My Review: Coming from this from the previous Star Wars film, here are my notes. Acting 9/10 - For the most part, on point. Some of it felt a little odd and I am not sure why, but it may just be recording quality limitations. The only other constructive criticism I would have is for the actors not to be too afraid of getting a little more emotionally invested into their roles in how they physically act. But that is something that also develops with time. On a last and less important note, the conversation or argument kinda felt like I was going in circles a little. Might have just been me. -shrugs- Story 6/10 - I will note this one was a HUGE step up from the previous "The Thing About Betrayal" film. A lot more context to the present circumstances. This would be one of those things where I would say what you have worked for the scene and really the only improvement I can see would be to expand the script further. I will admit this is sort of a genre outside of my personal experience though, so take that with a grain of salt.
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Richard (the president and Director) is one of my close friends, amazing job!
You guys are awesome!!!!! out standing job
The President must not be afraid to USE! FORCE! ("Thing about Betrayal" flashbacks on the spot).
Nice job. You guys should make more.
My Review:
Coming from this from the previous Star Wars film, here are my notes.
Acting 9/10 - For the most part, on point. Some of it felt a little odd and I am not sure why, but it may just be recording quality limitations. The only other constructive criticism I would have is for the actors not to be too afraid of getting a little more emotionally invested into their roles in how they physically act. But that is something that also develops with time. On a last and less important note, the conversation or argument kinda felt like I was going in circles a little. Might have just been me. -shrugs-
Story 6/10 - I will note this one was a HUGE step up from the previous "The Thing About Betrayal" film. A lot more context to the present circumstances. This would be one of those things where I would say what you have worked for the scene and really the only improvement I can see would be to expand the script further. I will admit this is sort of a genre outside of my personal experience though, so take that with a grain of salt.
Acting on point
this is amazing how you guys create all this is incredible