One time I joined a public lobby,everyone else was playing together except for me and my brother and then my brother and I were both imposters, and then we got voted out immediately
Then there are the discord cheaters who either mess with the votes to keep their friend (who is the impostor) in or just straight up says who killed who in chat cause their friend told them, so annoying.
Even in among us the first thing Ema Skye does is go to lab and do science. Also I now headcanon there exists a world where all of them get to play among us like this.
@Arman Erfan Akhlaghi Yeah but tasks in lab don’t take that long. Unless you thought inspect samples required you to actually wait there for a minute, which, tbf, Ema might have, since she was new to the game
You're off to a good start... You gained my attention... Since you put in a lot of effort, i will not hold any punches to give you feedback. 1. You need to utilize more flashes, shakes, and sound effects. Think of them as the spice of the conversation 2. You overused the objections... it's too much objections, making them felt weak in terms of impact 3. Use pauses on commas, dots, exclamations. 4. You used Gumshoe's theme without Gumshoe :( 5. The first round seems to have slower text speed, idk what happened but i don't think it's intentional, it kinda' drags on unnecessarily 6. Mostly on the last meeting, the conversation gets stale... especially at 11:23 until 14:47, to break the staleness of this section, the usage of shakes, flashes, and audios will help by a large margin. 7. Manfred von Karma has strong mental composure, his 'cornered' pose won't even visible until after he has no way of getting out of the accusations, so what i'm saying is that he will keep his cool through the end, once he's in cornered position, he would stay that way until his breakdown. I think that's all i can say, now for the points 1. Good use of monologues 2. You used Edgeworth's pursuit suitably well, it's like "Oh shit, his song just kicked in" 3. The usage of words makes them intelligent, not using simple word. It's rare to find someone say "You testified to the contrary" in AA x AU videos 4. You have good understanding of characters themselves 5. You used taunts before getting to the point, although they needs to be more taunts. 6. References to the ace attorney lore, because von Karma is always perfect Well... help yourself by watching the video below and you may understand what i'm talking about ua-cam.com/video/uciZmj4FjSY/v-deo.html How long did it take for you to make this objection? Because i look forward to your next AA x AU video!
Thanks for the feedback! This certain video took me about 20 hours of work to make, but a decent portion of that time was checking in on errors or getting used to the program. A new video should be coming out in the near future, which will probably feature a shorter, but much more satisfying mystery.
@@thewintercarrot1253 Less than a day when accumulated, so it would be few days. You took your time checking for errors, which is very important... I wouldn't finish it ASAP if quality hurts, you're in a right direction... I look forward to the next
Good: -Elegant language, they trully sound like attorneys playing, and i love it xD -The reference to the lore of the AA games themselves? Amazing -The scheme of their dialogues is structured and reminiscent of the games, and sounds really on character, which are things that anyone can trully appreciate and enjoy -Not revealing the impostors and make it a full-on mystery everyone HAD to solve as a group is something i quite enjoy Bad: -Too many spins to land to the floor, making it so long was really dragging my attention down a whole “Lotta” levels. -Too many justifications, and not too much “punchline” moments, it sorta dried at some points. -Von Karma is a very strong character, i highly doubt he will lose his calm nature with just a few accusations, is not very in character for him to do so, but the other characters kinda had it right so i guess is fine. -I like that Edgeworth is the “protagonist” here, sorta speak, instead of Phoenix, since we can read his thoughts while he plays, but it also did not make a lot of sense, to me at least, since Phoenix was actually present during the whole game, so… It wasn't that necessary. I liked it, over all.
First round suspects (my pov): Red could be self rp And pink sus Next round: did not expect him to be the imp he looks like one soi thought it was reverse psychology Final round: Lmao new pink was sus you dont stay in a lab for a full round unless it was fast
When you want to add an image (or Evidence as the maker calls it), you can click the Add Image button at the right most side of your scene's toolbar. To remove the Evidence you simple insert the hide Evidence tag where you want it to dissappear. Some images right off of Google may not work, but if you upload an image to Imgur I find that using the Imgur link solves the issue. If you want the picture to only take up the small amount it does in the video, select is icon right below the file URL, if you don't the picture will cover the whole screen. I hope this helps
this is great, i know at the time of makin this, the other colors dont exist, but i feel lik miles would take on the color of maroon the most, hence y recently ive taken up the color of maroon
I know this is an old video but I like how much of the OST you used, still a splendid video. What list of OST did you use if I may know? (Thanks in advance =v=)
God if only public games were actually this civil and logical. I'm the only one who plays this way
Mood
Once I got voted out because a person told their irl friend I killed them.
yes
@@kk_cats6072 thus why Discord vc exist
One time I joined a public lobby,everyone else was playing together except for me and my brother and then my brother and I were both imposters, and then we got voted out immediately
I try to
In a true random lobby, it would be
Few People: GG
Pink: Fuck you.
*Pink Left*
YYyyyyyeeepp
Then there are the discord cheaters who either mess with the votes to keep their friend (who is the impostor) in or just straight up says who killed who in chat cause their friend told them, so annoying.
@Bertholdt hoover smh
@@__alexn__3548 those are the smh momment
Hello fellow sky player
Shit now I want real attorneys playing Among Us with limited cooldown and each would keep an actual note of evidence and alibis.
That would be amazing
Oh hell, I'd watch that.
?
Even in among us the first thing Ema Skye does is go to lab and do science.
Also I now headcanon there exists a world where all of them get to play among us like this.
at the end blue should of been like:
“anything else to say, pink?”
“...red sus.”
“Oh. true!”
“Wait what-
*Red was not the Impostor.*
Yes
And there's your bad end
Lime: Spits coffee
Everyone else: *POUNDS THE TABLE*
#tableabuse
@@hogchecker2737 AYO HAMINATIONS IS IN THERE (also what the heck there is only ice and fire abuse not TABLE ABUSE)
AWESOME. The mystery is really well done, the songs are well-used, the intelligent reasoning...
This video is a straight 10/10.
Pink was sus the very first round for claiming to be in lab the whole round despite there being no reason for a crewmate to stay in lab for that long
@Arman Erfan Akhlaghi Yeah but tasks in lab don’t take that long. Unless you thought inspect samples required you to actually wait there for a minute, which, tbf, Ema might have, since she was new to the game
You're off to a good start...
You gained my attention...
Since you put in a lot of effort, i will not hold any punches to give you feedback.
1. You need to utilize more flashes, shakes, and sound effects. Think of them as the spice of the conversation
2. You overused the objections... it's too much objections, making them felt weak in terms of impact
3. Use pauses on commas, dots, exclamations.
4. You used Gumshoe's theme without Gumshoe :(
5. The first round seems to have slower text speed, idk what happened but i don't think it's intentional, it kinda' drags on unnecessarily
6. Mostly on the last meeting, the conversation gets stale... especially at 11:23 until 14:47, to break the staleness of this section, the usage of shakes, flashes, and audios will help by a large margin.
7. Manfred von Karma has strong mental composure, his 'cornered' pose won't even visible until after he has no way of getting out of the accusations, so what i'm saying is that he will keep his cool through the end, once he's in cornered position, he would stay that way until his breakdown.
I think that's all i can say, now for the points
1. Good use of monologues
2. You used Edgeworth's pursuit suitably well, it's like "Oh shit, his song just kicked in"
3. The usage of words makes them intelligent, not using simple word. It's rare to find someone say "You testified to the contrary" in AA x AU videos
4. You have good understanding of characters themselves
5. You used taunts before getting to the point, although they needs to be more taunts.
6. References to the ace attorney lore, because von Karma is always perfect
Well... help yourself by watching the video below and you may understand what i'm talking about
ua-cam.com/video/uciZmj4FjSY/v-deo.html
How long did it take for you to make this objection?
Because i look forward to your next AA x AU video!
Thanks for the feedback! This certain video took me about 20 hours of work to make, but a decent portion of that time was checking in on errors or getting used to the program. A new video should be coming out in the near future, which will probably feature a shorter, but much more satisfying mystery.
@@thewintercarrot1253 Less than a day when accumulated, so it would be few days.
You took your time checking for errors, which is very important...
I wouldn't finish it ASAP if quality hurts, you're in a right direction...
I look forward to the next
@@Raudent ok ima send you my link so you can give me tips cuz i have a feeling that i need more tips and im not the best
@@bidilz No one is the best, but everyone can be great...
Therefore yeah... go for it, send the link.
@@Raudent can u check out my latest video and give feedback too? I make objection.lol videos as well.
Good:
-Elegant language, they trully sound like attorneys playing, and i love it xD
-The reference to the lore of the AA games themselves? Amazing
-The scheme of their dialogues is structured and reminiscent of the games, and sounds really on character, which are things that anyone can trully appreciate and enjoy
-Not revealing the impostors and make it a full-on mystery everyone HAD to solve as a group is something i quite enjoy
Bad:
-Too many spins to land to the floor, making it so long was really dragging my attention down a whole “Lotta” levels.
-Too many justifications, and not too much “punchline” moments, it sorta dried at some points.
-Von Karma is a very strong character, i highly doubt he will lose his calm nature with just a few accusations, is not very in character for him to do so, but the other characters kinda had it right so i guess is fine.
-I like that Edgeworth is the “protagonist” here, sorta speak, instead of Phoenix, since we can read his thoughts while he plays, but it also did not make a lot of sense, to me at least, since Phoenix was actually present during the whole game, so… It wasn't that necessary.
I liked it, over all.
seems to me that you hated it
You taked this too long to do! I will give you a subscribe of incredible work.
This Among Us version of Ace Attorey you made feels like a Danganronpa case.
I know right?!
But it’s not for 1 whole hour and more-
This is how the devs want us to play, but in reality it just ends up being “red sus” lol
@InfiniteSouls perhaps both.
godot is the reason why 57% of the coffee in the world disappeared
Edgeworth Have A Good Effort This Time,Almost Better Then Phoenix But Phoenix Is A Pro
I loved the cyan segment
I like how at the end they say gg but this whole time I was thinking it was like real life
I really wish among us lobbies were like this
1:11 I CAN SO RELATE
I can relate as well
@Taco Animations yep
T a x
@@joecool1325 ??????
First round suspects (my pov):
Red could be self rp
And pink sus
Next round:
did not expect him to be the imp he looks like one soi thought it was reverse psychology
Final round:
Lmao new pink was sus you dont stay in a lab for a full round unless it was fast
bruh manfred is accusing his daughter for *murder*?
Nice your doing great at making video like this
why is karma always in one of these videos, imposter?
And yes, I know the game where he ... is to blame for something.
dang my objection.lol videos are way shorter than this good job
Red sus
This video is absolutely phenomenal!
Wish my Randoms were like this :)
9:19 how do u do the popup thing if its called that btw amazing video
When you want to add an image (or Evidence as the maker calls it), you can click the Add Image button at the right most side of your scene's toolbar. To remove the Evidence you simple insert the hide Evidence tag where you want it to dissappear. Some images right off of Google may not work, but if you upload an image to Imgur I find that using the Imgur link solves the issue. If you want the picture to only take up the small amount it does in the video, select is icon right below the file URL, if you don't the picture will cover the whole screen. I hope this helps
ok ill try do that
1:33 can someone please tell me what this piece is called
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
This video:
Me: Happy :)
I'm not as happy when C pulls out the jumper cables though
Pedophiles : "age is just a number"
Their mom's: well then this belt is going in you're @$$
Phoenix and Miles are 20000IQ
C o n c r e t e evidence
This is ace attorney but everyone is a procecutor and a attorney and a judge and a victim and a subject .
love it
Highest level of among us gameplay ngl
this is great, i know at the time of makin this, the other colors dont exist, but i feel lik miles would take on the color of maroon the most, hence y recently ive taken up the color of maroon
Edgeworth being the protagonist in this among us game instead a phoenix is fun
redgeworth is smart
Why is Godot always Lime? The only thing close to lime on his sprite is the DARK green sleeves on his shirt.
We will never know that
because godot is godot and everyone likes godot
wrightworth wins 🏳🌈
bro wanted among us that bad
what map are they in?
I will now try to be like edgeworth in public games now
When there's no crime and judge was busy
Imagine this was a New Game For Among Us or an Update to Among us. That`s a cool video btw
This is pretty good
Don't know man
Seems kinda sus..
I know this is an old video but I like how much of the OST you used, still a splendid video.
What list of OST did you use if I may know? (Thanks in advance =v=)
I'm not sure
Everybody at the end
GG
What's the music used at 6:55?
Pursuit ~ Overtaken
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
that was awsome
Awesome video
I Loved It
'MAZING!
among us sucks