NOT ALONE - Short Horror Film
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- Опубліковано 8 вер 2024
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This film was shot on a SONY FDR-AX100 and edited in Final Cut Pro X
Music and sound effects are from EpidemicSound.com.
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Beauriful risings steve, i believe its time to retire from making these short horror films. These are horribly paced and nothing happens throughout the entire video. You have a very scary costume but unfortunately it ended up in your hands and you are completely ruining its chance at scaring somebody. I hope you take these constructive criticisms to heart and i wish you luck in your next endeavours.
Ok. So first of all, the “home” is too sterile. Nobody believes this dude lives there. There is no context, zero story and it seems just possibly a roommate trying to scare him. This is NOT short horror to me. It is the equivalent of modern art where someone duct tapes a banana to a canvas and calls it art. The film quality is good. Just add context and some sort of linear path or call back so the audience can be on the same page.