honestly, you play really well but maybe try to keep a control ward placed around you at all times. If they have a lot of squishies u can go for burst items instead of liandries to snowball faster. Good gameplay keep it up :))
Overall you are doing nice things tbh. Quick things i can tell you if your wave is pushing naturally and your opponent cant un-push it, you don't need to keep pushing if you dont want like in 3:30 ~ or if you have the lane advantage, you just need to zone him from gold and exp by hanging around the ranged minions and only last hitting, the natural result of this would, either he loses minions or he loses hp, and you will create a bigger wave you can then crash and either dive him or a free back to base. In 6:30 the plate play is the correct one i would say, 2 plates is a free kill and he took what 300hp off you? worth. At 4:15 you should have crashed the wave, dont let him hold it by being in melee, escort the wave until its getting hit by tower. Then there, once he is last hitting under tower, he is pinned, so you can look at the map and decide if you want to: back to base to gain item advantage, ward river entrance (not river bush like you do, its not a bad play, but you have the necessay control and safety to ward deeper) for safety or warding Raptors to track enemy jungle or warding the drake/void grubs. Most junglers in low elo wont commit to an objective if they dont have vision on map (or they will boldly commit anyway and die because lack of vision). In general you did very good, once you have a lead just try to look at the map and make decisions not only for kills but for gaining an advantage, like pushing waves your teammates are not pushing or warding deep. Like for example the bot play at 11:00 you kill but the wave is not pushed and this means either: someone has to go and push that wave so they lose time to push the advantage in other parts of the map, or they dont push, enemy gets a tower and you lose 2 waves worth of gold, and you may be forced to share exp and gold with whoever is not going there to catch that wave. This doesnt really matter in this game because you are far ahead but this small things compound to a bigger lead in other games you may have lost. Anyway huge text sorry.
Thanks so much for taking the time to write such a detailed and helpful comment! I really appreciate it . Will definitely keep these points in mind while laning next time .
Auto cast, faster cam movement. These are easy to fix actually. Now the hard one: Click around your champ more your movement is a little lackluster. GL
honestly, you play really well but maybe try to keep a control ward placed around you at all times. If they have a lot of squishies u can go for burst items instead of liandries to snowball faster. Good gameplay keep it up :))
Thanks for the feedback ! Will definitely keep that in mind next time ! 🥷🏼
Kinda like the chill side.
Good luck the journey I couldn't take :D
Thanks ! Glad you enjoyed it !
Nice vidéo man. I Hope you will publish again soon! Good luck on the grind.
Thanks ! That means alot !
Overall you are doing nice things tbh. Quick things i can tell you if your wave is pushing naturally and your opponent cant un-push it, you don't need to keep pushing if you dont want like in 3:30 ~ or if you have the lane advantage, you just need to zone him from gold and exp by hanging around the ranged minions and only last hitting, the natural result of this would, either he loses minions or he loses hp, and you will create a bigger wave you can then crash and either dive him or a free back to base. In 6:30 the plate play is the correct one i would say, 2 plates is a free kill and he took what 300hp off you? worth. At 4:15 you should have crashed the wave, dont let him hold it by being in melee, escort the wave until its getting hit by tower. Then there, once he is last hitting under tower, he is pinned, so you can look at the map and decide if you want to: back to base to gain item advantage, ward river entrance (not river bush like you do, its not a bad play, but you have the necessay control and safety to ward deeper) for safety or warding Raptors to track enemy jungle or warding the drake/void grubs. Most junglers in low elo wont commit to an objective if they dont have vision on map (or they will boldly commit anyway and die because lack of vision). In general you did very good, once you have a lead just try to look at the map and make decisions not only for kills but for gaining an advantage, like pushing waves your teammates are not pushing or warding deep. Like for example the bot play at 11:00 you kill but the wave is not pushed and this means either: someone has to go and push that wave so they lose time to push the advantage in other parts of the map, or they dont push, enemy gets a tower and you lose 2 waves worth of gold, and you may be forced to share exp and gold with whoever is not going there to catch that wave. This doesnt really matter in this game because you are far ahead but this small things compound to a bigger lead in other games you may have lost. Anyway huge text sorry.
Thanks so much for taking the time to write such a detailed and helpful comment! I really appreciate it . Will definitely keep these points in mind while laning next time .
Auto cast, faster cam movement. These are easy to fix actually. Now the hard one: Click around your champ more your movement is a little lackluster. GL
Thanks for the feedback! Will try it out for a few games and tell you how it goes 💪🏼