@@FoodTechToday It's the weird timeline. Just present the content in a straight forward way. Don't jump to random future scenes. We don't want to see the finished fries before they are done being processed. Go watch a How It's Made video to get an idea. You also repeat the same scenes over again.
@@halo2glitcherz Thanks for the feedback! Appreciate you taking the time to watch and let me know what you think. You've got some solid points there, and I'm always looking to improve. No more surprise jumps to the future - gotta keep those fries under wraps until they're golden brown and ready to go! Think I'll go binge-watch some "How It's Made" myself for inspiration. Thanks for the tip!
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thank you
The editing in this is not good. I wanted to keep watching but couldn't
I will try to edit the script. If you have watched other videos, please let me know.
@@FoodTechToday It's the weird timeline. Just present the content in a straight forward way. Don't jump to random future scenes. We don't want to see the finished fries before they are done being processed. Go watch a How It's Made video to get an idea. You also repeat the same scenes over again.
@@halo2glitcherz Thanks for the feedback! Appreciate you taking the time to watch and let me know what you think. You've got some solid points there, and I'm always looking to improve. No more surprise jumps to the future - gotta keep those fries under wraps until they're golden brown and ready to go!
Think I'll go binge-watch some "How It's Made" myself for inspiration. Thanks for the tip!