You are the reason. Lyrical Oneshot (Adrienette. Post Battle. Half Reveal) Miraculous Fanfic/Audio

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  • Опубліковано 15 вер 2024
  • It was after the battle with Shadow Moth and Mayra, as Adrien lay in the hospital bed with Marinette watching over him... waiting for him to wake.
    Massive shout Carolina Jade (Jade Carol) for her amazing, emotional art in the thumbnail, go and send lots of love and will be feature more work from this talented artist.
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    Go and send loads of love to Jheqia and check out her other pieces of writing:
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 140

  • @mladysamantha1332
    @mladysamantha1332 2 роки тому +4

    Omg this made me sob so much 😭😭😭 SO BEAUTIFUL I WAS CRYING AND HUGGING MY CAR NOIR PLUSH HOPING HE WAS GONNA WAKE UP AND THAT HIM AND MARINETTE WOULD BE HAPPY AGAIN. So many emotions❤️❤️

  • @eleishadolbey6889
    @eleishadolbey6889 2 роки тому +26

    This is going to make us cry isn't it 😅
    *note to self get tissues ready for this one

    • @ashthegreat1371
      @ashthegreat1371 2 роки тому +3

      Dont worry I have plenty to share 😢🤧

    • @JohnR341
      @JohnR341 2 роки тому

      I love this story

  • @leo_v8214
    @leo_v8214 2 роки тому +18

    Man i love Jheqia's dark writing style
    It makes the entire story more real
    And ohhh how she makes the characters 100 times better
    Astruc should learn from her

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +1

      Thanks, Leo! What an amazing compliment! That means a lot. I never really thought of this story as dark, just more intense than my usual romantic fluff. Emotional intensity is very fun to write, but it is also a challenge to get the feelings conveyed just right. Thanks again!❤

  • @nicole-ssi
    @nicole-ssi 2 роки тому +8

    This got me tearing up- im crying right now..

  • @maryshashaw2895
    @maryshashaw2895 2 роки тому +14

    I loved it I cried most of the way though I was glad Chloe got a redemption oh my heart it was amazing 😻

    • @hannahllewellyn163
      @hannahllewellyn163 2 роки тому

      is so heart breaking this story whating on adrien same as chatnoir what up whating on him what up is heart breaking story to my heart 😥😢💔❣

  • @TipsForTeens2549
    @TipsForTeens2549 2 роки тому +50

    OMG! This is so brilliant 🤩 I thought it was going to be emotional but I did not expect this! It is so deep and meaningful- I love this kind of thing! This is probably my favourite fanfic. Well done Dawn you chose this so well😍 Also, where do you find these stories?

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +10

      Jheqia and I sometimes work together on the stories, bouncing idea's off one another and coming up with the fanfics. She is a great writer. 😊

    • @Mysillylife-mq4nl
      @Mysillylife-mq4nl 9 місяців тому

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculouswhen will you post agin

  • @stelerElk
    @stelerElk 2 роки тому +5

    I need you to pass on my compliments to the author, not every sad story can make me cry. I love the realism in this story. You did good *Jheqia*.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +1

      I will do, thank you and glad you enjoyed it 😊

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the realism. I pulled from personal experience and writing this was very cathartic for me. I'm glad it came across well.

  • @bernadetteturtscher39
    @bernadetteturtscher39 2 роки тому +13

    Wow.. its heartbreaking and sad 😪 but also very loving and warming 🥰❤
    Definitly one of my favourite fanfictions!!

  • @pinguinagata1997
    @pinguinagata1997 2 роки тому +18

    This was amazing and will definitely be my favorite fan fiction for ages it's just so cute 🥺 and I'm sure if it was a book it would win multiple awards. I hope you could make a second part to it. 🤍

  • @georgejcox9241
    @georgejcox9241 2 роки тому +10

    O M G!!!!!!!! What are you doing to us??????? This one got all of us RIGHT in the heartstrings. Tear oh the tears are flowing. So beautiful and amazing. Thank you both this is going to be very hard to bet. Stay Safe and Stay Miraculous 🐱🐞

  • @katherinesaenz455
    @katherinesaenz455 2 роки тому +11

    Dear Lord, it was awesome 😭❤️ I almost cried, so many feelings in my chest right now

  • @Will-mk5pj
    @Will-mk5pj 2 роки тому +8

    Oooo! Adrien ends up in the hospital!? This will be interesting!!

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 роки тому +2

      I’m pretty sure i’ve seen similar stories but I wonder what the twist is with this!

  • @ameliawilder28
    @ameliawilder28 2 роки тому +6

    I'm a tad disappointed this one will be lyrical but still looking forward to it

  • @stephaniebeitko9579
    @stephaniebeitko9579 2 роки тому +18

    Thank you so much for this Dawn. It was perfect. This was just so needed, the angst of the post battle and the fluff of him waking up. Just my heart. I really needed that like had no idea how much it was needed. Sometimes the highly emotional fics are just what we need. Amazing story and the narration of it just perfect.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +4

      Oh thank you, yeah I was actually crying at parts as I narrated it! Jheqia wrote an amazing story. 😊💖

    • @stephaniebeitko9579
      @stephaniebeitko9579 2 роки тому

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous it is just overall so amazing like the way your voice carried the emotion of it just so perfect. So perfect

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +1

      @@stephaniebeitko9579 That means the world 🌎 ❤ Thank you. 😊

  • @catdownthestreet
    @catdownthestreet 2 роки тому +3

    I’m crying my eyes out right now- there’s just so much wholesome hurt in this I’m dying 💕

  • @caymeechan2176
    @caymeechan2176 2 роки тому +3

    I love this! It was so amazing! But the ending was cliffhanging, maybe a second one might be the solution😁

  • @abbybae8330
    @abbybae8330 2 роки тому +2

    I love to listen to your story’s and your voice when I’m falling asleep but instead I’ve been sobbing, this was amazing but so sad at the same time

  • @michelledelong4498
    @michelledelong4498 2 роки тому +2

    This made me scream cry and laugh all at the same time I absolutely love your story's 😭😆🤣

  • @ashthegreat1371
    @ashthegreat1371 2 роки тому +8

    I cried 😖 it was so sad how do u do this wow

  • @marcelainuno7656
    @marcelainuno7656 2 роки тому +5

    You have to make a part two to this please

    • @marcelainuno7656
      @marcelainuno7656 2 роки тому +2

      I actually was crying listening to the story but I wiped it off before my family came in my room

  • @eryngreenwood6156
    @eryngreenwood6156 2 роки тому +3

    Yah it was awesome. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍 love it and crying through the how thing but I love it.

  • @johnam1234
    @johnam1234 2 роки тому +3

    We enjoyed this and a great ending

  • @jhankinson_music7605
    @jhankinson_music7605 2 роки тому +4

    Wow I am speechless best one by far deff was crying

  • @michellespencer9780
    @michellespencer9780 Рік тому

    Emotional is right. But such a happy ending! Great job to both of you for writing and reading this story to us! Thank you.

  • @andreapatrick3992
    @andreapatrick3992 2 роки тому +2

    Loved it I can emit an emotional weirdo actually start tearing up because of it but I loved it

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому

      You are not alone at crying during this vid, I mean I teared up at a point when I was narrating it and editing it. 💖🤗

  • @MoonlitWaterLillies
    @MoonlitWaterLillies 2 роки тому +3

    Oh my stars! 😭💖

  • @suzannatraynor3076
    @suzannatraynor3076 2 роки тому

    I’m just crying my eyes out, nothing wrong here😭😭😭 These! This! These are the fanfics that make me love them

  • @starfirelovesrobi101
    @starfirelovesrobi101 2 роки тому +3

    Wow i was not ready for that one

  • @amidoshi1909
    @amidoshi1909 2 роки тому +3

    This is just fabulous! I loved it sooo much!!! You made me cry in the first part, but I ended the story smiling. Thank you for this masterpiece 💖

  • @atika885
    @atika885 2 роки тому +2

    This story is a BLASTTT!!!!!!😍😍😘😘😘

  • @scott6976
    @scott6976 2 роки тому +6

    This was a great vid, loved the whole thing. Please keep making more great videos

  • @rosilvapeterson262
    @rosilvapeterson262 11 місяців тому

    That’s really a heart ❤️ felt😢I can’t stop feeling like this.😢 Well done 👏🏻👏🏻

  • @ehansen7935
    @ehansen7935 2 роки тому

    OMG so much emotion I was in literally tiers 😭💞💕😍🥰

  • @Sof_rha
    @Sof_rha 2 роки тому +1

    such a sweet story!❤️🥺

  • @rosilvapeterson262
    @rosilvapeterson262 11 місяців тому

    Wow!! 😲👏🏻👏🏻you did a wonderful job every time that I listen this narrative I come close to cry. ❤️thank you and congratulations 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻😊

  • @sithumi7170
    @sithumi7170 2 роки тому +1

    oh ... my godddd .... this is .....
    I can't find words , i can't type becauz my hands are shaking ....
    I couldn' t hold my tears when I was reading ..... this is too emotional. sis, U are the best ...
    If this will happene in the show for real .... AAAA 🤯🤯🤯🤯

  • @okeziegbevurie5401
    @okeziegbevurie5401 2 роки тому

    This was amazing!!! Do more of injured adrienette. It was so awesome!!!

  • @MS-vu6fh
    @MS-vu6fh 2 роки тому

    Thank you so much! I loved this story! I was crying half way through it, its so beautiful 😫😫

  • @johnhunt7814
    @johnhunt7814 2 роки тому +3

    Best story!

  • @carysturner2093
    @carysturner2093 2 роки тому

    the words in bold- there lyrics to a song literally called you are the reason, that’s so freaking smart. i don’t know if that’s something everyone knows or i should know by lyrical in the title (if that’s even what it means) but that’s so amazing and it was such an emotional story i loved it!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +1

      Thank you and I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, the lyricals are when the lyrics of songs are used in the story (I came up with the concept). Also there are a ton more lyricals one shots and series you might enjoy throughout this channel. 😉

    • @carysturner2093
      @carysturner2093 2 роки тому

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous wow omg that’s so amazing i love binging your channel, your so smart and thank you!!!

  • @myladynoirr853
    @myladynoirr853 2 роки тому

    Ohh you really made me cry there..
    IT WAS SO GOOD 😩😭💖

  • @emilyflanigan235
    @emilyflanigan235 2 роки тому +1

    Oh my goodness, I thought for sure...oh, so good!

  • @elisabautista7037
    @elisabautista7037 2 роки тому

    God this was absolutely amazing I'm crying so hard rn 😭😭

  • @Cancerwhatnow
    @Cancerwhatnow 2 роки тому +3

    A second one please.

  • @jackie0325
    @jackie0325 2 роки тому +1

    i’m out here crying myself to sleep with this story omg T^T

  • @haniashahhussain6947
    @haniashahhussain6947 2 роки тому

    OMG MY HEART, u literally made me cry🥰

  • @virginiametz6503
    @virginiametz6503 2 роки тому +1

    This was such a piece of art ♥️

  • @griffin3827
    @griffin3827 9 місяців тому

    I was listening to this at work trying my hardest not to cry. I failed but it was worth it

  • @sianarthur1458
    @sianarthur1458 2 роки тому

    Omg this story>>>> it was sooooo goood and it had me tingling like... AND YOUR VOICE IS JUST>>> ugh I love it and I love you... keep doing what you do babe🤩🥰❤❤❤

  • @favorayumba2059
    @favorayumba2059 2 роки тому

    Did anyone else notice that the bolded words were song lyrics? This was an amazing audiofic ❤❤❤😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому

      Thanks, the audiofic is a lyrical, where I use the song lyrics and blend them in with the rest of the story. There are a lot of lyricals on my channel so I hope you enjoy them too. 😊

  • @eleishadolbey6889
    @eleishadolbey6889 2 роки тому +2

    *takes deep breath
    Yup.... definitely needed those tissues 😭

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +1

      awww bless you 🎇💖

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 роки тому +2

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous you 2 are freaking amazing!! You both write so well... but your narration.... on point!! You really know how to express the emotions of each and every story!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +1

      @@eleishadolbey6889 oh wow, thank you that means a lot! 💖

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +1

      @@eleishadolbey6889 Thanks, E. That means a lot! Dawn is the best. My girl needs to be a voice actor!

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 роки тому

      @@jheqiawrites4985 she should definitely consider it!!!!

  • @krystalhumphries9099
    @krystalhumphries9099 2 роки тому +2

    That was intense! Wouldn’t mind a follow up to this one! 😜

  • @karlimathurine9913
    @karlimathurine9913 Рік тому

    Why am I crying over this 9 minutes in at 11 A.M....

  • @lizriz2890
    @lizriz2890 2 роки тому

    ONG THIS WAS SOOO GOOD. I want a part 2 honestly, that’s how good it was

  • @nothereanymore...
    @nothereanymore... 2 роки тому

    This made me cry and smile so wide tooo😁

  • @alexreese7
    @alexreese7 2 роки тому +1

    This. Was. Absolutely. Brilliant. ❤

  • @sethcarlow8363
    @sethcarlow8363 2 місяці тому +1

    what in the Multiverse, did i just watch ?
    crying at this,nope i just can't ,no,no, i am not going to end this like a Warner Brothers cartoon, nope, i wont do it.
    this is like that movie called up,you know what i am going to do, i am just going to iris out and fade out to black.

  • @Phoenix-vc7gp
    @Phoenix-vc7gp Рік тому +1

    My heart and soul!

  • @angienorton5577
    @angienorton5577 3 місяці тому

    I was scared there for a while, I won't lie.. Whew..

  • @didymow3940
    @didymow3940 2 роки тому +2

    Oh my! Brilliant job both in the writing and reading!!

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      Thank you, Didy! Dawn always does such a fantastic job with her narrations. She does a wonderful job bringing my stories to life! I am blessed beyond measure to work with her!

  • @kasi0109
    @kasi0109 2 роки тому

    It is so emotional and beautiful. 💘

  • @mareikenoe7233
    @mareikenoe7233 2 роки тому

    OMG, ich musste weinen. So unglaublich Herz ergreifend!!

  • @MariaRodriguez-on5sf
    @MariaRodriguez-on5sf 2 роки тому +2

    This was so beautiful thank you

  • @ansievancute3
    @ansievancute3 Рік тому

    I really injoyde crazy adout it...
    also trying to right my own
    love it thank you😊😊😊😊

  • @matthewhanlon1568
    @matthewhanlon1568 2 роки тому

    So many emotions in too little time. can’t contain. over flowing. Ahhhhhh!!!! (emotions translated into emojis) 🥺😱😭😱😢😠🫣😱😭☺️🥲😂☺️

  • @lizabethkarenpontanar633
    @lizabethkarenpontanar633 2 роки тому +2

    I Love it!!!

  • @adrienbrown438
    @adrienbrown438 2 роки тому +2

    😫😭🤧🤧
    damn it who is cutting Onions here!

  • @Loink11
    @Loink11 Рік тому +1

    I love it so much❤❤❤

  • @alibali7184
    @alibali7184 2 роки тому

    absolutely beautiful

  • @Liz_Lizzie123
    @Liz_Lizzie123 2 місяці тому

    I THOUGHT THIS WOULD BE A CUTESY ADRIENETTE COMIC 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 but pro tip next time u wanna make a tramatic fanfic make it so ladybug gets hit so yknow no one can fix the damages and adrien can have a huge mental breakdown 😊

  • @rebeccajolley4582
    @rebeccajolley4582 2 роки тому

    Brilliant OMG wow so lovely

  • @Sailormoonlover_199
    @Sailormoonlover_199 Рік тому

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ that was beautiful but poor adrien

  • @Floorsniffer
    @Floorsniffer 2 роки тому +4

    Am i the only one who was ugly crying abiut this?😅😭

  • @marichat99
    @marichat99 2 роки тому +1

    Love it 😭😭😭😭

  • @danielacastillo753
    @danielacastillo753 2 роки тому +2

    Not me crying 😭😅

  • @sandicliff1172
    @sandicliff1172 2 роки тому

    Beautiful 😍!

  • @starfirelovesrobi101
    @starfirelovesrobi101 2 роки тому +2

    But still loved it

  • @JohnR341
    @JohnR341 2 роки тому +2

    My name kiara I am big fan love your video s💙💙💙💙💙🥰🥰🥰🥰😻

  • @bookworm9968
    @bookworm9968 2 роки тому

    I cried so much

  • @Luna-eclipse707
    @Luna-eclipse707 2 роки тому +1

    14:36
    My mind for some reason: Wait where are Nathalie and Gabriel?!
    Oh wait- jail😅

  • @SandraVanhalst
    @SandraVanhalst Рік тому

    ❤❤❤❤ 😢😢😢😢 ❤❤❤❤ loved it so much!!!

  • @robertthompson3447
    @robertthompson3447 2 роки тому

    Thank you for not letting Adrian die. I was really worried 🥺. But wait.. does Adrian know about Marinette?

  • @clewis1063
    @clewis1063 2 роки тому +1

    I really want a part 2 now! 😑

  • @JSmokes6
    @JSmokes6 Місяць тому

    Bawling at 5:28 am 🫨

  • @pb0907.
    @pb0907. 2 роки тому +4

    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭dawnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 роки тому

    Hmm
    Why do I feel this look it connected to "If I Could Tell Her." seen seen Chat did get stab by his dad after all

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому

      Oh, I can see where you are coming from but it has nothing to do with If I could tell her. Those stories will be coming soon, but honestly this amazing story isn't part of it. 😀

  • @jhankinson_music7605
    @jhankinson_music7605 2 роки тому +3

    Oooh

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 роки тому

    So who knows that Mari is Bug...
    Hmmm

  • @user-wq3tb3ky4f
    @user-wq3tb3ky4f Рік тому

    You’re so mean how dare you make something that good. So rude.

  • @kitabootforever
    @kitabootforever 2 роки тому

    🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭🥰🥰🥰🥰

  • @midoriya-shonen
    @midoriya-shonen 8 місяців тому

    I'm 🥺🥺🥺

  • @shelbysnellen725
    @shelbysnellen725 2 роки тому +1

    Love your voice! Love your work!!!! I can't remember if you have an Instagram account