I love the fact it’s a massive combination of all the Timothy stuff fitted into a good story, and I like the fact that 0 is a prototype engine not a E2 specifically just a 0-6-0 tank engine, and poor 0 snapped not got possessed he snapped and in a rage he ended his life and clearly as a ghost regretted it, it really hammers the fact “if you push someone enough they will snap and you could be harmed if your in the wrong place…at the wrong time”
Definitely an awesome take on the original creepypasta. No demons, no passengers dying, no nonsensical craziness. You’ve done it once again, Joe. Kudos!
@@thomaspanditfan2435That maybe but then again the coaches were brown and Mark 0 coaches by the GCR. The Theory goes that the Mark 1s were supposed to be designed in the 1920s but were pushed back to 1950 due to 2 world wars.
This is probably the best adaptation of this story out there, and it makes you feel for poor Zero too. He wasn’t possessed, just thrown off the edge by constant bullying and decided to end his suffering in a most tragic way…
Admittingly this did remind me of 22tesla's adaptation of the infamous creepypasta in some parts like Edward telling Percy what happened. Even the title has the name. But this turned out to still be an original and unique take on the story. For example Zero is the only one that crashes off the viaduct and doesn't even have name or number. So with that said, this is probably one of the more unique takes on the ghost we see in Ghost Train and their origins. No random demon possessed E2 called Timothy that we've seen hundreds of times before but something that is different.
I always wondered why Timothys crew didn't just uncupple the coaches attached to him in the original story, so I applaud your adaptation for making them do so :D
This is how some people would write Timothy sometimes. No blood, no scary imagery, you just add distressing elements and pure scary sequences of fantasy peril and somber tones.
Hehe, not a bad story! Kinda like my old take on the creepypasta, but more unique than mine. And better in the regard that this engine snapped because of the bullying, no demonic nonsense. A simple story, but nice in a way. I could even imagine this Zero just appearing behind Percy, watching him go with a sad smile before vanishing. Maybe someday I'll try my own remake of my story as it's kinda rough
well, this was something, a really good take on an original creepypasta with no craziness or passengers dying. you made me proud Narrow gauge, great work on the audio and written story. keep up the good work. 🙂👍
I know that people are tired of this story after the various interpretations of Timothy, but you can’t deny that this ghost engine is a classic and gives you just enough information to spark your interest while being vague enough that you can take in any way you want
So much better than whatever the original youtube saga was. Also good idea to have the crew uncouple the train as they should’ve done in the original (funny enough DieselD199 did the exact same thing in his parody) And no one died yay! I do find interesting that Timothy, or Zero in this story, had a reason for going Mad, not cause of a cruel controller, but being bullied for being a finicky prototype. And him snapping was that one engine’s rude comment, and instead of him killing all of his passengers he simply was carrying on most likely just to end himself as he was already fed up with the way how he was treated, hence why he didn’t really react when he was uncoupled, because he was already done with life and couldn’t care if his passengers went down with him or not Zero still being a ghost to warn others is still something to think about though. Maybe to warn others of what had happened to him and as a lesson to not bully those who have faults that are not of their self doing?
Imagine a twist being the heroic crew of Zero is actually now Edward’s crew. Edit: I love the part where you take DieselD199’s part of uncoupling the coaches before the engine plunges into the gap.
Honestly I was very very impressed with this story. Got cold chills Once more Narrow Gauge you show you are so talented and go to depths in your story telling and thus I praise you and wish you the best to continue with your amazing story telling.
There’s something about referring to a sentient engine as ‘it’. I do it in my own fics from time to time , it just adds a little something in the right situation.
This Audio Production Needs Recognition For The Coming Fall Season Later This Year! Absolute Stellar Story! Adaptions of this in trainz would be fun! No Blood, No Demonic Scenery, No Jumpscares (thankgod), Just An Engine going through constant insults and bullying because of his own flaws he couldn't handle, just done with the world. Blinded by rage, regret, and sorrow and now, Just... Suicidal. Good god. Truely dark, but Awesome retelling of Timothy. Zero, Very Clever Indeed!
Wow. This is such a amazing job here. Cool to see your interpretation on what and/or who the ghost engine that Percy's driver might've seen on television is like. And cool to see a retelling of the story of Timothy in your way. This one sounds more tragic then the original. Instead of being crazy, demonic, and evil, the engine sounded like they were mentally feeling unstable for their treatment and being bullied to the point of being reckless. At least in this one, the engine's crew saved the passengers before they ended up falling and crashing to their deaths with the engine here. Such a fascinating and tragic rewrite here. Well done! Keep up the great work and take care!
Geez... This is a great retelling and probably one of the most tragic. No demonic or evil ghost stuff, but a poor engine dealt a bad hand and being bullied for something out of their control til they just... Snapped. Either just from blind rage or... Just didn't see the point anymore, to put it lightly and was so distraught that it forgot about the crew and its passengers. Makes me wonder if its crew and its friends felt guilty towards its death Again, amazing retelling with the Timothy story. Hope Zero finds their peace someday
This is easily the best version of the Timothy story out there. It manages to be more mature and less gruesome at the same time. This and “The Blizzard” are easily the best works I’ve seen from ya Joe.
I’ve been thinking about doing a concept similar to this for a while now, seems like you beat me to it lol. Either way, this story was really well done!
well done very well done indeed! remind me did you ever do a story on albert the mid Sodor engine? and if possible, could you do a story about another fan engine like tom moss the prank engine and give him a forgotten in the middle of the would in an abandoned town with a sad story vibe?
I know a lot of people don't really favor the untold story of Timothy, but I love any version related to Timothy. Personally though, Timothy turning into an evil ghost is kinda understandable as well. on one hand, the other version is way darker, and this one is lighter, but, if you really think about it, both stories do end up the same. an engine kills themself, and nobody really feels bad for them at the current time. now, for me, I would totally understand how that would drive a spirit to darkness, and besides, we know Timothy does feel bad for what he did, but he'd fallen too far to ever turn back. but also, it's nice to hear a lighter version too.
It's cool to see something done with the number. Even the best retellings keep with the idea that someone put a big 0 on the engine's side, which is so weird.
Wow. That gave me chills, you are an amazing storyteller great work. I have a theory that Edward was the engine who insulted zero and told it to derail, that’s why he has such a vivid memory of the story.
Who was the mean engine pulling the freight train - Afton the Claughton Class or his brother Charles? Possibly Sarah the Midland Railway Compound? (I've been watching Fan of Hiro's series "Engine Arrival")
This is genuinely the best take I've ever seen on the (incredibly overused) Timothy creepypasta. Zero is such a tragic character here, being a hardworking engine who was bullied to suicide over its lack of pulling power. It's such a shame it never lived to work on Sir Topham Hatt's railway, as I'm sure STH would have sympathized with it. I find it interesting how we never see its face, nor do we even know its gender, and I appreciate that the ridiculous "demonic" element of the creepypasta was removed. Very well done!
You’ve made this story ten time better than it ever will be. Awesome job! Though if I have to be honest, I still don’t like the fact that Zero is still a tank engine that looks like Thomas rather than Percy. But that’s my only complaint about it though. Other then that, it’s a huge improvement over the original.
As I hated that Creepypasta story about that demonic engine that is just a load of rubbish cause it was not written by Awdry nor written for the TVS - I know that story is 100% fake (if only that elder Thomas face made as a joke to David Mitton didn't exist to make such tomfoolery either)! This one is a much better version that can easily be watchable.
Yeah I remember that untold story of Timothy too, but while the story gave bit of attention it was difficult to tell if it was true because if it was a prototype engine, it would have been a E2 tank engine or a GWR prototype Holden 101 tank engine, but then again, that’s a well known fact
The story of Zero is more sadder than Timothy. This engine was an experimental prototype. No name, no number, no nothing. It was built & went to a railway, with nothing. And he was bullied for that. For having nothing.
This version of Timothy The Ghost Engine feels much more explained, and has more context. For instance, explaining that Zero had an undercoat and no real paint made it explainable why he was painted white. I like how there's no possessing in this one, and instead just a depressed engine. It also seems to make more sense because Timothy just gets all of his mistreatment built up in a suicide. It's really sad, and you can feel more remorse for poor old Zero. Nonetheless, I feel like this is even BETTER than the original story. Good job man! You've earned a subscription from me! :)
I love the fact it’s a massive combination of all the Timothy stuff fitted into a good story, and I like the fact that 0 is a prototype engine not a E2 specifically just a 0-6-0 tank engine, and poor 0 snapped not got possessed he snapped and in a rage he ended his life and clearly as a ghost regretted it, it really hammers the fact “if you push someone enough they will snap and you could be harmed if your in the wrong place…at the wrong time”
Looks like a E1X Tank Engine, just thought I’d update it.
@@MobyTheMerpup1852 you mean the LBSCR E1X
@@MobyTheMerpup1852 heh not a problem mate
The lack of human deaths makes the accident's in-universe obscurity a lot more believable. Nicely done!
Indeed
Agreed.
Definitely an awesome take on the original creepypasta. No demons, no passengers dying, no nonsensical craziness.
You’ve done it once again, Joe. Kudos!
I do agree, although my only complaint is that the coaches weren’t edited to be green or something other than that the story is amazingly sound.
i honestly kinda liked the whole he was trying to kill his horrible controller storyline that kanefan did
@@thomaspanditfan2435That maybe but then again the coaches were brown and Mark 0 coaches by the GCR. The Theory goes that the Mark 1s were supposed to be designed in the 1920s but were pushed back to 1950 due to 2 world wars.
@@MobyTheMerpup1852 ...what?
@@thomaspanditfan2435The coaches Kanefan701 used are brown not green.
This is probably the best adaptation of this story out there, and it makes you feel for poor Zero too. He wasn’t possessed, just thrown off the edge by constant bullying and decided to end his suffering in a most tragic way…
Do you know who is he talking to
“Thrown off the edge”
Both metaphorically and literally
Admittingly this did remind me of 22tesla's adaptation of the infamous creepypasta in some parts like Edward telling Percy what happened. Even the title has the name. But this turned out to still be an original and unique take on the story. For example Zero is the only one that crashes off the viaduct and doesn't even have name or number. So with that said, this is probably one of the more unique takes on the ghost we see in Ghost Train and their origins. No random demon possessed E2 called Timothy that we've seen hundreds of times before but something that is different.
Personally: That's the best adaptation for "Timothy" I've ever heard!
i honestly kinda liked the whole he was trying to kill his horrible controller storyline that kanefan did
I always wondered why Timothys crew didn't just uncupple the coaches attached to him in the original story, so I applaud your adaptation for making them do so :D
This is how some people would write Timothy sometimes.
No blood, no scary imagery, you just add distressing elements and pure scary sequences of fantasy peril and somber tones.
Agreed
Hehe, not a bad story! Kinda like my old take on the creepypasta, but more unique than mine. And better in the regard that this engine snapped because of the bullying, no demonic nonsense. A simple story, but nice in a way. I could even imagine this Zero just appearing behind Percy, watching him go with a sad smile before vanishing.
Maybe someday I'll try my own remake of my story as it's kinda rough
It's TESLA!!!!!
well, this was something, a really good take on an original creepypasta with no craziness or passengers dying.
you made me proud Narrow gauge, great work on the audio and written story. keep up the good work. 🙂👍
I know that people are tired of this story after the various interpretations of Timothy, but you can’t deny that this ghost engine is a classic and gives you just enough information to spark your interest while being vague enough that you can take in any way you want
Chilling! I love this adaptation of the Timothy story. Zero becomes very sympathetic and I love the touch of the older engines bullying him.
So much better than whatever the original youtube saga was. Also good idea to have the crew uncouple the train as they should’ve done in the original (funny enough DieselD199 did the exact same thing in his parody) And no one died yay!
I do find interesting that Timothy, or Zero in this story, had a reason for going Mad, not cause of a cruel controller, but being bullied for being a finicky prototype. And him snapping was that one engine’s rude comment, and instead of him killing all of his passengers he simply was carrying on most likely just to end himself as he was already fed up with the way how he was treated, hence why he didn’t really react when he was uncoupled, because he was already done with life and couldn’t care if his passengers went down with him or not
Zero still being a ghost to warn others is still something to think about though. Maybe to warn others of what had happened to him and as a lesson to not bully those who have faults that are not of their self doing?
Imagine a twist being the heroic crew of Zero is actually now Edward’s crew.
Edit: I love the part where you take DieselD199’s part of uncoupling the coaches before the engine plunges into the gap.
I imagine Timothy after his death goes after the engines that bullied him.
Very spooky, I'm glad the passengers were okay.
This is by far the best adaptation of Timothy I’ve ever seen
Honestly I was very very impressed with this story. Got cold chills Once more Narrow Gauge you show you are so talented and go to depths in your story telling and thus I praise you and wish you the best to continue with your amazing story telling.
Nice retelling of Timothy's backstory!!!
There’s something about referring to a sentient engine as ‘it’. I do it in my own fics from time to time , it just adds a little something in the right situation.
This Audio Production Needs Recognition For The Coming Fall Season Later This Year! Absolute Stellar Story! Adaptions of this in trainz would be fun!
No Blood, No Demonic Scenery, No Jumpscares (thankgod), Just An Engine going through constant insults and bullying because of his own flaws he couldn't handle, just done with the world. Blinded by rage, regret, and sorrow and now,
Just... Suicidal. Good god.
Truely dark, but Awesome retelling of Timothy. Zero, Very Clever Indeed!
Wow. This is such a amazing job here.
Cool to see your interpretation on what and/or who the ghost engine that Percy's driver might've seen on television is like. And cool to see a retelling of the story of Timothy in your way. This one sounds more tragic then the original. Instead of being crazy, demonic, and evil, the engine sounded like they were mentally feeling unstable for their treatment and being bullied to the point of being reckless. At least in this one, the engine's crew saved the passengers before they ended up falling and crashing to their deaths with the engine here.
Such a fascinating and tragic rewrite here. Well done! Keep up the great work and take care!
Geez... This is a great retelling and probably one of the most tragic.
No demonic or evil ghost stuff, but a poor engine dealt a bad hand and being bullied for something out of their control til they just... Snapped. Either just from blind rage or... Just didn't see the point anymore, to put it lightly and was so distraught that it forgot about the crew and its passengers. Makes me wonder if its crew and its friends felt guilty towards its death
Again, amazing retelling with the Timothy story. Hope Zero finds their peace someday
This is easily the best version of the Timothy story out there. It manages to be more mature and less gruesome at the same time. This and “The Blizzard” are easily the best works I’ve seen from ya Joe.
This has to be one of the best retellings of Timothy, glad to see the whole stupid demonic element.
8:03 My favourite part.
Not to be a downer but this reminds me of how my mom passed. She jumped from a railway trestle bridge. Anyways fantastic story
I’m so sorry for your loss. I can’t imagine what you’re going through.
@@blazingswordsman5410 ditto.
And here comes narrow gauge cooking up a storm as always!
Interesting.
Very good work, mate!👍
I’ve been thinking about doing a concept similar to this for a while now, seems like you beat me to it lol. Either way, this story was really well done!
Very unique take on the creepypasta!
well done very well done indeed! remind me did you ever do a story on albert the mid Sodor engine? and if possible, could you do a story about another fan engine like tom moss the prank engine and give him a forgotten in the middle of the would in an abandoned town with a sad story vibe?
Amazing job here, dude, I am impressed.
I guess zero’s reaction was due to all the bullying..
He snapped.. lost all sense reason. Poor guy.
It’s the ghost train who is ZERO.
I know a lot of people don't really favor the untold story of Timothy, but I love any version related to Timothy. Personally though, Timothy turning into an evil ghost is kinda understandable as well. on one hand, the other version is way darker, and this one is lighter, but, if you really think about it, both stories do end up the same. an engine kills themself, and nobody really feels bad for them at the current time. now, for me, I would totally understand how that would drive a spirit to darkness, and besides, we know Timothy does feel bad for what he did, but he'd fallen too far to ever turn back. but also, it's nice to hear a lighter version too.
Glad to see someone who agrees with me. I like both the original and this version too.
Great job with this!
Is Zero the E2 Prototype?
Considering it's a take on timothy, probably.
Or he could be a LBSCR E1X
It's cool to see something done with the number. Even the best retellings keep with the idea that someone put a big 0 on the engine's side, which is so weird.
This is a perfect remaster of the old ghost story perfect?
Damn I love this story, it's much better than the creepypasta, I hope to see more audio stories from you in future!
Wow. That gave me chills, you are an amazing storyteller great work.
I have a theory that Edward was the engine who insulted zero and told it to derail, that’s why he has such a vivid memory of the story.
I don't think that's him. Edward is too wise.
@@timothythetankenginesfunen1075 He wasn’t always wise.
@@ExtraEngine1 Yeah, but I still don't think it's Edward. It's just not in character for Edward to be like that.
Timothy!
Nice Video You Made Narrow Gauge
Good Story
Spectacular work! I'm not a fan of Timothy but i love the way you did this
Interesting retelling of Timo- er, I mean, Zero. At least no one was killed, other than Zero and no demon possession that we all seen and known.
Now this one is just amazing! The story I loved! The Images are truly beautiful and the music is outstanding! Spectacular Work!
Amazing job as always! It's so refreshing hearing a unique take of this story.
This is the best retelling of the orginal Creepypasta.
Engine Zero, also known as Timothy
this was actuality so close to my take on timothy it was just how he snaped and offed himself
Who was the mean engine pulling the freight train - Afton the Claughton Class or his brother Charles? Possibly Sarah the Midland Railway Compound? (I've been watching Fan of Hiro's series "Engine Arrival")
Very awesome!
10/10 Good Job For The Great Timothy Story
A Great adaptation of the original creepypasta far better then the um nonsense 2015 gave us with Zero/Timothy Well done Joe :)
Hey I love the 2015 ,,nonse"!
This was scary indeed my reaction☠️☠️☠️👍👍👍
Bro this is basically The Half Engine.
Awesome 👌
This is genuinely the best take I've ever seen on the (incredibly overused) Timothy creepypasta. Zero is such a tragic character here, being a hardworking engine who was bullied to suicide over its lack of pulling power. It's such a shame it never lived to work on Sir Topham Hatt's railway, as I'm sure STH would have sympathized with it. I find it interesting how we never see its face, nor do we even know its gender, and I appreciate that the ridiculous "demonic" element of the creepypasta was removed. Very well done!
You’ve made this story ten time better than it ever will be. Awesome job! Though if I have to be honest, I still don’t like the fact that Zero is still a tank engine that looks like Thomas rather than Percy. But that’s my only complaint about it though. Other then that, it’s a huge improvement over the original.
As I hated that Creepypasta story about that demonic engine that is just a load of rubbish cause it was not written by Awdry nor written for the TVS - I know that story is 100% fake (if only that elder Thomas face made as a joke to David Mitton didn't exist to make such tomfoolery either)! This one is a much better version that can easily be watchable.
I heard Dave died of laughter that day. It's funny to me. But I do understand and respect youre destain for it
Zero’s Driver and fireman are Heros
Agreed
Yeah I remember that untold story of Timothy too, but while the story gave bit of attention it was difficult to tell if it was true because if it was a prototype engine, it would have been a E2 tank engine or a GWR prototype Holden 101 tank engine, but then again, that’s a well known fact
The fact we never see the engine’s face.
Was Number 0 an E2?
This is the UNTOLD untold story of Timothy.
Request: The tragic of Andy/98464
Poor engine😢😢😢😮😮😮😮
Good morals and good story, eh.
Can i remake this in BTWF, please?
So engine Zero and Timothy are the same character??
When are you hiring voice actors?
The story of Zero is more sadder than Timothy.
This engine was an experimental prototype. No name, no number, no nothing. It was built & went to a railway, with nothing. And he was bullied for that.
For having nothing.
This was very good.
What face does this engine have?
This version of Timothy The Ghost Engine feels much more explained, and has more context. For instance, explaining that Zero had an undercoat and no real paint made it explainable why he was painted white. I like how there's no possessing in this one, and instead just a depressed engine. It also seems to make more sense because Timothy just gets all of his mistreatment built up in a suicide. It's really sad, and you can feel more remorse for poor old Zero. Nonetheless, I feel like this is even BETTER than the original story. Good job man! You've earned a subscription from me! :)
This is a MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCH better 'Timothy' story than the creepypasta piece of crap!!!
Hey I love that ,,crap"! People like you are the Reason why I hate the TTTE Community.
Series 18-20(2014-16)
Narrated by:Mark Moraghan
Written by: Britt Allcroft and Andrew Brenner
1962-63
(1912-14)
Starring Jesse McCartney as:Timothy/Zero
Nice but I still like Timothy
This is a brilliant take on the creepypasta. In fact, I prefer it over the creepypasta altogether.
The True Story Of The Ghost Train.
A Timothy retelling?
Yawn....
INFINITY times better than Timothy!
timothy if he was good
Series 18-20(2014-16)
Narrated by:Mark Moraghan
Written by: Britt Allcroft and Andrew Brenner
1962-63
(1912-14)