Very sad tale but, masterfully told. Damned decent AI voice, too. If there is more, great. If not, then I suspect that we'll see more from this stellar author.
87-99 she... Was 12. She was fucking 12. And she tore that ship apart. Imagine if they had taken her father as well. Would have been a different story.
2: Observation of media. 1: Either trial from previous captures, or they went with something that should work due to similar biology. Remember the worry of the captain due to the unusual length of her unconsciousness.
Now wasn't that a great intro to this author? Shows a lot of forethought, having those pirates gun this woman down in their ignorance, but then having the whole thing turn on tis head as we see the results are less than ideal in any way. Revenge isn't justice, after all, and it wasn't the whole of their species who did the crime, merely the outlaws and reprobates. Are we to judge one guilty, and assign that sin to the whole of their race? But it also shows that there are those for whom that question is answered yes, that sometimes, it takes a lot to forgive, and they want it known that their forgiveness does not come easily, to them, nor is it earned with small gestures and token platitudes. A good, well paced, well reasoned tale.
18:40 good story but there's one major plot hole / inconsistency. The only way that aliens, close to the same size as a human, would be so much weaker than a 12-year-old girl would be if the gravity on their planet was vastly lower than it is on Earth. But if that was the case, they would have barely been able to walk once they landed on the planet much less run back to their ship carrying a being with much higher muscle and bone density many times their own by several factors, on a planet that has already increased their own body weight by many times what they are used to.
Weight and cost. The entrance door to your home is different in material, thickness and weight compared to a simple room door. Just think of the first commercial airplanes where the pilots were separated by a curtain and only a after the terrorist kidnappings they started to use such sturdy doors that a kidnapper can't enter the pilots cabin with kicking it. Before that it was simple thin door to block the view. It's the same with European walls and USA walls - It happens so often in movies that I see someone shooting thru walls or punching a hole in it. Try that in Europe - you will hurt your hand when you punch the wall and shooting in a normal home would just chip the stone.
So one basically pirate vessel kidnapped and killed one person. Horrible and tragic yes, but would that destroy an entire people and their peaceful history? I very much doubt that…. One bad apple 🍎?
So, How did she break down the ships door to the pilots deck? And I know she had a pipe but this seemed to give the human more strength then i was expecting. Edit: BRO SHE WAS 12!! And did that much damage? Like i get that her father seemed military but what the devil kind of race can't stand against a 12 year old girl with a metal poll
@@Mark_Agamotto1313_Smith Even if that is the case, a 12 year old girl took out like a larger portion of the crew... was bleeding and injured. Broke down the bulk head after Being shot through the bulkhead. And then processed to still have the energy to run to glass and jump around waving still full of energy like the 12 year old girl was a 28 year old women whose gone through physical training to endure that amount of pain.
I stories like this it's usually: 1)Earth is a usually high gravity world (usually to the point that any higher and it would impossible to generate enough trush to leave orbit) 2) Humans are either deathworlders, which means they're far stronger than 'universal' standards, and unlike more deathworlders, Humans are intelligent and therefore can outsmart you. (or their Hellworlder which worst form the alien POV 3) both 4) Alien materials are not designed to contain an intelligent deathworlder. It just HFY stories/ humans are space Orks. Although I believe the high Gravity thing might be Theorically true.
Ever tried to contain a frightened person ? Even a toddler? It's a known fact that people who panic can do things that they couldn't do in a normal state. And kids are strong compared to their size, especially females in puberty. And how the story was told she was the same size as those aliens. When I was in school with 12yo I had a girl in my class who was a head taller than the rest in my class and nearly as tall as the teacher and she was strong. BTW size doesn't really tell how strong someone is. A chimp has enough strength to kill an adult person and it's smaller than a 12 year old. And we don't know the how the air and gravity is for the aliens. If they have more oxygen in the air and less gravity, she would have much more strength in comparison and more energy.
Hysterical strength and light and flimsy materials. People have been reported to be able to lift cars off loved ones at their most stressed. A child Busting down a door is well child’s play in comparison
😮💨 In none of the stories, Earth doesn't get hit by an FTL asteroid, or the sun gets blown up or someone shines a Saturn size mirror at Earth Before humans get FTL. 😮💨
Interesting story, very much a fantasy, as we all know what would really happen. THey would be offered more girls which they can pick up from an exclusive island in exchange for the tech they have,
A twelve-year-old girl crushed the hardened crew of a smuggler vessel. Imagine what would have happened if the Televan had failed to negotiate a peaceful resolution with Terra and the respective militaries became involved. No wonder they were eager to make peace. Just sayin'.
@@ricardocarmona5210 That must feel like a slap to the face! Imagine being one of the last real OG's and then this! ^^ Sir! Are you aware that you are a robot?
@@UltimatePerfection Really? It sounds just like an AI text to speech made from Tim Russ samples; pronunciation changes from sentence to sentence and typos are read as is - just like an AI, not much like a human.
@@403902 He doesn't sound anything like Tim Russ and I would know because I am rewatching Voyager now. Besides, as I have said, I know that person and he's a white dude in his mid-30s. Definitely not Tim Russ, as much as I love his acting.
I know Australians are strong and will die protecting their freedom but this is a little ridiculous! A 12 year old girl that can rip apart internal doors of a inter planetary space ship?
Internal, is the key word my dude, Thin as possible so less mass, less fuel, less inertia, also 9.8ms gravity gives us an escape velocity we have to train to deal with. We are gunna be hell a strong compared to many aliens. Our ape cousins are gunna be monsters to aliens.
No wonder they got obliterated, they stole a Tasmanian.
Ok I, as a father of 2,have to admit I cried. I can only imagine what that little girl went through in the last moments 😢
Very sad tale but, masterfully told. Damned decent AI voice, too. If there is more, great. If not, then I suspect that we'll see more from this stellar author.
It isn’t an AI voice as it turns out. He’s very much human.
87-99 she... Was 12.
She was fucking 12.
And she tore that ship apart. Imagine if they had taken her father as well. Would have been a different story.
Or an actual USMC in their prime....
Damn they ran into sigourney Weaver ....
A 12 year old obliterated alien slavers!!!
Still 11 really , but Yep .
they were probably very small
@@somnorila9913 . Not necessarily .
Just from a Lower Gravity Place .
@@woswasdenni1914 🤔📸
Ha! They should get a kid in their terrible twos.
I remember listening to someone else read this story back in 2021... its an older one. Still good.
Great story! Aliens learn that you don't kill Humanity's children!
Not in this story.
In this story, all aliens are appalled at what those kidnappers have done.
What the hell are they feeding 12 year olds in the 2080s??
aliens were simply as strong as twigs
Vegemite on toast
@@sandrosliskeThat’s what makes them tough. Builds character:-)
Sounds like the aliens were the same size as a 12 year old. Kids are strong for their size and have far more energy than a adult
Pure beef.
they stole an aussie
As soon as I read that the majority of the inland area was desert I started to snicker. They stole an auzzie. That was a bad call.
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Awesome story, wish it was longer but really hoping for a second chapter.
That's not fair, this video actually made me cry
Indomitable survival instincts at its finest.
yeah this is the best AI voice - so how do the aliens know 1. how to sedate a human 2. that she was female
Makes you wonder how many times this happened before.
In the beginning, they said they had received intel from other aliens about humans.
2: Observation of media.
1: Either trial from previous captures, or they went with something that should work due to similar biology. Remember the worry of the captain due to the unusual length of her unconsciousness.
Now wasn't that a great intro to this author? Shows a lot of forethought, having those pirates gun this woman down in their ignorance, but then having the whole thing turn on tis head as we see the results are less than ideal in any way. Revenge isn't justice, after all, and it wasn't the whole of their species who did the crime, merely the outlaws and reprobates. Are we to judge one guilty, and assign that sin to the whole of their race?
But it also shows that there are those for whom that question is answered yes, that sometimes, it takes a lot to forgive, and they want it known that their forgiveness does not come easily, to them, nor is it earned with small gestures and token platitudes.
A good, well paced, well reasoned tale.
She wasn't a woman, she was a little girl.
That explains the fear of humanity and why they really needed an alone human. 12 year old girl f them up
18:40 good story but there's one major plot hole / inconsistency. The only way that aliens, close to the same size as a human, would be so much weaker than a 12-year-old girl would be if the gravity on their planet was vastly lower than it is on Earth. But if that was the case, they would have barely been able to walk once they landed on the planet much less run back to their ship carrying a being with much higher muscle and bone density many times their own by several factors, on a planet that has already increased their own body weight by many times what they are used to.
Love this capture stuff!
Very well written. Very well written.
Well done 👍. Looking forward to more. Now if I can find out who's the author.
u/Tashdacat
They discovered the indomitable human spirit
I like your story, found it well thought out and interesting.
Good story, very sad
You made a ship out of cardboard or something.
How the doors break so easily
Weight and cost. The entrance door to your home is different in material, thickness and weight compared to a simple room door. Just think of the first commercial airplanes where the pilots were separated by a curtain and only a after the terrorist kidnappings they started to use such sturdy doors that a kidnapper can't enter the pilots cabin with kicking it. Before that it was simple thin door to block the view.
It's the same with European walls and USA walls - It happens so often in movies that I see someone shooting thru walls or punching a hole in it. Try that in Europe - you will hurt your hand when you punch the wall and shooting in a normal home would just chip the stone.
@seanthiar also gravity needs to be considered. One accustomed to high gravity will be stronger than those who are accustomed to lower gravity.
So one basically pirate vessel kidnapped and killed one person. Horrible and tragic yes, but would that destroy an entire people and their peaceful history? I very much doubt that….
One bad apple 🍎?
Not gonna lie this made me tear up a little
So, How did she break down the ships door to the pilots deck?
And I know she had a pipe but this seemed to give the human more strength then i was expecting.
Edit: BRO SHE WAS 12!! And did that much damage? Like i get that her father seemed military but what the devil kind of race can't stand against a 12 year old girl with a metal poll
Very low grav worlders. The bulkheads were likely as thin as necessary to maintain pressure to lighten the craft.
@@Mark_Agamotto1313_Smith Even if that is the case, a 12 year old girl took out like a larger portion of the crew... was bleeding and injured. Broke down the bulk head after Being shot through the bulkhead. And then processed to still have the energy to run to glass and jump around waving still full of energy like the 12 year old girl was a 28 year old women whose gone through physical training to endure that amount of pain.
I stories like this it's usually:
1)Earth is a usually high gravity world (usually to the point that any higher and it would impossible to generate enough trush to leave orbit)
2) Humans are either deathworlders, which means they're far stronger than 'universal' standards, and unlike more deathworlders, Humans are intelligent and therefore can outsmart you. (or their Hellworlder which worst form the alien POV
3) both
4) Alien materials are not designed to contain an intelligent deathworlder.
It just HFY stories/ humans are space Orks.
Although I believe the high Gravity thing might be Theorically true.
Ever tried to contain a frightened person ? Even a toddler? It's a known fact that people who panic can do things that they couldn't do in a normal state. And kids are strong compared to their size, especially females in puberty. And how the story was told she was the same size as those aliens. When I was in school with 12yo I had a girl in my class who was a head taller than the rest in my class and nearly as tall as the teacher and she was strong. BTW size doesn't really tell how strong someone is. A chimp has enough strength to kill an adult person and it's smaller than a 12 year old. And we don't know the how the air and gravity is for the aliens. If they have more oxygen in the air and less gravity, she would have much more strength in comparison and more energy.
Hysterical strength and light and flimsy materials. People have been reported to be able to lift cars off loved ones at their most stressed. A child Busting down a door is well child’s play in comparison
😮💨 In none of the stories, Earth doesn't get hit by an FTL asteroid, or the sun gets blown up or someone shines a Saturn size mirror at Earth Before humans get FTL. 😮💨
Should have switched to a different voice for the second part.
Its apparently a real bloke. He speaks like this normally too apparently.
As someone in a different story said, "They done fucked up!"
Damn... Very good
great story
Story is overdramatic, but it could be worse. But voice acting is good.
Why did they pick australia then
Interesting story, very much a fantasy, as we all know what would really happen. THey would be offered more girls which they can pick up from an exclusive island in exchange for the tech they have,
Epstein galactic enterprises.
I'm getting to be a big HFY fan but some of them do push it a bit lol 😂
😢nice
Reminds me of Universe Inside You, Interview With Reptilian Female Lacerta.
A 12 year old girl pre pubescent took apart a ship of guy aliens….
Can We get this AI to Read some Warhammer 40k books they never maid audio books for
Hmm, she was only 11, almost 12...
A twelve-year-old girl crushed the hardened crew of a smuggler vessel. Imagine what would have happened if the Televan had failed to negotiate a peaceful resolution with Terra and the respective militaries became involved. No wonder they were eager to make peace. Just sayin'.
👏👏👏👏👏
Very sad story.
best AI voice....good story as well.....
Bro, it's not AI, I know the dude from discord, the only AI on this channel here are the pics.
That's cool I thought it was AI to. ✌️
@@ricardocarmona5210 That must feel like a slap to the face!
Imagine being one of the last real OG's and then this! ^^
Sir! Are you aware that you are a robot?
@@UltimatePerfection
Really? It sounds just like an AI text to speech made from Tim Russ samples; pronunciation changes from sentence to sentence and typos are read as is - just like an AI, not much like a human.
@@403902 He doesn't sound anything like Tim Russ and I would know because I am rewatching Voyager now. Besides, as I have said, I know that person and he's a white dude in his mid-30s. Definitely not Tim Russ, as much as I love his acting.
I know Australians are strong and will die protecting their freedom but this is a little ridiculous! A 12 year old girl that can rip apart internal doors of a inter planetary space ship?
Internal, is the key word my dude,
Thin as possible so less mass, less fuel, less inertia, also 9.8ms gravity gives us an escape velocity we have to train to deal with.
We are gunna be hell a strong compared to many aliens. Our ape cousins are gunna be monsters to aliens.
@@julesmasseffectmusic My point is they must be Japanese paper doors, my Australian internal doors are timber!
The doors inside my house are hollow, and quite light.
@@Terran.Marine.2 Still can a 12 year old girl rip them down with her bare hands?
he is in a Guild and Mando Broke Guild Rules
What’s the interior of that ship made of? Tinfoil?
What if they captured a 12 boy 💀
They would've wish they never discovered earth
Shut up im not crying, you’re crying.
Earth is a god world..
Hey Jonothan do you plan to open up channel memberships? I would definitely join!
😢😢😢😢
all these story seem to avoid USA and always end up on aussie
they got messed up by a 12 year old.
They kidnapped an Amazon woman,😂