FSOT Prep #8: How to Write Winning Personal Narratives

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  • Опубліковано 16 жов 2024
  • This video will provide you information on how to prepare and write your Personal Narratives, including tips on putting your best foot forward. Unlike the essay on FSOT Part 1, in which you were graded solely on the mechanics of writing, the Personal Narratives will judge the mechanics of your writing but also the content.

КОМЕНТАРІ • 36

  • @mrAZcardinal
    @mrAZcardinal 4 роки тому +49

    Personal Narratives are now one of the first things you must complete- I had to write them down before I could even schedule the FSOT at a specific location.

    • @RamiroEloy1997
      @RamiroEloy1997 4 роки тому

      I noticed that too. I wonder if you have to pass them before you can take the test

    • @mrAZcardinal
      @mrAZcardinal 4 роки тому +3

      @@RamiroEloy1997 I'm unsure, but doubtful. It wouldn't give the State Department much time to review and grade the narratives before we'd need to take the FSOT.

    • @jameskim5046
      @jameskim5046 4 роки тому +5

      Nope, they are only graded if you pass the written exam first. So after you pass the written the pns and along with the qeps are evaluated at the same time.

    • @kennethhart7161
      @kennethhart7161 Рік тому

      Did you have to include verifiers for each essay?

    • @SteffanBlanco1
      @SteffanBlanco1 8 місяців тому

      now they ask you to provide people to verify your answer

  • @matthewsnow7018
    @matthewsnow7018 4 роки тому +13

    Bill, your insight is incredibly helpful as I sit down to work on my PN's (I have more time since they re-arranged the process for 2020). Thank you for putting this together for all of us in the FSO aspirant community.

  • @priswks6103
    @priswks6103 Рік тому +1

    Thank you for your help! What you have outlined gives me a better starting point.

  • @nightfox40
    @nightfox40 6 років тому +7

    Thank you so much for making this! I was not able to make it through the personal narrative section when I took the exam last time, so I have been looking forward to this video for quite a while.

    • @FSOTPrep
      @FSOTPrep  6 років тому +4

      Glad it helps. Practice your writing so you get faster and stronger.
      Good luck!

  • @danielchoi1286
    @danielchoi1286 5 років тому +4

    Thank you for your informative insight. I am preparing for the October test and I am glad that I found your UA-cam page.

  • @denequelee6221
    @denequelee6221 6 років тому +5

    HI Bill, I'm currently working on my PN's for a deadline at the end of this week(!!). Thanks for providing the most updated information out there!

    • @FSOTPrep
      @FSOTPrep  6 років тому +4

      You've already accomplished a lot by passing the first part of the FSOT. Congratulations. Remember to write your PNs with personality, good teamwork skills, and answering the 3W's -- Why do you want to be an FSO, What do you bring to the Foreign Service, and What do you bring to your Career Track (Cone).
      Also, share your PNs with friends and family to get their feedback.
      Good luck!

    • @denequelee6221
      @denequelee6221 6 років тому +1

      @@FSOTPrep Thanks so much for your response Bill. Just a quick question: I heard it's not as important to emphasize your job titles because BEX will examine your responses along with your resume. Is this true, or must you spell out your experiences once again in the essays just in case? I've been reading advice from others who advise against including every achievement, even if it might be relevant. Thanks again!

    • @FSOTPrep
      @FSOTPrep  6 років тому +3

      @@denequelee6221 Deneque, Use the most positive examples as you can. The Qualifications Evaluation Panel (QEP) will have access to all of you documents: FSOT results & essay, registration application, resume and PNs. But I'm not certain whether the reviewer of your PNs is going to have access to (or even read) your resume during the 'grading' of your PNs. I know this might not help, but knowing how promotion and other panels work, the reviewers from your Career Track will likely read and 'grade' your PNs and then meet with the other groups (e.g. POL, PD, etc) to discuss their scores and rank order the applicants.
      Best, Bill

    • @denequelee6221
      @denequelee6221 5 років тому +6

      @@FSOTPrep Bill, I passed. Thanks so much for your help!

    • @FSOTPrep
      @FSOTPrep  5 років тому +3

      @@denequelee6221 Congratulations! That's great news. Guess you're gearing up for the Oral Assessment now. I hope to have some videos out in early 2019 to help.

  • @josephproffit4198
    @josephproffit4198 8 місяців тому +1

    Thanks for the help!

  • @yourstruly6520
    @yourstruly6520 Рік тому +2

    I have just turned 20, and I am waiting for April 25th of 2023 to register my Personal Narratives to take the test in June. I hope I pass I've been going through the material provided in your videos as well as the resources you've cited. This will be my first attempt this year; most likely will to not be my last.

  • @chinajazzcat
    @chinajazzcat 5 років тому +1

    Thanks, Bill. I’m currently in the PN stage and this video was helpful.

  • @anajaninehernandez-diaz6284
    @anajaninehernandez-diaz6284 4 роки тому +2

    Thank you for these videos! They are very helpful! I know we all have different backgrounds and experiences. Any examples of successful past personal narratives out there? I’ve read that the style of writing shouldn’t be so structured, but have also read that the STAR method of writing is a good guideline... any advice would be appreciated.

  • @claudiaargueta1127
    @claudiaargueta1127 4 місяці тому

    Thank you! Could you give some examples of PN? It's harder than what it seems.

  • @LIamaLlama554
    @LIamaLlama554 5 років тому

    Thanks Bill! This is very helpful. Appreciate you taking the time.

  • @abdallahj.a.
    @abdallahj.a. 7 місяців тому

    Great video. Thank you very much!!

  • @joystraley1390
    @joystraley1390 Рік тому

    Question the personal narratives will they be pre written and submitted. Or will we need to train and memorize our narratives and them down on paper within an set time limit.

  • @get11net
    @get11net 4 роки тому

    Thank you so much for this video! I look forward to taking the test soon

  • @peternkansah8439
    @peternkansah8439 5 років тому +2

    Truly appreciate this

  • @SteffanBlanco1
    @SteffanBlanco1 8 місяців тому

    I find these the most difficult part is the application itself, asking you to provide someone who can verify your answers.

  • @asifkhancan
    @asifkhancan 4 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much, I'm gonna get you a pizza when I go through the whole testing process and pass.

  • @imranh781
    @imranh781 4 роки тому

    Thank you so much, sir! It is really helpful :)

  • @nyeusinyeupe8593
    @nyeusinyeupe8593 4 роки тому +2

    What is a cone?

    • @sohamDevRel
      @sohamDevRel 4 роки тому +1

      Your Career track
      One of the 5

  • @RobiTheophilus
    @RobiTheophilus 4 роки тому

    Thank you!!!!

  • @element1935
    @element1935 Місяць тому

    you re a master yapper u said nothing of value