Wish you'd posted the duet with your friend already first and did this second (or vice versa with just her) because you did a pretty good job. It's not 100% but damned that's a hard song in places. And its clear you have such deep feeling in singing that. if your friend's your equal here I am truly eagerly waiting to hear this because to me, the anime songs are magnifying lens for emotions, not technical exercises. And keep practicing your singing, you have wonderful potential :)
Not to imply you're bad right now but your breath control is a shade ragged and I think you need to change the pitch a 1/4 octave or 1/2 octave down so the high parts don't strain your voice so. But it's still far better than most people could do. I think mastering the technical side of singing is a way to widen the gate that the feelings you express can reach the audience.
Wish you'd posted the duet with your friend already first and did this second (or vice versa with just her) because you did a pretty good job. It's not 100% but damned that's a hard song in places. And its clear you have such deep feeling in singing that. if your friend's your equal here I am truly eagerly waiting to hear this because to me, the anime songs are magnifying lens for emotions, not technical exercises. And keep practicing your singing, you have wonderful potential :)
Not to imply you're bad right now but your breath control is a shade ragged and I think you need to change the pitch a 1/4 octave or 1/2 octave down so the high parts don't strain your voice so. But it's still far better than most people could do. I think mastering the technical side of singing is a way to widen the gate that the feelings you express can reach the audience.