THE ENDING COULD HAVE DEFINITELY BEEN MORE FORTHCOMING BUT THIS WAS AN EXCELLANT STORY. I WANT TO SEE THE NEXT 100 CHAPTERS OF THIS. YOU CAN DO SO MUCH WITH THIS. AWESOME. MORE?
Horribly edited story! The end is in the middle, and the middle is near the end. Horrible job of editing, it's a good thing those of us that really love science fiction, know how things should work. It could have been a good short story, but whoever did the editing, needs to find a janitor job in a middle school.
THE ENDING COULD HAVE DEFINITELY BEEN MORE FORTHCOMING BUT THIS WAS AN EXCELLANT STORY. I WANT TO SEE THE NEXT 100 CHAPTERS OF THIS. YOU CAN DO SO MUCH WITH THIS. AWESOME. MORE?
Real shame, a unfinished story, that is actually excellent, what a pity
Chen? Again. Nope!
Horribly edited story! The end is in the middle, and the middle is near the end. Horrible job of editing, it's a good thing those of us that really love science fiction, know how things should work. It could have been a good short story, but whoever did the editing, needs to find a janitor job in a middle school.
I’m out, another Chen story