"Rescued" By An Angel [M4A] [Angel Speaker x Injured Listener] [Threatening] [Yandere] (Pt 2)

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  • Опубліковано 23 лип 2023
  • Summary from the script author:
    After being saved by the demon emperor and living in his residence while recovering, you find yourself getting accustomed to your new surroundings. You can even say it's better than the village you were previously living in. During a quiet evening, you spend your time in the gardens alone, admiring the flowers, only to hear an unfamiliar voice calling to you..
    WARNING: This audio involves possessive tones. The speaker discusses wanting to keep the listener with them forever. Please remember that everything in this recording is purely the fantastical imaginings of the author, and is not in any way, shape, or form, real.
    Script written and artwork created by Quartx on the ASMRScriptGuild Discord.
    Next part here: • Having Breakfast with ...
    Previous part here: • Saved by the Demon Emp...
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  • @quartxio
    @quartxio Рік тому +127

    hello everyone! i'm quartx, scriptwriter of this video! i hoped everyone enjoyed the video
    first things first: a lot of people seem to be confusing this Gabriel for being Mandela Catalogue's Gabriel. while the reference in his dialogue was intentional, /this Gabriel is an entirely different character and is NOT MC Gabriel/; this script is NOT mandela catalogue related and the premise as well as this version of Gabriel is my own interpretation, and i respectfully ask you to maintain that perspective when commenting :]
    do tell me your thoughts on the lore!
    second of all: in case you didn't know, this script is a second part to a script naught also has done, "saved by the demon emperor" - i highly recommend you check it out for context, if you're missing any, as well as to meet the demon emperor, who's much sweeter compared to this bastard british boy
    who knows what the future holds..

    • @flairartstudios605
      @flairartstudios605 Рік тому +7

      You did a fantastic job with the artwork and the story so far. ☺️

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +7

      @@flairartstudios605 thank you so much!!

    • @bobaisasoup
      @bobaisasoup 9 місяців тому +5

      I am on my knees for a third instalment, this was an incredible script and the lore has me hooked!!!

  • @MoonchildDontCry
    @MoonchildDontCry Рік тому +121

    It's ironic how Gabriel is so committed to equality amongst angels yet he views humans as weak little toys to rule over and control.

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +35

      Gabriel could use a little more self-awareness. 😄

  • @mcsinning
    @mcsinning Рік тому +83

    "I. WILL. PROTECT. YOU." Gabriel said 'calmly'.

  • @laughingstock9869
    @laughingstock9869 Рік тому +82

    Me about the first image: Aw, he's so pretty.
    Me by the last image: NOT FRIEND SHAPED! NOT FRIENDLY!

  • @karmapuppet4096
    @karmapuppet4096 Рік тому +91

    We better be rescue by the demon emperor. He was nice :(

  • @annettehernandez7284
    @annettehernandez7284 Рік тому +38

    Gabriel: Angels don't hate demons, we just have our differences
    Me: But you angels didn't help them when they needed help

  • @rage2645
    @rage2645 Рік тому +35

    Listener: ow shit- an angel! I'm about to di-
    💫
    Angel: 👀👀👄👀👀
    Ḃ̴͇͓̚ẻ̸̢̖̟͕̘̩̺̯̎̎͜ ̷̛̝̪̦̰͌̈̅̔̈́̊̓̿́̈͂̐͘̚n̵̤͖̘̟͝ö̴̤̳͙̲͙̹̬͑͝͠ţ̵̱͉̬͓̜̝̱͇͇̔͋̿̍́ ̷̨̡̩̫̩̟̣̦̖̬̰͌͌́̄̊̈́͗̿̓̌̒̔̊̋̕ͅͅą̶͕̻̭̤͕̱̟̱̙͖̣̜͗̒f̸̡̘͓͈̠̝̖͕̲͎̮̺͒̋͋̀́̈́͑͐ŗ̴̡̛͖̝̖̞̙̞͓̠̮̬̻̱͊̄̋̅͆̃͌͌̌̀̅̕ä̸̪͚͍̬̳̤̪̘́ĭ̴̧͕̗́̓́͊͆̈́̍̾͠͝d̷̡̙͚̠̯̿̕

  • @brookelim193
    @brookelim193 Рік тому +188

    Oh dear, I feel like I’m getting the Mandela Catalogue vibe all of a sudden.

  • @machinfacultatif9012
    @machinfacultatif9012 Рік тому +85

    I feel like Gabriel has a very severe case of burn-out. Maybe a couple centuries of vacation would help him relax a little. Your acting was flawless, well done !

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +13

      he just loves his job a bit too much, that's all

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +15

      Aww, thank you for the feedback! And I agree with the writer. 😁

  • @liliththesolarexalted2206
    @liliththesolarexalted2206 Рік тому +58

    I love when you depict such interesting characters like this. You always add such an amazing sense of gravitas to them. Though I hope we get more cuddly Angels and mysterious strangers in the future.

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +3

      Thank you for the feedback! And yes, we will. 😎

  • @biancajoffre2670
    @biancajoffre2670 Рік тому +17

    I want ROMANTIC videos with both sweet demon emperor and crazy yandere angel. PLEASE. PRETTY PLEASE. Also, Gabriel sounds...DESPERATE near the end. Like broken desperate to me. Impressive! More please!

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +5

      We'll see what the script author comes up with! 😁

  • @scooter6104
    @scooter6104 Рік тому +13

    Why is it that every rendition I’ve seen of Gabriel is deceptively sinister (wether it’s Good Omens, Mandela Catalogue, or this series)? Either way, you definitely nailed the vibes for this type of character. Someone who seems nice in their actions, but something about them always feels off. That transition into desperation when this person was unwilling to come with him was great too (not to mention the art that went with it).
    The similarities between how this Angel describes demons, and how their actions replicate those descriptors just…adds another level to this as well.
    All in all, you did an awesome job! I’m stoked for what else might come from this.

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +4

      glad you enjoyed the script!!

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +4

      The script writer also provided a lot of good feedback on how to get his voice just right. 😁

  • @nikola4969
    @nikola4969 Рік тому +14

    I really need an angel to save me from my overflowing school works right now. Another great work Zero! Love you and your audios always

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +1

      Thank you, I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy the performances! 😊

  • @RobinIsDumb
    @RobinIsDumb Рік тому +18

    ...gabriel? From the Mandela Catalogue? 😦

  • @star-wood
    @star-wood Рік тому +6

    I love how everyone is going "mandela catalogue Gabriel?!"

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +2

      to be fair i made the reference in the script so i have to lie in this bed i made, but i do wish people focused more on the angel lore instead of the reference :')

    • @star-wood
      @star-wood Рік тому +2

      @@quartxio I do take interest in the lore just find it funny about the comments

    • @star-wood
      @star-wood Рік тому +2

      @@quartxio and I hope to see this character more :)

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +2

      @@star-wood thank you!! i appreciate it

  • @kiaradp82
    @kiaradp82 Рік тому +7

    Frikkin Alternates gonna take us back to mandela county .....

  • @fruitvitamins625
    @fruitvitamins625 Рік тому +5

    YALL THIS GIVES ME SUCH MANDELA CATALOG VIBES TOWARDS THE END HE SAYS: "I know what you love. I know what you dread."

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому

      correct! the reference was intentional though this is definitely not the same gabriel

  • @flairartstudios605
    @flairartstudios605 Рік тому +44

    Well this was.... eerie. Strangely, the nature sounds were really affective. The angel lore was really fascinating. Anyways, You did an excellent job with the video 👍
    Edit: Also forgot to mention the transitions (24:10 and 30:17) looks so cool 😍

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +5

      Thank you! The writer is also the artist, so the script was written in three acts each with a corresponding backdrop. 😎

    • @flairartstudios605
      @flairartstudios605 Рік тому +2

      @@NaughtPlusZero That is really intriguing to know about, the writer did a really fantastic job on both the story and the art. 😊

  • @EAG46
    @EAG46 Рік тому +8

    This dude is scary. I hope the Demon King will come to save the poor little human.

  • @averyvictoranevening
    @averyvictoranevening Рік тому +19

    Holy, freaking, crap. That was one of the best ASMR rps I've ever listened to! I love the character so much! Would love to see a part 2 if possible! Thank you for posting!!💜

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +2

      Thank you for the high praise! 😊 I'm glad you enjoyed the performance so much! There's more to come, but also if you haven't seen it, "Saved by the Demon Emperor" is the previous part of this series. 😎

  • @serpentiaS
    @serpentiaS Рік тому +36

    All I can say is never feel less impressed no matter how many times I listen to this marvelous performance. Cannot stop clapping my hans tbh.
    Quartx script is always wonderful and fantastic to read and see it come to life.
    Love you both hard work as always (^w^)b

  • @makaylahgerrits7864
    @makaylahgerrits7864 Рік тому +12

    Please bring back our demon who saved us❤❤

  • @andano4055
    @andano4055 Рік тому +8

    The eeriness vibe was perfectly hit with your tone of voice!!! Super awesome!

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +1

      Glad you enjoyed the vibe, and thank you for the feedback! 😎

  • @simp_trash
    @simp_trash Рік тому +15

    Hm... that audio seems vaguely familiar. I wonder where I've heard that before...🤔
    I really wish I could have been there for more of the editing process, the audio turned out absolutely amazing! (which is no surprise-)

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +4

      Seems I should do more live recording sessions on the Discord server! 😄

    • @simp_trash
      @simp_trash Рік тому +2

      @@NaughtPlusZero oh absolutely!

  • @Chris-Prank
    @Chris-Prank Рік тому +6

    I just realized, is this some kind of part 2 of the « saved by a demon emperor » video!? (Amazing video by the way, like always 😆)

  • @AzraelonEarth
    @AzraelonEarth Рік тому +15

    Perfectly terrifying.

    • @AzraelonEarth
      @AzraelonEarth Рік тому +2

      Also, I love the picture transitions.

    • @AzraelonEarth
      @AzraelonEarth Рік тому +4

      You know what? I'm coming around to this guy. I think I'm "fallen" for him. Haha.

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +2

      ​@@AzraelonEarth HE'S GETTING INTO YOUR HEAD OH NO

    • @AzraelonEarth
      @AzraelonEarth Рік тому +2

      @@quartxio Ah c'mon. Would a being with such a pretty Halo try to mind-control you?

    • @AzraelonEarth
      @AzraelonEarth Рік тому +2

      *days later, yes. I come back to listen to this again... and again. NPZero is very good.*
      Hey wait a minute. Quartx. Did the frickin' script writer comment on my lame comments?
      Okay listen, yes. I am dumb. But also... RL busy. So. If so, great script. Super stoked for more.
      ....If unrelated, I hope you don't read this. Just ignore me. I'll just be chilling in Gabriel's capable arms.

  • @Bridgeofaudio
    @Bridgeofaudio Рік тому +11

    Molto bene!
    Quartx always writes the best bastards 🎉 and you do a bang up job voicing them!!!

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +1

      Glad you enjoyed the performance, and I agree that Quartx creates some magnificent characters! 😁

  • @MushroomFrog0-0
    @MushroomFrog0-0 Рік тому +21

    Thank you for the amazing audio and I hope you have a good day/night and stay hydrated!

  • @aqueousmutivity
    @aqueousmutivity Рік тому +5

    You knocked this one out of the park Naught!!! 😭😭 Plus the progression of each piece of art gave me chills

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  11 місяців тому +4

      Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the performance so much. 😎 And the art progression was done beautifully by Quartx (the script writer) who even added notes in the script about when to switch between them.

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio 11 місяців тому +3

      @@NaughtPlusZero :D !!!!

  • @rune3700
    @rune3700 Рік тому +12

    Wow! You did a great job hitting the otherworldly feel in this. Thank you for the great audio. Hope you have a great day or night.

  • @msflusterbunny
    @msflusterbunny Рік тому +3

    I saw the thumbnail and was like I KNOW THAT ART then realized it was you and I was like oh yeah awesome

  • @Vox-87-u9g
    @Vox-87-u9g Рік тому +8

    Oh? Naughtpluszero after getting my new car? Hell yeah 😎

  • @Cheese.22
    @Cheese.22 10 місяців тому +2

    I’m so sorry but the drawing looks like Crowley from good omens and now I can’t unsee it 😂

  • @melikesmuffins6676
    @melikesmuffins6676 Рік тому +5

    Bro its just Gabe from the mandela catalogue lol

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +4

      Gabriel here in this script is 100% inspired by "Gabriel" from Mandela Catalogue, yes :]
      only difference is my Gabriel is a CEO which is way worse 😊

  • @NatOfTheManyCats
    @NatOfTheManyCats 8 місяців тому +2

    Ascepelus halp! Definitely hope this is a continuing series!

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  8 місяців тому +2

      It is! There’s another episode scheduled for release this Friday. 😎

    • @NatOfTheManyCats
      @NatOfTheManyCats 8 місяців тому +1

      Yaaaaas! I look forward to it!@@NaughtPlusZero

  • @chasoi2385
    @chasoi2385 11 місяців тому +2

    gabreil keeps saying why we fear the angels how about you tieing us up in bruning hot ropes

  • @Sky_The_Daily_Dreamer
    @Sky_The_Daily_Dreamer Рік тому +5

    Hello! I'm new around here, listen to a few of the audios in the channel and its really good stuff! 😌👍✨
    In regards to this audio, I love it! Will go back and listen to the Demon king one ~
    That being said, do you think if we sprayed holy water on Gabriel... Like would that work ??? Being a ( -fallen- ) "modern" angel and all ... 🤔
    (Or at the very least cool down his meltdown at the end, our feathered friend here is very... Passionate... about his mission but he does need a chill pill for his own good 😅 I get he's immortal and stuff but that much strong emotions daily cannot be good for his liver ... Or liver equivalent....)

    • @Sky_The_Daily_Dreamer
      @Sky_The_Daily_Dreamer Рік тому +2

      Whoa WHOA--- Buddy ... Pal... Gabriel --- have you ever heard of consent??? Mind control is not consent :0
      Oh dang.... Ended on a cliffhanger... I hope this demon king (I have yet to meet) will come find us and free us from this rouge angel 👀👀👀👀

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  11 місяців тому +3

      Welcome to the channel! As for what his reaction would be, I can only guess. 😄 Quartx (the script author) is the only one who could say definitively!

  • @xXRuler_of_AtlantisXx
    @xXRuler_of_AtlantisXx 11 місяців тому +3

    * wheeze *
    I believe I understand what Quartx meant now.
    I called this dude at the beginning. What mandelous ass- 😂

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio 11 місяців тому +3

      WHAT 😭

    • @xXRuler_of_AtlantisXx
      @xXRuler_of_AtlantisXx 11 місяців тому +4

      @@quartxio In the demon king video, one of your comments mentioned not to trust the angels. I saw this coming. 😅

  • @amberrr_misss
    @amberrr_misss Рік тому +7

    Man I hope there is more haha so good

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому

      There is much more to this story and this world. 😎

  • @Lady-Durza-Nightshade-Black
    @Lady-Durza-Nightshade-Black 3 місяці тому +1

    Currently at the 2 ish min mark and I swear, Gabby would've fucking gotten decked the moment they popped up without warning and received endless snark afterwards, especially the more they go on >.n.>
    31 min mark, yup, still would be giving all the snark, but also cussing them out between calling for Ascepelus. (Would be running, but fairly certain that we'd get out paced instantly, soo.. yeah.)

  • @skyshouseofhope1308
    @skyshouseofhope1308 3 місяці тому +1

    "You could live in our world, start a new life"
    Dude I'm sorry to tell you this but generally I won't fit in even if we ignore the fact that I'm human

  • @smolghostdog6756
    @smolghostdog6756 Рік тому +7

    I loved this ❤️! I can't describe how much I enjoyed this! (The video has been approved by the Ghost. Animal Council.)🏅✨️

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +1

      I'm very pleased to continue the tradition of delighting the Ghost Animal Council! 😁

  • @Bnnnuy
    @Bnnnuy 4 місяці тому

    Words can't describe how I'm invested in this series aaaa I love both characters but Gabriel really intrigues me. I believe the main reason he took a liking for us is simply because we wounded his ego, with how angels are perceived in this universe I believe he's very much used to humans kissing the floor he walks, so meeting a human that rejects him so viciously is curious to say the least, not only that, they prefer a demon before him! That must've hurt, that's why he's so keen on earning our affection, even if it's by force lol.
    On a second note, I also spent some time wondering why Gabriel still wanted an revolution even after he raised to the highest rank of angels, wasn't enough power for him? When I realized that while he was a Seraph, there were other angels with the same rank as him, that meant his authority wasn't absolute as he wanted, he'd have to share it so the whole speech about angels being equals was right, but not in a good sense, but more in a "equally bellow him" sense. And if he thinks that about fellow angels, imagine how he thinks about humans? He probably sees us as something akin to pets, but with demons is even worse since they don't submit to angels like most of humanity does.
    (Friendly reminder that this is all my interpretation of the story)

  • @gingerneutral_audios
    @gingerneutral_audios 11 місяців тому +3

    holy shit this gave me Chills

  • @amenax7914
    @amenax7914 Місяць тому

    Ah yes, Auriel being the goat

  • @LambBones
    @LambBones Рік тому +2

    The pretty blond angel is making my face hot-

  • @Cloud_Cyrus
    @Cloud_Cyrus 8 місяців тому +1

    I am so sorry but I heard:
    "[...] the demon eMpe *pause* ✨rAwR✨"

  • @zomgie6817
    @zomgie6817 3 дні тому

    Oh god the voice… it’s doing things to me

  • @annettehernandez7284
    @annettehernandez7284 Рік тому +6

    Can you make a video where the Demon emperor saves us?

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +1

      The writer may have something in the works... 😁

  • @MaryanneAfa
    @MaryanneAfa Місяць тому

    He's even worse than the devil himself.

  • @kairi4455
    @kairi4455 9 місяців тому +1

    Thank you so much

  • @acherontiamothman4280
    @acherontiamothman4280 8 місяців тому +3

    POV: Gabriel was Marx's guardian angel🧐

  • @gremlindave
    @gremlindave Рік тому +3

    When Naught post a Yandere audio: 😭💕

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +3

      The feedback is appreciated! I'll be voicing more yanderes in the future. 😎

  • @torakitsune1117
    @torakitsune1117 7 місяців тому +1

    Omg it's so cool to learn more about angels and how they live the lore is very much sought-after it's inspiring !
    Jeez, Gabriel is so unpredictable they changes mood faster than his shirt ! I don't know how to feel about them, is it the angel's nature to protect all the human from the "evil demons" or just him ? Maybe they lost someone, a human maybe before, because of demons and it's explain why they are so overprotective ? i don't know but i love this series, i hope that it will have more scripts about this story !
    (Sorry if there are mistakes english is not my first language )

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  6 місяців тому +1

      The script author wrote a lot of lore, so the answers to the questions are complicated! 😄 There is another part to this series after this one: ua-cam.com/video/Ii_NVmtvuR4/v-deo.htmlfeature=shared

    • @torakitsune1117
      @torakitsune1117 6 місяців тому +1

      @@NaughtPlusZero I can't wait to listen to the next part i already know it's going to be amazing !

  • @NotBonn1e
    @NotBonn1e Рік тому +4

    I'm a loser for yandere :(

  • @haidentheshadow7246
    @haidentheshadow7246 3 місяці тому +1

    I NO NO WANA

  • @justemma5313
    @justemma5313 Рік тому

    IS THIS A [HECKING] MANDELA CATALOGUE REFERENCE?!

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому

      only a very small part! otherwise, this whole script's premise and version of Gabriel is entirely its own thing! what did you think of the audio + script? :)

    • @justemma5313
      @justemma5313 Рік тому +2

      @@quartxio very sickly sweet,,, he has so many red flags but he's also such a silly little guy 😊

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому

      @@justemma5313 red is my favorite color fr 🤩 glad to hear you enjoyed it!!!

  • @NoodlezDoesDoodlez
    @NoodlezDoesDoodlez Рік тому +12

    Gabriel, your hair is nice
    your personality isn’t.

    • @star-wood
      @star-wood Рік тому +2

      Beautiful roast 👏

  • @KasandraChristinadeVera
    @KasandraChristinadeVera Рік тому +2

    Can we get a part 2 plaese if there is a part 2 😄?

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  11 місяців тому +2

      This is technically part 2, with the first part being the "Demon Emperor" video. There's more to come in this series!

    • @KasandraChristinadeVera
      @KasandraChristinadeVera 11 місяців тому +2

      @@NaughtPlusZero oh ok so can we get a part 3 if the writer makes it plaese 😄

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio 11 місяців тому +2

      @@KasandraChristinadeVera part 3 is in progress of being written, so i kindly ask for your patience

    • @KasandraChristinadeVera
      @KasandraChristinadeVera 11 місяців тому +2

      @@quartxio ok i will be patient 👍

  • @ariathmayhem620
    @ariathmayhem620 Рік тому +2

    Mandela

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +2

      it's not mandela catalogue 😅

    • @ariathmayhem620
      @ariathmayhem620 Рік тому +2

      @quartxio4979 oh my apologies

    • @ariathmayhem620
      @ariathmayhem620 Рік тому +2

      @@quartxio it's still fantastic

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +2

      @@ariathmayhem620 thank you !!

  • @soralantern3073
    @soralantern3073 2 місяці тому +1

    Please, Sir, Forgive me! I don't have any control over what I am made to do. I am just following orders! Hngh! Yes, sir. How.... How did you.... How did you do that? Because.... A Demon helped me. Lilith. She helped me Escape my Captors.
    I'm Afraid you'll think I had some part in their past Crimes. Am I wrong to be afraid of you? Angels are Messengers of Destruction. They only come around to punish those who Sin. You're seriously not here to Punish me in some sort of way?
    Why help me, at all? I'm Terminally ill. I don't have much life left in me, now. I'm at Stage 4, Ovarian Cancer. Wait.... So you're basically a Demon, then? Because the Demons left heaven. My Life is almost at it's Conclusion, so why help me?
    For us Humans, it's easier that way. You know, Everyone tells me I'm an Earth Angel. But how is it possible, when I'm going to pass away soon? Are you going to Turn me into one of You? Why is it you're helping me, when I'm Clearly Doomed to Be Condemned to Death?
    Well, I did. I'm more of A Cowgirl. I've read the Bible. You want me to come with you? Okay. I might as well spend my last days there. I don't know that you'll be able to keep me Alive for that long. Well, maybe you are! You're scaring me! Stay back! I've got a Gun, and I'm not afraid to use it! The way you're acting, you seem like a Demon! So what, if I die here, what difference does it make to you!? You can't Heal me! I'm going to die anyway. What difference does it make, whether I end up in Heaven or Hell!? No! I'm as good as dead anyway. Go ahead, Kill me and get it over with! No!
    You're a Monster! That's what a Demon would say! No, I won't! I'm on the way out of this life. No! Hngh! Stop it! Mmmmh! Unhh.... Get away from me! I despise you! Get off me! No! Ugh.... Go away! I don't Love you! I must get away....

  • @daughterofscars5068
    @daughterofscars5068 Рік тому +5

    Does the author have somewhere where I can read their stories
    I'm really invested❤

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +5

      that's so sweet!!! i really appreciate that

    • @daughterofscars5068
      @daughterofscars5068 Рік тому +3

      @@quartxio honestly you're the one making the stories so you're the sweetest 😁
      I mostly just want to see more of Gabriel (I have a problem TwT )

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому +3

      @@daughterofscars5068 thank you!! oh you'll definitely see more of him in the future, don't you worry

    • @daughterofscars5068
      @daughterofscars5068 Рік тому +3

      @@quartxio *happiness noises*

  • @TransientFlame
    @TransientFlame Рік тому +6

    _The road to hell is paved with g̶̺̩͉̮̹̒̒̌̐͛ơ̷̖̻̜̻͉̓̓̈́̚ő̴̡͎͓̫̼̏̓̑̕ḓ̶̡̘̯͕͊̄͂̾͆ ̴̧̲̩̥̦̄̑̌̇̽i̴͕̮̲̲̭͑̋̈́͆̚n̷̞͚̟̣̾̅̀̌̿ͅt̶̛̥̝̱̻̜̂́̆͐e̸͙̞̘̝̞̊̀͒̐͝ṅ̶̺̭̗͚͔̿̿̍͠ţ̴̖̮͉̦͑̃́̌̓ǐ̸̧̘̩̼͖̉̏̆͝ơ̴͍̫̘̗̪̎̇̀̑n̴͍̣̠̠̭͌̄͒̅͘s̷̼͕̰̰̱̔́̾̾̕_ .
    Okay, this comment might be a _bit_ long, more of a book review than a UA-cam comment, but I couldn't really help myself. When you come across an audio that's pretty much perfection - from the writing, to the lore, sfx, voice acting, hell, even the BEAUTIFUL art - it inspires me to appreciate all the work and passion that went into it! Plus, it's just a lot of fun to talk about interesting stories, (including audio scripts!) and I'm always a sucker for angelic lore. So thank you both @quartxio4979 and NaughtPlusZero for this fantastic audio entertainment! ❤
    (Warning for those who haven't watched the audio first: spoilers below).
    First things first, from the moment our angel friend -popped out of the bushes- stepped elegantly on the scene, NaughtPlusZero truly brought this character to life. The voice-acting was honestly top-tier, I can't think of a single word uttered that did not feel authentic coming from this character. The intonation, pleasantly lilting yet somehow eerily _wrong_ , suited Gabriel completely. It gave off the vibe that he was a. not human, and b. trying just a little _too_ hard to be friendly and comforting.
    _"A little lamb like you should not stray so far away from your flock. But do not be frightened, I am here to shepherd you back to where you belong."_ This is one of the first things Gabriel tells the Human, which I think is intended to foreshadow his intentions to bring them back to his city. (I am curious how he knew the Human was in the Demon Emperor's gardens, as well as why he wanted to take this human in particular, though).
    Next, he compliments the beauty of the human's eyes... in how they reflect the light of _his_ halo. I think that's a nice hint to his narcissism, while also foreshadowing that he _does_ desire the Human for his own... to mold them into the image that _he_ wants.
    _"Mankind tends to be incredibly persistent when it comes to killing something."_ Gabriel drops this eerily specific line after the Human reveals that it was their own kind that hurt them, and I was wondering if that was intended to hint that the angels actually _want_ the humans to wipe out the demons, or am I just overthinking that?
    Anyway, after Gabriel reassures the Human some more and heals up their wounds, he begins to question them on why the fuck they're hanging out at the Demon Emperor's place, and he seems genuinely incredulous that a demon took them in, and that the Human is _actually_ staying of their own free will. He claims he's never heard of any demon doing so before. Even if that's the case, it doesn't change the fact that I would still trust the Demon Emperor with my life, and I wouldn't trust the Angel with my goddamn chia pet. The Demon Emperor has passed all the vibe checks, meanwhile Gabriel is proudly waving a red flag and insisting it's green. Nobody's _that_ colorblind, bro. 😒
    The Angel goes on to ask for the Demon's name, saying in a _hella_ ominous tone, (starting around 1:43 ) that he "wants to speak to them" to ensure they have "no malicious intent in keeping the Human here." Honestly, I'm wondering if this is a property dispute. Gabriel is out here collecting humans like Pokemon to bring back to his city, meanwhile this Demon Emperor just swooped in and got himself a Shiny, before Gabriel could get his pretty hands on them first. Gabriel might be feeling territorial over humans in general and this one specifically.
    Then Gabriel proceeds to dump some ANGEL lore on us. And I love it??? The world-building is so intriguing. I _did_ have several questions on rewatch, but honestly, this -book review- comment is long enough, so moving on. While telling the story of the angels, Gabriel reveals he's not like the other girls, he couldn't hear his creator, and if the angel hierarchy was on fire, he wouldn't even deign to spit on it. It's not often you see a democracy-leaning villain, but here you go. I honestly think his motivation being progress, equality, and modernity is such an interesting twist on the standard antagonist formula.
    I also loved this fictional take on fallen angels - that they literally live on earth, and have a different set of ideals as the ones above, while still retaining some obvious angelic facets, instead of becoming full-blown devils; the motivation for the Fall was unique, too. And as he explains the Fall, Gabriel's pain and fury at being betrayed by his friend during the war was, again, brilliantly voice-acted (that growl on "URIEL" was legendary), before he returns to his cheery calm as he explains that s'all good, they have built up a glorious city that is incredibly modern and technologically advanced, "a perfect utopia of freedom" and a "fresh start" and they call themselves "Modern Angels" - *not* Fallen. Definitely not Fallen. Sure.
    Small detail, after delivering this line that is dripping in false pity: _"Those poor demons, having to deal with both angels and humans,"_ Gabriel gives an amused chuckle that sounds both melodic and malicious to me, and _definitely_ got across his genuine disdain of demons. (20:40 - 20:52 ) Anyway, Gabriel insists that while he's _not_ fond of demons, he's still not part of the ones currently attacking them, and if any angels are doing it, then it _has_ to be the Courthouse Angels, not the -Fallen- Modern Angels. (I'm actually not sure if I believe him or not here. 🤔 He's clearly a liar, but he might genuinely be too busy and apathetic to be waging war. For now. Clearly, he has a personal beef with _our_ demon, though, for trying to take a human away from him).
    Then, abruptly, Gabriel points out that the Human basically looks like a rural peasant, which means they probably don't live on his land. (Rude, but fair).
    So finally, Gabriel gets to the point he's been building up to all this time: come back with him, to live in his utopian city.
    The answer is no.
    Upon receiving this rejection, the tone starts taking a shift for the darker. For one, Gabriel starts calling the Human by _dArLiNg_ , which is actually quite creepy, and there is rising tension underneath the friendly facade. It's interesting to note that literally everything he tells the Human about demons and Asepelus(? how do you spell that name) to dissuade the Human from staying longer could be applied to himself - straight down to the pulling strings metaphor. Dude's a hypocrite.
    And when Gabriel finally goes full-blown crazy Yandere, it's a _glorious_ break-down, (which makes excellent use of sfx and echoing) and one that makes so much sense for an evil angelic character. Angels and humans have such an interesting, mutually dependent relationship with each other. Angels get all their power through protecting humans, and their entire lives revolve around watching over humans, who just keep dying foolishly no matter how hard they try to protect them. These avoidable tragedies could easily explain Gabriel's desperation and frustration and overcontrolling possessiveness, while he insists - and genuinely seems to believe - that he knows best, and only wants the best for humanity. He keeps insisting that he's a savior. That this is all for their own good. That he's doing a good thing. But even if ANY of his intentions are good, (and that's somewhat doubtful) you know what they say about those...
    It's interesting to note that while Courthouse angels can't do much about their charges' foolish choices, due to the no-contact rule set down by Order (iirc), Fallen/Mondern Angels actually *can* exert direct control over humans now. Which is kind of horrible news. I wonder if the Order wanted to keep Angels and Humans apart to ensure that humanity's free will wouldn't get tampered with by Yandere angels like Gabriel. 🤔
    Gabriel, unfortunately for this Human, believes he is far more entitled to having them than a demon like Asepelus. From his dialogue during this breakdown, Gabriel clearly looks at humanity as being hopelessly naive, inferior beings, but at the same time, he's clearly utterly obsessed with protecting them and feels a _need_ to be close with them and "save them," especially this Human, for some reason.
    He ends up abducting the Human despite their resistance, and the Human's mind ends up melted into Gabriel's chalice. I'm not exactly sure what that means, but it's not good, and I hope they'll be able to snap out of it. If there's a part 3 to this, I'll certainly look forward to it, and I thank you for bearing with my ramble. I have basically two modes: no comment, or a whole-ass essay. 😂You got an essay, because this got me genuinely intrigued to know more about the lore of this story and characters, and the quality overall was just so high in every department. If this was turned into a book or a webcomic, I'd read it; it has potential I think. Also, I'd love to know who the artist for this video is!
    TL;DR: video was gud 👍

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому

      OH MY GOD ??!??!?!???? THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENT I'M ACTUALLY SO ECSTATIC TO RECEIVE AN ESSAY LIKE THIS 😭😭😭😭😭
      I'M SO HAPPY YOU REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY AND THE WORLDBUILDING!!!!! Gabriel really is a nasty boy :') and you analyzed his character and behavior in this video so well!!! and i really appreciate how close attention you paid to each dialogue! it means so much to me

    • @TransientFlame
      @TransientFlame Рік тому

      @quartxio4979 AAAA reading your reply made me very happy, thank you for enjoying my essay! ❤ Also, you wrote both a fantastic script AND beautiful art to go with it?? I am *incredibly* impressed!
      While I can't remember some of my original worldbuilding questions, I still definitely have quite a few left to ask, so thank you for being willing to discuss your story with me!
      1. I was wondering when the conflict between angels and demons broke out, and why there was enmity between them in the first place; for example, themes of chaos vs order?
      Also, did Angels have a hand in turning humanity against Demons?
      2. Both demons and angels are fixated on humans; Order ... ordered Angels to watch over Humanity, even molding their form to reflect their charges, while Demons thought the human form was perfection by themselves and sought to emulate them. (I am so flattered ❤). Is there a reason established yet for why humans seem to be the nucleus of these three colliding worlds?
      3. I was very curious about how Gabriel knew the Human was here in the first place, and why he was so insistent on making _this_ one his special one. Is this Human a character with something unique about them?
      4. This nasty boi referenced a couple of times wanting to speak to our -manager- Demon Emperor, and I was wondering if the motivation for that eagerness could be divulged - was it a territory dispute, like I suspected; a warning to not collect humans anymore because Gabriel's got that market cornered?
      5. Do the Demons have their own dark secrets? While the Angels seem ... untrustworthy at best, and Humans seem to be the hot mean girls of this universe (our sweet rural peasant Human seems pretty neat though) demons came out looking innocent from the Demon Emperor's perspective, but he also mentioned they had done their own fair share of crimes/sins, which got me curious. I am positive he was telling us the truth with everything, but I wondered if omitted some details and sugarcoated some events in the hopes of creating a largely positive image of his people, because he mentioned that his goal *was* to foster a good image, if I recall correctly. (And demons clearly deserve better than what they've gotten; their history was so tender, even poetic in how they wandered the world, trying to find perfection, and how they dearly wanted to be accepted. Then it got so tragic.)
      6. What is Gabriel's chalice? Why is the human's mind being drawn into it? Also, where did the strings come from???
      Well, that's all I can think of for now, thank you so much for your time and your willingness to answer my questions! (As long as they don't spoil anything, of course!) There's actually a lot of questions and I just realized this became another essay, sorry!! Thank you again for creating such an interesting script that intrigued me this much! ❤

    • @quartxio
      @quartxio Рік тому

      @@TransientFlame
      1. i won't spoil much, but let's just say the creator of the demons and the angels have some serious beef
      2. humans are considered a rather important group of people by the gods that made them, like their children, so protecting them is a pretty big deal! they are made quite differently in comparison to other groups of people that exist in this world, and their anatomy is considered quite special. you can say humanity is one of a kind here
      3. Gabriel keeps a very close eye on Ascepelus since he considers him a threat, so he most likely saw Ascepelus bringing in the human
      4. aw hell naw karen gabriel, he even got the blond hair down ; you would be correct! Gabriel desires to protect and care for all humans and put them in his city so he can keep an eye on all of them. he sees their ability to shape and create as something he can exploit (though he aims to keep humanity happy, of course), so he wants to use that to expand his control and reach out for more. why? that's a story for another script :)
      5. demons are definitely not innocent! Ascepelus is aware of the crimes his people have committed, but even so, it was all done to survive against the wrath of the humans
      6. - the chalice part is just a metaphor for the human slipping into Gabriel's control and not an actual thing
      - Gabriel's angelic magic allows him to create puppet strings of magic to control people with :)

    • @TransientFlame
      @TransientFlame Рік тому +2

      @quartxio4979 Oh that's so interesting! Thank you so much for answering so many of my questions! Your story clearly has rich layers of lore, and I'm so excited to see more scripts from you in the future expanding more on this world and characters! ❤️
      I have one more question, albeit slightly off-topic; I searched but could not find the Asmr Script Guild on Discord, so is it a private server? I was curious because I was interested in writing some audio scripts myself, and wondered if that would be a good place to start.

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  Рік тому +2

      This conversation is so much fun to read! 😁
      The ASMR Script Guild server is public and can be found here: discord.gg/asmrscriptguild

  • @yandereconnoisseur
    @yandereconnoisseur 7 місяців тому +1

    WHY IS HE SO OBSESSED WITH TAKING YN I DONT GET IT😭😭😭😭does he only want somebody to rule over??

    • @NaughtPlusZero
      @NaughtPlusZero  6 місяців тому +1

      We learn a little more about him in the sequel, "Having Breakfast with an Angel"!