Excellent use of text to form the shape of the bird! It's very interesting and the fly zooming around in the beginning really shows the audience a characteristic of these birds. Wile the form is going back into the word, it looks like the wings are fluttering, and it would be really cool if you could drag that out a little longer before it forms the word. Again, nice use of illustration. Everything is legible, but I would add some of the blue in somewhere.
Also it's night that right before the form moves, it looks like it scrunches really quickly, like anticipation. You could drag this out another fourth of a second just to exaggerate it, then follow through a little right after, but good job remembering to squash!
Excellent use of text to form the shape of the bird! It's very interesting and the fly zooming around in the beginning really shows the audience a characteristic of these birds. Wile the form is going back into the word, it looks like the wings are fluttering, and it would be really cool if you could drag that out a little longer before it forms the word. Again, nice use of illustration. Everything is legible, but I would add some of the blue in somewhere.
Also it's night that right before the form moves, it looks like it scrunches really quickly, like anticipation. You could drag this out another fourth of a second just to exaggerate it, then follow through a little right after, but good job remembering to squash!