Second time asking: "what if Anakin followed his childhood dream, and went back and freed the slaves?" Since his mother was a slave, he would have to save her to complete the vision. The Jedi would absolutely not approve, so Anakin would have to leave the order, and that would be a purely good thing! Anakin would be a galactic hero to many, and many would see that he was how the Jedi should be. Other Jedi would leave (maybe Plo and Ahsoka?) To join. Anakin could bring balance through restoring what Jedi *should* be.
As a plot twist, Dooku is somehow learns of this or is involved. "I'm sure you've heard, Skywalker, that when I left the Order it was to save my people. While the Jedi do not approve of such things, such attachments, I have no such qualms. Let me help you in this. You may be powerful but it will take more than that to accomplish this task. I can offer what you need."
@@thestarwarsgalaxy Don't worry about and go for it, even if things get dark a bit. I know this is a bit off tangent, but i remember the early days of StarWarsTheory, when he was small, and not dogshit, he had such wild af what ifs, I loved them. Distincly remember one, where Sidius gave Anakin, Padmes head in a box, Anakins eyes went black and Sidius got integrated into the stone wall. Got killed in 3 seconds, no buts, not ifs. I know it's dumb and wild (kinda dark too) but also fun.
Nice story but there are a few MAJOR issues with it. First off Anakin would have not taken Padme with him into danger he would have insisted on her getting somewhere safe even escorting her there. Secondly Shaak TI and Stass Allie would have been sent with Anakin as they were sent there in the original timeline along with four other Jedi to guard Palpatine meaning it would have been seven Jedi against the droids and Grevious. Speaking of Grevious would never have used a Thermal Detonator to try and kill Anakin Skywalker he would have faced him in a Lightsaber duel, Grievous would NOT pass up a shot to fight Anakin one on one as he is completely unaware of Palpatine's plans regarding Anakin and would try to add his lightsaber to his collection. Interesting concept but it doesn't work in execution from a narrative standpoint in either continuity for hard reasons, that being Anakin would not recklessly endanger Padme by taking her with him and would have escorted to her to safety before going to protect Palpatine, Yoda would not have sent Anakin alone and would have sent Shaak Ti and Stass Allie and a few other Jedi with him and Greivous would NOT have passed up a shot to fight Anakin one on one and he'd never use a grenade to do the job that is a weapon that Grievous would never use in either timeline as he's a diehard warrior bent on face his enemies with his own combat prowess. It would have been more interesting if the characters acted more- logically and in accordance with their personalities as Grievous using a grenade is so OUT of character that you would have been better off having a generic droid do that and even then Grievous would have not allowed it. Also Yoda while he would not have bothered to ask why Anakin was on Coruscant he would NOT have sent him alone he would have still sent Shaak TI and Stass Allie as he did orginally
the star wars galaxy make what if yoda and mace windu trained anakin skywalker because both were grandmaster and master of the order two of the most powerful jedi of the jedi order they could have helped anakin save his mother and possibly be with padme that we leave it to you
Padmé always dying. Poor woman deserves a break. Lmao Enjoyed the story though. I love whenever Anakin finds his personal balance despite being through torment along the way.
That was very well imagined. I never thought to have contained the story to the battle of Coruscant. No Luke or Leia, intriguing. Your story was surprisingly heartbreaking. Very well done‼️✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼
Basically would be Thrawn, but more diabolical and unpredictable. The way I see it, Palps would pretty much be the Joker of the Star Wars universe, while I already see similarities between Thrawn and Lex Luthor
Imagine telling the most powerful living being who already is a little angry at you and has shown severe anger management issues especially when it comes to his wife, that his wife dying was a necessary sacrifice. That's like going up to a 2,20 m tall 170kg pure muscle dude who also knows martial arts and telling him he is a bastard and should die. Not a good Idea
SW FanFic Ideas: What If Bastila Shan trained Anakin SkyWalker What If Satele Shan trained Luke SkyWalker What If Shaak Ti trained Luke and Leia What If Padme didn't fall out of the ship in Attack Of The Clones
also when will what if anakin became jedi battlemaster what if anakin went with yoda to the wellspring of life what if padme or dooku became supreme chancellor and what if quinlan vos trained anakin skywalker along with many more you got this we trust you you know when to make them
Sideous: Who, in the HELL do you think you are?!?! Anakin: YOU KILLED MY WIFE!! Sideous: *I tried, so hard! To groom* you into the perfect disciple for the dark side, and this is the thanks I get?! You really *need to grow up!!*
What if the Chancellor decided that the Force was for losers, changed his name to Emperor Pal-Protein, opened a gym, and tempted Anakin to join the Swole Side.
Anakins so dumb falling for palpatine manipulating him . He blames the Jedi for having him on the front line like the chancellor isn’t the one giving the orders lol
That’s just so stupid why would Anakin take his pregnant padme with her to open conflict and risk her life like this , he would leave her at her apparment or take her to a bunker
As much as I like where you took the story after Padme's death here, there's no way in hell Anakin would have taken her into battle. Just no fcking way. Still, good story otherwise. Anyway, here's a suggestion: What if Ahsoka raised Luke and Leia?
That was a great battle. Best was Anakin becoming the chosen one and turning against Palpatine in the end Sad Padme died but in the end Anakin prevailed
What if the Jedi didn't consider blasters as being uncivilized and made use of them regularly either in coordination with their lightsaber or even something like Ezra's blade.
Overall I liked this story. My only issue with it is, that by this point the unborn children could be saved even with Padme dead, unless her belly was hit by shrapnel.
I think that I recognized this story it's like Star Lord vs Ego aunt may dieing in poor Spider-Man's arms and also there was Harry Potter defeating Voldemort with "something worth living for" you even took ideas from JJ Abram's Star Trek into darkness oh and that detonator that the force wasn't able to contain just like the explosion that Wanda couldn't contain in civil war? what else did you do that has already been done. Don't get me wrong I love the story but this is the X-Men origins wolverine of Star wars😂😂😂😂😂
And after all that ani still doesn’t get the rank of master. Instead he leaves the order with ahsoka and they eventually fall in love as it was meant to be and their children are even more powerful than luke and leia
Romans 10:9 That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus, and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved.
Once again you are killing people off for the sake of killing people off. Why would Anakin bring Padme into where one could assume danger was. I understand killing people for story relevance, but you always have a thing for always killing off someone even when it makes the least sense, it would have made sense if Anakin wasn't the only jedi to protect palpatine and maybe a council member died. But bringing Padme to die seems so forced. Your seriously pushing into Disney territory bad here, and that is saying something.
Second time asking: "what if Anakin followed his childhood dream, and went back and freed the slaves?" Since his mother was a slave, he would have to save her to complete the vision. The Jedi would absolutely not approve, so Anakin would have to leave the order, and that would be a purely good thing! Anakin would be a galactic hero to many, and many would see that he was how the Jedi should be. Other Jedi would leave (maybe Plo and Ahsoka?) To join. Anakin could bring balance through restoring what Jedi *should* be.
Maybe Anakin could discover the White Suns, a slave liberation movement on Tatooine.
😍 I love the idea 💡 😍
Like I said: Love the idea 💡 but I personally Don’t see the necessity to Anakin leave the order to fulfill that childhood dream
As a plot twist, Dooku is somehow learns of this or is involved. "I'm sure you've heard, Skywalker, that when I left the Order it was to save my people. While the Jedi do not approve of such things, such attachments, I have no such qualms. Let me help you in this. You may be powerful but it will take more than that to accomplish this task. I can offer what you need."
@@vnep5743 If you think about it, Dooku actually could help him without requiring Sidious
Palps pulling an ego with that “now hold on I know that sounds bad” is the funniest thing ever
Palpatine ego is calling for his lines back
“Padme I fear for your safety, which is why I’m taking you into battle”
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I half expected Anakin to just snap Sidius' neck with the force, after that "what"
I debated it lol
@@thestarwarsgalaxy
Don't worry about and go for it, even if things get dark a bit.
I know this is a bit off tangent, but i remember the early days of StarWarsTheory, when he was small, and not dogshit, he had such wild af what ifs, I loved them.
Distincly remember one, where Sidius gave Anakin, Padmes head in a box, Anakins eyes went black and Sidius got integrated into the stone wall. Got killed in 3 seconds, no buts, not ifs.
I know it's dumb and wild (kinda dark too) but also fun.
Whats the title of that video?
@@delta9934 I honestly can't remember
@@TheHighbornwas it what if darth maul trained anakin or soemthing
Ego and Peter Quill moment.
Nice story but there are a few MAJOR issues with it. First off Anakin would have not taken Padme with him into danger he would have insisted on her getting somewhere safe even escorting her there. Secondly Shaak TI and Stass Allie would have been sent with Anakin as they were sent there in the original timeline along with four other Jedi to guard Palpatine meaning it would have been seven Jedi against the droids and Grevious. Speaking of Grevious would never have used a Thermal Detonator to try and kill Anakin Skywalker he would have faced him in a Lightsaber duel, Grievous would NOT pass up a shot to fight Anakin one on one as he is completely unaware of Palpatine's plans regarding Anakin and would try to add his lightsaber to his collection.
Interesting concept but it doesn't work in execution from a narrative standpoint in either continuity for hard reasons, that being Anakin would not recklessly endanger Padme by taking her with him and would have escorted to her to safety before going to protect Palpatine, Yoda would not have sent Anakin alone and would have sent Shaak Ti and Stass Allie and a few other Jedi with him and Greivous would NOT have passed up a shot to fight Anakin one on one and he'd never use a grenade to do the job that is a weapon that Grievous would never use in either timeline as he's a diehard warrior bent on face his enemies with his own combat prowess.
It would have been more interesting if the characters acted more- logically and in accordance with their personalities as Grievous using a grenade is so OUT of character that you would have been better off having a generic droid do that and even then Grievous would have not allowed it. Also Yoda while he would not have bothered to ask why Anakin was on Coruscant he would NOT have sent him alone he would have still sent Shaak TI and Stass Allie as he did orginally
What if Dooku discovered the world between worlds and saved Qui-Gon?
Palpatine Really Pulled An Ego (Marvel Ego)
This would’ve been an epic movie . Almost brought me too tears by the end 😭
same
Palpatine in Force Hell: Dang, i should not have said that
So no Order 66 and the good, caring, loyal, and excellent Clones get to remain the Grand Army of the Republic…Awesome!
That Anakin and Palpatine dialogue genuinely sounded like a meme lol, nice touch!
the star wars galaxy make what if yoda and mace windu trained anakin skywalker because both were grandmaster and master of the order two of the most powerful jedi of the jedi order they could have helped anakin save his mother and possibly be with padme that we leave it to you
Sounds pretty cool
what about the other ones@@thelanceshipment
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@@irBribe can you
Nice! I do those “leave it to you” deals. Create the fork/deviation and have the master weave his tale.
Padmé always dying. Poor woman deserves a break. Lmao
Enjoyed the story though. I love whenever Anakin finds his personal balance despite being through torment along the way.
Nah it’s a cannon event for her to die in every universe
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Then why did she think it was good idea to follow him into battle?
@@michaelsmith622 i dont know its dumb but the story is *Acceptable*
I liked the Guardians 2 reference in this one. very nice
That was very well imagined. I never thought to have contained the story to the battle of Coruscant. No Luke or Leia, intriguing. Your story was surprisingly heartbreaking. Very well done‼️✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼
I have an idea that I think could be interesting:
What if Palpatine wasn't Force Sensitive, yet still manipulated events to rise to power?
Basically would be Thrawn, but more diabolical and unpredictable. The way I see it, Palps would pretty much be the Joker of the Star Wars universe, while I already see similarities between Thrawn and Lex Luthor
I am a story writer and I do ones where I use the Dark lighting for good, and this very action packed and seeing how powerful Anain is.
Imagine telling the most powerful living being who already is a little angry at you and has shown severe anger management issues especially when it comes to his wife, that his wife dying was a necessary sacrifice. That's like going up to a 2,20 m tall 170kg pure muscle dude who also knows martial arts and telling him he is a bastard and should die. Not a good Idea
SW FanFic Ideas:
What If Bastila Shan trained Anakin SkyWalker
What If Satele Shan trained Luke SkyWalker
What If Shaak Ti trained Luke and Leia
What If Padme didn't fall out of the ship in Attack Of The Clones
how would a millenia old jedi be able to train Anakin? I mean Bastilla Shan is Old Republic
also when will what if anakin became jedi battlemaster what if anakin went with yoda to the wellspring of life what if padme or dooku became supreme chancellor and what if quinlan vos trained anakin skywalker along with many more you got this we trust you you know when to make them
Ma boy Anakin turn into star lord for a moment there
If we ever get a Star Wars "What If" mini series on Disney Plus, this has to be an episode
This one kicked ass man. Well done
Day 5 of asking for what if Darth maul was never cut in half
What If Anakin Freed The Slaves In Tatooine
What if quigon did so himself instead rigjt then and there, I’d say.
Palps "her sacrifice was necessary" it was at this moment he fucked up
Sideous: Who, in the HELL do you think you are?!?!
Anakin: YOU KILLED MY WIFE!!
Sideous: *I tried, so hard! To groom* you into the perfect disciple for the dark side, and this is the thanks I get?! You really *need to grow up!!*
Yessss
Sideous: I wanted to do this *together!* But I suppose you'll have to learn by spending the next thousand years as a force *conduit.* 'Chosen-One'.
So, what have we learned today kids? Never make Anakin angry
Perhaps Padmes death was nessesary
At that moment palpatine knew he fed up
SW fanfic idea: What if Glup Shitto was the chosen one?
What if the Chancellor decided that the Force was for losers, changed his name to Emperor Pal-Protein, opened a gym, and tempted Anakin to join the Swole Side.
Anakins so dumb falling for palpatine manipulating him . He blames the Jedi for having him on the front line like the chancellor isn’t the one giving the orders lol
The many weaknesses of being emotional instead of logical.
The main thing was Palpatine told him what he wanted to hear the jedi do not
Palpatine was his mentor and his only father figure ever since qui gon died
@@jiffismm yeah ik
@@Trelitty11 The Jedi council was manipulated as well
That’s just so stupid why would Anakin take his pregnant padme with her to open conflict and risk her life like this , he would leave her at her apparment or take her to a bunker
I really enjoyed this Video based on What if Anakin Skywalker was on Coruscant when the Separatists Attacked The Star Wars Galaxy. Thanks.
Now I know that sounds bad… 😂
A true Ego moment, lol.
But what did padme love? Chicken? Pudding?! I need to know!!!
I love that guardians of the galaxy reference.
What if Ben Solo was trained by Ashoka Tano?
What if Rey was raised by Mother Talzin?
You and Lucas just got to kill Padme off. She was the only redeeming factor in Anakin's life.
Greivous is untamed metallic uncaring animal. How could palpatine have any hope in hell containing this guy.
Well, Padme gone, carry on
What if Dooku Had visions of Anakin becoming Darth Vader.
what if anakin and padme didn't go to geonosis
What if Yoda was a boody dancer in the club in his spare time?
What if Mace Windu trained Cal Kestis
What if anakin informed shaak ti about palpatine
Nice Guardians of the galaxy reference there. xD
I really enjoyed your story!
What if Darth Plagueis survived???
What if anakin had a child in the midle of the clone wars before luke and leia
What if we palps had a crush on padme?
As much as I like where you took the story after Padme's death here, there's no way in hell Anakin would have taken her into battle. Just no fcking way. Still, good story otherwise.
Anyway, here's a suggestion:
What if Ahsoka raised Luke and Leia?
Ah that reference.
That was a great battle. Best was Anakin becoming the chosen one and turning against Palpatine in the end
Sad Padme died but in the end Anakin prevailed
Very cool story
What if darth maul was trained by yoda
Video idea what if coruscant would have fallen
What if Anakin remembered his visions from the son and turned to the dark side then overthrew Palpatine, ending the war.
What if Vader died in the Battle of Yavin instead of Tarkin?
Another suggestion is what if Bail Organa was offworld when Alderaan was destroyed?
What if the Jedi didn't consider blasters as being uncivilized and made use of them regularly either in coordination with their lightsaber or even something like Ezra's blade.
Best one. Feels bro.
Overall I liked this story. My only issue with it is, that by this point the unborn children could be saved even with Padme dead, unless her belly was hit by shrapnel.
OK, maybe I’m missing it but when he contacted Yoda at the end and explained everything did he tell them about him and Padme?
Amazing
I liked it alot I assume Luke and Leia die as well? Great job really like your what if stories
Enjoyed this story 😊
Shouldnt u begin when Anakin and Obi Wan were on Yerbana thats the battle leading into the Battle of Corascuant
Nice nod to the Episode 3 novelization!
This might be interesting but what if anakin told mace about what happened on tatooine and mace decided to help him
What if Obi-Wan and Yoda found more survivors in the Jedi Temple during their raid in Revenge of the Sith?
What if Star Wars was guardians of the Galaxy 2?😭😭
What if anakin got hurt like vader while in the clone wars
Four ads in 10 minutes is ridiculous please I understand you need money but seriously 4 ads in 10 minutes is ridiculous
I had zero. Sorry about that.
What if ahsoka joined obi wan and anakin to rescue palpatine
I think that I recognized this story it's like Star Lord vs Ego aunt may dieing in poor Spider-Man's arms and also there was Harry Potter defeating Voldemort with "something worth living for" you even took ideas from JJ Abram's Star Trek into darkness oh and that detonator that the force wasn't able to contain just like the explosion that Wanda couldn't contain in civil war? what else did you do that has already been done. Don't get me wrong I love the story but this is the X-Men origins wolverine of Star wars😂😂😂😂😂
Why was padme with him to begin with she was heavily pregnant
So I could kill her and have my plot go forward idk lol
Why does padme always die in these stories
What if Rey fell for anakin? During clone war’s period
how would this be possible, Rey wasn't even born yet
What if Anikan was the brother of Padma Amaldal?
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And after all that ani still doesn’t get the rank of master. Instead he leaves the order with ahsoka and they eventually fall in love as it was meant to be and their children are even more powerful than luke and leia
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Romans 10:9 That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus, and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved.
Hmm.....
What if Grievous fund out about Sidiouse beeing Palpatine. Would love to hear this.
Once again you are killing people off for the sake of killing people off. Why would Anakin bring Padme into where one could assume danger was. I understand killing people for story relevance, but you always have a thing for always killing off someone even when it makes the least sense, it would have made sense if Anakin wasn't the only jedi to protect palpatine and maybe a council member died. But bringing Padme to die seems so forced. Your seriously pushing into Disney territory bad here, and that is saying something.