a character called Deeto (you do now..).
Terence Jay great advice
Terence Jay anything but not fucking the cat! Got it!
And then he took a shit.
@Madison Daily taking time off for stress can certainly help in certain cases, but often the point of writing everyday isn't actually to add words to your book consistantly, the stuff you force is obviously forced, and will end up in the trash. The point is to write everyday so that you are in the mindset of writing everyday, and you'll end up wanting to write more days than not. Its a cumulative effort rather than a truly consistant one.
'The cat sat on the mat' is not a story. 'The cat sat on the dog's mat' is a story.
I’m a 47 year old postman from Ireland who absolutely loved writing when younger .
I’ve always wanted to write a book , just so I can say I did it.
Tried , failed , every single time .
I have watched countless videos , read an array of books promising me it knew how to do it.
I just opened a beer and happened to see this video on my feed.
In all these years this is the only advice that makes any sense to me .
Thank you so much.
I am now on a quest to consume everything you have inadvertently laid out for me .
Thank you mr Jenkins - and I mean that
Edit - I don’t want this video to end
I can recommend NaNoWriMo to you. it won't make you write a great book normally, but it will make you actually WRITE a book and it will make you want to write a better book once your finished.
Wow , that's so cool!
even I have started writing a book :) , I am 15...
@@kushagragarg5982 how’s the book
Same here. I love this man and I've never met him. From an author to another author it's beautiful to gain more knowledge and find those with great wisdom and experience. You're going to write an incredible book! Get started my friend ❤
@@kushagragarg5982 same I am 9
I'm not a writer - at least, not for books. But I am making my first indie game. I don't know why or how I stumbled on this video, but I'm glad I did. This is how my game will be brought to life. Thank you for the advice, sir! PS: Loved the quote "Quality is the point."
from one baby dev to another, best of luck!
How do I start with game development? I feel like I have so many stories to tell but I have no idea what and how to do things. Any videos I should watch?🙏
So many of these “How to write a book” videos, but this the first one I watched to the end. Excellently explained and understood. Subscribed 👍
I second this. This video is really great compared to most others that contain so much fluff.
this is my first video on writing a book and nailed it! this is just golden
I couldn't agree more!!
That's cause of that marathon in the middle
I knew this dude was serious when I saw the typewriter keyboard, what a dude
I love this. "If you need an editor, is it really your work?"
Never found another author who feels the same way.
Ellie same
Yes! There are so many authors on UA-cam that talk about the importance of hiring a really good "editor" and then describe how the editor completely rewrote the story as if that's normal. They might as well just hire a ghostwriter and be honest about it. 😂
I really appreciate this as it's probably saved me lots of time. I realize that I simply don't have the internal drive to do any of this stuff. My writing dreams are just pipe dreams, I think I'll keep them that way. But I'll keep reading, and supporting writers who actually produce fine work!
Meanwhile, some youtubers:
"I WrOtE a NoVeL iN a MoNtH"
Thank you very much for posting actually great advices unlike others
I still didn't finish my novel in almost 10 years. Took a 2 year break...
10yrs+ to write a book is such a long time wtf.
The dude on the video wrote 190+ books in 40 years meaning it takes him on average around 2 months to write 1 book.
@@smartquotes6838 so? no need to be rude, maybe the guy that took 10+ years is just writing for fun, while the guy on the vid makes a living out of writing
Nuno Correia writing is different for everyone...'Speed is not the point' as said in the video, 'Quality is the point'. write until you're happy with the finished product. Writing is fun. If you force yourself to be quick, you'll most likely not be happy with what you got AND you'll burn yourself out AND hate writing. Doesn't matter how long you took to write the book, as long as you're happy with it, the time taken to write doesn't matter
It all depends on what you're writing and what type of writer you are. Jack Kerouac wrote his famous "On the Road" book in three weeks.
This is one of the best videos I have ever seen on UA-cam. Thank you sir
I don’t usually comment and I’ve watched a lot of tutorials and videos (I guess we all have) but something about him is so paternal, you want to keep listening. The points he raised are all so valid and he explained fiction and non-fiction in the simplest language.
His voice is so comforting.
Anya, I agree 100%. Some tutorials tend towards verbosity, or include distracting bells & whistles. Other presenters are chirpy or droll. His voice was kind, encouraging, and he made each point clear, crisp, and short. Best of luck!
MAN, HE'S A WRITER WITH AN ENTIRE WORLD INSIDE HIM, HE'S THE BEST , I LOVED SO MUCH THIS VIDEO ,WUAU
@@SwedeProof YES YOU'RE RIGHT, HE'S SO COMFORTABLE AND PATIENT, I LIKE TO REPEAT THE SOME MINUTES BECAUSE, HIS WORD ARE SO KNOWLEDGEABLE!!
Just love how you deliver so complicated tasks in so simple way! Thank you!
Writing has so many benefits for the brain. It’s not about becoming a best selling author...unless of course it is 😂
Yesss,the creativity it’s beyond. Like can my brain really do that.
@Arrowshard good method but don’t edit too much while I’m the midst of writing, definitely counter productive. Best to let all your ideas flow and then cut it down later on.
absolutely.
Usually it's a hit or miss too lol. Like the "To kill a mockingbird" author didn't expect much from the book but it ended up being one of the most popular that they force kids to read in school 🤣
I love how he isn’t like other people who will explain beginning, middle, and end. He tells you different things like Reader First.
This man is a God send, I swear. I have never been so motivated!
How many pages have you written since you watched this video?
Dianka D I started my book about a week and half ago, and I’ve sitting with almost 50 pages.
@@eruptor2222 Great! All the best.
Dianka D You too :)
@@eruptor2222 how many pages
I'm sorry excited for my 24 hour challenge! I've listened to this video 3 times, once a day at work for the last 3 days. And this coming weekend is my time. I have 2 kids, 1 on the way, 2 jobs, hubby has 2 jobs, we're swamped and exhausted. But I know exactly what I'm gonna write! So excited
15:17
*Let's eat Grandpa.*
*Let's eat, Grandpa.*
*Commas save lives.*
Yeah. Really
@@dua6521 lol
but the first line got my attention.
Let’s eat grandpa and I’ll eat the head
😂😂😂
"Cut to add power," "Readers remember what moves them, "if it seems boring to you, your reader is asleep." Thank you for this helpful list spoken succinctly and effectively.
I love how he lay down all of this in a non-condescending manner.
Jerry, as someone that has just began the journey as a writer, I think this is the most solid, well thought out and useful advice on You Tube.
This man has this aura coming even through the screen. I dont know how he manages to,but the calm voice he speaks,makes your ears want to listen anyway.The atmosphere is quite calm and quiet,the perfect atmosphere for writing a book and he knows it,cause he has a very long experience on it. The steps are so thought-well and helpful. This whole video sends you to a whole other dimension. It honestly hypnotized me and my ears caught every word. Never been this focused in something in my life. And i have a story,which is fictional,and i feel so happy for it and i have this idea with me everywhere i go. My mind creates new opportunities for the characters in the book when it sees places.Its like,the more i get inspired,the more i want to see.I will succeed on this work and i know it. Not just to make it to the best-seller’s,but because thats my passion, *writing* ....
How’s the writing going?
Honestly,couldn’t go any better! I have about a year thinking of the story but at the last six months i have worked on it more.Still preparing the outline but at times when i have nothing to do and i get inspierd,i keep notes.I really appreciate the fact you asked! 😄
@@xx_eclipse_xx3773 I am now asking it too. How are you advancing?
@@lampyrisnoctiluca9904 Its going really really good! I still havent written like book pages BUT i am trying to build the world and my characters onto advancing more and more,and i have written a few scripts too! Thanks for asking! 😋
@@xx_eclipse_xx3773 Don't go into to much detail. Write instead. 🤗
Write drunk, edit sober - Hemingway
That’s a whole mood
He didn't say this
It helps
Or hi 😂🍁💨👍🏽
Honestly so true
That's a piece of GREAT advice, "If it stays with you" if every time you tell your idea of a book and it gets bigger.
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1) Establish your Writing Space 0:29
2) Assemble your Writing Tools 1:31
3) Break the Project into Small Pieces 2:12
4) Settle on your Big Idea 2:41
5) Construct your Outline 3:30
6) Set a firm Writing Schedule (Firm Deadline) 6:04
7) Conduct your Research 7:51
8) Write a compelling, Reader-first, Opener 9:00
9) Fill your story with Conflict and Tension 11:10
10) Turn off your Internal Editor (While Writing) 12:46
11) Don't quit during the Marathon of the Middle 13:52
12) Write a Resounding Ending 15:06
12) Become a Ferocious Self-Editor 16:09
Not all heroes wear capes
Thank you so much for the time stamps! My ADHD is thriving now 🙏🏻
You're awesome .
Good lookout thanks.
Thank you!
Tension every page. That's a good thing to always have in mind.
Ayex too much tension minimizes pay off, moments of respite are needed in order to build tension from comfort. In my humble opinion!
Tension is one thing but i find that not every page has to be super interesting since it will make your payoffs less influential since the reader gets served on every single page. Think of it as a boring GoT episode but at the end there is this big moment: 49min boring + 1 min exciting. You wanna know what will be discussed after the episode? Yes, only that 1 minute.
"Change the outline, don't change the book."
Me who changed my book for the 14th time: 👁👄👁
It happens to everyone, don't worry and just keep trying!
Alexandra Perez I made a habit of quit writing a story a lot and i finally finished a short story, now it has to be edited and uploaded on Wattpad
Same
omg. same. 😩
LOL
I’m a writer transitioning from a screenwriter to a novelist and beginning my first novel. These are great tips. Thanks Jerry.
I am also beginning to start a novel
I'm 17 and wrote my first YA novel when I was 15. I'm working on seven more novels and hope to make it successful one day. Writing means the world to me...
one of the most effective tips I personally use are:
1. ensuring that the leading character or protagonist has a character sketch and a proper outline before I decide to add him/her in my book.
2. Every character should have a unique personality trait and should not be Bland
3. NEVER exclude the emotional aspect of your characters! always ensure you express your characters feelings and thoughts throughout the book.
4. Make effective use of figurative language (etc metaphors, smilies, personification) it really helps.
5. reconstruct your sentences when editing your book, you can always come up with attractive and creative ways to rephrase sentences.
6. Avoid cliche dialogue at all cost... If you're aiming at a romance theme it's easy to get carried away with typical and overused dialogue. Try to change that and create dynamic and original phrases that is heartfelt.
7. incorporate realistic emotions in your character. To do that, try analyzing your surroundings and the people around you to get a better picture.
8. Don't rush the writing process. As tedious as it seems, writing a book isn't too hard, however it's a carefully crafted art that shouldn't be rushed. make sure every single page has quality and depth in it. So write slowly even if it takes over a year.
9. Take short breaks because it's important to clear your mind and come up with fresh ideas
10. learn synonyms
11. enjoy the process 😊
I don't believe you are 17 at the time you wrote this message
@@Merakireads what novels did you write? would be interested to read them!
@@yisahkelvin1532 why though
@@billymotric2124 well, they're centered around conceptual plots that aim at sending a positive/comforting message.
So far I've completed 2 novels.
They're in the process of being published.
@@Merakireads You are too young.
Thank you☀️
I am not writing a best selling novel. I just want to improve my writing skills.
Best solution read and only see it the way you can comprehend it, you imagination is what makes your writing skills unique.
Gemini Media I concur!
mannie's Art And Fitness Channel you’re right.
I suggest one way to know if your idea is "big enough" is if you find that it seems to have A LIFE ALL ITS OWN, and constantly suggests and connects more and more ideas, associations, and emotions. This way you KNOW that your project is a LIVING thing that will thrive in your mind-space. It also insures that you have no shortage of ideas (aka things to writer about!) and your task, then, is reduced to an editorial one, rather than searches for inspiration and, well, just simply "things to write about" in your project. It is a double-edged sword, as the editorial challenge---finding what is vital and should be included vs.what is better left out----IS the heart of the whole deal. (Having a lot of notes/thoughts jotted down ahead of time means you won't be caught-up bereft of possibilities and stimulus. This helps get into that divine state known as FLOW!
I might also suggest turning to simple tablet and pen---or pencil, better yet--- which, for some, can help get into the kind of meditative state in which ideas often find themselves being conceived: The hand-movements across the page in hand-writing can find parallels with drawing and painting, and may help some people slow down into that often sought-for creative mind-space.
Jerry, I cannot thank you enough for these tips. I learned so much - about MYSELF and why I have 10 unfinished manuscripts sitting in my computer. I now understand the 'Marathon of the Middle'. Thank you, thank you, thank you for not only identifying my greatest challenge, but also for helping me understand how to thrive in it and through it. I feel restocked with more arrows in my quiver and a clearer path! Thank you again!
I share your view.
The marathon in the middle my worst challenge but I'll make it this time round ill conquer my worst enemy
"Reader first" is so important, and also, to remember that YOU ARE the first reader. I don't know about other people, but I find that writing pours out of me and has a life of its own, such that the writer part of me is a different entity to the reader part of me. These two parts of me, reader and storyteller, are what makes writing so magical for me - the reader in me is always nagging the writer to write more, and the writer knows what's good when the reader gets excited. I have a lot of trust in that process.
Hell of an idea thank you for constructing that
@@matthewede7282 You're welcome 😅
He’s realistic and sophisticated. He lived his life as a productive writer who knows the right way to make ideas written out on the computer the way it should be. He seems like he doesn’t believe in too much pressure. He says a lot of ideas. Big ideas. This man is so knowledgeable. Why do I keep on coming up with good things about this man? I hope that I see him more often. My friend is a great motivator too. So is this man. Publishers want to rush people. This man doesn’t believe in rushing the writer. A good book takes patience.
You really hit the nail on the head. I never finish writing my book cos I never put a deadline on it. I never also schedule my writing....I only write when i feel bored and thats bad. Thanks alot sir. You talk like you care and want to guide us into. Glad i found this video. Will follow each step. This was really helpful...Thank you very much. You have helped me alot.😪❤
Sometimes i get the most amazing tutors on you tube and when i listen. I know were it not for the grace of sharing in them, whatever they are teaching me, i cannot pay or say thank to them enough.. so thank you and may God bless you even more.
Now that's an AMAZING THANK YOU!!!
I agree god bless everyone reading this message and you 🙂🙏✍🏻
"How do you eat an elephant? One bite at a time." - Jerry B. Jenkins
Eww..
@emille mcmillan lmao
XD
Unless he made that up over 100 years ago, I'm going to say he didn't make it up.
@@jamessurber853 lol
I've dreamt of being an author since I was 7 years old and I've never felt I was good enough. I'm 25 now and I've finally decided to take the plunge and start writing again. All of these tips are things I definitely needed to hear, so thank you very much!
you can easily write a book through Albat Diaz who is a professional book writter from promotional department in ghostwriter venture who can even help you publish them just contact him...
Same
Same here. Im your age and finally decided im in a time where I trust myself more. How’s the writing going btw?
@@JuankiHilsaca Prolly failed.
I to be author but just make manga it's my good achievement but finally I just to be author for myself never to be famous and best seller
Right until a few moments ago, I had no idea who Jerry Jenkins was. Fast forward 17 minutes, or so, & I'm now a subscriber.
I sense in this learned man an authentic desire to freely share his many, many years of hard-earned knowledge, insight & wisdom.
"While wondering wearily o'er the dry, spreading ground... saw from the corner of my eye a feint reflection in the dust. Downcast and depressed, I turned to see - and found a diamond hidden between that mile-upon-mile myriad of stones, on a land that was once a sea!"
Thank you ever so much, Mr. Jenkins!
This video soothed me.
His voice, his demeanor, the advice. Everything.
This is some of the most practical advice on youtube about writing. And my favorite.
One of my favorite King opening's is from The Dark Tower The Gunslinger: "The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed."
Awesome video!
YES!
You have such a calming voice, I must admit I haven't read any of your books before coming across this, but I will now. Thanks for the wonderful tips.
He is like my Writer Grandpa. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I learned a lot!
When I found myself in this passion, I started to get lazy to everything. I got tired. I don't want to do anything but to write and write and write. Writing found me!
Same
This is just what I needed! I didn’t know I was stuck in the marathon at the middle. Glad to know it happens with all writers!!
I love how calm and relaxing this video is 😌
I've written two books (my first two) since watching this, and I must say; writing has never been more enjoyable. Thank you.
Teachers in Elementary school always said “it’s alright to write the ending first” but I think it’s more natural to right the middle. It can help you dissolve into that end in a way that satisfies the reader. Of course you can write a rough draft first then input it back more smoothly when you have the middle done.
Thank you, sir. You’re so humble. Grateful for your information!
That inner critic is hard to shut off but it is must if you want to write your best work.
*"Spill your guts. THEN clean it up!"* Just let the story flow. I have to do that at home because at work, I have people who are CLUE- *LESS* about the writer's zone. One guy thinks all I'm doing is writing 'memoirs' , and another woman who thinks I'm writing a diary. I don't think she reads novels because I tell her what I'm doing and she thinks I'm either crazy or she has NO idea what I'm talking about. It's sad.
Fun fact: I stardet writing a short story about 2 weeks ago it became so long that I am going to try making it into a book. Wish me luck. I am a 15 year old boy trying to write a book about ww1. (I hope I once will write books about multiple time and events in histor told out of many diffrent views)
Edit:
Thanks for all your kind support!
My book is currently on a hold because I need to focus on school now because of final exams (my school decided that every student has to make the finals of a lower education too so I have two years of final exams)
For I what I wanted to write originally and what the my "experiment" (to see what I can do) book is about. It is about ww1 but to write as I would want my books about history to be I need much more knowledge and experience in history.
So I had an idea
I will start with other forms of drama but really realistic stuff I am someone who enjoys it when things are extremely realistic.
So I am going to try to write books that follow stories of people that have problems that effect many people today (f. E. Depression, PTSD, anxiety,....) and the books should also work as guides for those people our people that want to help those people
Good luck!
@@Biggg_Cee thanks
I am 14 and I want to write a book too:) I hope you will be successful with your writing
@@marwaalahoui6971 Thank you. I hope you will be successful too. :)
Don't give up dude. I gave up when i was your age and feel the last 13 years of my life were wasted in doing so. You can do it - get it written, we want to read it.
"If it's boring to you, your reader is asleep."
Really!!???
All of these years, I've found it hard to write the things that came up down, but you really helped me more than you will ever realize, thank you so much. I love your advice, and you're truly very admirable.
I really appreciate him giving tips that actually help. Most videos would start off with how to write a story, his video starts off with how to prepare for writing a story. And I can testify to how important it is to have the proper writing tools and your own writing space.
It's need process. I appreciated like you
The best opening line is from Neuromancer, by William Gibson. "The sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel."
Or Gravity's Rainbow: "A screaming comes across the sky."
@@threeletteragent Straight and to the point, which I love, but it's not nearly as evocative.
This is a honeycomb world. It hides a hollow heart. - John connoly The Killing Kind.
A surprising phillosophical poetic dramatic statement.
DAAAMN, that was amazing!!!
In the nighttime heart of Beirut, in one of a row of
general-address transfer booths, Louis Wu flicked
into reality.
-Larry Niven
This video is an answered prayer.
You can say that again.
Same.
That's sad
He always give the best advice, I mention his guid all the time on my channel.
@@pizzospages354 next class, grammar
For years, actually decades, literally, I have been searching for a trusted, truly experienced, writing expert, a mentor, to give me the advice I felt I needed, to help me get my many ideas out of my head and onto paper. Or onto a screen.
Now finally, I believe I may have found that person. Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge on this subject. I'm sure you will never know how much it helps those of us who are trying to find our way in this craft. Even when we are in our 60's ...
Wishing you all the very best.
College student here in the very long editing process of my first book with any time I can find. These videos are crazy encouraging and get me excited to sit down again to focus on my writing. Thank you for all the help!
What degree are you doing, im working on a book and I wonder if there some classes I can take that can help improve my writing.
Esteban Reyes depends on what you mean by improving your writing. Improving by being "correct" or improving as in the creative side? I would say not to worry about the first because it will smother your creative flame too much. The second, I recommend just taking any creative writing style classes or clubs in your school. Even poetry clubs or classes or film writing. Anything that requires you to be creative will certainly help.
Do you know how to emphasize neutrality in a story? like in reality? I don't really know how to convey randomness in a book that tries to delineate morality or subjective theories. I know that each event needs to have a purpose but in the real world not every event is essential, get what I mean? I'm open to any suggestions.
IKR
Esteban Reyes at the school I’m at they have a creative writing minor with a slew of available writing courses. I’m sure your school would have similar courses. Most of the schools I’ve looked at have some form of writing/creative writing minor option.
It's harder when you're trying to write a trilogy and you're 13 years old and have to deal with school and studying and many other struggles but still want to write the books and finish them while you're still young and your imagination and ideas extra fresh. Goddamnit, it has taken me three whole days only to write 2000 words
Imagine how it is when you're working and have a family.
How bad do you want it? Keep going. Tiny steps and tiny wins
Let's do this guys...
Thank you all so much 😊
I'm trying to spend all the time I can writing and I really really really hope I'll actually be able to finish my books one day!
My daughters 9 and she's Writing a Novel!
This guy is a true advocate for genuinely wanting to help others succeed. double thumbs up for this quality and non marketing/promotion video. Nice to find they still exist!
love your comment, and i agree to it
I just finsihed writing my second draft of a science fiction slash fantasy novel three years ago, before I even wrote one word, I searched youtube and found this video, and yes. This exactly the video that led me to start among good you-tubers who provide me with great advices.
Today, exactly this hour and time, I finished my 80k words second draft, after I wrote the first one with 95k words.
Before this video there’s a good advice which I found helpful for me and others: the first draft is meant to be finished not published or perfect.
only after you finish the first draft, you will have the well and strong mental muscle to say, every time you struggle with compensation, is:
“I already did this, I can continue writing until I finish this one. “
It will keep you writing.
This man just gave a ton of things that might change me life. Focking legend.