reading my college essay that won me $80,000 in scholarships + tips on how to write yours!

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  • @themomotocoryxkenshinsbonnet
    @themomotocoryxkenshinsbonnet Рік тому +8

    Hey! A year later and I came across this video. I just wanted to tell you how much you helped me with this process, I was really scared and uncertain about the whole thing. But you’re advice truthfully helped! I can’t thank you enough. Tysm!

  • @mystique2595
    @mystique2595 Рік тому +10

    I’m seeing this so late but better late than never. Honestly this was the best advice I ever got. A key point in this video that really made me feel the spotlight on myself was when you said “make your essay about you”. My college essay that I wrote was literally only about my mom. While everyone did praise it no one told me I had to make it about myself (I mean it is self explanatory but have mercy i was new at this lmao). But not getting accepted into any schools really made me think I’m not good at essay writing so I have been avoiding it. Now i’m about to be a junior in community college and I’m finally doing research on how to make my essay better and I am so happy I clicked on this one!

  • @savanahjennings4623
    @savanahjennings4623 11 місяців тому +4

    ATEEEEE IT ALL THE WAY SIS❤🎉

  • @aafrinvasaya
    @aafrinvasaya 2 роки тому +4

    im a rising senior and i'm about to start writing my essay. this was so helpful because i had no idea where to start!

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  2 роки тому

      i’m so glad i could help, good luck!💕

  • @Adzhanee
    @Adzhanee Рік тому +7

    You ate!!!! Ngl I teared up while listening to your essay.. really inspiring💜 I wish I also know my ancestors like your family do

  • @surprisealabi9596
    @surprisealabi9596 Рік тому +4

    I just wanted to say thank you. I got the scholarship

  • @RobynAshford24
    @RobynAshford24 2 роки тому +11

    whenever essays are involved i dip 🏃‍♀️💨.

  • @RobynAshford24
    @RobynAshford24 2 роки тому +4

    you made some really good points tho ! this could be very helpful for someone. i enjoyed watching

  • @willieharrisjr.2145
    @willieharrisjr.2145 2 роки тому +2

    that essay will never miss.

  • @mainlyalicia
    @mainlyalicia 2 роки тому +2

    this will really be helpful and you mentioned some great tips in there. loved this

  • @faithlee.official
    @faithlee.official 2 роки тому +2

    thank you so much for this🧡 very helpful

  • @angiegabriela
    @angiegabriela 2 роки тому +2

    when i clicked on this video it had 443 views and you 443 subscribers !! i turned both of those into 444. tysm for the tips

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  2 роки тому

      omg😭 tysm❤️❤️! and yes take it as a sign definitely!!

    • @angiegabriela
      @angiegabriela 2 роки тому +1

      @@divineblkgirl ahh i thought i was doing good but i can’t come up with a good way of writing the essay

  • @bread-i6u
    @bread-i6u 6 місяців тому

    i’m only a freshman in high school but this video was really great!

  • @jes2fresh285
    @jes2fresh285 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you for the tips!!

  • @jadaelease6586
    @jadaelease6586 Рік тому +2

    YES , you ate that essay up 😅😅

  • @stephanieegbuonu2626
    @stephanieegbuonu2626 Рік тому

    You ate it up🎉

  • @jeannine1985
    @jeannine1985 Рік тому

    You ate it girl❤😂

  • @sharonkemboi193
    @sharonkemboi193 8 місяців тому

    Just got accepted to NYFA, thanks

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  8 місяців тому

      that’s awesome!! so glad i could help 🥰

  • @ronniekiven7177
    @ronniekiven7177 11 місяців тому +2

    Which scholarship had you applied for?

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  11 місяців тому

      all of the scholarships i received were awarded to me by the individual schools. when you apply to most schools you’re automatically considered for merit based scholarships!

  • @angi9214
    @angi9214 5 місяців тому

    i wanna write scholarship essay but idk what theme i should write about😭😭

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  5 місяців тому

      try to write about something unique about yourself to make you stand out!

  • @mrsstyles1324
    @mrsstyles1324 9 місяців тому

    Así son de pequeños los ensayos?

  • @RobynAshford24
    @RobynAshford24 2 роки тому +2

    omg you ateee the essay up girl🤭 was worth the procrastination 💕✨.

  • @NaijaRelate
    @NaijaRelate Рік тому

    Thanks you very much our beautiful aunty brieller.
    Please I'm sending my essay straight to your email for you to check it out before I submit.
    I wish I had met you five years ago. I have written countless essays without winning the competition or scholarship 😢😢😢😢

  • @sharonkemboi193
    @sharonkemboi193 8 місяців тому

    Thank you

  • @kiesha0308
    @kiesha0308 2 роки тому

    That's great!

  • @Scrubsfordays_withMia
    @Scrubsfordays_withMia Рік тому +1

    Hows your gap year going?

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  Рік тому +1

      it turned into a permanent one 😅

    • @sophiaarias9341
      @sophiaarias9341 Рік тому

      @@divineblkgirldang

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  Рік тому

      @@sophiaarias9341decided it wasn’t for me 😅

    • @zinkai1490
      @zinkai1490 Рік тому

      @@divineblkgirl you're not going to college? so what are you doing now?

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  8 місяців тому +1

      @@zinkai1490i’m thinking about going to beauty school! but mainly i’ve just been working and focusing on building up my social media platforms 😊

  • @emmanuelakalonu6396
    @emmanuelakalonu6396 Рік тому

    Hello, I am writing to you, because I am applying for the Think Big scholarship at the University and I would love for you to help review my application

  • @Fatcat561
    @Fatcat561 Рік тому

    hey, do you apply for scholarships in your college essay or after you get excepted

    • @divineblkgirl
      @divineblkgirl  Рік тому

      hi! so mainly when you apply to any school you will be considered for scholarships based on your essays, transcripts, and extracurriculars. you can use many different websites to find some as such as scholarships.com and goingmerry.com (which allows you to apply for multiple scholarships at once). you can apply for scholarships all the way up until you graduate from college! it’s never too soon/ late :)