Hello, Can we structure the commentary via progression of the main text ? Ideas in paragraph one, then two, then three and so on ? Or is that frowned upon?
This is generally frowned upon. You should observe the text as a whole, and analyze it according to different language, form and structure elements, not the content.
I put this as my intro. How many marks would I get for this: Fredrick Douglass, a former slave ant abolitionist, delivered his speech "What to the slave is Fourth of July?". He gives his speech with a fortified, passionate tone wrecked with anger. The articulate language and eloquent form gives the purpose of reaching the hearts of the audience, to ensure their reception of information both intellectually and emotionally. By the way I wrote this before seeing the example and without reading the speech, so I am missing some parts to it.
Greetings! I was looking for the answer booklet of 2021 examination in order to practice writing using it. Do you think you can provide us with the pdf or a site that offers it? Thank you!
Hello :) The answer booklets (i.e. answers for specimen questions for the 2021 syllabus) are officially provided only on School Support Hub, which is only available to teachers. You can ask your teachers to copy those for you. I unfortunately cannot provide any links or PDFs due to copyright reasons.
Hello. We just published an analysis of a sample commentary two days ago: ua-cam.com/video/bogSCBfmwNs/v-deo.html Is that what you're looking for or did you mean something else?
Your videos are all extremely helpful. Thank you!
Your voice is very calm. Thankyou.
This is an excellent idea, I enjoyed.
what is the max word limit for paper 1 question 1 and 2?
How do we conclude the commentary? Do we write a conclusion or just simply end it end after the last point?
Js end it bruh
Don’t write conclusions waste of time
is rhis usable for paper 2’s question 1 relfective comentary
Yes
Hello,
Can we structure the commentary via progression of the main text ? Ideas in paragraph one, then two, then three and so on ? Or is that frowned upon?
This is generally frowned upon. You should observe the text as a whole, and analyze it according to different language, form and structure elements, not the content.
URGENT exam tomorrow 7:07 ma'am please explain how do I do it if I don't analyze line by line. I didn't understand this point.
how’d you end up doing?
I better get my diploma 🥲
I put this as my intro. How many marks would I get for this:
Fredrick Douglass, a former slave ant abolitionist, delivered his speech "What to the slave is Fourth of July?". He gives his speech with a fortified, passionate tone wrecked with anger. The articulate language and eloquent form gives the purpose of reaching the hearts of the audience, to ensure their reception of information both intellectually and emotionally.
By the way I wrote this before seeing the example and without reading the speech, so I am missing some parts to it.
I would include his tone he gives towards the audience like for instance “He uses his frustrated tone to address his privileged white audience”
Could you please do one video on how to write comparative commentaries
Soon, hopefully :)
@@EngliLearn did you do that video?
@@eurydicee same boat lol
@@Xanderdp aw haha, when are you appearing for exams? may/june 2023? 👀
@@eurydicee I'm writing 26th and 28th april
can you please do a video on paper 2 question1b. i have no idea how to structure it or what to say and how to say it.
hello. what is low frequency vocabulary
very basic vocabulary. try using big/descriptive words instead of really simple ones.
Greetings!
I was looking for the answer booklet of 2021 examination in order to practice writing using it. Do you think you can provide us with the pdf or a site that offers it?
Thank you!
Hello :) The answer booklets (i.e. answers for specimen questions for the 2021 syllabus) are officially provided only on School Support Hub, which is only available to teachers. You can ask your teachers to copy those for you.
I unfortunately cannot provide any links or PDFs due to copyright reasons.
@@EngliLearn Oh! Alright! Thank you! I am studying alone from videos and lots of practice so a teacher is not available unfortunately.
Hello there, is it possible if you could do commentaries from paper 1
Hello. We just published an analysis of a sample commentary two days ago: ua-cam.com/video/bogSCBfmwNs/v-deo.html
Is that what you're looking for or did you mean something else?
please help i have exams on tuesday especially on essays
Can you please correct one of my text analysis by today?
Unfortunately, I am not able to provide feedback for student work. Best of luck in the exam!
Thank you this is a god send.
i need help
How much practice do you recommend? Would 10 papers be enough??
It’s actually More than enough!!
Awesome
Thank you!
Rewritten opening: Mr. Fredrick Douglass, former slave and abolitionist in the USA, gives the aforementioned speech on Independence Day to...