@@wonderful_forest thanks for the feedback. However this is a scrap song that I didn't like and felt like it deserved to be released. That's why I didn't do a proper release. This is a demo a "secret" track that I didn't expect and didn't want to blow up. It obviously needs some work. Listen to my album maybe you'll like that.
guitars humiliate mixes, drums are simply required in them, bass is not there at all, well, that's not a problem) you need to work on mixing, try to make the snare drum as loud as a kick drum, and the guitars as loud as a snare drum, use an equalizer to cut out unnecessary mids and lower mids from the guitars, so they will press less, reduce compression, there is too much of it on guitars, in terms of sound, you are using a stratocaster, I advise you to record in the middle position of the positioner when recording with a distortion, so the sound will be much more collected
and lastly, you use too many doubles in the second part. and about the fact that you use 4 chords, I am silent, I like the direction in which your endeavors are moving. you can not listen to me at all, it's just that these things are very obvious for people who have been doing music for at least 2-3 years
Beautiful ⚰️🥀
I like this song, i will like to make a dsbm project too
Love it 🐺
Nice song ,i'm put it on my bm playlist
Hahahahaha its so bad bruh, you need a study, before you drop it in the UA-cam
@@wonderful_forest thanks for the feedback. However this is a scrap song that I didn't like and felt like it deserved to be released. That's why I didn't do a proper release. This is a demo a "secret" track that I didn't expect and didn't want to blow up. It obviously needs some work. Listen to my album maybe you'll like that.
guitars humiliate mixes, drums are simply required in them, bass is not there at all, well, that's not a problem) you need to work on mixing, try to make the snare drum as loud as a kick drum, and the guitars as loud as a snare drum, use an equalizer to cut out unnecessary mids and lower mids from the guitars, so they will press less, reduce compression, there is too much of it on guitars, in terms of sound, you are using a stratocaster, I advise you to record in the middle position of the positioner when recording with a distortion, so the sound will be much more collected
the guitars are too loud in the second half of the song, I mean this part
and lastly, you use too many doubles in the second part. and about the fact that you use 4 chords, I am silent, I like the direction in which your endeavors are moving. you can not listen to me at all, it's just that these things are very obvious for people who have been doing music for at least 2-3 years
@@mourningangelDSBM I listened to your album, it sounds just as shitty as this demo