When the story referenced Talon's mandibles, well, aren't mandibles associated with insects, such as ants? If they are referring to her jawbones, then why not call them jawbones?
how come all these alien planets have breathable air???? And have alien flora with phosphorescent leaves and wild animals all with sharp talons and humans to save the alien who all speak English ????????????????????????????????????
I stopped as I've already had 2 instances of repetition and I imagine many more would follow. Just something with these repeating parts of stories on every channel. The repetitions are called out in people's comments but nothing is done about it. For me I'm not interested.
Three most annoying words repeated over and over "hung in the balance" repeated over and over in this and other stories. this and every time it's repeated earns a thumbs down.
These fantasies never get enough of junk drama, because their foundations are morally dishonest and lack any reference to the Creator and His salvation.
It's amazing how in space, even the aliens speak English. Here in America, many aliens can't speak English, and many don't try. 😅😂😊
Lots of breathless moments narrowly avoiding another catastrophe with some repeating and flying fingers over alien tech. A good story in the end
88 I really enjoyed this story. I especially like the way it ended. I'm a sucker for a happy ending! Thanks!
More Chen’s ohboy
Does the AI take photos of models and alter them to look like aliens or create them wholly?
In either case, well done.
88. An execution of the story telling well done. Story is interesting and intriguing.
This is one of the best stories I have ever heard.
Repeating dialoge but overall not bad.
Once again you repeat part of the story. I have noticed this in several of your show. Otherwise well done
You do love that word palpable.
When the story referenced Talon's mandibles, well, aren't mandibles associated with insects, such as ants? If they are referring to her jawbones, then why not call them jawbones?
Not everyone speaks English but they do have universal translators
how come all these alien planets have breathable air???? And have alien flora with phosphorescent leaves and wild animals all with sharp talons and humans to save the alien who all speak English ????????????????????????????????????
The writer seems to forget what he has written before in the descriptions of Talon
And Jesse Tucker gets renamed Jesse Crawford without explaination...
I stopped as I've already had 2 instances of repetition and I imagine many more would follow. Just something with these repeating parts of stories on every channel. The repetitions are called out in people's comments but nothing is done about it. For me I'm not interested.
Me too, im tired of this sorry ass AI
I liked the story
Quite good story well done
Gargantua
Her are you going to eat me or something? Him well maybe just not in the way you're thinking.
AI sure likes to write in cliches.lots of fingers flying over alien interfaces
Story script makes little sense. If Jesse knew of the alien outpost a few days travel away, why hadn't he already used it to get off that rock?
Why is Talon the Orion flying the Zarthac's ship? Wouldn't the Zarthac fly their own ship? The ship is ancient and the Zarthac are too.
Why this green space elf hot tho?
Eighty-eight
Three most annoying words repeated over and over "hung in the balance" repeated over and over in this and other stories. this and every time it's repeated earns a thumbs down.
88
Check your editing for repetitions though.
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One of the worst ai readers on the market. Really bad story. Almost nothing had any sort of plausibility.
one too many repeats 😒
PLEASE quit with the Chens of all flavors.
88
These fantasies never get enough of junk drama, because their foundations are morally dishonest and lack any reference to the Creator and His salvation.
You are watching/listening to a classical space opera, a morality play....I will not comment further on this post.
What creator would that be ?