9093 AS Level English Paper 1 Question 1b

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  • @aaryanvipin2412
    @aaryanvipin2412 Місяць тому +1

    Awesome video!
    Thanks a lot, Nick!

  • @pearlhotto949
    @pearlhotto949 Рік тому +5

    Thank you so much Teacher Nick❤️❤️❤️your efforts don't go unappreciated... I'm very grateful for your videos.. And I'll continue watching them.. Please keep up the crazy good work

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +1

      Thank you for the encouragement. I have a break in July and hope to make more videos then. Let me know what you think I should cover.

    • @sthuthexproduction5787
      @sthuthexproduction5787 Рік тому +1

      @@CrazyTeacherNick sir, pls cover the key conventions of a:
      1. Leaflet
      2. Newsreport
      3. Blog
      4. Editorial
      5. Biography
      6. Memoir
      7. Brochure
      8. Voice over script
      9. Email

  • @ihisoka9118
    @ihisoka9118 Рік тому +2

    MUCH THANKS FOR THIS VIDEO, CHEERS!🥂

  • @m2splashy-jo9qj
    @m2splashy-jo9qj 6 днів тому

    For question 2 analysis question, should we link points thematically (my teacher suggests this) or do we just talk about form, structure and language in seperate paragraphs

  • @ihisoka9118
    @ihisoka9118 Рік тому +4

    And prettyyyy pls can you make a video about reviews in P2 Extended writing? to get maximum marks on that?

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +1

      I know this is IGCSE but this is a helpful video on text types. ua-cam.com/video/lRTCz3NJo_4/v-deo.html&pp=ygUQaWdjc2UgdGV4dCB0eXBlcw%3D%3D
      My students make lists - for each text type consider the key conventions, what language devices and structural devices you would expect to see in each text.
      Also check out Teacher Adna's Channel. ua-cam.com/video/jC4WFGewKP0/v-deo.html
      I will try make a video about Reviews.

  • @pearlhotto949
    @pearlhotto949 Рік тому +1

    Teacher Nick... Please make a video on how to actually write a commentary based on form and structure coz they're very confusing

  • @lev7879
    @lev7879 Рік тому +1

    thank you ❤❤❤❤❤

  • @fatima-gy6gn
    @fatima-gy6gn Рік тому +4

    please make a video about question 2

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +1

      Hi Fatima
      I plan to do this in the future.
      I would visit Teacher Adna her videos are excellent.
      ua-cam.com/video/OKNngovm724/v-deo.html
      ua-cam.com/video/XlQzjUX0NKA/v-deo.html
      ua-cam.com/video/xWB-UvJBYPI/v-deo.html
      ua-cam.com/video/bogSCBfmwNs/v-deo.html

    • @muhammad4779
      @muhammad4779 Рік тому

      @@CrazyTeacherNick Appreciate it!

  • @amyvdhelde
    @amyvdhelde 3 місяці тому +1

    Hi Teacher Nick, thank you so much for your video!! You mentioned that there needs to be a comma after Dear Diary. Does that mean we start the next part of our text with a capital or lowercase letter? Thank you so much!!

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  3 місяці тому

      Thank you for the kind words. You will start with a capital letter. Great question!

  • @SomeRandomPerson946
    @SomeRandomPerson946 Рік тому +1

    Do we need to include a conclusion for Q1b, Q2 and the reflective commentry? And if so what do we need to talk about in the conclusion?

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +1

      Hi Angela, No a conclusion is a waste of time/ words in any analysis because you are just repeating the same thing. So, in short No. Good question.

    • @SomeRandomPerson946
      @SomeRandomPerson946 Рік тому

      @@CrazyTeacherNick ok thank you sir

  • @konkemshunqane1040
    @konkemshunqane1040 Рік тому +1

    Thank you so much sirrr

  • @husseinmanea4366
    @husseinmanea4366 Рік тому +1

    Sir is allusion, flashbacks, foreshadowing, alliteration, diction are they a part of language devices ??

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому

      Flashback and foreshadowing are NORMALLY forms of structural devices. Remember you cannot write about everything. You must discuss FORM, STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE devices. Only discuss those devices you are confident in explaining.

    • @husseinmanea4366
      @husseinmanea4366 Рік тому

      @@CrazyTeacherNick 👌👌 thank you sir

  • @sthuthexproduction5787
    @sthuthexproduction5787 Рік тому +1

    Teacher Nick, may I ask if you 're penalised in question 1a for exceeding the number of words since its 150-200 words?

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому

      You won't be penalised but remember that time is not on your side and essentially - you should not need more than 200 words to complete the task. Also there are only 10 marks avaialble. In 1b you are aiming for about 350 - 400 words. Put your effort into 1b. Good Luck in your exams.

    • @sthuthexproduction5787
      @sthuthexproduction5787 Рік тому

      @@CrazyTeacherNick your response suffices for me Teacher Nick. Thank u very much.

  • @sthuthexproduction5787
    @sthuthexproduction5787 Рік тому +1

    Also in paper 2 question 1a, are you penalised for exceeding the number of words since it is said do not write not more than 400 words?

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому

      Again it is time-related. At Cambridge we expect students to be able to write a minimum of 600 words per hour. So aim for 350 words in Paper 2 1a. You won't be penalised but you are wasting time that you could use in Q2,3 or 4. For Q21b - aim for about 150 - 200 words. TIME is not a student's best friend. GL

    • @sthuthexproduction5787
      @sthuthexproduction5787 Рік тому

      @@CrazyTeacherNick thank u so much sir.

  • @ihisoka9118
    @ihisoka9118 Рік тому +2

    How do we allocate time to both questions of P1? And is there any way in which I can contact you directly for my queries as I have my AS exam in two days? plss and thank you for this video

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +1

      Hi Ihisoka -
      I would suggest that you time Paper 1 as follows:
      P1 Q1
      Planning: 15 minutes
      Writing 1a: 15 Minutes (10 Marks)
      Writing 1b: 25-30 Minutes (15 Marks)
      Checking 5 minutes.
      P1Q2
      Planning: 10 minutes
      Writing; 45 - 50 minutes.
      You have 135 minutes in total.
      Practice makes perfect.
      You can email me nick.ferris3@gmail.com But

    • @ihisoka9118
      @ihisoka9118 Рік тому +1

      @@CrazyTeacherNick YOU'RE A LIFE SAVER SIR!!

    • @ihisoka9118
      @ihisoka9118 Рік тому +1

      @@CrazyTeacherNick However l was quite confused on how much time should l allocate for reading?

  • @sara-il4bb
    @sara-il4bb Рік тому +1

    Hello, my exam is in 2 days and i haven't prepped since October, any advice or cheatcodes please

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +3

      Cheatcodes:
      1. Structural Devices
      2. Language Devices
      3. Key Conventions
      Be precise, plan and English is a Study Subject so Study!

    • @sara-il4bb
      @sara-il4bb Рік тому +1

      @@CrazyTeacherNick Hi sir, could you please give examples of each.
      Thanks xx

    • @sthuthexproduction5787
      @sthuthexproduction5787 Рік тому

      @@sara-il4bb don't be lazy young lady. Don't be lazy!!!. You had ample time and now you expect teacher Nick to summarise all of the structural, language and form features. Are you for real really? If you fail, you only have yourself to blame.

  • @husseinmanea4366
    @husseinmanea4366 Рік тому +1

    Hello sir, can you tell us about the world level that we can use for example anaphora, anadeplosis, lscolon extra but there are much more. If possible sir you could remind me of more of them

    • @ihisoka9118
      @ihisoka9118 Рік тому

      I have never heard of these...could you send me this on whatsapp pls?

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +1

      Hi Hussein, These are some excellent videos for Structural Devices and Language Devices.
      1. ua-cam.com/video/kGTDmQSm6_s/v-deo.html&pp=ygUjc3RydWN0dXJhbCBkZXZpY2VzIGVuZ2xpc2ggbGFuZ3VhZ2U%3D
      2. ua-cam.com/video/ymL88ythSao/v-deo.html&pp=ygUhbGFuZ3VhZ2UgZGV2aWNlcyBlbmdsaXNoIGxhbmd1YWdl

    • @husseinmanea4366
      @husseinmanea4366 Рік тому

      @@ihisoka9118 bro these are extremely important to raise up ur marks

    • @husseinmanea4366
      @husseinmanea4366 Рік тому

      @@CrazyTeacherNick sir I have another question is allusion,diction,alliteration,allegory,flashbacks,imagery. Are they all type of language devices or structural device???

    • @sthuthexproduction5787
      @sthuthexproduction5787 Рік тому

      @@husseinmanea4366 to answer your question dear, allusion, alliteration fall under figurative devices/figurative language but they 're deemed as language devices. Its not an undeniable fact that the words 'diction' and 'lexical choice'/ 'lexical field ' mean the same thing but try to use the term lexical choice instead of the word diction as it is less sophisticated- Diction does fall under a language device as well. Imagery and allegory fall under language devices. Note that the narrative essay techniques like flashback, flashforward, sequential, cyclical etc all those 're deemed as form features NOT structural features. I hope you understand dear.

  • @ihisoka9118
    @ihisoka9118 Рік тому +3

    And can you please tell me how to bring sophistication in my writing? the mark scheme always emphasizes on the words sophisticated and effectiveness but I dont quite understand them... my plan is to use as much structural and language devices as possible. My one more concern is that my vocabulary level isnt that advanced as compared to other students.. I did manage to learn some good adjectives but was still feeling doubtful. Any tips? or go to words?

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +4

      Do not obsess about the word "sophistication"in the mark scheme. It only causes students to try and write in some fake style. Be yourself, we are more interested in your knowledge of the effects. Know your wordclasses, know your key terms ie structural and language devices. Be clear, precise and to the point. Make it easy for the examiner to understand your knowledge. Be Calm and Confident.

    • @ihisoka9118
      @ihisoka9118 Рік тому

      @@CrazyTeacherNick THANK YOU!! this gives me so much confidence. Wish me luck as my Exam is tommorrow!!

    • @MayishaDenise
      @MayishaDenise 2 дні тому

      @@ihisoka9118how did you do?writing tomorrow

    • @MayishaDenise
      @MayishaDenise 2 дні тому

      monday***

  • @melon_mer
    @melon_mer Рік тому +1

    omg thank you

    • @CrazyTeacherNick
      @CrazyTeacherNick  Рік тому +1

      I hope it helps. If you have questions - please ask.