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The production quality has greatly increased! Although your first videos sure had a lovely charm to them, this is what will drive even more traffic to your channel.
I like the long hair hippie dude look better. Lance certainly has talent for talking and is obviously very smart… definitely my second favorite UA-cam personality in the coffee world… or possibly even a tie with James Hoffman, I learn so much! Thanks!
Thank you! I've recently started venturing into 45-60 second shots with lighter roasts and finer grinds - fully expecting them to be super bitter and, to my surprise, finding that it's actually really hard to get any bitterness out of these coffees, and these long shots tend to taste pretty good!
Lance, thaaaanks! As a person who started 1.5 years ago in coffee, need to admit that I always strived for finding such a helpful video. Trust me, you've helped a lot to every newcomer, as it doesn't go nerdy to the point of confusion.
Lance, I discovered you around the time I purchased my Gaggia and I have watched every video since. I love the science and discussion. I have really valued your work, thank you.
Thank you for helping me discover the magic that's caffé crema, Lance! I've been making it since the sprover video and I just can't believe what a great beverage that can be. A couple months ago I had some very lightly roasted coffee that I struggled to extract properly with either V60 or Aeropress, but then I made a coffee shot and it turned out to be a super delicious fruit salad in a coffee cup. My mind was totally blown!
Wish I had a pressure gauge on my Picopresso for some of these shots! Thanks for this video. I don't do Espresso a lot but I keep hearing these different terms but never fully explained. This is great!
Have tried most of these shots on my bambino, I found it a teachable experience of how coffee can taste from an espresso machine. Especially when using different beans of different roast levels. Love the office and your new office.
Great video! Tried a ristretto on lightly roasted natural ethiopian coffee, year ago at our roastery lab.. 18in 20 out, 94c in 45 to 1minute on fine grind. Tasted like coffee caramel candy, but not sour, balanced fruity. Im on allonge now, or 6bar espresso shots, depends on coffee)
Agreed. My personal preference is a ristretto ratio. I can achieve balanced shots by dialing in dose and grind. Ristretto definitely does not have to be sour.
this is the video! From this video on the production quality of your videos was really great and a huge leap from before! I have to admit, I was too shallow to personally find access to the older videos, just because of the presentation. So glad you upped your game! I actually went back through your videos to find that point in time, because I noticed that I really love your videos nowadays, while when I watched older videos of you a while ago, when the algorith presented them to me, I somehow didn't stick...
What I love about your videos is that even though you are extremely knowledgeable, the bottom line in your videos (at least for me) is enjoy your own process and enjoy coffee! Thank you for that:)
The one thing I love about his videos is how Lance establishes a “baseline” like ratios/recipes but also comes in and says that they can be adjusted. Coffee elitists and snobs could never reach his level of technicality. 👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
Recently added a needle valve and head pressure gauge to my e61 machine. What an eye opener to be able to monitor puck pressure. Pulling Slayer shots are a breeze as well as any pressure profile recipe. Highly recommend a puck pressure gauge for e61 machines. The pressure gauge on a rotary pump machine does not reveal the true puck pressure in most cases.
now we need to try and see what baskets are best for each of these . (for both dark and light roasts) . some precision baskets have fast flow some restrict the flow . so this changes the grind size . and when messing with ratios like these recipes do the grind size can change the flavour .
This video is great to help the dogmatic type (me) to lighten the f up - THX again Lance... I also like the specific kind of video that explains exactly how to make a cup - I'm so confused-:)
The major "problem" with us coffee nerds, is that we are explorers and perfectionists. We are never happy and we like to try new things, even if that thing bring us to madness Lately I am trying to stick to 1-2 coffees so I can see different results, and that is the thing I suggest to new baristi
Hi Lance would you mind making a video for puck preperation without any additional tools besides a portafilter and a tamper but in a cafe barista setting? I keep getting inconsistent timings and i would like to improve on that. Also comparing the timings and taste would be nice as well :) (if you read this message)
Can't wait to churn through dozens of bangs trying all these on my Flair 58, gettin confused by all these recipes and doing a great Spromale or a Turbo Allongreto
Nice shout out to Myriade cafe, the original location in downtown Montreal used to be my daily driver for allongés during university about 10 years ago. I remember thinking their espresso tasted like nothing I had tried before (I was working in a coffee shop myself back then) and their machines were out of this world. Had no idea Scott Rao was the founder of Myriade!
Great video, this one and the last one. It’s already helped me look at coffee differently and also kinda expanded my horizons to understand more about coffee. Almost like finding a new quest line playing Skyrim lol great videos Lance!
I like these and will try. I found another reason to become familiar with them … when dialing in a new bag and something “isn’t going right” (for example, looks like your target 25-30 seconds is going to be significantly faster or slower), you roll with it and tell yourself you’re making something else. Instead of getting frustrated, stopping the shot and throwing everything out.
Beautiful video, awesome audio, but what I like the most is the accessibility. No 'right' or 'wrong', no 'ultimate' or 'perfect', just 'here are some techniques to consider, but go and explore'. Thanks for the great content.
Lance I love your videos and always appreciated how you experiment with random products and get super in depth. Would love to see you review the JT64 grinder!
Great video! I’m definitely gonna try the turbo and allonge at work tomorrow 👍 Oh! And the studio looks awesome btw! 2 questions: 1. What is the ratio you usually go for on the turbo? 2. How’s the kafmasino review coming along? 😀 Cheers!
I would start at 1:3 for turbo, at 15-16g dose, as I pull turbo with light roasted coffee which are not easy to extract, too little water could not reach the high flow rate (higher flow rate extract more).
Great video, just wonder if there’s any direction of choosing these methods, for example if want to get away from saltiness or bitterness etc.? Or any beans could be tasty with all methods? Or it’s total random and undiscovered?
Awesome awesome awesome video. UA-cam didn't suggest any of your videos for months, I guess I 'm gonna have to binge watch. Finally someone explaining property the ristretto. One question, when I worked in a coffee shop, my first goal was trying to minimize the waste in between shots, that's also why the team wasn't into offering many coffee styles because we had only one grinder and a 2 heads group. What's your take on this, how practical it is to offer a wide range of beverages for a small business? Is it really relevant especially when we try to minimize waste by dialing in shots? Or is there some methods to avoid coffee loss? (I'm especially thinking about myself when I was training at home and wasting fields of coffee and squeezing 10 cows a day 😂)
Love it broski!! Looks like I'm gonna be drinking a hell of a lot (more than usual) of coffee this afternoon tweaking a few things lol Btw, until watching your videos I don't think I've heard someone say "homemade sin" since my grandmother passed away lol. Big nostalgia, love it lol
Thank you for the video. It was a great Bday gift for this old fella. :) Gonna be going crazy with a locally roasted decaf (health reasons) trying as many of these as I can today. Keep up the great work!
I am waiting for lance hedrick and poppa james hoffmann to do a video on decaf. Unusual find?:" Oslo" (usa nyc?) roastery did a blend of Colombian and Sumatra medium. Counter culture has featured a seasonal decaf in addition to their year round. Besides swiss water processed, everyone seems to be using the "sugar" processing at the same place even? Does it remove more than caffeine?
I really need to try the Ristretto with a light roast! I love the lighting and the coffee studio set up. But I digress... The Ristretto on a light roast...
@Lance Hedrick thanks for the video, beside the portability and other features, how does flair 58 compare to pro 2, just in terms of esspresso body and taste ? Does it worth the extra money ? I'm looking forward to upgrade my pro2 to 58 if the difference worth it.
Are there any bean criteria you use besides being a light roast when pulling a lungo (i.e., beans from x altitude being super dense work best)? Do you get good results with medium roasts pulled as a lungo? What is your ristretto recipe?
Tbh i pull normal shots everyday because it's the safe sweet spot and coffee is a routine these days But this vid make me wanna experiment on these shots. Thanks!
I was having channeling problems. Then I switched to a traditional spouted portafilter, and my problems went away. Maybe there was still channeling, but I no longer had a problem with it. Out of sight, out of mind. More seriously: I'm sure that thinking and stressing too much about channels is going to distract (at least me, maybe some other folks) from what really matters: the taste. See a strange squirt? That kind of primes me to think that something will be wrong with my coffee. It didn't brew right. So I'm expecting it to taste incorrect.
Love turbos and the occasional allongé. Most times is a standard 1:2 though. Next recipe needs to be big bodied syrupy shot that still has clarity and sweetness 🤔
Could not get a purchase of Eugenides (sold out), but could you do a short video on it? Have tried Robusta in a phin and some brewers, but could not handle the jolt of caffeine. What is Eugenides like in properties, taste, and the botany array?
Any notes for if you are lucky enough to have a machine where you can easily adjust your pump's max pressure? (I know, I know, experiment & break rules, but as starting points?)
Great explanations. I do not have the experience that ristrettos are more sour or bitter than longer shots. They just taste like the flavor notes, more concentrated. Fruity coffees make fruity ristrettos, spicy cinnamony coffees make spicy ristrettos, etc. to me a longer shot of same tastes like a ristretto with hot brown water added, and I really hate being refused a short shot at a cafe because the brown water is needed to “balance out the acidity” which to me it does not. All this is assuming the coffee is properly dialed in using your great sour-sweet-bitter dial from an excellent earlier video.
Do you believe there could be a niche for alternative firmware for Nespresso and Dolce Gusto machines that allows control over temperature and extraction time?
What's a "daddy Hoff"? Stirring with a fancy spoon, as advocated by Sir James? Anyway, even though it's the middle of the night over here, because of this video I'm about to brew me somewhere between 10 and 15 shots. Thanks Lance!
Honestly this video just made more confused than before - Originally I was always under the assumption that ratios defined Ristretto/Normale/Lungo but they were always in relation to a perfectly pulled Normale - So that grind size didnt change just how long you pulled your shot for to either get a ristretto or lungo. Than earlier this year through HB, UA-cam and Discord channels I was led to believe that Ristrettos and Lungos need there own specific grind size and that they should be there own variable for hitting your times - Yes, yes, yes - I understand at the end of the day its all about taste and preference there are no hard set rules - but I really just want to know if you are pulling a ristretto should you just pull a Normale early or should you make a grind size adjustment so that get you a 1:1 in 25-30 seconds vs a 1:2 in 25-30 seconds (Normale) - this would just be for a typical Ristretto with no info related to bean origin/roast/etc - what is the preferred way to get a Ristretto its own recipe or a Normale recipe stopped short?
If you enjoyed the video, please consider leaving a comment and hitting like! All of this helps my video get seen. And don't forget to hit that subscribe! Thank you
your hipster man bun and moustache is out of control, and not in a good way.
The production quality has greatly increased! Although your first videos sure had a lovely charm to them, this is what will drive even more traffic to your channel.
I like the long hair hippie dude look better. Lance certainly has talent for talking and is obviously very smart… definitely my second favorite UA-cam personality in the coffee world… or possibly even a tie with James Hoffman, I learn so much! Thanks!
Thank you! I've recently started venturing into 45-60 second shots with lighter roasts and finer grinds - fully expecting them to be super bitter and, to my surprise, finding that it's actually really hard to get any bitterness out of these coffees, and these long shots tend to taste pretty good!
Any recommendations?
Lance, thaaaanks! As a person who started 1.5 years ago in coffee, need to admit that I always strived for finding such a helpful video. Trust me, you've helped a lot to every newcomer, as it doesn't go nerdy to the point of confusion.
Such a great video. I would love an infographic/cheat sheet for all these recipes to pin up on my brew bar! :D
Just wanted to congratulate you on the new studio and improved video quality. The difference is noticeable and appreciated!
Lance, I discovered you around the time I purchased my Gaggia and I have watched every video since. I love the science and discussion. I have really valued your work, thank you.
Thank you for helping me discover the magic that's caffé crema, Lance! I've been making it since the sprover video and I just can't believe what a great beverage that can be. A couple months ago I had some very lightly roasted coffee that I struggled to extract properly with either V60 or Aeropress, but then I made a coffee shot and it turned out to be a super delicious fruit salad in a coffee cup. My mind was totally blown!
There is so much information, I'd love a visualisation and a comparison in the end. Just to remember it better! Awesome video!
This is the most profound video about coffee I’ve came through. Thank you, sir.
Love how often daddy Hoff gets referenced in new videos
Thanks, Lance. Love all your works.
your videos are always full of details and most important part- the heart of enjoying coffee!
i have fallen in love with your channel! Truly great content
cheers from Barcelona
Wish I had a pressure gauge on my Picopresso for some of these shots! Thanks for this video. I don't do Espresso a lot but I keep hearing these different terms but never fully explained. This is great!
Love seeing Cafelat Robot on your shelving.
Unbelievable amount of valuable content packed into this 15 minute video. Thank you.
Have tried most of these shots on my bambino, I found it a teachable experience of how coffee can taste from an espresso machine. Especially when using different beans of different roast levels.
Love the office and your new office.
Thanks Hedrick! Good advise. I found myself in a journey to a lungo as a way to taste a great coffee.
Great video! Tried a ristretto on lightly roasted natural ethiopian coffee, year ago at our roastery lab.. 18in 20 out, 94c in 45 to 1minute on fine grind. Tasted like coffee caramel candy, but not sour, balanced fruity. Im on allonge now, or 6bar espresso shots, depends on coffee)
Agreed. My personal preference is a ristretto ratio. I can achieve balanced shots by dialing in dose and grind. Ristretto definitely does not have to be sour.
This was great, thanks for this Lance. Really nice to see many of these shots styles that I had heard of demonstrated in a single video!
this is the video! From this video on the production quality of your videos was really great and a huge leap from before!
I have to admit, I was too shallow to personally find access to the older videos, just because of the presentation. So glad you upped your game!
I actually went back through your videos to find that point in time, because I noticed that I really love your videos nowadays, while when I watched older videos of you a while ago, when the algorith presented them to me, I somehow didn't stick...
The studio looks great Lance!
Easily one of my favorite videos of yours. The digression at 10:10 was sumptuous.
Thanks for the video Lance! Really informative + I liked the The Office reference!
What I love about your videos is that even though you are extremely knowledgeable, the bottom line in your videos (at least for me) is enjoy your own process and enjoy coffee!
Thank you for that:)
This is such a great and informative video. Thanks as always.
The one thing I love about his videos is how Lance establishes a “baseline” like ratios/recipes but also comes in and says that they can be adjusted.
Coffee elitists and snobs could never reach his level of technicality. 👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
Great breakdown Lance thankyou.
Just found this channel by recommendation. Liked & subscribed. Thank you.
Love this! Such a great video to keep as a reference and try out. Thanks 🙏
Recently added a needle valve and head pressure gauge to my e61 machine. What an eye opener to be able to monitor puck pressure. Pulling Slayer shots are a breeze as well as any pressure profile recipe. Highly recommend a puck pressure gauge for e61 machines. The pressure gauge on a rotary pump machine does not reveal the true puck pressure in most cases.
What needle valve and puck pressure gauge do you reccomened for e61?
@@dylananhorn1 I have the Coffee Sensor set up but there are a lot of them available now from popular suppliers. All should work the same.
now we need to try and see what baskets are best for each of these . (for both dark and light roasts) . some precision baskets have fast flow some restrict the flow . so this changes the grind size . and when messing with ratios like these recipes do the grind size can change the flavour .
Thanks for the shout-out right before the intro!
This video is great to help the dogmatic type (me) to lighten the f up - THX again Lance...
I also like the specific kind of video that explains exactly how to make a cup - I'm so confused-:)
The major "problem" with us coffee nerds, is that we are explorers and perfectionists.
We are never happy and we like to try new things, even if that thing bring us to madness
Lately I am trying to stick to 1-2 coffees so I can see different results, and that is the thing I suggest to new baristi
Hi Lance would you mind making a video for puck preperation without any additional tools besides a portafilter and a tamper but in a cafe barista setting? I keep getting inconsistent timings and i would like to improve on that. Also comparing the timings and taste would be nice as well :) (if you read this message)
Nice table slapping’. Great video. Away to dial in some spros…
Can't wait to churn through dozens of bangs trying all these on my Flair 58, gettin confused by all these recipes and doing a great Spromale or a Turbo Allongreto
I have 2 lbs of coffee that arrived late that I ordered for my visitors last weekend. Time to get frisky this weekend with some shots.
Nice shout out to Myriade cafe, the original location in downtown Montreal used to be my daily driver for allongés during university about 10 years ago. I remember thinking their espresso tasted like nothing I had tried before (I was working in a coffee shop myself back then) and their machines were out of this world. Had no idea Scott Rao was the founder of Myriade!
Great video, this one and the last one. It’s already helped me look at coffee differently and also kinda expanded my horizons to understand more about coffee. Almost like finding a new quest line playing Skyrim lol great videos Lance!
Lance, you’re funny as frick. Keep it up, man.
I like these and will try. I found another reason to become familiar with them … when dialing in a new bag and something “isn’t going right” (for example, looks like your target 25-30 seconds is going to be significantly faster or slower), you roll with it and tell yourself you’re making something else. Instead of getting frustrated, stopping the shot and throwing everything out.
Beautiful video, awesome audio, but what I like the most is the accessibility. No 'right' or 'wrong', no 'ultimate' or 'perfect', just 'here are some techniques to consider, but go and explore'. Thanks for the great content.
Lance I love your videos and always appreciated how you experiment with random products and get super in depth. Would love to see you review the JT64 grinder!
Great video! I’m definitely gonna try the turbo and allonge at work tomorrow 👍
Oh! And the studio looks awesome btw!
2 questions:
1. What is the ratio you usually go for on the turbo?
2. How’s the kafmasino review coming along? 😀
Cheers!
I would start at 1:3 for turbo, at 15-16g dose, as I pull turbo with light roasted coffee which are not easy to extract, too little water could not reach the high flow rate (higher flow rate extract more).
@@nicholashongkong I’ll give it a shot!(pun intended) thanks!
Awesome video
I'm certainly no expert, but the production quality seems to have improved noticeably. Nice work!
Salesman of the year!
Yes, here here for all coffees and The Office!
Great video, just wonder if there’s any direction of choosing these methods, for example if want to get away from saltiness or bitterness etc.? Or any beans could be tasty with all methods? Or it’s total random and undiscovered?
Great video. Are certain coffees best suited for turbo or allongé recipes?
I saw that sneaky silver play button. Congrats bro.
Just keeps getting better, Lance. Thank you so much for your work!
Awesome awesome awesome video.
UA-cam didn't suggest any of your videos for months, I guess I 'm gonna have to binge watch.
Finally someone explaining property the ristretto.
One question, when I worked in a coffee shop, my first goal was trying to minimize the waste in between shots, that's also why the team wasn't into offering many coffee styles because we had only one grinder and a 2 heads group. What's your take on this, how practical it is to offer a wide range of beverages for a small business? Is it really relevant especially when we try to minimize waste by dialing in shots? Or is there some methods to avoid coffee loss?
(I'm especially thinking about myself when I was training at home and wasting fields of coffee and squeezing 10 cows a day 😂)
Thanks Lance ❤️☕️
Love it broski!! Looks like I'm gonna be drinking a hell of a lot (more than usual) of coffee this afternoon tweaking a few things lol
Btw, until watching your videos I don't think I've heard someone say "homemade sin" since my grandmother passed away lol. Big nostalgia, love it lol
Thank you for the video. It was a great Bday gift for this old fella. :) Gonna be going crazy with a locally roasted decaf (health reasons) trying as many of these as I can today. Keep up the great work!
I am trying different decafs. Looking for ones medium roasted and not as pricey as a delicacy. Have 12-20 g caffeinated, but then switch to
Happy belated bday ☕☕☕
I am waiting for lance hedrick and poppa james hoffmann to do a video on decaf. Unusual find?:" Oslo" (usa nyc?) roastery did a blend of Colombian and Sumatra medium. Counter culture has featured a seasonal decaf in addition to their year round. Besides swiss water processed, everyone seems to be using the "sugar" processing at the same place even? Does it remove more than caffeine?
Just visiting to drop a like and will watch later after work :)
more tangents than isosceles :) Keep up the great work Lance
Nice studio, much better than the temporary place you were making videos.
awesome video
The new studio looks awesome, Lance! You kind of blend into the background in that black shirt though. Get you some drip!
These all sound like so much fun, I wish I had an espresso machine so I could play too
I really need to try the Ristretto with a light roast!
I love the lighting and the coffee studio set up. But I digress...
The Ristretto on a light roast...
Your studio colour scheme is 👌
I have a question. What is "in and out" referring too? Thank you for answering
Thanks Lance.
Which one is the best for an iced latte?
Thank you
Love the office
I love this video
Adding a bottom paper filter massively helps against the mess of high flow rate shots
@Lance Hedrick thanks for the video, beside the portability and other features, how does flair 58 compare to pro 2, just in terms of esspresso body and taste ? Does it worth the extra money ? I'm looking forward to upgrade my pro2 to 58 if the difference worth it.
Are there any bean criteria you use besides being a light roast when pulling a lungo (i.e., beans from x altitude being super dense work best)? Do you get good results with medium roasts pulled as a lungo? What is your ristretto recipe?
The challenge has been laid. Now we all need to up our game!
Tbh i pull normal shots everyday because it's the safe sweet spot and coffee is a routine these days
But this vid make me wanna experiment on these shots. Thanks!
Hey the camera improved, the video is much higher resolution now. And I liked your video even though I keep getting channels on my espresso >.
I was having channeling problems. Then I switched to a traditional spouted portafilter, and my problems went away. Maybe there was still channeling, but I no longer had a problem with it. Out of sight, out of mind.
More seriously: I'm sure that thinking and stressing too much about channels is going to distract (at least me, maybe some other folks) from what really matters: the taste. See a strange squirt? That kind of primes me to think that something will be wrong with my coffee. It didn't brew right. So I'm expecting it to taste incorrect.
Love turbos and the occasional allongé. Most times is a standard 1:2 though. Next recipe needs to be big bodied syrupy shot that still has clarity and sweetness 🤔
Could not get a purchase of Eugenides (sold out), but could you do a short video on it? Have tried Robusta in a phin and some brewers, but could not handle the jolt of caffeine. What is Eugenides like in properties, taste, and the botany array?
He already has. Just a couple of months ago.
What are those cups with the solid handles? 😍
Any notes for if you are lucky enough to have a machine where you can easily adjust your pump's max pressure? (I know, I know, experiment & break rules, but as starting points?)
Great explanations. I do not have the experience that ristrettos are more sour or bitter than longer shots. They just taste like the flavor notes, more concentrated. Fruity coffees make fruity ristrettos, spicy cinnamony coffees make spicy ristrettos, etc. to me a longer shot of same tastes like a ristretto with hot brown water added, and I really hate being refused a short shot at a cafe because the brown water is needed to “balance out the acidity” which to me it does not. All this is assuming the coffee is properly dialed in using your great sour-sweet-bitter dial from an excellent earlier video.
Do you believe there could be a niche for alternative firmware for Nespresso and Dolce Gusto machines that allows control over temperature and extraction time?
Lance, a coffee related collaboration with Eric bugehagen would be fricking epic
Great!
thanks gotta try those
Can I lower the pressure by slightly opening the steam wand if I have a single boiler machine?
Yes!
@@LanceHedrick Thanks! I'll try it!
What's a "daddy Hoff"? Stirring with a fancy spoon, as advocated by Sir James?
Anyway, even though it's the middle of the night over here, because of this video I'm about to brew me somewhere between 10 and 15 shots. Thanks Lance!
Turbo shots are an eye opener! I can finally make consistent espresso with no harsh bitter finish.
COFFEE ALONE MOVES THE WHEELS OF HISTORY!!!
BARISTAS OF NORTHEASTERN PENNSYLVANIA UNITE!
Honestly this video just made more confused than before - Originally I was always under the assumption that ratios defined Ristretto/Normale/Lungo but they were always in relation to a perfectly pulled Normale - So that grind size didnt change just how long you pulled your shot for to either get a ristretto or lungo. Than earlier this year through HB, UA-cam and Discord channels I was led to believe that Ristrettos and Lungos need there own specific grind size and that they should be there own variable for hitting your times - Yes, yes, yes - I understand at the end of the day its all about taste and preference there are no hard set rules - but I really just want to know if you are pulling a ristretto should you just pull a Normale early or should you make a grind size adjustment so that get you a 1:1 in 25-30 seconds vs a 1:2 in 25-30 seconds (Normale) - this would just be for a typical Ristretto with no info related to bean origin/roast/etc - what is the preferred way to get a Ristretto its own recipe or a Normale recipe stopped short?
That's what she said!
Office fan here 🤚
Thanks, We are still waiting for your review of the robot.
I see it behind you 😅
My Favorite is your awesome beard!
what machine are you using?
You widen my understanding by every video dude. Come on
What about Blooming espresso? Definitely my favourite style of espresso now. Would have loved this video to be more visual style and less disertation.
Your scenario is amazing... The older one seems a little mess 😂