Clarifying scene geography

In this screenwriting video, I discuss how small choices on the page can help (or hurt) a reader's ability to understand where characters are and what's happening.
Links:
The original Scriptnotes conversation
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The original version of the scene
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Writer's revised version of the scene
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Demo filmed version
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