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88 Great story!

Aside from the never ending 'elf girl' AI generated imagery on just about all the scifi narration stories this particular one has hit a new low. I'm guessing the target audience is young teenage boys. The fantasy machinations of the author (likely also an AI) to make sure the human member finds it's way into the alien's food chain has no place in legit scifi. And then his DNA magically transforming her in real time approaches even higher levels of ridiculousness. I'm not even wondering how it ended. If this had been the story line of an actual movie then you'd have to present ID to even see it in a theater.🥱

Need to find a reader that does not repeat things so many times and a writer that does not repeat him/herself so often

How did military and others stay immune to the changes affecting the crowd???

Great story!!! 88. Keep up the Awesome work!!!!❤

Too many ads in your stories way too many ads it gets old and monotonous

Great story I really enjoyed it.

Really pushing this story to the max 😳🤨

Not Lyra again...ffs...

Kind of odd, both worlds that were crash landed on had oxygen to match the needs of the characters. I mean, how fortuitous is that?

Bruh…. Lock the bedroom door unless you WANT them staring at you while you’re sleeping. Like some kind of creepy space perv

wtf is up with these ai generated pics they get more and more grotesk it a fricking horror show just looking at these ... hands fingers arms legs toes the list keep growing with weird ass stuff and extra limbs xD

A great story.

88

Very good story but what happen to the little sister that was put on the smugglers ship?

Sorry, but when the soldier sends a blast towards his own princess… the whole premise of this story is off. Let alone, leave Star Trek alone. Just do what you do. And leave the pillars of Sci-fi to themselves.

88

Need a Part II this is a good story

GREAT STORY 👍🏻

Jobs and professionalism be dammed Philip tell her how you feal. 😍🥰 Good story!

Hmmmm.... this would be a GREAT 3hour Sci-Fi Movie! Especially if made for the Big Screen! [ *Grabs popcorn and starts munching while hoping it happens someday* ]

88

W T ever living holy month fucking is going on in this story 😆

Narration is terrible.

A great story thankyou. 88.😊😊

H'mm. If all males kie then where did all the palace guards come from? Immunity maybe?

This is what happens when AI ghost writes all your stories for you. 4 or 5 key lines repeating over and over, and the same basic plot in every story. Characters and plots "borrowed" from movies and novels.

As I listen to the story unfolding in my ears, my mind begins comparing what is going on with the prophecy of “as the days of Noah were” rerunning continually. Good story otherwise.

88❤great stories 🎉

So they can run between galaxies like crossing the street? While abilities used earlier just disappear. Oh and extending health and life expectancy sounds great how do you handle the population surge?

This is the most interesting one so far.

18 minutes in and so far this is the dumbest story I have ever heard.

This story advances too fast, and we never really get to know anybody, not even the main character. The story starts with humanity only having met a few alien races. While it's never clear how far in the future this takes place, it is implied it is a few centuries by context of "only a few alien races" having been met. Apparently the Vidiians have amazing medical knowledge, as our current medical knowledge is dismal compared to our technical knowledge. Projected into the future the gap will continue to become worse over time given the rate of real break-throughs. SPOILERS BELOW There is no sense of time during the story, the events seem to happen in rapid succession with no mention of time at all. It makes the story a bit of a jumbled mess. Then after a disastrous journey to unknown space, they land on a planet left behind by an ancient race of unknown aliens, then they are visited by another race of aliens, then another race of aliens, and then they are found by Human and VIdiian ships apparently looking for them. So, much is happening it is difficult to follow all the events, and since the characters are barely detailed, because most of them are only names, their relative relationships sometimes get lost in the narrative. It's far too ambitious a story, and none of the characters feel real.

i wood like more of the story x88 ples

The filler scenes are "they couldn't keep their hands off each other" and this trope repeats about every five minutes. Lol, I'm like, get a room!

These stories are predictable weenie man clickbait with junk that bears NO relationship to ANY red blooded human men!

Arrogance and hubris in the writing of this story. Constant "human / alien hybrid" statements. The alien has a name, on the same order as the humans are so named and they are equals in the relationship. Apparently not when it comes to the author, or translator, of this story. Aliens, to me, are an unknown or unwanted beings. Depending on circumstances. The former is a matter of overcoming ignorance. The latter is a matter of invaders who have no wish to assimilate to the society they have invaded. They keep old customs in new lands, rather than conforming to the customs of the land / area they have entered, and are thus alien by their own choice. Stupidity! Rogue mercenaries are never a welcome group to any situation. Mercenaries aligned to a faction can be reasoned with, as they abide by the rules / customs of the group which hires them. Mercenaries as a random group have NO STANDING and therefore no say in anything that happens. Allowing them to remain is pure stupidity that only happens in the mind of the writer. Certainly not as a third party. The moron who continued to endanger everyone with terraforming attempts, after the second attempt should have been 'spaced' or disarmed. (literally) I'm 2 hours into this story. Somewhat curious, and somewhat furious. Poor writing for grand fantastical nonsense is not a good thing. The repeating paragraphs have started at this point. 2:19:00. I'm done, not just with this, but the channel. It is getting a Do Not Recommend flag from me.

Who writes these things? What red blooded viral man would hesitate to have relations with these gorgeous women? Whoever is riding this could you make it a little bit more believable?

She must have not been that ugly if the man mated with her. So, hey Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder.

BUT WHATEVER HAPPENED TO THE YOUNGEST SISTER THAT HE HANDED OFF TO BEGIN WITH?

I love the Toyota Sequoia. It’s amazing. Not much room in the back but I’m a minimalist so that’s ok.

at8

Its okay, but I have heard this story over and over. It's good just its a repeat.

And the characters die

thank you for a great story

Earth is a lost cause

8t8

88

So you decided to just change their ranks!😂😂 she goes fae captain to lieutenant he goes lieutenant to captain

Needs more work not a proper ending.