Eggman's HUGE Mistake! (Sonic Generations Rewritten)
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Tails: “You’d build replacements, right?”
Eggman: *You weren’t supposed to do that!*
Robotnik: So when does he start the one liners?
Eggman: Sometime around 1998.
Classic Sonic:
**laughs demonically**
Leonard Church Sonic first started talking in sonic cd and in the game the USA Eggman theme is demonic screeching look it up
nice
@@alebree6983 Sonic first starts talking in Sonic adventure, which comes out in 1998. the joke is that Classic Sonic knows when to start quipping and relishes the thought of it.
@@thedman1754 Well CD was in 1993 and Sonic talks before his "outta here" animation if you are idle in a level for too long
@@justanothersilentprotagoni9139 yeah, but he never says anything directly to Eggman.
Character-driven conflicts, self-reflection, situations being taken seriously with humor being put in comfortably in the middle? No wonder SEGA WON'T hire you. You're way past their current standard.
Seriously, this guy needs to be hired! Not only could he help fix up the old games (making the canon stories better and making Sega more money as fans will have updated versions of the games with better stories and game play) but with these rewrites, he has excellent sequel material for at least one new game, if not more.
At least hire him to help with the movies so he can fix up the video game stories for the bug screen!
So then how is Ian Flynn?
I like how there is a clear difference between robotnik and eggman. it makes sense, given how eggman was certainly changed by his burning hatred of sonic.
maybe this experience would cause even more of a timeline split for classic, if say, robotnik decided to find other ways to persue that amusement park that wouldn't spark conflict with sonic. so many possibilities :)
Aiden Hunt Maybe he’ll go back and get his teaching degree~
Aiden Hunt how would mania end up from this?
would make sense considering sonic from mania learned the drop dash but modern never did
Maybe that's why Classic eventually is from a different dimension instead of time, as suggested in Sonic Forces.
you could say there's... Endless Possibilities
I really love all the meta humor in this series. The rings joke and “You have always been Eggman” were my favorites
I always love the idea that Robotnic was not originally evil so having a good Robotnic in this is pretty cool.
He's not exactly a good guy, but he's not evil. Years of defeats and obsession lead him down a darker path than he intended.
Hate to be that guy but it’s, “Robotnik,” not, “Robotnic.”
@@Garrulous64 Yeah i think i see what you mean, in the begining Eggman just wanted to build his own place, but the fact that in doing so would of caused a TON of little animals and an entire island being enslaved would just be bad, so Sonic stopped him, Then Robotnick just set himself bigger goals, then bigger, and bigger, until he wanted to conquer the ENTIRE world, but at the same time his grudge grew, and grew
But at the same time, i think he still somewhat feels sympathy, i feel like if he finaly got rid of Sonic, he'd feel atleast a little sad, apparently in SA2, if you use the Japanese voices: Eggman actualy sounds a bit sad when he blasts Sonic off into space
@@Sydney_Angelyt Knew someone would notice, was thinking of putting Robotnick instead
coincidentally the original concept art for robotnik was during an art contest for a new protagonist for an entirely new game of sega, so he was originally drawn to be good! (i hope thats right atleast)
"I'm here to save the world..but that dosen't mean I need to save you."
*[Tails will remember that]*
[Orbot and Cubot will remember that]
[Everyone will remember that]
Lol I love that "You'll find that you've always been Eggman"
Your description of sonic drowning perfectly encapsulates what any underwater segment feels like in sonic.
Cept in Colors where he finally learns how to swim
Mine N Adventurer _The Aegis Boy_ Then he never swims again
this was like a movie, twists, turns, betrayal. a masterpiece.
thanks for the heart, sonic generations is my favourite sonic game so i really want to see more.
I love how you're fixing this very straightforward (literally) story while coincidingly making it funny
Robotnik is so much more interesting in this rewrite. He's Eggman BEFORE he became Eggman. Sure his means are cruel, but he isn't an angry or spiteful person. I hope that in later chapters Robotnik begins to understand what Eggman means and becomes the villain, while Eggman develops into a better person, like a role reversal. It's a classic but an ideal trope for this type of story.
Guy Emu Nice 👍🏻
Or, these events creat an alternative timeline where Robotnik never becomes Eggman.
to be honest, I hope that all of this just causes a paradox level thing and at the end of this the classic timeline and Modern timelines branch off. Just so Robotnik doesn't turn into a villain.
leafgreen 25, but then Mania would never happen. And Avcergy97, they do branch off in canon too btw. Mania and Forces exist.
well yeah. They Did. But I feel that even still, mania can still happen. Just be creativee. And what I meant by that, would be that the story would change towards it. Cause if you do sonic mania rewritten, it may be Eggman looking for other power sources so he doesn't have to hurt any animals. And his robots find the ruby. Ezy
I desperately need this to be cannon. And the Robotnik interactions. That was just brilliant.
Sovic91 aggred garrulous deserves a Perrrrrrrromotion
Me: casually chilling at home
"Sees fixing Sonic generation"
G O T T A G O F A S T ! ! !
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Tails: You'd build replacements, huh?
Eggman: i was not expecting that.
But I was expecting not to expect something so it doesn't count.
I can't imagine any of these characters (besides Robotnik) sounding this... sophisticated. It occasionally breaks the immersion, but you gotta have something to remind you that this isn't a canon Sonic product, no? In any case, it does little to dampen my opinion on this rewritten stuff. Your storytelling gets better by the month!
(and tails)
*(and knuckles)*
@@pearlx7828 (featuring Dante from the devil may cry series)
Pearl X Naw I don’t think knuckles should be like Sonic Boom dumb, but he shouldn’t be this smart either
@@DBK_Productions Bare in mind that in sonic 06 and Sonic Riders, he did talk the corpus callosum.
9:36 It was at this moment Eggman knew he f****d up
Ngl I'd love to see a game based off your story.
This is really unique and better than what Sega gave us anyway.
I still want a game based on his sequel idea to Forces rewritten. It is such a cool concept. Heck, let's just have games based off of all Garrulous rewrites
kimzee59 all we need to do is figure out how to mod bosses in Generations.
'You get older, you'll understand that you've always been Eggman. You just didn't realize it.'
Okay, that is INSANELY clever.
I love how you made a joke of that eggmans name was always eggman because of his name being eggman in Japanese
I was looking for this comment
Me: sees sonic generations rewritten
My finger: *s o n i c s p e e d*
*SONICS PEE*
Hey RelaxAlax
Personally, instead of the Giant Motobug from Chaos, I believe the Giant Turtle Badnik from the first stage of Triple Trouble would be a better fit for the environment. Still, I'm LOVING where this is headed. I love the direction you decided to take Robotnik and Eggman, really great stuff!
We gotta have The Bug
I'd be interested in the after events where eggman having a dispute with robotnick causes robotnick to reaproach how he goes about the amusement park. Maybe he ends up entirely different than the man we know today
Huh, eggman is an honestly hateable villain now. I'm... Invested. Amazing
Eggman to younger self "I dream of a world covered in metal..." Hmmm... sounds on brand :)
Literally the current arc in the comics.
Poor robotnik he probably feels doomed now that he met his future self...
This sounds interesting. I wonder if interactions with his younger self will make Eggman re-evaluate his actions in long run. Yes, it's hard to acknowledge his mistakes and logically, it would be hard to him to go back to Robotnik after identifying for years as a villain (I'd say, it sounds like Eggman was born out of Sonic and others calling him bad for years... After all, Sonic started calling Robotnik Eggman. And the more time passed, the more Robotnik started to believe himself to be an evil villain and just gave up on his original ideas and plan, when in reality he was just misguided, but with good intentions. Would be a twist if Sonic created the villain out of Robotnik.)
man here you can really see how nuts eggman got in the future when robotnik and eggman are talking together
Robotnik vs eggman somehow you turn an idea I've never thought of and made into a something amazing
I love how robotnik is starting to turn on eggman, i really get the feeling of "A Dr.Ivo Robotnik biography" from robotniks parts
The bit about Cubot screaming in Russian is a hilarious mental image I'll never get rid of lmao
And cubot screamed something in a language i think was Russian
I CODE SWITCH WHEN IM SCARED
great line
I wonder if because of this, an alternative timeline opens up where Eggman never exists, and remains as a more sain and better personne.
Also ",Cubot screamed something in a different that might if been russian,"
"I code switch when I'm scared!"
I love how Robotnik is more sane than Eggman. It's clear he doesn't like Sonic much but dislikes his future self even moreso. Also, yeah, currently at this point in the rewrite, I doubt Robotnik will turn out like Eggman. And if that happens, then that means we'll get a new timeline with Classic Sonic & Robotnik where Robotnik would probably find a different way to go about building Robotnik Land.
Also, Classic Sonic is his Sonic 1 counter part or between CD and 2? Since he never got to Chemical Plant it seems like it's one of those options. Which is interesting since this means he'll have no idea who Tails is since he hasn't even met him yet.
Orbot and Cubot are always a delight and I love how you wrote for them. They both feel on point and in-character!
The perfect thing to watch when I'm in a creative mood.
I apparently had the first ep of this series in my Watch Later for over a year and I am VERY glad I decided to give this a listen! This is great!
I honestly adore these. Most of your rewrites are pretty good but this one is by far my favorite. I'm a writer too (well i like to think of myself as such) and the way you use these characters is just on point. It reaches this level of near hyperrealism where they feel a little too true to themselves to be official. This story has strong themes that don't take away from how silly the premise is, it aligns with the original, and it doesn't try to be out of character with what you'd expect from the 10's Pontaff style of writing. Like sure it has its occasional hiccups but I can't wait for the next part. It's honestly refreshing to see a take on a Sonic story that doesn't just try to ape what Adventure did right, and yours is just one highlight after another. I'd feel jealous if I were Pontaff, but then, being Pontaff means you don't really care about Sonic besides stale memes...
Cubot saying "I code-switch when I'm scared" killed me
I can see why the Sonics get along so well. I mean, yes, Classic is a younger version of Sonic himself, but Sonic has had a lot of time to learn to be an older brother of sorts when he met Tails. He's just playing those old memories of comforting a younger Tails in his mind, and I find that so precious.
Edit: Thanks for the heart, Garrulouos64!
Holy crap. This is so much better, especially with the drama against Eggman, and possible character growth.
Hey Garrulous64, this is a really good rewrite! I think it’s really cool someone’s going back and rewriting these game. Although, if I could ask one thing, and this is more of a problem with the original game story, but how does the sonics not run into their other past selves? (Example: Super Sonic (Sonic Adventure) was nowhere to be seen when they fight perfect chaos.)
Good question
My personal explanation is that the timeline is being destroyed. Different parts of it have already been removed, and the characters in the story are some of the few that are still surviving
@Garrulous64
Okay 👌
Plus, you could always say that they were frozen in times (similar to Tails, Orbot, & Cubot) and we’re freed once things go back to normal.
Great continuation! However, I would like to offer a suggestion. I get the point that you want to make with Eggman being a more cynical, 'eviler' Robotnik, but I believe that in canon Robotnik should be more centered on robotic domination, since it was his original motivation on the classic games, while Eggman is the more whimsically psychotic, since after so many defeats, he has lost his original focus of a mechanical society and turned into a mentally unstable, world-conquering megalomaniac who just wants to make a theme park. That being said... I really like the way the story is playing out! Eggman is being attacked by all fronts here, no punches pulled, and he feels (rightfully?) misunderstood, even by his past self. The only other thing I would change would be that Tails, Orbot and Cubot didn't have their memories of Eggman leaving them there, that way there's more tension on whether Eggman actually wants to help or not. With the way the plot is advancing, it becomes evident that Eggman can and will betray the heroes for his own gain, not listening to any of their needs. Besides that, a great work as always! I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for the next part... Keep up the good stuff!
The only thing I want to point out is that Tails has never canonically been Tails the Fox. One of the few characters with a first and last name, his full name is Miles “Tails” Prower. That tiny nitpick aside, though, I really like the way this is going. The differences between Robotnik and Eggman apparent in their conversations really show how much he let his obsession with defeating Sonic control him. Also: Eggman pays his robots?
The dialogue in this rewrite geez. Utter pure gold!
Betrayal in Sonic now that's awesome for a sonic story!
I have endless adoration for your storywriting, it's so so so wonderful
Thanks!
Ouch, burned in the one way only oneself could... That's a special kind of burn.
I am a HUGE fan of your Sonic rewrites! This is one of my favorites, and I can’t wait to see what you do next. Great video!
My code switches when I am scared made me chuckle
I would love at the end of this, classic Eggman will take Classic Sonic Tails and Knuckles out to eat for all that happened
I love your rewrites. I’m an aspiring game designer, and want to specifically make Sonic games, and when I start making them I would hire you as a story writer.
Honestly I love how you made the egg heads differ like it’s a lot better than oh hey we’re same dude let’s use a possibly reality destroying entity to kill like 2 hedgehogs and some of their friends like the whole backstabbing hinted and shown I love this can’t wait for part 3 !
Oh yeah can you try to make a reference for when if you use a cheer part for the end battle if you do can you make silver say “I dont even know you” little reference too 06’s yes we know you hate this let’s make it non canon.
Also good job with the it’s gonna be your plan later nice reference to the white void of generations the references get better
Wow, the writing for this is actually amazing. And the jokes are actually funny!
This is quickly looking like a ten-parter. Holy cow.
I really love these Sonic rewritings. You are a great storyteller and your better than Sega at writing stories obviously. I'd love to see what you might do with other Sonic games. It'd be awesome to see what your take of Sonic unleashed would be.
Please more, it’s the serious tone from forces I wanted with an actual problem they need to fix so please more it’s amazing
Didn't expect Mario & Luigi music but it fits
It's perfect for setting scenes.
@@Garrulous64 Yeah.
*Wait did you just heart my comment-*
@@Garrulous64 This has been on my mind for a few days, but have you ever thought of rewriting the game Shadow The Hedgehog? I really think you could pull it off and give Shadow's game a story that (dare I say) MAKES SENSE.
I've considered it, but the only idea I have wouldn't change the story much.
@@Garrulous64 It would be pretty damn hard considering you'd have to rewrite the dark, hero, neutral, semi hero, semi dark, AND last story.
Unless you were gonna get rid of the semi stories because they barely make sense.
This came out on my birthday! How didn't I see the notification until today is a mystery to me. Thanks so much! Your work is always a joy to see!
Happy birthday
I really like your Sonic Rewritten story. It might be interesting if Sonic and Eggman have more in common then just their birthday. In a old comic called Sonic The Comic, Sonic and Eggman met before and became friends and also how Sonic got his blue color. There are some fanfics that Eggman raised Sonic even giving him his name. But will leave that up to you. During the journey, Classic Eggman talked to classic sonic about the past and how close friends they were. Tails, Orbot and Cubot will be surprised and modern Eggman will deny it all. Tails will ask Sonic if it's true. Sonic will try to deny it only to not remember anything except an explosion a promise to keep something safe and That's it. What happens next is up to you. It's your idea if you want to do this or not. Sill I like your story and can't wait to see what happens next.
If these changed gameplay then I'd have mechanic like in Mania Plus where you can switch on the fly.
bro you need to wright for a canon sonic game because holy hell this is way better than the recent games
As with part 1, here's the titles I came up with for the cutscenes:
00:44 - 01:55 Chemical Reaction
*Chemical Plant Act 1*
01:58 - 04:06 Sting My Eyes
*Chemical Plant Act 2*
04:08 - 06:47 I Hate Myself
06:48 - 08:45 Zero to the Power
*Motobug Boss Fight*
09:07 - 11:35 A Rotten Egg
i really laught at the "i code-switch when im scared" line xD
I can imagine this being an actual Sega game if you worked there
"you've become a big-time villain, doctor!"
Since you focused on Eggman speaking to Orbot and Cubot, I have a quick bit of dialogue for the Sonics when they are helping Tails.
Sonic: Whoa, Tails, you alright there, little buddy?
Tails: I... I think so... (Sees Classic) Huh?
Classic: (Looks inquisitively at Tails)
Sonic: Younger me, meet your future brother and best friend for life, Tails.
Classic: (Smiling and exchanges a fist bump with Tails)
Tails: Heh... two Sonics. I guess you'll be meeting younger me sooner or later.
It is interesting to see an arch-enemy dynamic explored. Villains like Eggman literally exist to challenge a hero like Sonic. Given Eggman's entire life revolves around fighting Sonic, I often picture him as growing consumed by his obsession to the point where he's not certain what he would actually do if he were to actually defeat Sonic.
Eggman’s way of being now compared to his past self makes me think...
Before, he just wanted to make a park, but Sonic didn’t approve of that without even attempting to listen closely at Robotnic’s intentions.
This repeated act, alongside the many insults, must have broken poor Eggman into the state of going mad, forgetting his goal to just make an amusement park and instead destroy sonic, and in conjunction, the hedgehog’s palls, and take over the world.
Classic Era Robotnic wasn’t a villain, he was just miss understood...
Makes you really question who the real villain really is...
I wouldn't say he was innocent, he was still using animals to power robots
Garrulous64 yeah that is very true, to me at least, he was a miss-understood villain, good intentions but a bad execution, whom then turned into a super villain with truly villainous intentions
I was just trying to pass the time until something I wanted to watch came out but then I saw your video and oh It’s must be my birthday.
"I assure you I had no idea about this little plan of his" *UA-cam crashes*
Some pretty spicy conflict going on already.
Awww yeeeahhh ive been waiting for part 2 great job man
I have a feeling Classic Sonic is going to say something and Robotnik is going to shut his mouth and say "No we don't need two of you speaking"
Pretty good story so far can't wait for more :)
I love the interactions between the Eggmans.
You're not a real woman
this feels like an audio book. it should be a book.
Let Orbot and Cubot unionize
Next chapter: Metal Sonic and Amy at Stardust Speedway
I love this series over all its great!
Hey, Garrulous64. A few days ago, I had an idea for a Sonic Forces rewrite. The story starts at the end of Generations. Classic Eggman has escaped from limbo, while Eggman did not. This means that Lost World (and Boom if you wanted to rewrite that as well) would happen without everyone's favorite Egghead. At the start, Sonic is seen parkouring all over angel island until he gets a distress signal from Tails, saying an unidentified threat has appeared. Sonic runs to the mainland, and the player can see Tails fighting off a ...badnik? This doesn't make sense. "Sonic!" Tails exclaims as he sees his best friend. "Don't worry Tails, I'll clean 'em up real quick!" Before tails can say something back, Sonic destroys all the badniks, only for them to reform seconds later. "What!?" Sonic exclaims as he is rushed by a badnik. Luckily, Tails saves him. "That's what i've been trying to tell you, they are unstoppable!" Suddenly, you can hear a (familiar to us) tune shouting "E! G! G! M! A! N!", And then Phantom Eggman appears. That's all I got for now. Great Video!
I was totally caught off guard by the reference to the post credits
In my opinion, rather than pinpoint a specific year, the interaction between Eggman and Robotnik relating to when Sonic starts quipping could've been like
Robotnik: So, when does he start spouting one liners?
Eggman: What did your most recent battle consist of?
Robotnik: He _just_ destroyed my Death Egg...Again.
Eggman: *Get those ear plugs **_now._*
Sonic: "Oh! So you don't go around the loop-de-loops then!" (scarcasm)
Eggman: "His jokes have been getting worse recently since my last scheme..."
Eggman's biggest mistake was...
*Peeing on the moon*
*I'M PISSING ON THE MOOON!*
HOW DO YA LIKE THAT, OBAMA!
this be a great sonic generations 2
this makes more since than it has any right to...btw if the dynamic stays as is and Robotnik and Eggman continue their split ideology which would most likely lead to one siding with Sonic and the other still being revenge driven please put in a scene where the nicer Robotnik saves the two Sonics and says a line like "I'm never going to become such a rotten egg" that's toocheesey and heroic to pass up
10:35 funniest part
peter porker I code switch when I’m scared T-T
Loving this Dylan! Good job!
"Found out next, on Sonic X!"
0:59 When Exacly He Starts To Not Stop Talking.
What if the time eater turns out to be a remaining bit of methalus
4:34 Im E.G.G.M.A.N and this is deep
Your rewrites are awesome!
Eggman pathos? Yes please!
This is really interesting, will Robotnik eventually fall into the trapping that made him become modern Eggman or will the events that transpire through this game cause him to reject Eggman and diverge from his future self, causing a branching alternate timeline, perhaps one where Robotnik is no longer the villain but an ally to Sonic. Or will Eggman be moved by his younger self to recognize his own failing?
I have a question: at what point did each timeline get fuzzy? I'm fairly certain Modern still happens a little bit after Colors, but what about Classic? Does that happen before Sonic 2? Sonic 1?
Also, would versions of characters from appropriate times appear in areas taken from specific times - i.e. Adventure Big/Tails/Whatever in Radial Highway, Heroes Eggman in the Heroes stage?
The way i'm explaining that is that the timeline is being destroyed. Very little remains aside from what we've seen already. The Sonics and the Eggmen are exceptions purely by coincidence.
This pair of classic characters is Post Sonic 1, but Pre Sonic 2. Spin-dash is added as a retcon and since Classic always has the option for spin-dash in re-releases of Sonic 1 these days.
This is why Robotnik is not as obsessive over victory and just believes he's had some "setbacks" and why Classic Sonic isn't super serious around Robotnik. He hasn't seen what he's capable of yet.
@@Garrulous64 I see. Thanks for clarifying!
what if in a hard mode the chemicals drained you of rings like the vulkan cannon
I still like Generations' story, but it really deserved something big like this for Sonic's 20th anniversary.